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1、World Expo commemorative coins,Why do you want to have this World Expo coin?,1.so-that2.too-to3.It is -that-4.With-5.(The reason) why-is that-6.be likely to /It is likely that-7.It seems that- sb. /sth. seems to be/do8.It never occurs to sb. that-9.Only-10.There is no doubt that-11.have trouble /dif
2、ficulty (in) doing12.cant help doing13.The more-,the more-14.There is no point (in) doing sth.15.past or present participles,高三英语写作指导 润饰词句，增加文采,Dear Sir or Madam, Please listen to my hope. Im a senior middle school student. I want to be an exchange student in England since I was a child. Its the bes
3、t way to improve my language.England has many palaces and churches.I want to live with the host family, I can know more about the English culture. I can make some friends with blue eyes and golden hair.I think its cool and wonderful.It can open my eyesight area in this way.Thats my heart words. Plea
4、se consider it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,评点： 1.基本交代清楚了来信目的； 2.没有分段 3.没有运用过渡的连接词； 4.表达方式单一，语句欠丰富， 5.基本上没有高级词汇和句型； 6.开头生硬,结尾处汉式英语较严重.,The first paragraph : Give a brief self introduction and make clear your purposeThe second paragraph: Give reasons or list some advantages of being an exchange student.
5、 (containing facts, data, examples, etc.)The third paragraph: Express wishes and gratitude.,Dear Sir or Madam, Please listen to my hope. Im a senior middle school student. I want to be an exchange student in England since I was a child. Its the best way to improve my language. England has many palac
6、es and churches. I want to live with the host family, I can know more about the English culture. I can make some friends with blue eyes and golden hair. I think its cool and wonderful. It can open my eyesight area in this way. Thats my heart words. Please consider it. Yours faithfully, Li Hua,Im a s
7、enior middle school student. I want to be an exchange student.,Im a senior schoolgirl who wants to be an exchange student to England for one year.,Its the best way to improve my language.,As English is becoming more and more important in job-hunting and communication, there is no doubt that being an
8、 exchange student is an effective way to success.,1.使用从句,I want to live with the host family, I can know more about the English culture.,It is living together with the host family that can help me get a better understanding of the English culture.,2.使用强调句,Inspired by the English culture ,Im willing
9、to seize the opportunity to live with the host family to enrich my knowledge.,Living with the host family, I can have a better understanding of the English culture.,3.使用非谓语动词,I want to live with the host family, I can know more about the English culture.,England has many palaces and churches. （一般）,E
10、ngland is also an ancient country with many cultural relics and fascinating castles. （高级）,4.使用with的复合结构,Only by studying abroad in England can I broaden my horizons.,It can open my eyesight area in this way.,5.使用倒装句, going abroad is the best way to mastera foreign language as so perfect a learning c
11、ircumstance is offered., it is living together with the host family that can help me get a better understanding of theEnglish culture., one is bound to benefit a lot from a one-year study likethis., England is a developed country where a lot of job Opportunities are in store for me.,6、使用恰当的连接词,Reaso
12、ns for being an exchange student:,To begin with,Whats more,In addition,Therefore,1.The reasons why I am interested in it are listed_.,2.I hope you can_ this _and I would _if you could give me an early reply.,3.I _to visit places of interest in England.,4.I will _ this opportunity to_.,5.It is also s
13、aid that the weather there is_.,7. 运用高级词汇，提高表达层次,as follows,take,into consideration,be very grateful,have a desire,make the most of,make myself improved,agreeable,Dear Sir, I am a senior school student who wants to be an exchange studentin England for one year, so I am writing to apply to you for yo
14、ur admission._. _,as English is becoming more and more important in Job-hunting and communication, there is no doubt that being an exchange student is an effective way to success._, It is living together with the host family that can help me get a better understanding of the English culture._, Engla
15、nd is also an ancient country with many cultural relics and fascinating castles. Only by studying there can I broaden my horizons. _,I will make the most of this opportunity to make my English improved if possible. _,_. I hope you can take my request into consideration and I would be very grateful i
16、f you could give me an early reply. yours sincerely Wang Hua,The reasons why I am interested in it are listed as follows.,To begin with,Whats more,In addition,Therefore,In a word one is bound to benefit a lot from a one-year study like this,假如你是李明，本学期你们班级里从外省转来一名学生王华，他一时无法融入新的集体，感到苦恼，请给他写一封信，信中应该包括以
17、下要点：1.分析原因。 2.提出建议。,Dear Wanghua, You feel upset as you are a newcomer, and you cant get familiar with everyone soon. I think you should be active! Anyway, I will try to help you. In my opinion, you are too shy to talk to your classmates. Maybe the new surroundings make you uncomfortable. Never give
18、 up yourself and isolate yourself. The following are my suggestions. First, you must speak to others and communicate with the others more .Second ,dont always try to regard yourself as an important one in the class, just relax yourself and display your abilities freely, then others will be aware tha
19、t you are a nice person. In this way, when you try your best, you can really become a part of our class, I think you will be popular with the others. Wish you good luck! Yours Li Ming,Dear Wanghua, (background)My name is Liming.I am your new classmate. welcome to our school.I know that you cant get
20、into our class.I will help you. (reason)I think the reason you cant get along with us was that you didnt like communicating with us.If you communicate with us,well know each other.It is good for us to develop our friendships.you are from other place.So you have not been used to the custom of Shangha
21、i.It is quite normal. You need time. (suggestion)You should try communicating with classmates, teachers and your friends.It will help you a lot .If you have time,you can go out to play with us.We can play basketball,sing songs and do a lot of interesting things.I hope you will be our friend quickly.
22、It is good for you and our class, (conclusion)Take my advice and you will feel better,trust me! Yours Liming,Good bye!,写作练习：由湖南卫视策划“超级女声”节目连续热播，在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的反响，上周末你们班也为此展开了一场讨论，讨论结果如下：观点支持者 1.给一些平凡却爱唱歌的女孩子提供了一个展示才华的舞台. 2.增强了她们的竞争意识.观点反对者 1.花费了太多的时间和精力. 2.因为不能集中精力学习,对她们将来自身发展不利.你的观点注意:1. 行文应连贯,内容应完整; 2. 词数: 100-120左右 Recently many people especially high school students have been fascinated by a singing competition “Super girls voice”, which was held by Hunan TV Station.,
