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1、如何写好作文？,How can we write composition well？,中考英语高分作文的特点,1、书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。2、分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。3、要点齐全，不缺要点。4、首尾呼应，自然成一体。5、开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。6、段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。7、句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。8、使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。9、全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同
2、学的词汇量不同寻常。老师自然就对该作文有好感了。10、能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。,中考英语作文评分标准一档13-15分 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。 二档10-12 分 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。三档7-9分 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。四档4-6分 只包含了少数要点，语言不规范，句子无条理，行文不连贯，语言错误严重，影响理解。五档1-3分 只写出与要求的内容相关的一些信息
3、词语，语言错误多。六档0分 空白,英语作文中会出现哪些问题？,Alice is my a best friend, she come from Canada. she is very tall, hair is very long,he like sports. but I dont know if does she like swim? She likes chinese,and she do well in it,we all very like she.,去掉,comes,She,her,she,likes,去掉,likes,swimming,Chinese,does,去掉,her,ve
4、ry much,For example,1.句型、结构 - 避免出现Chinglish 现象。 We all very like her.We all like her very much.He by bike to school. He goes to school by bike. 避免方法： 多记短语和句型,2 .注意语法项目,人称一致: Alice is my best friend, he likes sports. 时态: He has gone to Guilin yesterday.主谓一致: This pair of shoes are mine. The shoes are
5、 new.习惯用法: He helps me in my English.,she,去掉,is,with,3. 注意语序 (感叹句，疑问句，宾语从句，倒装句),I dont know if does she like swimming。,she likes swimming,What a nice student is she!,she is!,She is a student, so I am.,so am I,4.注意：重短轻长, 就易避难。,以写正确、通顺为最基本要求。,2. Mr Tang is the teacher that I like best.,1. I have a fri
6、end is called Li Ming.,去掉,I have a friend，he is called Li Ming.,Mr Tang is a teacher, I like him best.,如何写好作文？,How can we write composition well？,方法一:善用高级词汇,Which is better?,他们很早就到了。,A They arrived early.B They arrived as early as they could.,我们应该保护环境。,A We should protect the environment.B Its our d
7、uty to protect the environment.,方法二:活用多种句型,她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。,A She is very young. She cant carry the heavy box.B She is too young to carry the heavy box.C She is so young that she cant carry the D She is not old enough to carry the,方法三:妙用关联词,1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, whats more not onlybut a
8、lso, neithernor2.表示选择: or, eitheror3.表示转折: but,however,althoughthough,after all,anyway4.表示因果: because, so, therefore,since,for,as a result5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, notbut, while, in the same way, on the one handon the other hand7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in
9、 other words,to tell the truth8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end9.表示强调: also, besides, especially, actually, in fact10.表示结论: all in all, altogether, in a word, generally speaking, in short,关联词(connection words),方法四:善
10、用谚语,Enjoy some proverbs,1. Practice makes perfect.2. Think twice before you do. 4. Do as the Romans do.,三思而后行。,熟能生巧。,有志者事竟成。,入乡随俗。,早起的鸟儿有虫吃。,失败是成功之母。,5.The early bird catches the worm.,3. Where there is a will, there is a way.,6.Failure is the mother of success.,Enjoy some proverbs,7.It is no use cr
11、ying over spilt milk. 8.An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 9.All roads lead to Rome. 10.Never too old to learn.,覆水难收。,一天一苹果， 医生远离我。,条条大路通罗马。,活到老，学到老。,方法五:加例子,在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。,I often help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes, folding the clothes, taking out the trash and so on.,要求：1词数8
12、0以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2可适当发挥，但必须包含表格所提供的信息。 参考词汇：培养cultivate; 学费tuition。 Dear Editor Im a student in Class 3, Grade 9. In our English class we had a discussion about the advantages and disadvantages of studying abroad.,近年来，越来越多的同学选择在不久的将来出国读书，你们班在英语课上开展了对出国留学利与弊的讨论。假如你是Mike，请根据以下表格所给的信息写一篇报道，并简要表达你自己的观点。,练习,
