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1、托福写作文章结构设置安排方法实例讲解 托福写作的官方评分标准中有一条是结构清晰(well-organized)，很多同学对这条标准存在理解上的偏差，不知道怎样写才能达到这个要求。今天给大家带来了托福写作*结构设置安排方法实例讲解 ,希望能够帮助到大家，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作*结构设置安排方法实例讲解写作分段落只是基本操作不算结构清晰首先腰围大家明确的一个错误认知是，并非托福写作分了几个段落就能算是结构清晰的。根据官方指南OG中关于organization的说明，通过几个问句提醒同学们一篇完整的*应该要包含几个部分：开头段，主体段和结尾段，并且要分段，结构要清晰。同学们往往对于
2、每部分要写什么毋庸置疑，但在准备的过程中，往往重视形式大过内容。原则上，在不影响主体段发挥的前提下，开头和结尾的方法以及长度随意(OG中介绍了6种开头方法以及5种结尾方法)，保证关键的信息给出即可;但从大部分同学的实际考试情况来看，开头和结尾总倾向于事先准备好的模板句型;相反，最重要的主体段没有留足够的时间和精力。结果往往捡了芝麻丢了西瓜。所以除非能够灵活运用OG介绍的方法，否则建议同学简化开头和结尾。托福官方指南OG结构清晰实例分析我们看一下OG书上的一个开头段例子：The importance of the issue raised by the posed statement, name
3、ly creating a new holiday for people, cannot be underestimated, as it concerns the very fabric of society. As it stands, the issue of creating a new holiday raises profound implications for the future. However, although the subject matter in general cannot be dismissed lightheartedly, the perspectiv
4、e of the issue as presented by the statement raises certain qualms regarding practical application.这个开头段的前两句都在强调话题(create a new holiday)的重要性，属于赘述(redundancy)，第三句并没有很直接给出立场，不符合评分标准中的“有效回答问题”。为了获得一个高分，我们需要避免赘述(redundancy)和偏题(digression)。其次OG中有个2分的*，截取每段的第一句话：In the following, I will illustrate my opin
5、ion by two reasons.First of all, honest make the trust stronger between friends or colleagues.Secondly, telling a lie always makes things worse not only in work but also in family life.On the contrary, sometimes it is better to tell a lie to others, such as telling a lie to a patient.作者想给出2个理由，从正反论证
6、说实话在人际关系中的重要性。而第三段的on the contrary， 看似是对比论证，然而并非是描述”撒谎的弊端“，所以结构上会引起困惑。写出结构清晰*两个建议分享关于结构清晰，一方面建议大家不要大片背诵模板句式然后进行堆砌。近期的托福考试中写作部分已经有明确要求Do not use memorized examples.如果不能将模板句式巧妙结合所写*熟练混迹在自己的语言表达之下，那么建议踏踏实实审题。另一方面，平时可以结合历年真题，多训练开门见山的思维方式，然后根据不同的话题补充相应的词汇短语等语料表达，不至于无话可说。托福写作模板:搬去新地方会失去老朋友吗20XX年托福写作真题题目：2
7、0XX年3月26日托福独立写作题目Agree or disagree:it is often not a good city to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.真题重现It is not a good thing to move to a new cityor country because we will lose old friends.20XX年3月26日托福独立写作解析该题目从题型分类上来讲，不属于常见题型(绝对型、对比型、建议型)，其最显著的特征是题目
8、本身带有一个因果关系：因为会失去老朋友，所以搬到一个新地方不是一件好的事情。严格来讲，如果从同意的角度来写，思路可能会受到题目的限制，即只能想到从失去老朋友这个角度来论证搬去新地方不好。所以这种题目从不同意的角度更容易写出逻辑严谨，内容丰富的*。下面的范文采取不同意的立场，主体段第一段写，搬去新地方不见得会失去老朋友，因为通讯工具日益发达;第二个主体段写，就算老朋友有些疏远，也不能因此断定搬去新地方不好，反而可以开始一段新生活、了解新的文化、结交新的朋友。托福写作范文参考:20XX年3月26日托福独立写作范文As the technology of public transportation
9、keeps advancing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, there occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sens
10、ible.Firstly, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends. To be more specific, the maintenance of friendship doesnt lie in how far they live with each other and the development of technology has diversified the ways of interacting with friends. The invention of cellph
11、ones break the shackles caused by distance and overseas students can choose to communicate with their family members and friends through a variety of Apps like WeChat that makes video calls possible. Except for that, by looking at the pictures popping up all over the social media like Facebook, peop
12、le can easily capture what is happening to their friends. For instance, my friend Selina took selfie in the Sydney Opera House a week ago and I would learn that she was having fun in the Australia with her picture posted on the Instagram. Therefore, a wide range of advanced electronic gadgets can be
13、 used to sustain friendship.Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success. Restricted in a city for a long period, people may be trapped in a situation that would block their development and they can gain refreshing experience w
14、hile immigrating to a new city. My friend of Mine named Michael served as a Market Analyst in a renewed company in Beijing. However, he couldnt see any progress in recent years and then an opportunity comes out. Because of his five-year working experience, a foreign trade cooperation tried to recrui
15、t him as the Market Analyst because the firm was planning to start a new program. Then he grasped the chance and earn a challenging life that he likes even though he was required to work in Shanghai. Our relationship have not experienced any interruption and his strong ability of being adapted to th
16、e new environment helps him to make lots of new friends. Accordingly, moving to a new city can, occasionally, help to break the deadlock in our professions.Admittedly, it can be sensible that friends can be estranged owing to the long distance with each other. Specifically speaking, the chances to m
17、eet with each other will be limited a lot. However, as I just put, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-spee
18、d trains and airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is good choice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of li
19、ving a different life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move.托福写作模板:如何提升社区环境20XX年9月3日托福独立写作真题：What is the most useful action for people to help environment in their local communities?1. Plant trees and create parks2. Persuade local shops t
20、o stop providing plastic bags for consumers3. Increase access to public transportation (such as buses and trains), and reduce the automobiles on roads托福写作范文参考:20XX年9月3日托福独立写作范文：With the sense of community becoming much stronger, how to protect the environment of local communities has never failed to
