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1、雅思写作技巧之如何强化重点 今天给大家带来了雅思写作技巧之如何强化重点，希望可以帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作技巧之如何强化重点首先，强化重点的技巧可以将作文核心句的摆放位置，就是考生常见的把想强调的内容放在句首或句尾。通常句首是最显眼的部分，考官更容易接收到考生所想要强调的重点。此外，把重点放在句尾也不失一个很好的方法，可以引导考官把全句通读，才能看到重点。这样能够加强考官对你的写作遣词造句的能力有一个综合的评价。可以从下题例子看出：重点放句首：Incorrect grammar and improper construction invariably distract
2、 readers attention.重点放句尾：The history of vocabulary is, in many ways, the record of civilization.其次，强化的技巧就是句法上用倒装来强调。对于雅思写作而言，最强调的就是句型的多变，如果考生只用一招来应对强化句子重点的话，很难取得写作高分。因此，除了放在句首句尾这种简单的技巧之外，考生应该掌握在复杂句中如何强化重点。对于复杂句的构成是主句加从句，所以如果要强化重点的话，考生可以把主句移到从句的后面。通常，除了名词和形容词从句之外，由于位置比较固定，所以不能移到从句的后面。像副词从句和短语，就可以把主句放
3、在从句的后面，进行强化作用。看下面例子：I came upon an old classmate when I went to town yesterday.副词从句中主句放后面：When I went to town yesterday, I came upon an old classmate.Steel is commonly used to make knives, razors and other useful tools because of its durability.副词短语中主句放后面：Because of its durability, steel is commonly
4、 used to make knives, razors and other useful tools.然后，如果考生想进一步突出雅思写作中的句子重点，可以将句子中一系列的项目做逻辑性的排列，进行重点的突出。换句话说就是把你所要强调的内容进行排序，例如大小，日期，年龄等排序。就好比爬楼梯一样，指引考官按照你的逻辑性排列一步一步看到你想表达的重点。如下例：Tony ate his dinner, watched TV, and then went to bed.Were you bored with years of study in elementary school, high school
5、 and institute of higher education?接下里，强化重点的技巧可以利用倒装完成。除了上述雅思写作技巧之外，还可以对你想要强调的重点进行重复。肯定不是单纯的重新写一个单词这么简单。对强调的重点需要对句式的把握，以及合理的语法布置。这样可以强化考官印象，加强中心思想的巩固。可以看下面例子作为参考：.the land stretched out without names. Nameless headlands split the surf; nameless lakes reflected the nameless mountains and nameless riv
6、ers flowed through nameless valleys and nameless bays.最后，强化重点的技巧还可以重复进行实现。考生可以根据自己对语法掌握的程度，进行倒装句和平行句的运用。通过对句子进行倒装和平行，可以把想要强调的重点提到最合适的位置，让考官更直接的看到考生所想表达的重点，而且还会让句子种类变得丰富起来。其实有效的倒转和平行，可以更精炼句子，能够在雅思写作中取得高分。来看看下面的例子。Seven dwarfs lived here in the center of the dark forest.改写为：Here, in the center of the
7、dark forest lived seven dwarfs.2018年9月8日雅思写作真题及7分范文：垃圾处理问题题目为：We have developed a “throw-away” society and are filling the environment with many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. What measures should be taken to combat the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any
8、 relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.本周考的是一个环境类的老题目。我们现在的社会是一个浪费型的社会(a throw-away society)，随处可见被扔弃不用的东西。本题要求分析这个现象产生的原因及解决办法。就原因而言，大家可能想到的生活水平提高了，物质太丰富了，这是老雅经常谈到的物质层面上的原因。如果我们再往下想一想，可能就想到，我们乱扔东西，可能还有一个心理层面上的原因：出于方便(out of convenience)。除此之外，当然还有一个社会层面的原因，即消费社会鼓励大家扔弃旧东西，换新时尚。在这类分析原
9、因类的考题中，大家都可以按照这三个层面去思考，就容易写得更有逻辑一些。就解决办法而言，无非也就两条：一是国家层面，制定法规，让大家对垃圾进行分类回收，二是个人层面，提高大家垃圾回收的意识。我们在构思任何一篇雅思作文的时候，都应该写出层次，这是雅思作文批判思维的基本要求。各位烤鸭应该在这方面积累经验。雅思写作范文Ours is a “throw-away” society strongly influenced by consumerism as we value convenience over environmental protection. We throw away out of co
10、nvenience, and societal conventions have us move on to the next fad or technology. For example, we are dumping large quantities of thrash, such as plastic bags and diapers, that we cannot fully dispose of. Likewise, we are discarding televisions, cell phones, computers and other used items in exchan
