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1、TASK 2,urpose：essay/ dissertation 考查提出解决方案的能力；举例说明观点的能力；对比证据和意见的能力等,TASK 2purpose：,Rubric: (I6 P31) (fact+) opinion+ question+instructionYou should spend about 40 minutes on this task:,Rubric: (I6 P31),.,Write about the following topic:Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the powe
2、r of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold.,.Write about the following top,.,To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.,.To what extent do y
3、ou agree o,大作文准备 天龙八“步”,熟读剑5，剑6范文，理解评分标准 题型 ；每种题型对应的结构 题材归类 素材 提纲（落实细节） 思维 高频短语 建立精彩句库（换写，仿写，扩写） 每2天一篇；模考；,大作文准备 天龙八“步”熟读剑5，剑6范文，理解评分标准,Question types：,I Agree or Disagree? (+A or -A)-I6 P31（见上） opinion+(+A or -A)-I3 P52 fact+opinion+(+A or -A),Question types：I Agree or Disa,When a country develops
4、its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive.To what extent (/how far) do you agree or disagree (with this opinion)?,When a country develops its te,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages(+A or -A),I5 P53 In some countries young people are encour
5、aged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.advantages and disadvantages,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages,III Discuss Both Views (A or B),I6 P53Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important profession
6、s. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both views；your opinion,III Discuss Both Views (A or B,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B),Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development tha
7、n any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99,IV Comparison and contrast (A,V Problem + Reasons + Solutions (PRS),I4 P101In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions c
8、an you suggest?,V Problem + Reasons + Solution,评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，语言读雅思大作文范文学习写作的内容，结构，文章行文和逻辑。,评分标准三大要素：内容，结构，语言,写作内容及结构：,I Agree or Disagree? (+A or -A)Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what
9、 extent do you agree or disagree?,写作内容及结构：I Agree or Disagree? (,Para1开头 指出现象/事实; restate the rubric（换词，换句型，换种说法）；字数：30-40w；,Para1开头 指出现象/事实; restate the r,Para 2 &3正文：四种写法,一边倒：-完全同意(在开头段提出观点表同意；para2 R1；para3 R2；)-完全不同意（在开头段提出观点表不同意；para2 R1；para3 R2；）不完全同意或不同意,Para 2 &3正文：四种写法一边倒：,- para2同意的部分；R1，
10、2；para3不同意的部分R1,2- para2基本赞同；R1，2; para 3 in what cases题中观点站不住脚Para4结尾 总结以上观点 字数：30-40w,- para2同意的部分；R1，2；para3不同意的部分,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages(+A or -A),In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Dis
11、cuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.,II Advantages Vs Disadvantages,Para1开头：指出现象/事实restate the rubric（换词，换句型，换种说法）； Para 2 advantages (2-3个)Para 3 disadvantages (2-3个),Para1开头：指出现象/事实restate the rub,Para 4 结论：“我”的观点。偏向advantages 或disadvantages；理由（2个）；字数：50w；注
12、意：结论部分，无论是倾向优点还是缺点，都不要重复正文部分的语句。对策：（如：偏向优点）1.总结第二段的观点，由specific到general；2. 重复第二段观点，但要用重述法。赞成的一边适当多写一些内容。,Para 4 结论：“我”的观点。偏向advantages,III Discuss Both Views (A or B) I6 P164,Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people thin
13、k this is fully justified while others think it is unfair.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion I6 P53,III Discuss Both Views (A or B,开头Para1 摆现象；restate the rubric；,开头Para1 摆现象；restate the rubric,正文：有倾向性； Para 2 A ，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。Para 3 B (理由2-3个) 注：倾向A写法正好相反,正文：,无倾向性Para 2 A ，简单
14、陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。Para 3 B ，简单陈述其理由，然后针对所述理由展开驳论。结论Para 4 “我”的观点。标明倾向性A or B，或者保持中立并提出自己独特的观点。,无倾向性,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B)Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our lif
15、e. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99 范文：I5 P169,IV Comparison and contrast (A,IV Comparison and contrast (A or B)Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life
16、. Which do you consider to be the major influence? I5 P99 范文：I5 P169,IV Comparison and contrast (A,Para1开头 restate the rubric；指出fact(s)说明有哪些可能的选择； Para 2 为什么A，B是可能的选择，Para 3 “我”的选择(one of A，B，or none of these but another one)；R1，2Para 4 结论 概括para2和para3的观点。,Para1开头 restate the rubric；指出f,V Problem +
17、 Reasons + Solutions (PRS)In many countries schools have severe problems with student behavior.What do you think are the cause of this? What solutions can you suggest? I4 P101,V Problem + Reasons + Solution,Para1开头 指出problem；restate the rubric； Para 2 R1,2.Para 3 S1,2Para 4结论 概括para2和para3的观点。Note：S
18、和R要一一对应。,Para1开头 指出problem；restate the,衔接，逻辑性1. for an essay as a whole: topic sentence (thesis statement)2. for each paragraph: topic sentence3. 段落间,段内都要注意衔接。标明并列，递进，转折等主要关系。学习1篇范文，体会内容，结构及连接手段,衔接，逻辑性,观点前置-段内扩展：,观点前置-段内扩展：,原因Example 1:,There are more job opportunities readily available in the big c
