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1、托福写作句式运用心得分享 托福写作对*句式有一定要求，只靠平铺直叙的简单句很难拿到25分以上的作文成绩。今天给大家带来了托福写作句式运用心得分享 ，希望能够给帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作句式运用心得分享 倒装句改写技巧实例精讲托福写作完全倒装句式改写技巧实例讲解1. here, there, now, then等副词引导的句子，通常称作把时间状语，地点状语提前的倒装句，其谓语动词通常跟在时间or地点状语之后。A controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice appears then.变成
2、：Then appears a controversy whether starting school day early is a better choice.In the urban cities, an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a better living live there.变成：In the urban cities, there live an increasing number of ambitious youngsters who attempt to earn a bett
3、er living.2. 为了使描述的景象更生动，常把拟声词或away, in, out, up, down等状语放在句首，从而引起主谓全部倒装。Down it fell from the apple tree.The door opened, in rush the crowed.Up went the arrow总结1,2： here, there/now, then/in, out/up, down/ away + 谓语动词 + 主语3. 句首状语是表示地点的介词词组时，也完全倒装: 地点状语+谓语+主语很多工厂位于都市。Many factories lie in urban citie
4、s.变成：In urban cities lie many factories.越来越多的学生在美国学习，为了更先进的教育体系和多元文化。Students in a growing number study in America, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.变成：In America study students in a growing number, for advanced educational system and diversified culture.更多的市民选择住在在他们老了以后住小城市。M
5、ore citizens choose to live in a small town when they grow older.变成：In a small town choose to live more citizens, when they grow older.更多的年轻人选待在家里放松。Many more young people stay at home for relaxation.变成：At home stay many young people for relaxation.4. 表语 放在句首，倒装结构采用：“表语+ 系动词 + 主语”1)形容词+系动词+主语:大学生很担忧
6、他们未来的职业发展，使他们找各种兼职工作希望去尽可能多的培养技能。College students are anxious about their future career development, leading them to take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.变为：Anxious about their future career development are college students, leading them t
7、o take various different part-time jobs with the hoping to cultivate techniques as many as possible.2)现在/过去分词+系动词+主语：中国正发生巨大的变化。The dramatic change is taking place in China.变成：Taking place in China is the dramatic change.7-12岁的小孩上不了小学的现象已经一去不复返了。The phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years
8、old cannot attend primary schools are gone.变成：Gone are the phenomena that many kids aging from 7 to 12 years old cannot attend primary schools.发展中和发达国家都遭受了前所未有的经济危机。Both developing and developed countries are confronted with an unprecedented economic crisis.变成：Confronted with an unprecedented econom
9、ic crisis are both developing and developed countries.目前学校基础设施的质量正在经历巨大的提升。The quality of infrastructure facilities in current schools is experiencing a huge improvement变成：Experiencing a huge improvement is the quality of infrastructure facilities in current universities.日渐衰败的传统企业处于激烈的竞争市场中。Traditio
10、nal enterprises of gradual dilapidation is involved in the market of fierce competition变成：Involved in the market of fierce competition is traditional enterprises of gradual dilapidation.3)介词 + 系动词 + 主语：由睡眠不足引起的劳累和注意力不集中是导致交通事故的主要因素。The fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep are among the
11、 main contributors to traffic accidents.变成：Among the main contributors to traffic accidents are the fatigue and distraction caused by inadequate sleep.新东方托福写作语料库：独处是最好的放松方式独处是最好的放松方式语料库Do you agree or disagree with: Spending time alone is the best way to reduce the stress?是否同意独处是最佳的缓解压力的方式?相关提问：Whic
12、h way would you like to take to improve your health?Eat more healthy foodDo more exercisesReduce stress by other ways独处是缓解压力的最佳方式*布局：让步反驳写法:薛鹏思路拓展：为何独处不是最好的缓压方式，其他缓解压力的方式有哪些：1. 参加群体性的体育活动(例证展开)2. 和朋友们去旅行 (细节展开)薛鹏原创语料库：1. strain = stress = pressure n压力2. feel stressful adj感到压力的3. be under a pool of p
13、ressure v压力很大4. burn the mid-night oil v开夜车(为工作，学习)5. work far into the night v 工作到深夜6. strike a proper balance between rest and work v劳逸结合7. People always believe that they will be less busy in the future than now，however，they are, sometimes， too occupied to relax for a while. 人们一直以为将来会比现在轻松， 然而，有时
14、候，他们太忙碌，以至于不能稍微放松下。点评：relax for a while 放松一下点评：tooto 太而不能8. A lot of modern people with demanding jobs need a proper way to relieve their pressure caused by tight working scheme. 很多现代人，工作极有挑战性，因此，他们需要一种适当的方式缓解紧张工作引起的压力。点评：tight working scheme n紧张的工作计划9. Modern people are now under a pool of pressure
15、 ranging from pursuing academic excellence to sustaining the family to developing personal career. 现代人压力很大，压力来自追求学业，赡养家庭，发展事业。词汇：range from v 从到10. Some people argue that to enjoy the happiness of solitude is the best way to get relaxed. 有人认为享受独处的乐趣是放松的最佳方式。11. In comparison with being alone, embark
