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1、中考英语作文专题,1,中考英语作文专题1,评分标准,2,评分标准 第一档符合题意要求，表达完整，条理清晰，语句,写作小技巧,3,写作小技巧写作小技巧学生例句更改例句1.用两个词而不用一个词,说明文,写前,“2W”: what, why, 人称、时态subject, tense头脑风暴:brainstorming列提纲: 搜集、提取信息,写中,组织信息添加内容选取信息（根据内容而定）自我检查,写后,检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等,审题,书写,检查,4,说明文写前“2W”: what, why, 写中组织信息写后,说明文,1. 背景信息2. Whats it?,What,W
2、hy,1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?,How,根据提示信息扩展内容,Other,.,写前,审题,5,说明文WhatWhyHowOther写前审题5,真题赏析,6,真题赏析6,即将毕业的你，将如何处置初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢？假如你是李华，请根据以下提示，给学校英文报纸写一封电子邮件，分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。(2019年陕西省中考英语作文),put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale,要求: 1. 参考提示语，可适当发挥； 2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整； 3. 文章不得出
3、现任何真实信息（姓名、学校和地名等） 4. 词数: 不少于70词。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。）,Dear Editor, My name is Li Hua. Im going to graduate soon. Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks. I hope,文章的背景信息,人称: I时态：一般将来时,7,即将毕业的你，将如何处置初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢？假如你是,说明文,1. 背景信息2. Whats it?,What,Why,1.Why is it specia
4、l?2. Why do you like it?,How,根据提示信息扩展内容,Other,.,写前,Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.,1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacation,put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale,Step 1,审题,8,说明文WhatWhyHowOther.写前Id lik,说明文,1. 背景信息2. Whats it?,What,
5、Why,1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?,How,根据提示信息扩展内容,Other,写前,Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.,1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacation,put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale,.,Step 2,第一人称一般将来时,审题,9,说明文WhatWhyHowOther写前Id li
6、ke t,说明文,1. 背景信息2. Whats it?,What,Why,1.Why is it special?2. Why do you like it?,How,根据提示信息扩展内容,Other,写前,Id like to share some ideas about how to deal with my books and notebooks.,1.useful2.at low prices3.study at home on summer vacation,put into different kindsgivetohave a book sale,1.keep the note
7、books for myself2.bring me a lot of sweet memories,Step 3,第一人称一般将来时,审题,10,说明文WhatWhyHowOther写前Id like t,写前,搜集、提取信息,Firstly,Secondly,Next,Finally,Step 4,写前 搜集、提取信息1. put books into di,写前,将第一条提示语转化为第一条理由,Firstly, I will put books into different kinds.,将第二条提示语转化为第二条理由,Secondly, I am going to give my te
8、xtbooks to younger sisters.,根据上文添加信息,They can study at home during the comingsummer vacation.,将第三条提示语转化为第三条理由,Thirdly, I have a book sale.,Step 5,根据上文添加信息,Children can buy them at low prices.,添加信息,I want to keep the notebooks for myself.Because they bring me a lot of sweet memories.,添加信息,The used pa
9、per will be taken to the waste center.,搜集、提取信息,12,写前依据呈现句子将第一条提示语转化为第一条理由Firstly,写中,Step 1,First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a
10、book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices. I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua,组织信息,draft,13,写中Step 1 First of all,
11、Whats more,In this way,写中,First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters. They can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Thirdly, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low price
12、s. I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua,Step 2,添加信息（写作小技巧）,Besides,写作小技巧4,写作小技巧2,14,Whats moreIn this way写中,主要内容检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构,写后,Step 3,Fi
13、rst of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more, I d
14、ecide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Finally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua,15,主要内容写后Step 3 First o,First of all, I will put all my books into different kinds. Secondly, I am going to
15、 give my textbooks to my younger sisters.In the way, they can study at home during the coming summer vacation. Besides, I want to have a book sale so that children can buy the picture books at low prices.Whats more, I decide to keep the notebooks for myself. They bring me lots of sweet memories. Fin
16、ally, the used paper will be taken to the waste center. These are my ideas. I hope they can help. Yours, Li Hua,最终呈现,八年级的难度,16,First of all, I wi,真题赏析,17,真题赏析17,每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以”My favourite_” 为题，写一篇短文，介绍一件你最喜爱的衣服。(2017陕西中考英语作文),提示语：,My favourite,What does it look like?,Why do you like it?,When
17、 do you wear it?,.,What is it made of?,cottonfiber(纤维)wool(羊毛)silk.,要求：1. 请将短文题目补充完整；2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）5. 词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）,18,每个人都有自己喜欢的衣服，请根据提示语，以”My favou,My favourite,What does it look like?,Why do you like it?,When do you wear it?,.,What is it m
