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1、托福作文写作要掌握好度 托福作文之前介绍过要有一个好的文笔，但是这里提醒大家的是新托福写作不要过度卖弄自己的句子，今天给大家带来托福作文写作要掌握好度，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福作文写作要掌握好度当我们说到托福写作技巧中句式多样性的时候，我们最常想到的就是两点，第一点，这是好像一直都与我绝缘，我们最常写的就只有定语从句和宾语从句，第二点，所谓句式的多样性，貌似只要把句子写长了，句子就有多样性了。如果我们喜欢卖弄文字的话，其实大可以说短句不见得句子多样性就不好，长句不见得句子多样性就好。但是托福作文句子长本身就是更有空间来承载更多的可能性，这里自然也就包括句子的多样
2、性。如果句子短的话，可用空间就少，想增加多样性难度就会偏高，这是不可否认的。但是，这并不意味着句子单纯的长就是好事，其实简单来说，新托福写作中我们会发现高分作文句子的长度大多是会控制在2行以内，换句话说，如果一篇托福作文之中有1-2句超过了2行，是可以的，但是如果有5句以上都超过了2行，在别人看的时候，有可能就会觉得过于复杂难懂了，这个度是要把握好的。接下来就是我们句式多样性的主菜了，也就是到底哪些元素会增加句子的多样性呢?这就要分为两大块，第一大块是替换和改写句子里面的某些词来实现的，另外一部分，则是要重写整个句子才能实现的。当然第一块是最好做的，我们不妨先来看第一部分。其实第一部分，可以包
3、括如下几个部分，分别是：定语从句，非限定性定语从句，宾语从句，同位语，介宾结构，并列结构，固定搭配，以及地道的表达方式。我们可以看一下作文巨讲堂里面的句子。学生综合英语素质的提升，取决于自身的英语基本功底，从听、说、读、写各方面全方位的提高。词汇，语法，语言理解能力均衡发展，是将来考试测试的重点。综合英语系列课程选用了当前最优秀的引进教材，采用国际流行的教学模式，深度剖析英语作为第二语言学习的特点，选取当下的热点话题，让学生在学习过程中也能丰富视野，为将来的留学做好充足的准备。听说教程的教材选用了朗文当代听说教程，阅写教程的教材选用了积极英语阅读教程，两套教程相辅相成，采用进阶式的编排方式，内
4、容详实，题材丰富。对于那些没有出国打算，只是想提升英语的同学来说，也是非常契合的。综合英语系列课程共分三个阶段：综合英语基础阶段;综合英语提升阶段以及综合英语强化阶段。通过系统的综合英语课程学习，学生可以全面提升自己的英语水平，充分为将来的雅思，新托福以及SAT考试打下坚实的基础。教程里面的词汇，语法训练以及*体裁都充分迎合目前的各类考试，学生也可以提前熟悉各类的*体裁，提前了解国外学习生活的模式。各个阶段学习结束都有相应的阶段测试，用来评估学生学习的进度及效果，方便制定后续的学习计划。定语从句的代表就是：The difference is very obvious, so the moder
5、n people who have high technol.y would easier to be successful.里面的who have high technol.y非限定性定语从句的代表：The standard is very wide and abstract, which are against the standard of the students scores narrowness and rigidity.里面的which are against the standard of the students scores narrowness and rigidity.
