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1、雅思图表小作文范文分析 雅思图表小作文范文分析，今天就给大家带来了雅思图表小作文范文分析，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。雅思图表小作文范文分析 混合图之某市温度与降水The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata该图表展示一年当中加尔各答市的月均气温和降水。请由此，作答150*，描述此图。雅思图表小作文混合图9分范文：The chart compares average figures for temperature and precip

2、itation over the course of a calendar year in Kolkata.(1句做介绍导入)It is noticeable that monthly figures for precipitation in Kolkata vary considerably, whereas monthly temperatures remain relatively stable. Rainfall is highest from July to August, while temperatures are highest in April and May.(2句做图表概

3、述)Between the months of January and May, average temperatures in Kolkata rise from their lowest point at around 20C to a peak of just over 30C. Average rainfall in the city also rises over the same period, from approximately 20mm of rain in January to 100mm in May.(3句的细节段1)While temperatures stay ro

4、ughly the same for the next four months, the amount of rainfall more than doubles between May and June. Figures for precipitation remain above 250mm from June to September, peaking at around 330mm in July. The final three months of the year see a dramatic fall in precipitation, to a low of about 10m

5、m in December, and a steady drop in temperatures back to the January average.(3句的细节段2)(173 words, band 9)附雅思小作文考官范文基本套路For the task 1 report, I aim for 9 sentences.这是他所擅长的图表作文4段9句大法，具体结构如下：1.Introduction: 1 sentence，Introduction段落，1句话介绍图表大意足矣2.Overview (summary): 2 sentences，Overview段，用2句话做图表信息的摘要3.

6、First details paragraph: 3 sentences4.Second details paragraph: 3 sentences。三、四段为细节段，每段3句做详细的特征或规律的描述。当然，Simon同学不忘补充，这只是他个人在写作时的偏好结构，好文无定法，大家也不需要拘泥于9句，只要内容表达的需要，8句，10句都是没问题的。注意：simon考官主张雅思小作文无须总结!大家可留心这一点。当然小作文是否需要写总结段，雅思届尚无定论。雅思大作文考试最新趋势分析及备考建议雅思大作文旧题新出例证之一3月3日的考试真题如下：In many countries, prison is t

7、he most common solution to the problem of crime. However, another effective way is to provide people with better education so that they can not become criminals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?这是一道社会类大话题下关于犯罪问题的重复考题，原题出现在20XX年5月12日的考试中。总结规律来讲，如果说20XX年雅思写作考试对20XX年情有独钟，2018年似乎返祖现象更为严重，已经考过的很多

8、场都是在重复20XX年甚至更早的原题。用专业术语来讲，就是挖坟题。雅思大作文旧题新出例证之二再比如说，3月10日的真题：Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.解决世界环境问题的最好方法之一就是增加燃料和所有车辆的成本。你在多大程度上同意或不同

9、意?是不是和20XX年6月17日的这道题无比接近，请看：The best way to solve the worlds environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?当然这个日期真的久远了，就算是疯狂的刷提者也不会刷十年之前的考题吧。那么问题来了，我们知道了现在的考题中没有新题这件事，能指引我们什么呢?2018雅思大作文备考建议笔者的想法是，既然考生们知道不会出现新的话题了，也就是大作文的一些话题词汇和常用观点，大家是可以大量的积累和使用的，虽然题

10、目你复习不到那么久远，但是常考的话题，就那不超过十个。考生们就可以围绕话题进行大作文的语言片段的准备，它们分别包括社会类，科技类，文化类，政府类，教育类，犯罪类，新闻媒体类，环境类以及抽象类等。把这些话题分别整理词汇，并且找到20XX年和20XX年考过的相关真题，进行动手写作，那么考试就算遇不到原题，至少也会遇到相似话题，你背过的词汇和观点依然是有用武之地的。在这里，为大家寻找了一些3、4月份可以练习的过往话题，希望对考生能有所帮助。2018雅思大作文备考话题预测社会类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年2月7日 Many museums and historical sites are mainly

11、 visited by tourists, not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract local people.2.20XX年10月31日Some people think people working in creative arts should be financially supported by government. Others think they should find financial support from other resources. Discuss both s

12、ides and give your opinion.3.20XX年4月16日When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?4.20XX年4月2日 Multicultural societies, where people of different groups

13、live together, can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree and disagree?教育类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年2月13日In some countries, there has been an increase number of parents who educated their children themselves at home instead of sending them to school. Do you think the advant

14、ages of this outweigh the disadvantages?2.20XX年3月31日Today many children spend a lot of time playing computer games and little time on sports. Why is it? Is it a positive or negative development?3.20XX年5月16日 To improve the quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to ev

15、aluate and criticize their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.4. 20XX年10月8日In some countries, secondary school aims to provide a general education across a range of subjects. In others, child

16、ren focus on a narrow range of subjects related to a particular career. Which do you think is appropriate in todays world?科技类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年2月14日 The use of mobile phone in certain places is just as antisocial as smoking. Do you think mobile should be banned like smoking?2.20XX年10月24日Some people say

17、that playing computer games is bad for children in every aspect. Others say that playing computer games can have positive effects on the way children develop. Discuss both views and give your opinion.3.20XX年10月8日Maintaining public libraries is a waste of time since computer technology is now replaci

18、ng their functions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?文化类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年8月29日 Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion

19、.2.20XX年8月13日International travel sometimes lead people have some prejudices rather than broad minds，why? How to improve the understanding of countries they visit?3.20XX年9月10日Many customs and the traditional ways of behavior are no longer relevant to the modern life and no worth keeping. Do you agre

20、e or disagree?政府类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年1月30日In some countries, the government has tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?2.20XX年7月23日Some people say government should give the health care the first prioriti