11、ge of new ones that unsurprisingly will become our future garbage. Under these circumstances, environmental pollution is the cruel price we have to pay for the consumerism culture in the age of mass production. Even though our society as a whole is increasingly aware of the environmental pollution,
12、more has to be done to prevent the problem from worsening.我们的社会是一个受消费主义强烈影响的“浪费型”社会，因为我们更看重方便而不是环境保护。出于方便我们随意扔弃，而社会习俗让我们冲向下一个时尚或技术。例如，我们正在倾倒大量我们无法完全处理的垃圾，比如塑料袋和尿布。同样，我们正在丢弃电视机，手机，电脑和其他旧物品，然后换用新的，而这些新的物品又会毫不奇怪成为未来的垃圾。在这样的情况下，环境污染是我们为大规模生产时代的消费主义文化所必需付出的残酷代价。尽管整个社会日益意识到环境污染，但仍有更多的工作要做，以防止这个问题恶化。In ord
13、er to relieve the environmental impact of the consumerism culture, we believe that recycling is the most effective solution. It is necessary for governments to make recycling a legal requirement, and “punish” those who throw away recyclable materials. For example, households will be legally required
14、 to separate all rubbish into different bins for recycling, on penalties of fines. New waste management rules should be introduced to act as a deterrent and to encourage people to abide by strict recycling standards. At the same time, government-sponsored recycling education programs (through the me
15、dia) can be useful to increase recycling by changing peoples behavior and create an environment-friendly culture.为了减轻消费主义文化对环境的影响，我们认为回收是最有效的解决办法。各国政府有必要将回收利用作为一项法律要求，并“惩罚”那些扔掉可回收的材料的人。例如，法律可要求家庭将所有垃圾分成不同的垃圾桶进行回收，否则处以罚款。应该制定新的垃圾管理规则，将它作为一种威慑，鼓励人们遵守严格的回收标准。与此同时，政府资助的回收教育项目(通过媒体)可以改变人们的行为来增加回收，并创造一种环境
16、友好型文化。In conclusion, mandatory laws must be put in place so that people who are used to the lifestyle of convenience will refrain from throwing away plastic bags and rubbish. It is important for governments to make recycling everybodys business; otherwise, environmental protection might become nobod
17、ys business.总之，必须制定强制性法律，使习惯于方便型生活方式的人避免乱扔塑料袋和垃圾。对政府来说，让人人都参与回收工作很重要，否则，环保就变成了无人问津的事。雅思写作高分表达1. Likewise, we are discarding televisions, cell phones, computers and other used items in exchange of new ones that unsurprisingly will become our future garbage.同样，我们正在丢弃电视机，手机，电脑和其他旧物品，然后换用新的，而这些新的物品又会毫不奇
18、怪成为未来的垃圾。2. Even though our society as a whole is increasingly aware of the environmental pollution, more has to be done to prevent the problem from worsening尽管整个社会日益意识到环境污染，但仍有更多的工作要做，以防止这个问题恶化。3. At the same time, government-sponsored recycling education programs (through the media) can be useful
19、to increase recycling by changing peoples behavior and create anenvironment-friendly culture.与此同时，政府资助的回收教育项目(通过媒体)可以改变人们的行为来增加回收，并创造一种环境友好型文化。4. In conclusion, mandatory laws must be put in place so that people who are used to the lifestyle of convenience will refrain from throwing away plastic bag
20、s and rubbish.总之，必须制定强制性法律，使习惯于方便型生活方式的人避免乱扔塑料袋和垃圾。5. It is important for governments to make recycling everybodys business; otherwise, environmental protection might become nobodys business.对政府来说，让人人都参与回收工作很重要，否则，环保就变成了无人问津的事。2018年9月8日雅思大作文写作真题范文解析：社会资源浪费问题环保类话题，Nowadays people are living in a “ th
21、rown-away” society where they use things for a short time and then throw away. What cause this and what problem it may lead to?探讨社会中出现的一次性社会(浪费型社会)的形成原因及影响。范文解析 本题属于社会生活类话题。题目问题要求阐述导致“ thrown-away” society 的原因以及该现象导致的问题。属于说明文类型的文体。考生在答题时，切忌看清题目要求，不要惯性思维写原因和解决方法。此外，思考思路时务必结合现实情况，如个体本身没有这样的习惯则联想身边有该类特