19、ities than in the small towns.,原因Example 1: There are more jo,The economic conditions in the big cities are generally better than those in the small towns, which, in return, attracts more investment from commercial corporations and companies.,The economic conditions in the,Therefore, compared to mos
20、t small towns, there are always more modern and international companies which can offer city residents numerous job opportunities.,Therefore, compared to most sm,Example 2:,Big cities can provide city residents with more education opportunities.,Example 2: Big cities can prov,Education institutions
21、are always built in the area with a big population with the intention of serving and educating people.,Education institutions are alw,Therefore, compared with small towns, big cities always have more schools, colleges and universities which can offer many educational opportunities for both children
22、and adults.,Therefore, compared with small,原因-展开的常用句型,because for the simple reason that The reason is that 无须过渡词,原因-展开的常用句型 because ,拟无 Example 1,The most obviously important characteristic of air plane travel is the high speed involved.,拟无 Example 1The most obviously,It took weeks to cross the Atl
23、antic or Pacific oceans inside a ship. Today with the advent of airplanes in our lives, those same trips can be completed in a matter of hours.,It took weeks to cross the Atl,A hundred years ago, when we didnt have the flights in the sky, and when there were only ships, the only transportation facil
24、ity across the ocean, an international journey was exhausting and time-wasting.,A hundred years ago, when we d,Example 2,Eating at restaurant can save a lot of time.,Example 2Eating at restaurant,We can hardly imagine the situation without restaurants in our lives. Living under the high-pressure and
25、 fast-paced living style, people have found they need restaurant when they dont have enough time to enjoy their own cooking.,We can hardly imagine the situ,Without restaurants and the services offered by them, people will have to spend long time going to groceries and cooking by themselves.,Without
26、restaurants and the se,常用句型,WithoutIf we dont have in our lives, We can not imagine the situation without,常用句型,One hundred years ago when we didnt have in our lives, Things would be completely different without in our lives.,One hundred years ago when we,方面展开 Example 1,Compared with small towns, the
27、re are more convenient living conditions in big cities.,方面展开 Example 1Compared with s,In the big cities, there are convenient shopping centers for people to buy daily necessities；public transportation system can transfer city residents from one place to another easily; in entertaining places citizen
28、s get fun and enjoy life; and even there are more theaters to show the latest movies,In the big cities, there are c,Example 2,Do you agree or disagree? A zoo has no useful purpose. (disagree),Example 2Do you agree or disag,By observing and studying the behaviors and habits of animals in the zoo, we
29、can learn the basic rules of surviving and living in the world.,By observing and studying the,A monkey has to fight to win when he decides to be a leader of the group; birds show their beautiful plume and voice if they want to attract their partners; and all the animals, if they want a life free of
30、worries, responsibilities, and pressure, have to sacrifice their freedom.,A monkey has to fight to win w,常用句型,This reason can be reflected in the following aspects. We can see this in every aspect of First, second, in addition, moreover, alsoSeveral factsseveral aspects,常用句型This reason can be reflec
31、t,数据：Example 1,There are more job opportunities readily available in the big cities than in the small towns.,数据：Example 1There are more job,According to the survey conducted by Tessess Data, a statistic organization, 80% commercial and industrial corporations and companies, including both domestic c
32、ompanies and international companies are located in the big cities, which offer more than 80% working positions for those who are working and living in the cities.,According to the survey conduc,常用句型,According to a recent survey, The latest surveys show that An investigation shows that A survey was
33、carried out on , the results of which were surprising.According to an investigation, A recent survey revealed that ,常用句型According to a recent surv,举例 Example 1,Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city.,举例 Example 1Some people prefer,For example, there are far m
34、ore supermarkets, bus lines, theaters in Paris than in Lestie, a very small town in north France. On average people in Paris can go to theater every week to enjoy the latest movies whereas those in Lestie have to take hours of train to go to the city theaters for a movie. Generally, people in Paris
