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1、托福口语低分常见问题分析 托福口语低分常见问题分析 ,如何避免表达内容空洞，今天给大家带来托福口语低分常见问题分析,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福口语低分常见问题分析 如何避免表达内容空洞托福口语如何避免表达内容空洞?中国学生在用英语表达的时候，论点有余，但是支持论点的例子和原因显得严重不足，因此，整篇表达听上去十分干涩，不够丰满。例如，当一个中国学生想要表达他非常喜欢一部电影的时候，他可能会不断地罗列他的论点而无法去挖掘、发展他的观点，他会说“I love this movie, and I think it is amazing. No one loves the
2、 movie like I do; it is so good and I think it is the best film in this world.” 这样的表达即使用最漂亮的发音呈现出来也显得苍白无力。甚至有的同学将托福口语题目中常出现的一句话“Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.” 当作一句没用的话，殊不知这正是托福口语考试希望同学们做的，用充分的事实去展开。丰富口语表达内容实例分析1一个建议的版本可以是这样的，如果想表达很喜欢Forrest Gump阿甘正传这部电影，可以说：“I love this
3、movie because I can learn something about Americas history. For example，I know the lost generation and Watergate scandal through this movie. People living in UnitedStates start doubting the policy of government, and of course, how the Vietnam War affected American peoples lives. People want to chang
4、e their attitudes to the war, and look for their own freedom and democracy. So I can have the opportunity to enrich my knowledge concerning this through this masterpiece.”这是一部非常“有文化”的电影。导演将美国重要的历史事件默默的安排在阿甘的经历中，通过时代的变迁反映出美国在各个时期的特征和美国年轻人的追求。如果考生可以用“迷失的一代”，“水事件”，“”来举例，rater马上就明白我喜欢这部电影的原因了，而且通过这些美国人耳
5、熟能详的例子也体现出考生满腹经纶，是一个非常了解美国历史和文化的优秀考生。丰富口语表达内容实例分析2再举一例，比如谈到一所好的大学需要具备什么样的特点这道题时，会说“The university has a good library.”或“The university has numerous trees.”就此停止了，而没能有理有据地展开。正确的表述比如：“My university has a good library, and it is one of the largest and most valuable research libraries in China. It has ab
6、out 6 million items in its collection, including over 2 million books and pamphlets and thousands of charts, engravings, manuscripts, map and so forth. The librarys half million manuscript collection reflects different aspects of Chinese life and culture. And the library has grown so large that it c
7、ould no longer be housed in one building. Two more buildings were built to accommodate the ever increasing collection in the library. Also, the library is computerized, so students can research the information or E-book freely when the professor assigns the new homework, which makes the use of the l
8、ibrary a pleasant experience.”要想避免表达思想内容空洞就可以按照上面大学图书馆一例来把自己的想法展开。具体要细化到什么程度还是由考生自己决定，不过强烈建议考生可以根据自己的生活经验和真实的感受(比如真的对自己学校的图书馆)进行客观的评价，而不是在考场中随性的编造例子，毕竟编造的内容是你临时想的，你也不能确定你的创造是否能hold住45秒的答题时间，反而自己真实的感受更容易表达。所以平时对于生活中的素材，或是一些新闻实事合理积累也对话题的展开大有裨益。托福口语的考官心水什么样的回答因为新的托福口语考试，考得不仅是学生“bula bula”的流利程度，更是要学生言之有
9、物，能实现有实质内容的问答，也就是我们常说的培养“交际能力”。例如，在托福口语考试中经常出现的问题：问你最喜欢在哪里读书?80%以上的学生立刻欢呼雀跃地先回答：library。然后下面的模式基本雷同：first，图书馆环境安静适合读书;second，图书馆书多，信息丰富，有我喜欢的.类书;third，图书馆有学习的氛围，总之，三板斧糊弄下来，完事大吉!不用我点评，这样的言之无物、了无生趣的答案估计学生自己都不忍心回头去听、去想，更何况每天要听成百上千答案的ETS评分专员呢。托福 口语中那么这种回答会不会好一点呢?我喜欢到附近的一个小公园去读书。读书本身是件苦差事，在公园里，我的大脑如果累了，可
10、以看看湖里的天鹅和游船，可以逗逗草地上嬉戏的孩子，不仅能放松，心情也会变得很好。而且公园里还有很多绿树和绿草，绿色非常适合可以放松眼睛，放松大脑，还可以闹中取静。也是短短几句，可是生动鲜活，合情合理而且最重要的是不落俗套。有的同学可能会说了，这样生动的东西，怎么可能在短短的15秒内准备好呢?这就是我常跟学生说的，要“做细活”。然后，口齿清楚也是重点。谁都不爱听“和尚念经式”的口语表达，抑扬顿挫的声调、适度的停顿和重音表达，都会在语气上加重你的情感和内容的色彩，这样，即使有一点“印度音”，评分老师也不会过度苛求的。希望同学们通过阅读，对托福成绩提升有一定的帮助。托福考试万能攻略之口语第一题托福口
11、语第一题简单原则：没有对错之分，自圆其说即可第一题是开放性话题，内容涉及4个大方面：人、物、地、事。要求考生在15秒钟的准备时间之后，用45秒来回答问题。这些问题都是最身边、最生活、最简单的话题，考生只要用最简单的语言答问题之所问即可。有些时候用一些比较复杂的词汇或者句子结构反而会成为口语熟练表达的桎梏。因此脑海中最先闪现的词或结构就可以摘来使用，当然这些词汇和结构要求恰当、合适。考生通常遇到的托福口语第一题疑问1整体来看语调缺乏起伏;流利度不够;流利但是发音不清晰，语调太平;衔接性不强。2语言应用方面用词不当(大词小用);句子结构有误;有明显的语法错误思想混乱，三单、过去式形式错误，男女不分
12、。3话题开展方面有理由，没细节;只有细节，没有提炼出理由;语言空洞，理由和细节不能支撑所持观点。4中英转换时找不到合适且恰当的英文表达。如果考生出现了上述所有问题，那自然分数低的“可观”;一般考生只会出现上述个别现象，所以只要对症下药，就可取得比较高的分数。托福口语第一题万能攻略1、每天的发音练习必不可少至少坚持一个月。大家要记住：语音方面，如果不是糟糕的不可救药的话，都是可以纠正过来的，所以首先要对自己充满信心。2、选择合适跟读材料，每天跟读30分钟不必花费心思挑选跟读材料，只要跟读我们的听力材料即可，比如红、蓝色Delta中的听力材料。3、每天10分钟的口语小段子谨遵第一题根本原则最生活，
13、每天用10分钟的时间完成一篇口语小段子，内容是一天当中任何值得纪念的人、物、事、地，字数在93-107字。写完后纠正出语法错误，然后熟读自己写的段子，继续完善。托福口语出口成章的好用句子(task1task2)【插图】There are a great many beautiful and delicate pictures to illustrate the words and make it more understandable. With those wonderful pictures, learning can be real fun and easy!【环境优美】The amaz
14、ing part is its picturesque view and enjoyable surroundings. Having a walk beside the lake and rockery, I can smell the fragrance of grass and the flowers, hear the cries of the birds and feel the bracing breeze on my face.【学习英语】With the language surroundings, itll be easy for me to polish my speaki
