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1、中考英语专题作文交通问题及绿色出行Traffic Problems and Green Commuting,中考英语专题作文,brainstorm,way to school AndWay to work,On foot/walk .,By bike.,By bus.,By horse/carriage.,By subway.,By plane.,By train.,By boat.,How do you go to school/work?,brainstormOn foot/walk .By bik,Types of vehciles:,bus,train,car,taxi,Types o
2、f vehciles:bustraincart,Discuss the means of transportation you have used.,plane,subway,light rail,ferry,Discuss the means of transport,Can you guess the meaning of these two words？,carriage spaceship,Can you guess the meaning of t,Traffic Accidents,Page 6,Traffic AccidentsPage 6,What are the reason
3、s that cause more and more traffic accidents today?,more cars on the road road designs are not clearlack of driver educationtoo many bad and dangerous drivers: not skillful enough, irresponsible,What are the reasons that caus,What behaviors can result in traffic accidents?,for driversdriving too fas
4、t /speedingdriving while on the cell phonesrunning the red lightsudden lane（车道） changingdrunk drivingnot using signal(信号 ）lights,What behaviors can result in,for pedestrians（行人）,running the red lightcrossing the road while listening to the music or using the mobile phone.get over the fence（栅栏）,What
5、behaviors can result in traffic accidents?,for pedestrians（行人）running th,the sign of bans 禁止标志,the sign of bans 禁止标志,禁止通行No entry禁止驶车No driving禁止停车,the sign of directions 指示标志,the sign of directions 指示标志,单行路（直行）straight-going only允许掉头,the sign of cautions 警示标志,the sign of cautions 警示标志,事故易发路段Acciden
6、ts happen easily注,What can we do to avoid the traffic accidents?,Education for drivers self-discipline(自律） education for pedestrians self-protectionStrict official management Drive patientUse seat-belt and other safety devices.Do not run red light.,What can we do to avoid the tr,What should the pede
7、strians do ?,Crossing with the signal in a crosswalkDont walk on the high way Follow the traffic rulesWalking along a sidewalkRemember the above four points,What should the pedestrians do,What traffic problems do you know?,traffic jams,parking problems,noise pollution,air pollutions,traffic accident
8、s,What traffic problems do you k,Page 19,How to solve these traffic problems ?,Choose green commuting.Drive less, try to choose the public transport. try to walk or ride a bike,Page 19How to solve these traf,中考专题作文,随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越拥堵，某中学英文报刊的主编邀请你为该报纸写一篇小短文，呼吁人们绿色出行（Green commuting)内容包括：
9、1 如何做到绿色出行？2 作为中学生，我们如何支持绿色出行？3 说说绿色出行的重要性及呼吁人们绿色出行。写作要求：1 文中不得出现学校和本人的真名；2、80词左右，作文开头已给出，不记入总词数。开头：As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems.,中考专题作文随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交,内容分：7分（1）绿色出行重要性（1分），呼吁（1.5分）（2）如何做到（每条建议1.5分） 4.5分内容要点完整且词数符合写作要求的作文可以得7分，词数在70个以下的作文在内容分上酌情扣分。语言分：8分第一档：8分 要求
10、：内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。第二档：67分 要求：内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少量语言错误。 第三档：45分 要求：内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚 ,连贯，基本符合逻辑，但有一些语言错误。第四档：13分 要求：内容涵盖部分要点，能写出少数正确句子，但整体表达不太连贯，且语言错误较多。 第五档：0分 空白卷或你没有相关内容。,评分档次和要求：,内容分：7分评分档次和要求：,认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。,写作第一步,审,写作第一步审,审:,随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越拥堵，某中学英文报刊的主编邀
11、请你为该报纸写一篇小短文，呼吁人们绿色出行（Green commuting)。(80词左右）内容包括：1 如何做到绿色出行？2 作为中学生，我们如何支持绿色出行？3 说说绿色出行的重要性及呼吁人们绿色出行。,找出关键词、明确作文要求,_,_,_,_,因开头已给出，决定将呼吁部分当作结尾，其它要求作为正文。,审:随着人民生活水平的提高，开车出行的人越来越多，交通越来越,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。列写作第二步,1、开头已给出2、正文（body)分述1）、如何做到？可用句型:We should/can/are supposed to/. We
12、should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far.2）、如何支持？Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a car,列,1、开头已给出列,3）绿色出行的重要性. 可用句型:it can help. /it can give us可用句子:It can help solve the traffic problems and give us a gree
13、n life. 3、结尾总结（呼吁人们绿色出行）.Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?,列,3）绿色出行的重要性. 列,We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. We can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. It can help solve the traffic problems and give us a green life.,As we know,too much trafiic
14、has caused too many problems.,Green commuting is necessary. Why not come and join us?,a nice head,a nice tail,a nice body,We should drive less and try t,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：,加,加首尾，使结构完整。首：As we know,too much trafiic has caused too many problems. To s
15、olve these problems, we have to do something.尾：Green commuting is necessaryIt can help solve these traffic problems, it will give us a green life.Why not come and join us?,写作第三步：,加加首尾，使结构完整。写作第三步：,加,加正文，使内容丰富。We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the
16、train and so onWe can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far.That will help reduce traffic problems.Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a carIt is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can take some exercise.,写作第三步：,加加正文，使内容丰富。写作第三步：,连,恰当运用关联词
17、句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,连恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。写作,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示选择: or, eitheror;3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the one handon the other h
18、and;7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, gene
19、rally speaking,关联词,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bo,Lets play the game.,_ I am tired, I keep on working till midnight.He didnt go to movies, he went to the concert _.We like doing kinds of sports _ swimming, running and hiking._, he stood up. Then he got out. _, he went back. _, he smiled.,Though,like
20、,Next,First,instead,Finally,Lets play the game._ I am,连,As we know, too much traffic has caused too many problems. To solve these problems, we have to do something. We should drive less and try to choose the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the train and so on. We can walk or ride a bike
21、if it is not too far. That will help reduce these traffic problems. Students can go to school on foot or by bike, try not to take a car. It is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can take some exercise. Green commuting is necessary.It can help solve these traffic probl
22、ems, it will give us a green life.Why not come and join us?,写作第四步：,instead of taking a car.,and,First,Second,连 As we know, too much traf,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,美选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。写,美,As we know, too much traffic has caused too many problems. To solve these problems, we have
23、to do something. First, we should drive less and try to choose the public transport. Like the bus, the subway, the train and so on. Second, we can walk or ride a bike if it is not too far. That will help reduce these traffic problems. Students can go to school on foot or by bike instead of taking a
24、car. It is good for the environment. And it is good for our health because we can take some exercise. Green commuting is necessary.It can help solve these traffic problems and give us a green life. Why not come and join us?,写作第五步：,As a student,we,At the same time,solve these problems,We have to do s
25、omething to,美 As we know, too much traf,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up.We should do sports a week once.Save the environment is our duty.There is going to have a meeting today.I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Saving,be,achieve,Skill One Make your sentenc
26、es,Skill Two Express in different ways,Our parents really wish us to work hard.Our parents really wish us to put our heart into study.The teenagers like the computers.The teenagers are fond of the computers. We shouldnt eat junk food. We should stay away from the junk food. When he spoke, he got mor
27、e excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got. We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.,Skill Two Express in differe,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,书面表达写作技巧审列加连美,中考作文评分标准,第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（1-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。,中考作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）,Homework,Correct and rewrite your passage.,Homework,Thank you!,Thank you!,