6、宾语从句的代表是：We have to admit that grandparents would not be able to give suggestions when we are in trouble with these new technol.ies or when we are in problems with specific characteristics of this generation.之中的that grandparents would not be able to give suggestions when we are in trouble with these
7、 new technol.ies or when we are in problems with specific characteristics of this generation.同位语：Thomas Jefferson，the third president of the United States，may be less fa- mous than George Washington and Abraham Lincoln.里面的the third president of the United States，(本句话不取材于作文巨讲堂)介宾结构的代表是： Also, in poli
8、tical negotiations, possessing of a solid oral expression would give the government more lead in negotiation and prevent possible misunderstandings when discussing specific details.这里的in political negotiations并列结构很重要，他的代表是：Internet, smart phones and computers are filled in every corner of our daily
9、lives.他们的Internet, smart phones and computers。显然并列结构会让人感觉论证很充分，很令人信服。固定搭配的代表就是：For instance, the computer plays an important role in our life in terms of efficiency.里面的plays an important role。地道的表达的代表则是Given the past, I had to go to the library and bury me a couple of days looking for the informatio
10、n on nuclear energy without the assistance of computers.里面的Given the past前面这是第一部分，不过说实话，这还是简单易学的。但是有一些其实是要改变我们整体的思维方式，由此来改变我们的写作或者说表达方式，其实这一点上是难度很高的。比如说这句话The extreme seriousness of desertification results from the vast areas of land and the tremendous numbers of people affected, as well as from the
11、 great difficulty of reversing or even slowing the process.其实我们想一下就会发现，我们自己写，很多时候不会这么写，我们写的很有可能是The desertification is extremely seriousness. Because the vast areas of land and the tremendous numbers of people was affected, as well as reversing or even slowing the process is very difficulty.这其实是难度很高
12、的。但往往也就是因为这个核心部分，而决定了一个分数段上的差别。可以看出新托福写作中关于托福写作技巧的介绍比较重要的便是句式的运用，一个漂亮的句子往往能让你的托福作文上一个档次，希望大家在这方面多下一下功夫托福考试复习攻略：地道美式作文必备60词新托福考试作文高分评判标准之一，就是看你对于词汇的驾驭能力，这里的“驾驭”指的不光指你的单词量有多大，还包括你的词汇用的有多么的准确。这种准确就像是东北人听到了“俺们”，北京人听到了“有范”，上海人听到了“晓得伐?”，广东人听到了”点解“。换句话说，就是“地道”。下面，为您提供托福作文高分词汇60个，请注意，等号前面的是实际使用的，等号后面的是中国学生经
13、常使用的单词。aid=assist(帮助，援助)alter=change or modify(改变)ask=inquire(询问)assail=denounce(谴责)axe=dismissreduce(解雇，减少)balk=impede(阻碍)ban=prohibit or forbid(禁止)bar=prevent(防止，阻止)bare=expose or reveal(暴露，揭露)blast=explode(爆炸)begin=commence(开始)bid=attempt(努力)bilk=cheat(欺骗)bolt=desert or abandon(放弃)boost=increase(
14、增加，提高)check=examine(检查)claim=ause the death of(夺去的生命)clash=disagree strong1y(发生分歧，争议)curb=control or restrict(控制)dip=decIlne or decrease(下降)ease=lessen(减轻，缓和)end=terminate(结束，中止)flay=criticize(批评)flout=insult(侮辱)foil=prevent from(阻止，防止)grill = investigate(调查)gut=destroy(摧毁)head=direct(率领)hold=arrest
15、(逮捕)laud=praise(赞扬)lop=diminish(下降，减少)map=work out(制订)mark=celebrate(庆祝)name=appointnominate(命名，提名)moot=discuss(讨论)mull=consider(考虑)nab=arrest(逮捕)nip=defeat(击败)ease=lessen(减轻，缓和)end=terminate(结束，中止)flay=criticize(批评)flout=insult(侮辱)foil=prevent from(阻止，防止)grill = investigate(调查)gut=destroy(摧毁)head=d
16、irect(率领)hold=arrest(逮捕)laud=praise(赞扬)lop=diminish(下降，减少)map=work out(制订)mark=celebrate(庆祝)name=appointnominate(命名，提名)moot=discuss(讨论)mull=consider(考虑)nab=arrest(逮捕)nip=defeat(击败)slay=murder(谋杀)soar=skyrocket(急剧上升)spur=encourage(激励，鞭策)swap=exchange(交流，交换)sway=influence(影响)trim=reduce(削减)vie=compete
17、(竞争)vow=determine(决心，发誓)weigh=consider(考虑)你想要的托福写作模板都在这里托福写作模板一A or B将 原题复述_.When faced with the decision of A of B, quite a few would deem that_, but others, in contrast, believe A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence -A/-B, there are three cons
18、picuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity of _is that_.The second reason can be seen by every person that_.In addition, these reason are also usable when we consider that_.There are some disadvantages in_另一种观点的缺点_.In a word, _重复观点句并缩写理由_.Taking into account of all these factors, w
19、e may reach the conclusion that_.托福写作模板二A or BDepending on personal experience, personality type and emotional concern, we find that some people hold the idea of A meanwhile others prefer to B, from my point of view, it is more advisable to chose A rather than B. My arguments for this point are list
20、ed as follows.The main reason for my propensity for A is that_. 就理由进行解释_. For instance,_ .Another reason can be seen by every one is that_. 就理由进行解释_. For example,_.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because_.Although I agree that there may be a couple of
21、 advantages of B, I feel that the disadvantages are more obvious. Such as_.In a word, _.So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to A.托福写作模板三单一命题式The answer of this statement depends on your own experience and life style. In my point view, buying computers is as important as, i
22、f not more important than, buying books. So it is sagacious to _.Among countless factors which influence the choice, these are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for _is that_.Another reason can be seen by every person is that_.Furthermore, _.In short,_复述前文中的理由_.托
23、福写作模板四agree or disagreeSome people argue as if it is a general truth that a _.But to be frank, I cannot agree with them. There are numerous reasons why I hold no confidence on them, and I would explore only a few primary ones here.The main problem with this argument is that it is ignoran to the basi
24、c fact that_解释本段中心_.Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that I believe that_.What is more, some students are interested in_.In a word, _.托福写作模板五A or BSome people prefer to A. others believe B. When faced with the decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that_, but others, in
25、 contrast , deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. There are numerous reasons why_, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones here.The main reason why I agree with the above statement, however, is that_. Take _as example, _.There is another factor that deserves som
26、e words here. Such as_.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that_. (examples:_).From the above you might got idea that I agree_.(repeat the above three reason_).So, it is sagacious to support the statement that it is better to _.托福写作模板六Agree or disagreeSome people prefer to A, o
27、thers believe B, Nowadays some may hold the opinion that _, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree/disagree that_. MY arguments for this point are listed as follows.One of the primary causes is that_.Examples_.But there is a further more subtle point we must consider.