35、can enjoy much better shopping environment than those in Lestie.,For example, there are far mor,Example 2,Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Disagree,Example 2Do you agree or disag,One example in point is Internet, one of the
36、most pervasive modern technology in our lives, which has made our world even more complicated and isolated.,One example in point is Intern,With the advent of Internet in our lives, most young people have already moved their lives to the cyber world. They study , work , chat, even game online. People
37、 lost their previous way of gaming, from which they can enjoy the fun of cooperating and communicating.,With the advent of Internet in,Also, they are away from the traditional way of living, from which they can enjoy the basic and simple lives of human beings.,Also, they are away from the t,常用句型,Ins
38、tead of improving our way of living, Internet has made the world a more complicated and isolated place to live in.,常用句型Instead of improving our w,The example that can support my idea is .The example of can support my idea. is a good example which can support my idea.,The example that can support m,T
39、o support my idea, there is one good example.A good example in point is A good example is To take as an example.The most obvious example of this reason is For example, For instance, ,To support my idea, there is o,对比：,Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work or a small c
40、ompany.,对比：Some people prefer to work,Employees in the big companies can always own more chances to acquire more knowledge and experience. In big companies, professionals and experts employed can offer more expertise and skills, which you can hardly find in a small company which can barely afford to
41、 employ an expert, or where there is no need to have experts at all.,Employees in the big companies,In big companies, professionals and experts employed can offer more expertise and skills, which you can hardly find in a small company which can barely afford to employ an expert, or where there is no
42、 need to have experts at all.,In big companies, professional,常用句型,However, but,in contraston the other hand,常用句型However,开头段,开头段,Introduction-背景引入,In the future, students may have the choice of studying at home by using technology such as computers or television or of studying at traditional schools.
43、,Introduction-背景引入 In the fu,We live in a world in which technology gives us many opportunities to improve every aspect of our lives, including arts, sciences, politics, and education(时代特征). One of most obvious impact which the technology has on education is that it has changed traditional studying-
44、in-class learning pattern(走向主题).,We live in a world in which te,Now we get chance to study at home by using technology such as computer or television(论述主题). This new learning pattern, which I strongly recommend to every one, will benefit us a lot.,Now we get chance to study at,Introduction-对方让步,Many
45、 people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family.,Introduction-对方让步 Many peop,For many kids, family pets are not just animals kept for amusement or companionship; the family pets are treated as their best friends and
46、 companions who not only provide unconditional love, but also teach them about friendship,For many kids, family pets are,responsibility, loyalty, and empathy. They love to treat them as their family members and prefer to keep them in their rooms. (对方观点),responsibility, loyalty, and e,However，they fa
47、il to realize that pets are still animals, which may, firstly, make serious injury to kids around them; in addition, there are always various bacteria and diseases bearing.Therefore, I dont think its a good idea to treat the pets as family members. (我方观点),However，they fail to realize t,观点驳斥句型,People
48、 seem to fail to take into account the fact that university also bring students valuable knowledge in every field.,观点驳斥句型People seem to fail to t,However, this opinion is now being questioned by more and more city residents, who complain that the migrants have brought many serious problems like crim
49、e and prostitution,However, this opinion is now b,Introduction-主题重述,In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Agree？,Introduction-主题重述 In some c,The school debate over college students taking a part-time job can always arouse widespread interests. Those who object to it a
50、rgue that students should not spend their precious time in this way. People who,The school debate over college,advocate it, on the other hand, claim that by taking a major-related part-time job, students can further improve their academic studies. 转述主题+理由As far as I am concerned, I believe that part