18、ade of?,cottonfiber(纤维)wool(羊毛)silk.,写前,审题,第一人称一般现在时,Step 1,19,My favouriteWhat does it look,写前,Step 2,搜集信息,My favourite T-shirt,What does it look like?,It is a T-shirt. It is white.,Why do you like it?,special gift,birthday gift,When do you wear it?,parties with friends,It brings me a lot of sweet
19、memories.,It is made of cotton and fiber.,审题,20,写前Step 2搜集信息My favourite T-shi,组织信息,My favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white.It is made of cotton and fiber. I like it because this is my birthday gift. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my
20、 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.,写中,Step 1,T-shirt,T-shirt,draft,21,组织信息My favourite_写中S,My favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white.It is made of cotton and f
21、iber, so its very comfortable. I like it because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together. This
22、 is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.,T-shirt,T-shirt,topic sentence,why,when,what is it made of,写中,Step 2,添加信息,22,My favourite_T-shirt,My favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white, it is made of cotton and fiber, so its very comfortable. I like i
23、t because there is a photo of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a
24、 lot of happy memories.,T-shirt,T-shirt,topic sentence,why,when,summary,what is it made of,总,分,总,写中,Step 3,自我检查,23,My favourite_T-shirt,My favourite_ Among all my clothes, I like one of the _best. It is white, it is made of cotton and fiber, so its very comfortable. I like it because there is a phot
25、o of my best friend and me on it. Its a very special gift from him. He sent it to me last year for my 14th birthday. I often wear the T-shirt when I have parties with my friends. It makes me remember the time we two spent together. This is my favorite T-shirt. It brings me a lot of happy memories.,T
26、-shirt,T-shirt,最终呈现,八年级的难度,24,My favourite_T-shirt,Practice makes perfect!,25,Practice makes perfect!25,某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。亲你根据一下图示内容积极投稿，倡导同学们“爱护校园环境，健康快乐生活”。(2020年陕西中考英语),Practice,要求：1. 请将短文题目补充完整；2. 参考提示语，可适当发挥；3. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；4. 文章不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）5. 词数：不得少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总数词）,keep
27、the school clean,do sports,look after yourself,other,Students need to have a healthy school life. What can we do to make it? Here Ive got some ideas to share with you.,第一人称,一般现在时,说明文,topic: what,How,26,某英文网站开展关于“美丽校园，健康生活”的征稿活动。亲你根据,说明文,Step1,What:健康生活Why: How: 提示词人称、时态 subject, tense头脑风暴:brainstorm
28、ing列提纲: 搜集、提取信息,Step2,组织信息添加内容 选取信息(根据内容而定)自我检查,Step3,检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构等,审题,书写,检查,写前,important, good,Why,27,说明文Step1What:健康生活Step2组织信息Step,写中,First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our s
29、tudy and health. Second, its good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, wed better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healt
30、hy school life.,draft,28,写中 First, it is important,First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, its good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Thir
31、d, wed better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.,写作原技巧4：文章具有逻辑性和连贯性,写作技巧4：简单句变成复合句,if条件句“主将从现”点睛之笔,写中,29,First, it is important t,写后,
32、First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the desks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, its good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, wed better look after ourselves well, such as wa
33、shing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we always get on well each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.,主要内容检查词数检查语法拼写、标点、结构,30,写后 First, it is important,最终呈现,First, it is important to keep our school clean. For example, we can clean the d
34、esks and floor every day,because good environment is helpful to our study and health. Second, its good to do some sports like running, playing basketball and so on. Third, wed better look after ourselves well, such as washing hands in time and wearing masks when it is necessary. Finally, if we alway
35、s get on well each other and keep happy, well enjoy a happy and healthy school life.,31,最终呈现 First, it is importa,Summary,Pre-writing,审题,话题类型,教育类实践活动类,文章类型,记叙文说明文议论文,what, who, where,when,what, why,what, why, how,列提纲,提示语适当添加内容选取信息,While-writing,人称时态,组织信息（根据提纲）添加信息（注意写作技巧）选取信息（议论文)自我检查（结构、技巧、拼写等）,Post-writing,检查,检查内容（主要信息）检查词数检查语法检查拼写、标点、结构等,书写,32,SummaryPre-writing审题话题类型教育类文章类,33,33,Thank you,34,Thank you34,