28、 Examples.What is more_. Examples_.General speaking, _. Recognizing the fact that _should drive us to conclude that_.托福写作模板七A or BIn my point of view, A is as important as, if not more important than B. So it is sagacious to choose A. Among count less factors which influence A. there are three consp
29、icuous aspects as follows.The above point is certainly true if A is considered. For example,_.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that A is better than B. For instance,_.It would probably not be too kindly disposed to the idea that B is not important . B_也好_.In a wo
30、rd, to choose A or B is something of a dilemma to the public because they sometimes are confused by the seemingly good qualities of B, and neglect hte genuinely good aspects of A. For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that A, but not B.托福写作模板八A or BWhen faced with the deci
31、sion of A or B, quite a few would claim that A, but others, in contrast, deem B as the premier choice and that is also my point. This quite different view is based on the propensity of following points.We may look into every possible reason, however, fore most reason for B is _. For example, _.Also,
32、 _.This is arbitray to judge B according only to the excuse I mentioned in the above paragraph.Similarly, these reasons are also usable when we consider that_.Admittedly, _A也有好的地方_.By he same token, however, _B更好_.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_.托福写作模板九A o
33、r BWhen it comes to_, Nevertheless, in my part, I prefer A rather than B as my inclination. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _without reservation since_.Naturally _.It can be given a concrete example_.A more essential factor why I advocate the argumen
34、t of _is that. Obviously _.Take the case of a thing that_.Furthermore, what is worth noticing fact is that _. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that_.Of course, choosing B also has advantages to some extent,_此处论述B的1-2优点_.But if all these factors are contemplated, the advantages of A carry more w
35、eight than those of B. From what has been discussed above, we may finally draw the conclusion that_.托福写作模板十A or B_ 改写并复述题目_. There may be by one or two disadvantages to _; however, I believe that there are far more advantages. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.First of all, perhaps o
36、ne disadvantages to _is that _.For instance, _. Another drawback to _involves the possibility that_. For example, _.Even though there may be one or two disadvantages to_, the advantages far outweigh them. The main reason for my propensity for _is that _. For example_.Another reason for my inclinatio
37、n for _ is that _. For example, _.In a word, in spite of the fact that there may be a couple of disadvantages to _, I feel that the advantages are more obvious_.重复优点_.Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that _.托福写作模板十一A or B_ 改写并复述题目_.The advantages of B carry more
38、weight than those of A. There are numerous reasons why _, and I would explore only a few of the most important ones hereOne of the primary cause is that_.What is also worth noticing fact is that_.Furthermore, _.Although I agree that there may be couple of disadvantages to _.I fell that the advantage
39、s are more obvious_._, Given the factors I have just outlined, I can only say that_.托福写作模板十二A or B_ 改写并复述题目_.When faced withe decision of A or B, quite a few would claim that _, but others, in contrast, deem A/B as the premier choice and that is also my point. Among countless factors which influence
40、 _, there are three conspicuous aspects as follows.The main reason for my propensity for _ is that _.Another reason can be seen by every person is that_.The argument I support in the first paragraph is also in a position of advantage because _.In a word, _.Taking into account of all these factors, w
41、e may reach the conclusion that _.托福写作模板十三agree or disagreeNowadays, some may hold the opinion that _. But others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I agree that _. My arguments for this point are listed as follows.I agree with the statement that _without reservation since _.Another reason why I agree with the above statement is that I believe that_.In a word,_. Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that_.托福写作模板十四A or BFrom my point of view, it is advisable
