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1、A Lesson of Writing,假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。,How to write a composition.,认真审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、字数、结构、时态、提示要点和补充信息。,写作第一步,审,假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。 英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班 内汇报。 请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报。,主题
2、,字数,人称,体裁,提示要点,补充信息,一般现在时,时态,用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。,列,写作第二步,Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thinks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success.,Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cult
3、ures.,Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.,My dream is to work at school . I want to be an English teacher.Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.,加,加首尾，使结构完整。可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的
4、句子应注意简洁，漂亮。,写作第三步：,Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer.Writing brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . He can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worke
5、r to help animals live in peace.I want to be an English teacher.I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased.,Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.,I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.,a nice head
6、,a nice tail,a nice body,连,恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。,写作第四步：,英语写作时常用的过渡语:,表并列或递进：and, besides, bothand，not onlybut also，whats more, 表转折：but, yet, however, though，although表因果关系：because, so, therefore, as a result表先后顺序：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally表时间关系：when, while, after, before, then, 表
7、列举说明：for example , for instance, such as发表观点：in my opinion, to my understanding, from my point of view,表总结陈词：in general, all in all, in a word, generally speaking,Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share ours with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing. She wants to be a writer. She thin
8、ks writing makes her relaxed and it brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. He wants to be a guide . he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.I want to
9、 be an English teacher. I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.,also,In this way,Because,美,选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。,写作第五步：,Boys and girls，Everyone has hobbies and dreams.Now let me share our
10、s with you.Yi Kes hobby is writing. So she thinks writing makes her relaxed and it also brings her pleasure and success. Li Rui likes travelling best. In this way he can experience different life and learn about different cultures.Wu Fan s hobby is looking after animals. I want to be an English teac
11、her. Because I like speaking English. I can be good with children and it makes me happy and pleased. I hope we enjoy our hobbies and our dreams can come true.,She wants to be a writer .,She wants to be a successful writer in the future, just like Mo Yan.,He wants to be a guide .,He is looking forwar
12、d to travelling abroad so he wants to be a guide in foreign countries.,He wants to be a WWF worker to help animals live in peace.,When she grows up, she wants to be a WWF worker to save the animals in danger and help animals live in peace.,适当运用名言或俗语,Time is money. 一寸光阴一寸金Time waits for no man.岁月不待人K
13、nowledge is power.知识就是力量Where there is a will, there is a way.有志者，事竟成Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧Its never too old to learn. 活到老，学到老,Skill One Make your sentences correct,Good good study, day day up.We should do sports a week once.Watch TV too much is bad for your eyes.There is going to have a meeti
14、ng today.I hope I can come true my dream.,once a week,Watching,be,achieve,Skill Two Express in different ways,When he spoke, he got more excited. The more he spoke, the more excited he got.,We should learn English grammar. Its important to learn English grammar.,他们在海滩上听音乐。,A They listened to the mus
15、ic on the beach.B They enjoyed the music on the beach.,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,书面表达写作技巧,审,列,加,连,美,中考作文评分标准,第五档（很好）（25-21分） 完全完成了试题规定的任务，涵盖
16、了所有内容要点，或在发挥时内容有新意或亮点；语言基本无误，行文连贯，表达清楚。第四档（好）（20-16分） 完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚。第三档（一般）（15-11分） 基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第二档（较差）（10-6分） 未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。第一档（差）（5-0分） 未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息。,Rome is not built in a day.,Tips:1. 卷面工整。2. 规范写作过程。3. 多背诵美文，积累素材。,Have a Try!,书面表达,以 “I have a dream”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文。Sentence patterns for reference(以下句型供参考）My dream is to be/to do/to goI enjoy /like/preferTo make my dream come true, I If my dream comes true,Thanks !,
