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1、雅思写作高分范文汇总 雅思写作高分范文分享，今天就给大家带来了雅思写作高分范文，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作高分范文：解决城市拥堵问题题目是：Some people think traffic and housing problems in large cities can be solved by moving companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.雅思
2、哥版雅思写作大作文范文To tackle the problems of traffic congestion and the shortage of housing, it is suggested that large companies and factories in major cities should be relocated in the rural area. I think this policy can be effective to some extent, but it is difficult to implement, with possible objectio
3、ns and negative outcomes.There is no doubt that the dense population and limited land resources are responsible for housing shortage in major cities, while the rural area is sparsely populated with sufficient land supply. If some companies, factories and their employees moved out of town, there woul
4、d be more vacant buildings to meet the demand of city dwellers. Besides, with fewer people travelling to and from work inside the city, traffic is expected to be reduced and pressure on the public transportation system eased.However, the strategy of business relocation seems to be infeasible, consid
5、ering the negative outcomes that may ensue. It may impact the sales of some companies whose customers mainly come from the urban area.Also, the employees may reject to move to the countryside, as they can no longer enjoy the high quality educational resources, medical services and entertainment faci
6、lities in the city. The rural infrastructure is relatively backward and life is less convenient. People need to travel between the countryside and the city frequently, leading to new traffic problems, especially on the weekend.Overall, moving some companies to the rural area can reduce the populatio
7、n and traffic in the city and more houses can be vacated. However, this policy is difficult to put into practice, as some companies and their employees may be unwilling to move.雅思写作范文：家庭教育优劣原题是：Some parents think that they can teach their children at home rather than sending to the school. Do the ad
8、vantages outweigh the disadvantages?雅思写作大作文范文解析本题属于教育类话题的范畴。讨论家长可以在家教育孩子而不是送他们去学校，这件事情的好处和坏处。考生在思考论点时，可以从教育的本质即传输知识和技能这两方面展开，具体论述此举的坏处，以及家庭式教育的灵活性。一般来说，*的缺点倾向更好展开;毕竟现实生活中，学校教育是主流方式。因此，考生在阐述论点时也可以扬长避短。雅思大作文*结构paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且表明自己的观点。paragraph 2: 论述在家接受教育的缺点。(1. 学习知识的不全面 2. 家长教学方法的缺失)paragraph
9、 3: 论述在家接受教育的缺点。(1. 缺乏与同龄人的交往)paragraph 4: 论述在家接受教育的好处。(1.灵活性和便捷性更强)Paragraph 5: 总结上文论点，强调自己的观点。雅思写作大作文范文：In contemporary society, due to the easier access to learning and teaching resources, as well as the higher level of education possessed by parents, some of them contend that their children can
10、be better educated at home than at school. From my perspective, such practice exerts more negative impacts on childrens development both in academic attainment and social skills.The most distinct demerit is that children who receive education at home may fail to have the comprehensive coverage of kn
11、owledge. It is ubiquitous that not all parents are generalists although parts of them are granted with Bachelor or even Master Degree. In contrast, teachers at school specialize in different domains; for example, arts teachers gain expertise at literature, history and language while science teachers
12、 at physics, chemistry and mathematics. Apparently, learners can be imparted with professional theories or guidance via attending board curricula. Whats worse, it is conceivable that some parents lack teaching strategies and methodology. Unlike them, through years of teaching practice and training,
13、teachers are equipped with the ability to explain complicated equations, illustrate the theme of poetry and the aesthetic value of art works in a simple and understandable way. In this scenario, students learning efficiency can be boosted dramatically.Apart from these, another underlying downside is
14、 the scarcity of interaction with peers. Human beings are social animals and children are no exceptions. At school, they are encouraged and required to engage in abundant sports or outdoor activities, communicating and sharing happiness and sorrows with classmates or friends. During this process, th
15、ey have learnt how to be acceptable and accountable for their behaviors in a community. Conversely, fewer opportunities are provided for them to be in company of others who are at the same age if they are taught at home.On the flip side, we can not deny the fact that self-paced learning offers stude
16、nts conveniences and flexibility. To be specific, gifted students are allowed to study subjects ahead of their level and accomplish their compulsory education in a shorter period, instead of being restricted by the routine steps of school education.In conclusion, even though teaching children at hom
17、e is geared to talented students needs and capabilities, I still believe that formal education at school can not be substituted for its purpose for cultivating children to be well-rounded individuals.字数 384 words雅思写作大作文7分范文解析题目是：Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic (educational)
18、, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?雅思写作解析本题是一个典型的“报道型”(report)作文题目，要求考生对某个现象或问题进行原因分析，并给出解决办法。本题是一个比较新的题目。我们需要找到题目中的关键词。首先，children很关键，本题要求我们讨论的主人公是“孩子”，因此本题最好不要过多讨论大学生，更不可讨论更宽泛意义上的“人”。其次，题目中已经给定了“学