22、征的人群，以便快速得到论点。*结构 P1：改写现象并写出承接句。P2：阐述导致该现象的第一个原因，即市场上有大量便宜的商品。P3：阐述导致该现象的第二个原因，即广告诱导消费者追赶潮流从而丢弃旧物品。P4：阐述该现象导致的问题。第一，造成了环境污染;第二，造成了不良生活方式。P5： 总结上文内容。雅思大作文高分话题表达two contributing factors can be identified 两个促成(该现象)的理由可以被证实it is precisely because of 正因为。would do sth rather than 宁愿做。而不。brand new 崭新的be ex
23、posed to 被暴露在。之下glamorous 富有魅力的dump 丢弃decompose 分解landfill 垃圾填埋法materially abundant but spiritually barren 物质丰富但是精神贫瘠be discouraged from 被阻止。雅思写作高分结构it is a ubiquitous tendency that 同位语从句the most apparent reason is that 表语从句as much as 比较状语Another ground whyis . 定语从句Inevitably, 副词放在句首, contaminating
24、现在分词做结果状语雅思大作文范文In this fast-paced society, it is a ubiquitous tendency that modern people throw away things utilized for a short period of time. As far as I am concerned, two contributing factors can be identified as below.在这个快节奏的社会里，现代的人们抛弃了在短时间内使用的东西，这是一种普遍存在的趋势。就我而言，可以确定以下两个因素。The most apparent
25、reason is that massive production conduced by technological advancement renders cheap products are available for most consumers. It is precisely because of the fact, the public do not value what they have owned as much as they used to. A case in the point is that, once the hairdryer worth around 100
26、 yuan fails to function well, its owner would discard it rather than repairing it as the expense of buying a brand new one is not quite high.最明显的原因是，由于技术进步，大规模生产使得大多数消费者都能买到便宜的产品。正因为如此，公众并不像过去那样重视他们所拥有的东西。一个例子是，一旦价值约100元的电吹风不能正常运转，它的主人就会把它扔掉，而不是修理它，因为购买一个全新的品牌的费用并不高。Another ground why people refuse
27、to wear the same dress or use the phone for years is the impact of advertising campaigns. Being exposed to intensive advertisements, which inform customers of new goods whose appearance looks gorgeous and performance seems unparalleled; as well as create a trend for them to chase, it is difficult fo
28、r viewers to resist the temptation of being fashionable and glamorous by purchasing the latest smart phone or lipsticks. Obviously, the old-fashioned things are dumped in the garbage can.另一个原因是，人们拒绝穿同一件衣服或使用手机多年的原因是广告宣传的影响。暴露在密集的广告中，这些广告会让顾客了解到他们的外表看起来很漂亮，而且表现得无与伦比;除了为他们创造一种追逐的趋势，观众也很难通过购买最新的智能手机或口红
29、来抵制时尚和迷人的诱惑。很明显，老式的东西会被扔进垃圾桶里。Inevitably, this trend gives rise to several problems and the first one is environmental pollution. As a matter of fact, some waste such as electronic and plastic products can be hardly decomposed; worse still, in most cases, landfill is a common approach to dispose the
30、m, contaminating the soil and even the underground water. In addition, an unhealthy lifestyle may emerge. In an attempt to become fashion chasers, people especially the younger generation would waste a great deal of money and time on trying diverse commodities, being materially abundant but spiritua
31、lly barren.不可避免的是，这一趋势引发了一些问题，第一个问题是环境污染。事实上，一些废物，如电子和塑料制品，几乎不能分解;更糟糕的是，在大多数情况下，垃圾填埋场是一种处理它们的常见方法，污染了土壤甚至地下水。此外，可能会出现不健康的生活方式。为了成为时尚的追猎者，尤其是年轻一代，他们会浪费大量的金钱和时间去尝试各种各样的商品，物质丰富，但精神上却贫瘠。In conclusion, considering detrimental effects of this phenomenon on both environment and individuals, people are discouraged from throwing away old things in daily life.总之，考虑到这种现象对环境和个人的不利影响，人们不鼓励人们在日常生活中丢弃旧东西。雅思写作技巧之如何强化重点