21、es , some others believe there are more important priorities to spend the tax payers money. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.抽象类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年9月19日Some people think everyone should be a vegetarian, because we do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. To what extent do you agree or

22、disagree?犯罪类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年6月27日Many people do not feel safe either at home or they are out. What are the causes, and what can be done to make people feel safer?2.20XX年1月14日 A recent newspaper article reports that a 14-year-old boy who seriously destroyed his school got a punishment to clean streets

23、instead of sent to the prison, do you think this is right, or the young criminals should be sent to the jail?3.20XX年8月8日Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that they are the best people to talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. T

24、o what extent do you agree or disagree?传媒类雅思写作大作文1. 20XX年1月23日News media has become more influential in peoples lives. Others believe it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree?2. 20XX年10月22日In some countries, the criminal trials are shown on the TV and the general public

25、can watch them. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?环境类雅思写作大作文1.20XX年3月12日Some people think that it is more important to plant more trees in open area which in towns and cities than build more housing. To what extend do agree or disagree?2.20XX年4月21日The increase in the production of consume

26、r goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?3.20XX年9月15日More and more people buy and use their own car. Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals overweigh the disadvantages for environment?当然，大家要记住，刷题的目的不是

27、为了大家背诵*，而是通过常用的真题进行话题词汇的累积和观点方面的头脑风暴。毕竟考试的时候你不能把背诵的内容直接写进去，但是你留在脑海里的话题单词和观点，确实实实在在给你增加分数的砝码，最后希望各位考生多刷题，多思考，勤动笔，少背诵最好的雅思写作开头段写法 必出自这5类雅思写作开头段的构成那我们研究开头段，第一个问题就是开头段是由什么组成的。开头段可以说是对于题目的一个最直接的回应，因此，一个开头段的组成基本是和题目的构成紧密相关的。而雅思大作文的题目构成主要分成两类，一类是和观点有关的题目，比方说“to what extent do you agree or disagree?”或者是“dis

28、cuss both views and give your own opinion.” 这类题目的构成往往为“背景+题目观点+题目问题”。另一类是和事实有关的题目，比方说“do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?”或者是“what are the reasons and how to solve these issues?” 而这一类的题目中就只有“背景事实+题目问题”。所以， 我们的较为标准的开头段通常便是“背景引入+题目观点复述+己方观点表达”或是，“背景引入+己方问题回应”。因此我们在本篇先说一说开头段中的背景引入的方式。这个部分我认为应该是整个

29、开头段从语言角度讲最重要的部分，最需要同学们的注意。一方面因为，学生往往会用较为随便或千篇一律的描述一笔带过，比方是“Nowadays, with the development of.”这样的老套话术，会给考官模板的感觉，也让考官对*一开始就失去兴趣。另一个需要重视这一部分的重要原因是，这部分灵活度很强，也就是能更好的展现自己的英语实力。所以，比起简单的同意替换，我们可以把背景引入分为五大类：雅思写作开头段写法1 摆事实也就是通过对题目主题的理解，写一句对事实的描述，从而引出题目的话题或是问题。例：1. Women and men are commonly seen as having di

30、fferent strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender?(Collins Unit1)There have always been differences in the types of work men and women have done.2. Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace tradi

31、tional foods and traditional methods of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit2)The increasing availability of convenience foods has been a significant feature of modern life in many developed countries.3. In many countries schools have severe probl

32、ems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? (C4T4)Poor student behaviour seems to be an increasingly widespread problem and I think that modern lifestyles are probably responsible for this.4. In some countries young people are encouraged to w

33、ork or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. (C5T2)It is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high sch

34、ool.雅思写作开头段写法2 给原因也就是根据题目中的观点或是题目中的事实去向前推出一层原因，从而让开头更有逻辑。例：1. As language such as English, Spanish and mandarin become more widely spoken, there is a fear that many minority languages may die out. Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages. What is your view of this practice? (Col

35、lins Unit5)As the world becomes more integrated, the need for common means of communication is becoming more pressing.2. Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unf

36、air. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (C6T2)As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries.雅思写作开头段写法3 给结果通过对于结果的描述，向上推出题目论证的内容。这个方法思路较绕，但是用恰当也算是另辟蹊径。例：1. In the past, people

37、 spent their entire lives doing one job. But nowadays they change their job frequently. Please give your reasons and suggestions.Though the experience of moving from one job to another can sometimes be distressing or even traumatic, thousands of employees move from one job to another in rapid succes

38、sion every year.2. Some people think that machine translation is highly developed in todays society. Therefore it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. Whats your opinion.It will be good news for school children when they are told that foreign language is no longer a required su

39、bject because translation can all be down by machines. 雅思写作开头段写法4 时间对比这样的开头做法通常是将古今进行对比，从而引出题目的争论，或是主题。例：1. Longer life spans and improvements in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty-five can continue to live full and active lives. In what ways can social benefit from

40、 the contribution that older people can make?(Collins Unit9)People today can expect to live a longer and healthier life than people in the past. .(现在的人与过去相比预期活得更长，更健康。)2. Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or di

41、sagree with this opinion?(Collins Unit10)In the past, news about famous people may have been confined to gossip columns in newspapers; these days it is not uncommon for celebrities to feature as front page news.3. Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign langua

42、ge at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? (C9T1)Traditionally, children have begun studying foreign languages at secondary school, but introducing them earlier is recommended by some educationalists.雅思写作开头段写法5 地点对比例：Some people think tha

43、t it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. (C8GB)Some countries have single-sex education models, while in others both single sex and mixed schools co-exist and it is up to the parents or the children to decide which model is preferable.(有些国家通行同性别教育模式;而有些国家实行同性别教育和混合教育，父母或者孩子自己可以决定哪种模式更适合。)