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1、,Writing,Describe the picture,She is used to using a smart-phone before going to bed every day.,She uses a smart-phone before going to bed.,智能手机,before going to bed,Danger,be bad for,伤身体,描述图片,Describe the picture,Many people use smart-phones when they cross the street.,Many people use smart-phones w
2、hen they ride bikesdrive a carwalk.,cause traffic accidents,1.eat with family,eat with family,Describe the picture,Some people use smart-phones when they eat with family.,Some people use smart-phones. They eat with family.,Danger,influence,the relationship with,Opinions,1.好好利用手机。（make good use of）2.
3、面对面的交流胜过网上交流。 （ face-to-face conversation）,Structures: In my opinion I think/believe,Wed better make good use of smart-phones.,Face-to-face conversation is better than chatting online.,We can use them at proper time and proper situations,Discussion,小组讨论发表你们的观点：,(firstly, secondly, besides, whats mor
4、e, finallyOn the one hand, on the other handnot onlybut also),（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(phubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”写一篇120词左右的短文。,要求：1. 短文须包含所有信息，语句通顺、意思连贯,可适当发挥；2. 题目与开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：1. eat with family 2. cause traffic accidents3. face-to-fac
5、e conversation 4. make good use of Refuse to be phubbers With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. Phubbers can be seen here and there. _,1.认真审题， 理清思路。 2.列出提纲，初步成形。,本篇文章应分为几段，每段都写什么？应选用哪种时态？第几人称？需要用到哪些句式结构？,（2015，烟台）随着互联网的发展，智能手机（smart-phone）已被广泛使用。我们身边的“低头族(ph
6、ubber)”随处可见。请根据图中所示，结合表格所提供的信息,以“Refuse to be phubbers”写一篇120词左右的短文。,选出每段主题句：,In my opinion, we should learn to use our smart-phones properly, and we should refuse to be phubbers 2. With the development of the Internet, smart-phones are widely used among people. 3.Being phubbers has some disadvantag
7、es.,1.现象,2.弊端,3.观点,While writing,While writing,几点建议：,1.注意标点和字母大小写.,2.注意句子的结构正确。,3.注意遣词造句，争取文采。,Refuse to be phubbers,Your opinions(1.make good use of 2.face-to-face conversation, ),现象Phenomenon (1.eat with family2.get together with friends3.be busy doing cross the street）,Disadvantages,In my opinion
8、, We shouldWed betterI think/believe,4.the relationship with5.cause traffic accidents6.be bad for/get in the way of,Exchange your article with your partner , then underline the beautiful sentences and circle the mistakes.,Groupwork,1.用最熟悉、最有把握的句型，短语。2.用英语思维来表达。3.语句要通顺，层次要清楚，上下连贯很重要。,Some advice for you!,Put down the phones, give more time to our families .,Homework,A组：继续改写本节课作文，使它更加完美。B组：利用本节课所学方法，针对近段时间班上有些同学“抄袭作业或不锻炼身体”的现象屡见不鲜，写一篇分析原因、危害、解决办法和自己的态度的英语作文 。,Thanks for your listening,