21、 attract the attention of the general public. Therefore, when it comes to which is the most feasible measure to help environment, among planting trees and building parks, encouraging local shops to stop using plastic bags, and improving public transportation, peoples notions may vary from one to ano
22、ther. Towards such a long-running tug-of-war, I am inclined to claim that the first option is the best.Firstly, growing trees and constructing parks can definitely help to ameliorate the environment. For one thing, more trees will contribute to the improvement of the air quality of the whole neighbo
23、rhood. As is common sense, the prosperous industrial development has produced large amounts of waste gas, with the result that the haze and smoggy weather shroud quite frequently the major cities in our country. The current air condition necessitates the planting of trees, which can purify the conta
24、minated air to a large extent. In other words, trees, the lung of the earth, play a vital role in absorbing some harmful gas and producing more fresh air through photosynthesis. For another, the public parks can be helpful to increase the biodiversity of the local community. Accompanying the rapid u
25、rbanization, an increasing number of natural lands have been utilized for constructing factories, shopping mall and skyscrapers, which greatly diminishes the natural habitats of animals, such as birds and squirrels. In this case, parks become the only place which can serve as habitats for those anim
26、als. Accordingly, the species of animals living here can become more diverse.In addition, there are certain limitations for the other two options. Admittedly, reducing the use of plastic bags and making public transportation more accessible may also be conducive to the environmental protection in so
27、me degrees. To illustrate, if the plastic bags are prohibited, the so-called white pollution will be relieved. Also, easier access to public transportation means less use of private cars, which leads to the reduction of car exhaust. However, in comparison to planting trees and building parks, the ab
28、ove two measures enjoy less popularity among the residents of the community and thus are unlikely to be implemented. The underlying reason is that growing trees and constructing parks can create a more comfortable living environment while the other two choices can bring about more inconvenience. To
29、be more specific, if shops stop the use of plastic shopping bags, the customers have to take a cloth bag while shopping. Also, taking public transportation will take longer time than driving the private cars, which means that commuters have to get up much earlier than before. It is self-evident that
30、 whether a policy can be carried out directly determines its effect, which is especially true of the above situation.Taking what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that the most effective way of protecting environment in local communities is to plant trees and create parks.托福写作模板:了
31、解跟你观点相反的人更重要20XX年8月27日托福独立写作题目It is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose opinion are similar to yours.托福写作范文参考:20XX年8月27日托福独立写作范文With the increasingly diverse means of acquiring information, it has become a commo
32、n phenonmen that we are exposed to conflicting ideas about a single event, which has aroused deep social concern. A growing boday of average people are wondering whether it is more important to read and watch news presented by people whose opinion is different from your own view than by people whose
33、 opinion are similar to yours. From my pesepective, it is advisable to be a good listener to the different viewpoints.Firstlly, receiving news presented by people with dissenting perspective can help people have access to the comprehensive information and get closer to the truth of the events. As is
34、 common sense, every single event or piece of news is not as simple as we expect. So it is an indisputable fact that nobody can have a panoramic view of the truth of the incidents due to the limited experience and knowledge span. In this case, gaining news from our opponents will definitely deliver
35、a brandnew perspective and make us have a second thought of our own viewpoint. In other words, the clashes of different views will temper and refine our opinion about the events, with the result that a whole picture is formed. On the contrary, just selectively listening to the similar ideas, people
36、will become narrow-minded.Besides that, another potential benefit of obtaining news from those with opposite view is the higher likelihood to make acquaitance with more people. As is known to all, the way person responds to someone whose opinion differs drastically from theirs reveals their true cha
37、racter. To be specific, being tolerant of different voices about one thing reflects that a person is endowed with the quality of inclusiveness and humbility, which can make him/her leave a good impression on others. Consequently, no one, including those from opposing party, will refuse to become fri
38、ends with humble and inclusive ones. Instead, those solely accepting same opinion are usually self-centered and arrogant so that they not consider others thought or feeling but impose their own opinion. Thus it is unlikely that they will build friendship with those with different ideas. Even worse, the alreadly established friendship may also end, once the disagreements occur.In a nutshell, it is sensible for people to read or watch news from people with dissenting perspective, in order to gain the whole picture of the news and enlarge the social network.托福写作*结构设置安排方法实例讲解
