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1、托福写作中的语法易错扣分细节实例分析 托福写作中的语法易错扣分细节实例分析, 这些低级错误别再犯了，今天给大家带来了托福写作中的语法易错扣分细节实例分析，希望能够给帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作中的语法易错扣分细节实例分析 这些低级错误别再犯了1.there be 句型误用There are a great many parents require their children to learning music and art since they are at the age of five.There are a large number of students s
2、pend more than ten hours a day on learning English in CAU.There be 句型是我们在写作中经常用的一种句型，可惜这种句型很多考生并不能真正掌握。在there be后面如果要加动词，千万不要出现例句所犯的错误，要时刻记得be动词后面应该加的是ing形式。2.主谓不一致错误A quantity of people concerns about how to solve the severe problem of air contamination.Restricted by methods, students has to be inf
3、luenced by their teachers, even though the teachers are not outstanding.新托福写作不同于汉语，汉语中的谓语动词是不会有任何变化的。比如说一个人在吃饭和一万个人在吃饭，吃就是吃，不会有吃s和吃之分。可是在英语中，谓语动词要根据主语的单复数情况进行变化。在上面的两个例句中，主语都是复数，而谓语动词却选择了单三形式，显然是不正确的。3.时态错误In the past, the major way for young people to learn knowledge is attending classes.When I stu
4、dy in college, I have no choice but to spend more than 10 hours a day on academic study.托福写作中除了主谓一致之外，还有一个特点就是时态问题。过去时，过去完成时，一般现在时，将来时，正在进行时等等。各种各样的时态也是我们要数量掌握的。在上面的例句中，所犯错误即为将过去时的动词写成了一般现在时。4.作文中的名词单复数错误A great many student would benefit from the investment on improving school.Few parent would like
5、 to permit their child to make any mistake.Environmental problem are beyond the ability of individual.上面这三句话中，都出现了共同的错误，就是本来应该是复数的名词却写成了单数形式。5.词性误用No one can negative the importance of money.Family members play significance role in our journey s of success.托福写作词性误用同样是托福考生常犯的一种错误，因为英语单词的名词形式，形容词形式，副词
6、形式很多时候是非常相近的，如果我们对语法掌握或者对于单词本身掌握不够扎实的话，很容易出这种错误。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：clothes influence the way people behave托福写作难点话题一览Does different clothes influence the way people behave?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People behave differently when they wear different clothes. Do you agre
7、e that different clothes influence the way people behave? Use specific examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析不能同意。确实，有些时候人们在穿着不同的情况下会有不同的行为。比如穿着正式的时候可能态度举止都会比较严谨。然而，决定行为因素还有很多，服装仅仅是其中的一个因素。(罗列几个其本话题高分范文赏析It seems that people do sometimes behave differently when they wear different clothes. For e
8、xample, a well-dressed man seldom spits at random, a woman in glorious dresses is more likely to talk in a gentle tone, and a clean dressed child seems quiet than others. It might be explained that different dresses give people different self-images, and most people subconsciously behave according t
9、o their own self-images. Equally sensible is another factor, that is, all too often people regard a person differently according to his/her dresses. Therefore, people might behave differently when they wear different clothes because they are treated differently. Also, appropriate dresses do help a l
10、ot in certain circumstances. It is not difficult to imagine that a doctor with a casual suit instead of his/her formal one will certainly make his/her patients nervous, for doctors in working hours are always supposed to be in white suits. An applicant in his/her first interview will be naturally ac
11、companied with great mental tension. If he/she was well-dressed, by well we do not mean expensively or gloriously, we mean neatly, he/she would appear more self-confident and or even be self-confident in deed. However, merely a suit in itself can contribute little. In fact, peoples behaviors inevita
12、bly reflect their very nature. A poor gentleman dressed in rags is still a gentleman. He knows the essential principles that a civilized individual must observe, he knows fundamental moral disciplines which an educated individual must follow. A parvenu on the other hand, will finally find out the fa
13、ct that his exorbitantly dear dresses is of no use to make himself a gentleman, and he even eventually fail to make him look like a gentleman. Maybe those are right who said it takes at least three generations to cultivate a gentleman. In a word, I do not believe that clothes can essentially make pe
14、ople different, even though they might sometimes seemingly do.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：how to choose your friends托福写作难点话题一览Choose friends who are different from you or similar to you?Some people choose friends who are different from themselves. Others choose friends who are similar to themselves. Compa
