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1、GRE写作：开头结尾的具体技巧 GRE写作开头结尾有哪些技巧呢?今天给大家带来GRE写作开头结尾的具体技巧，希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。GRE写作：开头结尾的具体技巧新GRE作文Argue写作开头结尾：新GRE作文Argue和issue不一样，开头结尾都有迹可循，这个也许是唯一能搞出模板的东西。考试的时候我都是一边写开头一边想错误。等开头写完了，错误也找全了。开头一般说，这*标明，因为(照抄原文)，所以(原文)，作者于是得出结论(原文)。但是，作者论证的时候犯了一些错误(可以随便列举一个，比如证据不足)，如果能够注意以下几点，那么这篇*能够更有说服力。写到这儿都不用动脑
2、子的。结尾呢，也跟新GRE作文issue不一样。我们不一定要力求升华，毕竟不是立论文。就大概总结说，因为作者犯了错误一错误二和错误三，所以*没有吸引力。如果作者能做到改进一，改进二和改进三，那么这篇*就会更好了。(错误和改进都是之前写过的。所以无脑照抄，或者适当变脸，写上去就行了，字数也是大大的有。)新GRE作文Argue写作挑错：挑错怎么挑呢?反正我感觉，除了事实说明，比如有个城市叫A市，旁边有个B市这样的句子，基本每个句子都有错。这个我因为辩论的原因，难以传授什么秘诀。大家可能看几道题找找感觉就好了。本着质疑的态度，每句话都怀疑一下就可以了。再不行就幻想自己在网上和人对喷。对喷的时候，对方
3、说的每句话你都恨不得直接拍桌子反对。有这样的气势就可以了。注意，每当出现样本调查，一定要抓住猛骂。质疑样本，质疑容量，质疑可信度，什么都能质疑。另外，每当出现类比和因果关系，也要质疑。这个只能大家随机应变了。要说逻辑培养也不是一天两天，GRE作文考的逻辑也很直白，一般找三个不是问题，实在不行看几篇范文就明白了。新GRE作文Argue写作文段：中间三段怎么放?我感觉，第二段一定要说个最大的问题。这个不一定要是全文最大的问题，而是各位感觉最大的。绝大多数情况下，最明显那个错，也是各位觉得最大的错，也就是全文最大的错。不是也没关系。因为各位感觉最大的错，各位有话说，那么第二段一定会很丰满，也基本不会
4、出错，字数也拉上来了，妥了一半。有人说这三段也能写出递进或者并列，我感觉写递进有点困难，因为错都差不多，还要花心思论证哪个错的多哪个错的少。我的习惯，大家可能借鉴一下。先写一个最大的错，然后再抓一个我觉得能论证好几句的错。剩下来的基本都是一两句可以提一提的错，比如证据不足啊，其他可能情况啊，那就都并到第三段，开头就说，除了上述两点，还有一些细节问题可以注意。然后随便抓两三个说一说，凑成一段。最后结尾也说，作者有错误一，错误二，以及上文提到的细节(problematic details mentioned above)，如果能有改进一改进二点点点，就点点点了。具体每段论证，我的习惯是先说错误，然
5、后说为什么错，最后说如何改进。这就成了逻辑严密的一段。GRE写作满分范文赏析The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.?According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?year?than?in?any?ot
6、her?year.?And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.?Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?quality?of?our?mo
7、vies?but?with?the?publics?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.?Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies.?Americans?are?spending?millions?of?their?hard?earned?dollars?to?see?th
8、e?latest?theatrical?productions,?and?we?here?at?Silver?Screen?want?to?exploit?our?share?of?that?profit.?Surveys?have?proven?that?our?movies?are?better?than?ever,?but?yet?our?attendance?is?lower?than?ever.?This?finding?screams?one?shortcoming:?advertisement.?Try?to?think?of?the?last?movie?you?remembe
9、r.?The?movie?which?probably?leaps?into?everyones?mind?is?Independence?Day.?Why?Certainly?not?because?of?the?actual?film,?but?because?of?all?the?hype?which?the?movie?received.?Furthermore,?this?grand?production?paid?off?big?for?the?production?company.?Does?anyone?that?you?know?drive?by?the?theatre?ju
10、st?to?see?what?is?playing?and?then?pick?a?film?based?on?the?catchiness?of?the?title?No.?Viewers?buy?tickets?for?movies?which?they?have?seen?effectively?advertised?on?television?and?radio.?Not?only?must?Silver?Screen?advertise?more,?but?we?must?advertise?when?it?really?counts:?Monday?Night?Football,?
