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4、的人。2.语句要通顺。3.用一件事来写（或者是人物的一系列行为。4.抓住人物的特点。,二、明确任务，选材构思,长辈（父母、爷爷、奶奶、外公、外婆、老师等） 同辈（同学、兄弟、姐妹、邻居家的小伙伴等）,明确习作对象,如何定题目？,习作指导,给你将要写的作文选择一个题目，用上表示人物特点的词语。,如“我们班的昆虫迷”“故事大王张小乐”,抓住特点： 有的爱学习、有的爱帮助别人，有的爱做小手工，有的爱吃零食，有的爱劳动，有的爱读书，有的爱踢足球等等。写人的作文就是要抓住这些特点写好一件事。,性格特点：细心、唠叨、爱美、善良、温柔关心我、乐于助人、严厉、关心学生、工作认真、马虎、文静、爱劳动、勇敢、爱读
5、书、聪明、乐于助人、调皮、可爱、,一、要适当地描写人物的外貌1.按照一定的顺序2.抓住外在特点3.适当添加修辞手法,二、要选择一件具体的事例来表现这个人的特点用典型的事例突出人物的特点。（什么时候？在哪里？发生了什么事？事件发生过程中出了什么状况？结果如何？）写一件事。三、要对这个人的语言、动作、神态心理活动进行描写,爱劳动的小红小红特别爱劳动。记得有一次，在开家长会的前一天，（时间）老师一声令下：“我们今天大扫除，现在就开始。”（事情起因）老师刚说完，小红（人物）就第一个冲到黑板前，拿起抹布放进水盆里弄湿，然后两只手用力把抹布拧干净，然后叠成方块，最后端了一把凳子放到黑板前，站在上面，一下一
6、下的擦了起来，等擦完之后，她又端盆到洗手间把盆洗干净，换了新水。她洗了洗抹布，又站到凳子上认真地擦了起来，擦完以后，整个黑板就像换了一件衣服似的，被擦得如同星星一样明亮。（事情经过）老师和同学们都夸她是个爱劳动的同学。（事情结果）,例文1：,我们班的认真大王她是我的向学郑欣雨。一张白里透红的脸，像一个红红的大苹果，脸上嵌着一双水汪汪的大眼睛一眨一眨的像天上闪烁的星星，小巧玲珑的鼻子，她的伶牙俐齿总是说得别人哑口无言。下课了，同学们像箭一样冲出教室。郑欣雨却依然在座位上认真地练字，我跑过去，大声地说：“郑欣雨，我们一起去玩吧！”她头也不抬，仍然埋头写字。我连喊了三遍，她还是头也不抬。我生气地回到
7、座位上。过了一会儿有人拍我，我一看，原来是郑欣雨，我说：“你刚才不是不理我的吗？”她惭愧地说“刚才我在练字，没听见，真对不起。你能原谅我吗？”我点点头。她又说：“练字有许多的好处。不如我们一起来学练字吧！”我高兴地笑了。我相信我们能永远做朋友，也相信她一定能成为一位著名的书法家。,例文2：,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才路,状元成才
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