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1、How to write,A Letter of Request,2011-2016全国卷高考作文,Pre-writing: Task 1,Read, underline and identify the main structures(mostly 3 parts) of the letter.,（课标卷） 假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信： 1.本人简介 2.求助内容 3. 约定时间 4. 你的联系方式 （Email:;Phone:12345678)注意：
2、1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 3. 结束语已为你写好。,Dear Sir/Madam, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student taking summer courses in your university. Im writing to ask for help. I came here last month and found my courses interesting. But I have some difficulties with note-making and I have no idea of how to use the
3、library. I was told the Learning Center provides help for students and Im anxious to get help from you. I have no class on Tuesday mornings and Friday afternoons. Please let me know which day is ok with you. You may email or phone me. Here are my email address and phone number:; 12345678. Thanks for
4、 your kindness in advance. Look forward to your reply . yours, Li hua,自我介绍,写信目的,困难,联系方式,道谢,Common structure of a request letter,1. Opening: Introduce yourself & _ politely.2. Body: Describe your _ & _ again. Try to be specific if possible. 3. End: Give _ to the person who will help you.,ask for help
5、,difficulties,ask for help,thanks,A. Useful expressions for an opening：写信来寻求帮助：(用至少两种方式表达),(a)Im writing _.(b) Im writing _.,to ask for/seek your help,to ask whether you can give me a hand,More expressions:1. Im writing this letter, with the hope that you will be kind to give me a hand.2. I wonder i
6、f you could do me a favor. 3. Sorry to bother you but I really need your help.,Im in desperate need of your help.,*adj./adv. persuasive,B.Useful expressions for describing the difficulties : 高二学生，学习英语有困难 (用至少两种方式表达),(a) _(b) _.(c) _.,As a Senior two student, I have （met/encountered） some difficultie
7、s/trouble in learning English.,English frustrates me a lot as I just cant take so many different aspects into my consideration at a time.,Now Im in Senior 2, I find it extremely hard for me to learn English well.,* reasons persuasive,虽然努力过，人际交往仍有问题(用至少两种方式表达)(a) _, interpersonal relationship is stil
8、l a headache for me.(b) _, interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(障碍) for me to overcome.(c) _, interpersonal relationship is still an obstacle(障碍) for me.,Although I have tried many times,Hard as I tried,Ive tried to participate in some activities/share my hobbies with my classmates, but I
9、 find,*facts,data persuasive,C. Useful expressions for feelings, request & appreciation：,(1) Having failed for so many times, I _.（描述情绪）(2)请求帮助，表示谢意（用至少两种方式表达）_ _,feel very depressed /disappointed/frustrated,(c) Thank you in advance.,(a) I would appreciate it if you can share your thoughts with me.,
10、(b) I would be grateful/delighted if you could give me some suggestions.,*politeness persuasive,While-writing: Task 2,Practice writing,（山东卷） 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛(speech contest)，你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给Tom写一封电子邮件：a询问Tom的生活和学习情况；b谈谈你的困难并请Tom帮忙；c告诉Tom你打算赛后去看他。注意：a词数：100左
11、右； b可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。,Dear Tom, Its a month since you studied in Beijing. How are you doing in Beijing?(求助) Im writing to ask for help. I am going to Beijing to take part in an English speech contest for middle school students in July this summer. ( 我要认真准备）_ _ _.However, （搜集资料困难）_ _. Meanwhile, （语言运用困
12、难）_ _ （求助并感谢） _ _.I also hope that the great effort I am making will pay off. Hope to see you in Beijing after the English contest. Yours, Lihua,well-prepared,have some trouble in collecting useful materials,I find it hard to use,I would appreciate,I think the chance is of great importance,it if you
13、 could offer me a hand,for me. In order to get good performance, I need to be,I still,English properly.,Post-writing:Task 3,The draft letter below is written by a student. Find out four sentences that need to be improved, paying attention to their styles and tones.,Dear teacher, My name is Li Hua. I
14、 wanna you to help me. I have met many difficulties in learning English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. Whats more, grammar is also very difficult to learn. Faced with so many difficulties, I hav
15、e to ask you for some help. You should introduce us some good ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways t
16、o learn grammar. Im sure that I can make great progress in my English study if you can answer my question and follow my advice. Yours, Li Hua,1.too casual,2.repetition,3. impolite tones,Dear teacher, My name is Li Hua. Im writing this letter to seek some help. I have met many difficulties in learnin
17、g English. First, I find our texts full of new words that are very difficult for me to remember. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite. Whats more, grammar is also beyond my reach. Faced with so many difficulties, I have to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some goo
18、d ways to learn new words so that we can remember them more easily？ In the meanwhile, I beg you to teach the text more slowly so that the average students can easily follow you. Also, I would like you to introduce some rules and good ways to learn grammar. Im sure that I can make great progress in my English study with your help. Yours, Li Hua,Homework: Two of your classmates broke up with each other because some misunderstandings. Help your them to write a letter or request to their friends to ask for help.,