11、the?evening?news,?awards?shows,?etc.?Everyone?has?heard?the?saying,?you?must?spend?money?to?make?money,?and?it?is?proven?true?in?this?industry.?From?a?completely?economical?standpoint,?the?ad?is?actually?more?important?than?the?film?itself.?Consumers?are?compelled?by?the?preview?and?buy?a?ticket.?I?
12、am?not?suggesting?that?we?compromise?the?integrity?of?our?films,?but?I?cannot?overstate?the?importance?of?this?decision.Therefore,?I?submit?that?the?Silver?Screen?Production?Company?attempt?to?secure?30%?of?the?fiscal?budget?for?advertisement.?It?will?be?the?best?money?you?have?ever?spent.?Commentar
13、y?The?writer?of?this?seriously?flawed?response?has?adopted?the?position?that?she?or?he?works?for?Silver?Screen?and?that?it?is?her?or?his?job?to?present?in?expanded?form?the?fallacious?reasoning?of?the?argument.?In?so?doing,?the?writer?turns?the?argument?task?into?an?issue-like?discussion.?The?writer
14、?presents?no?analysis?of?the?argument.?The?paper?is?characterized?by?a?series?of?undeveloped?paragraphs,?yet?there?is?some?variety?in?syntax?and?there?is?adequate?control?of?both?language?and?the?elements?of?writing.?However,?even?though?the?writing?may?be?typical?of?a?4?score?level,?the?absence?of?
15、any?kind?of?critique?requires?a?score?of?2.GRE写作满分范文赏析The?following?is?taken?from?a?memo?from?the?advertising?director?of?the?Silver?Screen?Movie?Production?Company.?According?to?a?recent?report?from?our?marketing?department,?fewer?people?attended?movies?produced?by?Silver?Screen?during?the?past?yea
16、r?than?in?any?other?year.?And?yet?the?percentage?of?generally?favorable?comments?by?movie?reviewers?about?specific?Silver?Screen?movies?actually?increased?during?this?period.?Clearly,?the?contents?of?these?reviews?are?not?reaching?enough?of?our?prospective?viewers;?so?the?problem?lies?not?with?the?q
17、uality?of?our?movies?but?with?the?publics?lack?of?awareness?that?movies?of?good?quality?are?available.?Silver?Screen?should?therefore?spend?more?of?its?budget?next?year?on?reaching?the?public?through?advertising?and?less?on?producing?new?movies.?This?argument?states?the?problem?but?the?conclusion?is
18、?not?compatible?to?the?rest?of?the?statement.?Silver?Screen?recognized?that?fewer?people?attended?movies?in?the?studied?year.?I?would?recommend?that?they?find?out?if?this?was?happening?with?the?entire?movie?market.?It?might?of?have?been?a?poor?year?for?movies?for?all?movie?companies.?Silver?Screen?r
19、ecognized?that?of?the?movies?that?they?did,?they?received?favorable?reviews.?It?should?be?concluded?that?they?are?doing?well?with?the?movies?that?they?are?making.?Obviously,?they?are?on?track?with?the?consumer?in?what?they?are?producing.?I?understand?the?conclusion?that?more?people?need?to?be?expose
20、d?to?the?movies?available?for?viewing.?The?last?statement?focuses?on?the?fact?that?advertising?needs?to?be?increased,?but?does?it?by?cutting?production?costs.?This?is?wrong,?instead?of?continuing?what?is?working?the?company?plans?on?focusing?on?advertising?while?taking?away?from?producing.?The?consu
21、mers?like?the?movies?they?make.?If?Silver?Screen?focuses?their?funds?with?advertising,?producing?funds?will?suffer.?It?will?not?matter?how?much?advertising?is?done,?if?it?is?a?poorly?produced?movie,?nobody?will?want?to?go?Eventually,?Silver?Screen?will?get?the?reputation?of?producing?bad?movies.?The
22、re?has?to?be?some?compromise?which?doesnt?hurt?producing?costs.?Commentary?This?response?is?flawed.?It?makes?two?points,?the?first?of?which?is?undeveloped?(paragraph?2)?and?the?second?of?which?(the?remainder?of?the?essay)?is?mainly?discussion?rather?than?analysis,?although?some?meager?analysis?is?pr
23、esent.?The?author?also?offers?a?questionable?assumption?of?his?or?her?own?in stating?in?paragraph?4?that?the?consumers?like?the?movies?they?make.?Overall,?there?is?nothing?incisive?or?convincing?in?this?paper.?It?is?loosely?organized?and?not?well?developed.?The?response?is?clear;?what?errors?there?are?never?interfere?with?a?readers?understanding,?but?there?are?frequent?minor?errors?in?language,?syntax,?and?punctuation.?For?all?of?these?reasons,?the?response?is?clearly?limited?and?deserves?a?score?of?3.GRE写作：开头结尾的具体技巧