16、ing on group physical exercises and travelling with friends deserve more praises in terms of reducing pressure. 对比独处，从事群体性的体育锻炼，和朋友旅行在缓解压力方面更加值得推荐。词汇：in comparison with adv和对比点评：in terms of adv在方面12. is a good stress-reducer v 是缓解压力的有效方式13. is an effective way to relax ones body and ease ones mind 是
17、放松身心的良好方式14. in this way, ones circle of friends grows v因此，人的朋友增多了15. to enjoy the company of intimate friends v享受好友的陪伴16. add color to ones dull routine of everyday life v 增加了人们枯燥琐碎生活的乐趣17. Spending time alone is merely a short-term stress relief. 独处仅仅是短期的缓解方式。点评：relief n.(痛苦，压力等的)减轻18. To climb th
18、e mountain with a group of like-minded friends over weekends is a superior approach to relax and entertain, which will increase ones resilience over time. 在周末，和一群志同道合的好友一起爬山是更好的放松娱乐的方式，爬山运动可以增加人的乐观情绪。(例证展开)点评：increase ones resilience over time v 随着时间的推移，增加人的乐观情绪。19. Those who like to spend time alon
19、e, to large extent, tend to become socially inadequate and thus fail to establish good interpersonal relationship. 喜欢独处的人，在很大程度上，易于变得社交方面力不从心，也很难建立良好的人脉资源。点评：tend to become socially inadequate v容易变得社交方面力不从心 (推荐背诵)20. Although to reduce pressure by being alone sounds appealing to some extent，I still
20、enjoy the company of friends and group stress-reducing approach. 经管独自缓解压力在某种程度上听起来有吸引力，但是我依然喜欢好友的陪伴以及群体性的缓压方式。提升教师的工资是提升教学效率最重要的因素的之一。Increasing teachers salaries is one of the most indispensable methods to facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency.变成：Among the most indispensable methods to
21、facilitate the improvement of teaching efficiency is increasing teachers salaries.新东方托福写作语料库：高薪好还是低薪好?高薪低薪工作语料库工作类：A job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time. 是否同意低薪假期多的工作比高薪假期少的工作好?(09.02.27 )【范文】题目解析：对比类写法：主题观点：支持高薪假期少的工作：薛鹏思路拓展：1.
22、 工作是生活的重要部分，因此是幸福的源泉，很多人将自己的成就感和薪水的高低联系到一起。薪水高意味企业重视自己，因此，获得职业成就感和自豪感的机会就多。2. 经管可能休闲的时间减少，但是，高薪可以给家人带来更加幸福的生活。具体而言，改善居住环境，子女接受精英教育，家人的医疗有保障，这些是幸福的源泉。3. 工作着是美丽的，因为人不是怕忙，而是怕闲下来，工作通过有建设地利用了时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感。因此，世界上即使是最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。薛鹏原创语料库：1. One of the traits of modern way of working is that people e
23、njoy more freedom and flexibility in selecting their favorite jobs. 现代择业方式的重要特征之一就是人们在选择自己喜欢的事业方面更加自由，灵活。点评：One of the traits ofis that 的最重要的特征之一就是2. It often happens that modern job-seekers often fall into a dilemma when faced with the option of choosing a handsomely paid job with less vacation or
24、opting for a career with meager salary but less leisure hours. 人们常常陷入两难的困境，是选择高薪假期少的工作好，还是低薪假期多的工作好。3. a handsomely paid job with less vacation n高薪假期少的工作点评：vacation 假期(美国);holiday 假期(英国)4. a career with meager salary but less leisure hours n低薪假期多的工作5. When it comes to the issue that whether people s
25、hall take up the job with more freedom or the counterpart that could provide them alluring economic incentive, there never lacks debates and arguments. 当提及到是应该选择自由时间更多的工作，还是经济回报更好的工作的时候，人们常常争议不断。点评：alluring economic incentive n诱人的经济鼓励6. Many people prefer to secure a well-paying job even though they
26、 may have less time at their disposal. 很多人喜欢高薪的工作， 尽管他们的自由时间减少。点评：at ones own disposal v 可以供自己支配7. Making large sums of money could improve ones quality of life 挣到很多的钱可以提高生活的质量(细节展开)8. to receive fine education with high quality v接受精英教育9. to smell the flowers when aging v老年的时候，偷得余生半日闲(作家文采)10. to ta
27、ke a few days off in luxurious seaside resorts when vacation comes v 假期来临，在海边的奢华度假胜地享受生活11. take their salary as an indication of happiness v把薪水当成是幸福的一种象征12. have a meager salary = have a low-paid job v有低薪的工作记忆：m + eager = meager adj 少量的13. enjoy more freedom = have more time at ones own disposal v有
28、更多的自由14. enjoy the flexibility of work v 享受工作的灵活15. have a flexible working time v有更加灵活的工作时间点评：假期多的利好;远程办公的利好;远程教育的利好16. have more time that could be allocated to their families， friends or hobbies 有更多的时间留给家庭，朋友和爱好点评：谈及低薪假期多的工作的利好17. A well-paid career indicates high social status，which could earn r
29、espect from others. Some top stars or financially richer business leaders could serve as perfect examples. 高薪工作意味社会地位高，也赢得他人的尊敬，明星和企业家就是很好的例证。点评：financially richer business leaders n 富有的企业家(推荐背诵)18. Working, by occupying time constructively, makes one contented and with no time for boredom. 工作，有建设性地
30、利用时间，使人心满意足，再也没有无聊之感(推荐背诵)19. A busy life is what every individual aspires after. 人人渴望充实的生活。点评： is what every individual aspires after v 是人人渴望的。20. Provided workload is not excessive in amount, even the dullest work in this world is less painful than idleness. 假如工作不是过量的话，即使这个世界上最枯燥的工作，也比无所事事要强。点评：provided = if 假如