15、ng and listening skills.This can render me a good opportunity to practice my English, and eventually put me in a favorable position in the upcoming competition.【勇敢】Youve got to have faith and courage; the only thing we have to fear is fear itself. In this rapid developing society, if were easily fre
16、aked out by various challenges, then theres no way we can succeed.【放松】It drives away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. Whats more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off the depression and pessimism .【好笑】The scene is extremely hilarious and funny a
17、nd make me laugh. Laugh can definitely drive away my lassitude and helps me relax and relieve the pressure from work and study. Whats more? It even puts me in a better mood and wards off the depression and pessimism .【结交朋友】I would be able to make friends with those who share the same love for this.
18、Perhaps we can have a little get-together. We can talk, laugh, I mean, exchange our ideas and share our feelings. We all feel like one big family.【榜样作用】Since he is the role model for us, he needs to speak and behave appropriately, in order to set a good example for us. No one can deny that a good ex
19、ample can exert an profound influence on the people.【守信】He is a man of his word and he never breaks his promise. I remember once I asked him to pick up my cousin when I couldnt come back. He did so even though he had caught a bad cold. I said thanks and sorry but he said its ok because he promised m
20、e. It is the characteristic of keeping faith enabled him to win my complete trust.【热心】He is very obliging. Whenever you are in trouble, he is always the first one who comes up and gives you the shirt off his back. Once my computer was attacked by Trojan horse, it is him who spent four hours to help
21、me get rid of it.【善于表达】He should be expressive to convey his ideas effectively and efficiently. He is supposed to speak loud and clear and be able to put difficult things in a way that is easy to understand. Only in this way can we fully comprehend his idea and better do our own job.【体贴】He is consid
22、erate and shows much care and concern about others. He is always trying to look at things from your angle and not to hurt you or upset you. For example, knowing that I am taking a nap or reading books, he would turn down the volume of the CD player.【节约时间】Its such a time saver. In this fast-paced soc
23、iety, we all do our utmost to keep up with time. With the time it saves for us, we can do various meaningful things thus make the most of precious time which elapses every second【避免堵车】Since there is no traffic jam in subway lines, passengers can perfectly avoid the unpleasant traffic congestion. On
24、one hand, it saves us time, on the other hand itll make it easier for us to make plans and schedules. In contrast, other vehicles running on the roads and streets are extremely subject to traffic conditions.【覆盖面广】The subway system cover almost all the major parts of the cities, stations can be seen
25、everywhere. So it would be more convenient to go out by subway.【海量信息】We can have an easy access to a huge amount of information on the internet. The internet is a vast ocean of knowledge in both natural sciences and social sciences. Search engine like google can lead us to the information we need in
26、 no time and considerably broaden our horizon.【提升健康】It can improve health condition and enhance our ability to respond quickly. Besides, as long as we keep doing it frequently, we can effectively lose weight and keep ourselves in good shape. In addition, it can better prepare us for any physical cha
27、llenge in the future.【宽容】He should tolerate relatively small mistakes committed by others. Making mistakes is somehow inevitable, as long as its unintentional, he is supposed to forgive it. The tolerance will breed gratitude from others.【人际交往】During the process of communication, my interpersonal skills will improve considerably. This can help me cooperate with others more effectively, and render me more opportunities to make new acquaintance. With more friends, I could live happily and more likely to succeed.