19、业”(academic)、“社会”(social)、“金钱”(commercial)三个层次的压力，因此讨论原因的时候最好都要涉及(虽然可以根据情况进行详略选择)。雅思写作7分范文What do you think makes children unhappy today? Researchers are pointing at the pressures from various perspectivesacademic, social and commercial. While the causes of these pressures seem clear enough, there a
20、re no simple measures to reduce them.It is easy to explain why children are facing academic, social and commercial pressures. Firstly, although as parents there are few pleasures greater than their children succeeding at school, sometimes the pressure is way too much. Parents unrealistically high ex
21、pectations can backfire severely and end up causing their children to be unhappy. Secondly, all children have to face peer pressure in school, which is generally beneficial to kids growth, yet the ugly reality is that peer pressure reaches its highest intensity at just the age when children tend to
22、be so insensitive, unkind, and even cruel as to purposefully make others unhappy. Thirdly, children are easily affected by advertising that attracts them to buy things they cannot possibly afford, and as a result, they may feel unhappy.Though it is never easy to fix these feelings of unhappiness, th
23、ere are possible measures to be taken to enhance the wellbeing of children who are under constant pressures. To begin with, parents have to draw a line on the expectations of their children and find out their true potentials, rather than pushing them to unrealistic limits. Meanwhile, with patience a
24、nd guidance, parents should keep an eye on their children who fall victims to online pressure through social networking. Simultaneously, the authorities should do more to regulate advertising that are intended for children who are anxious to buy unnecessary things.In conclusion, there are no easy so
25、lutions to the increasing academic, social, and commercial pressures children face today. Frankly, I am quite pessimistic because those factors that bring pressures to children are not likely to go away, at least in the foreseeable future.雅思写作高分表达Point at 指向.Perspective 角度Reduce 减少;减轻Pleasure 快乐;愉悦W
26、ay too much 太过了Unrealistically 不切实际地Backfire 回火;事与愿违End up 最终落得个.Peer pressure 同龄人压力Intensity 强度Purposefully 有意地Afford 负担得起Fix 解决Enhance 提高Constant 长期的Potential 潜力(的)Keep an eye on. 关注.Fall victim to. 沦为.的牺牲品Simultaneously 同时Frankly 坦白地说Pessimistic 悲观的In the foreseeable future 在可见的未来2018年5月24日雅思写作大作
27、文真题范文雅思大作文写作题目Children are face educational, social and commercial pressures. What are the causes of these pressures? What measures should be taken to reduce them?范文解析 本题属于教育类话题。重点讨论孩子面临教育，社交和商业压力的原因和解决方法。该题型属于说明文类别，考生在处理*结构时可以对应问题内容来设置主体段内容。在思考论点方面，关于社交和商业压力这两方面的原因可能稍难一些，尤其是对于“social”这个词汇的理解。如果理解为“
28、社会的”那么对应的原因就比较难以概括了。雅思大作文*结构paragraph 1 :结合时代背景引入话题且写出引导下文的衔接句。paragraph 2: 论述孩子面临教育、社交和商业压力的原因。paragraph 3: 论述对应的解决方法。paragraph 4: 总结题目中的现象和解决方法。雅思大作文写作范文In this time and age, it is conceivable that children bear heavy pressure from education, social life and commercial respect. This tendency invol
29、ves several factors and I would elaborate on them as follows.The most rooted one lies in the fiercer competition in the society. It is ubiquitous that the modern world is a one replete with competition. In an attempt to survive and attain success in future life, children are required to be accustome
30、d to competing with peers in various situations, ranging from academic performance to personal skills. Besides, most parents place higher expectation on their children, urging them to study harder and diminishing their time on entertainment. Obviously, under such circumstance, excessive stress is im
31、posed on children.Another factor is that children should follow certain rules to be acceptable by others. Although sometimes they do not quite approve of perspectives or values of peers, they are not allowed to behave aggressively and even conceal their true feeling to maintain a stable and close fr
32、iendship. In regard to the culprit of commercial pressure, intensive advertising campaigns should be blamed for. Toys and snacks are depicted attractive and tasty in TV commercials; consequently, it is difficult for children to resist the temptation and they tend to require parents to purchase those
33、 products. However, the fact is that the result is often contrary to their expectations.In order to relieve children from high pressure, several effective measures are supposed to be adopted. First and foremost, children themselves had better to adjust their attitude towards exams or competition in
34、schools. To be specific, composure and optimism are essential elements they should be equipped with when encountering challenges. In addition, parents encouragement and guidance rather than undue requirements serve the better purpose. Furthermore, government should play a regulatory role in advertis
35、ing aimed at children, applying the power to censoring the content of commercials.In conclusion, although it is regarded as a normal phenomenon in the wake of social development, children who are continuously under pressure are likely to suffer from mental diseases. Therefore, children, parents as well as the authority should make concerted efforts to address this issue.