15、re the advantages of having friends who are different from you with the advantages of having friends who are similar to you. Which kind of friend do you prefer for yourself? Why?写作思路展开结构分析与志同道合(cherish the same ideals and follow the same path; share the same views; have a common goal; have similar i
16、deals and beliefs;)的朋友交往的好处;但是人与人之间毕竟存在着不同。与性格不同，兴趣不同的人交往的好处。选择立场，可以自由一些。比如，可以选择这样的立场：我认为，选择朋友不一定要选择相同的或者是不同的。因为人们之间总是有一些相同点的同时有一些不同点。关键在于，一个人是不是诚实、睿智、幽默。本话题高分范文赏析In general, my friends are quite similar to me. There are a number of reasons as to why this is the case. When two people are similar to
17、each other, they have a wide basis of topics available to them for conversation, and are also able to bond over many types of experiences. For example, one of my major interests is music. I frequently enjoy going to see musical acts perform. If a potential friend is not interested in the same type o
18、f music as me, we will not be able to share these experiences together. Without being able to have these bonding experiences, it is difficult for an acquaintanceship to evolve into a friendship. Another reason why we usually choose friends who are quite similar to us is because having similar friend
19、s who have common interests can help us come up with new ideas regarding things we are interested in. If I am particularly interested in a project, but cannot seem to advance the thought to my satisfaction, it is quite likely that one of my friends will be able to offer insight on the subject that I
20、 hadnt previously thought of. Nonetheless, it is important to consider exactly how similar one must be to me for me to form a friendship with them. I have many friends who, on the surface, are quite different from me. However, we share one or two common interests that allow us to communicate on a cl
21、ear, meaningful level. To explain, I will give an example of a particular friend who fits into this category. I met this friend at the opening of a new Italian restaurant in town. We have very different interests, and very different occupations. However, we are both connoisseurs of fine cuisine. Bas
22、ed on this one small connection, we formed a very good friendship. In conclusion, I find that it is possible to have friends who appear similar to or different from myself. The key to a strong, lasting friendship is finding one or two areas that both parties find interesting.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：pl
23、anning for your leisure time托福写作难点话题一览Planning or not planning for your leisure time?Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of no
24、t making plans. Which do you prefer planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.写作思路展开结构分析倾向于选择“有计划”。因为不管做什么事情，多少都会有一些计划。至少知道从什么时候开始，到什么时候结束。罗列几个实现计划的好处。据几个实例。使用让步结构结尾：尽管确实有一些过程完全不需要计划，而计划也做不到面面俱到(cover all aspects; have every detail thoug
25、ht of - think of every detail)，但是适当的计划仍然是必要的。本话题高分范文赏析Some people find it to be a better use of their free time if they plan out all of their activities very carefully. Others enjoy their free time more if they do not make any plans at all. I agree with those in the latter group, and would prefer to
26、 not be restricted to a schedule. Above most things, I enjoy living my life spontaneously. If I decide that I want to go away for the weekend, assuming I have money and can take time off work, I will go. I am able to live my life in this manner because I never bind myself to carefully planned schedu
27、les. I make the most out of every situation I come across and always enjoy myself. Because of this, there is no need for a schedule. It is much more fun to just wait and see what will happen next, after all, its a free time. I always enjoy the freedom of an unplanned afternoon. If I need to get erra
28、nds done, I will find time for them. If I have free time, I want to enjoy it. I do not want to be trying to finish things quickly just because there is somewhere else that might be interesting on my list of things to do. If I am at a park and am really enjoying myself, there is no reason why I shoul
29、d leave, even if there is something else to do on my list that sounds interesting. I believe in living in the moment. What I am doing at the present moment is more important than anything I might do in the future. If, on a rare occasion, I do make a schedule, I find that it quickly runs off track. Perhaps I am just particularly bad at keeping to a schedule, but I find that some things take longer to do than I expected they would, and other things are finished in much shorter a time than expected. This quickly makes even the best schedule go awry.
