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1、英语写作讲解,现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，写一篇短文。并说明你的主张。,How to write a good composition,学生作文展示 There is an arguement on whether Senior 3 students should go spring outing or not.Finally,we get the following results. About 65% of the students think we should go spring outing.Because it
2、 may let us touch nature,and we can get fresh air.As we know, it is good for our health.Whats more,going spring outing makes our brains relaxed,which helps us study well .,However,about 35%of students are against it. Because college entrance examination is coming, we might not have a good time. And
3、it has a bad effect on our schoolwork. Therefore, they think they shouldnt go spring outing. 评语：文章信息完整，结构好，连贯流畅 卷面整洁,书写工整。,高考作文类型：,对比观点题型要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法,写作基本步骤：仔细审题，列举大纲。围绕要点，写出句子。添加过度，确保连贯。先求正确，再求灵活。认真眷写，卷面整洁。,分四段写：Para.1. Introduction: 引入主题句 Para. 2. Point1 有一些人认为Para. 3. Point2 另一些人认为Para .4.
4、 Conclusion 我的看法,The outline of the writing:,写作基本步骤：第一：仔细审题，列举大纲。,写作基本步骤：第二： 围绕要点，写出句子。,1.grade three students of a high/middle school 2.There are 65%students agree it.3.Have 65%students agree it.- 65% of the students agree with it be in favor of the idea be for the idea4.They thought go spring outi
5、ng can touch the nature. - They think we can get close to nature by going spring outing,Grade Three-Senior 3 students,5.They think going spring outing can make them breath the fresh/ flesh air.呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air )6.It is benefit to their healthy. It is beneficial to their health.7. make
6、spirit loose. 精神放松（relax oneself refresh oneself / make sb relaxed8.let our brain have a good rest大脑休息（rest their brains ）,Chinglish,即中式英语,9. be good for studying be good for study10. (1) High exam will come. (2)Because of college entrance examination is coming. (3)With college entrance examination
7、is coming. - With the college entrance examination coming.,Key words:高三学生（senior 3 students）春游(go spring outing）讨论（discussion）接触自然（be close to nature） 呼吸新鲜空气（ breathe some fresh air ）,精神放松（relax themselves ）大脑休息（rest their brains ）高考临近（ with college entrance examination drawing near ）没心情玩（dont feel
8、like playing outside）耽误学习(waste the time)在我看来（in my opinion）,Para.1.主题句的内容要明确具体，语言简洁，开门见山，句式力争多样性,How will you start you passage?Introduction:（sample） Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a heated discussion.,巧用过渡句、过渡词，理顺文章的逻辑关系,Pay special attention to the transition sentences:Opi
9、nions are divided on the question. Different people hold different / opposite opinions.,写作基本步骤：第三：添加过度，确保连贯。,Point1: 65%的人认为应该春游（亮明观点）Sentence pattern: Most of us (about 65%) hold the opinion that, of them are in favor of the idea thatAbout 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students
10、 should go spring outing.,Reason1：接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康,Sentence pattern: They think it good to do sth/ sth do good to sth In their opinion, it is of great benefit to do sth Eg:They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air .,Reason 2:活动使精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习,（注意：两个观点之间的连
11、接）递进whats more ；besides ; moreover ; in addition；furthermoreEg: whats more ,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.,Conclusion: 小段总结，进一步亮明观点，前后呼应。,Eg: They think it will do good to their study.,Point 2:的学生认为不应该春游（亮明观点）注意：使用过渡句，自然衔接句子和段落（承上启下）S
12、entence pattern:However, others prefer toSome others have just the opposite opinion.On the other hand. Eg: On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea.,Reason 1:高考临近，没有心情玩 Sentence pattern: They say/believe/hold the opinion that.Eg: They say that with the college entrance exami
13、nation drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere.,Reason 2:春游耽误学习 （注意：两个观点之间的连接）Eg:Besides, they think going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study.,Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had
14、 a heated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. About 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air .whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest thei
15、r brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their study.,参考范文 one possible version,On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea. They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they th
16、ink going spring outing will take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study. In my opinion, I d like to say that we should go spring outing.,A、运用高级词汇或短语B、增加形容词或副词C、灵活运用各种句型,亮点点拨,Should Senior 3 students go spring outing? We have had a he
17、ated discussion. Opinions are divided on the question. About 65% of the students are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing. They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more, they can relax themselves for a while and rest their
18、brains so that they will be more energetic. They think it will do good to their study. On the other hand, about 35% of the students are against the idea. They say that with the college entrance examination drawing near, they dont feel like going anywhere. Besides, they think going spring outing will
19、 take at least a day off. They cant afford the time. They think they should fix their attention on their study.,be close to,energetic,feel,like going,afford,fix their,attention on,heated,fresh,表示观点对比类写作作文模版,The topic of （主题）is becoming more and more popular recently. People have different opinions o
20、n this problem. of them are in favor of the idea that They hold their view for the reason of (理由一）What is more， (理由二）。 Moreover， （理由三）。 However, of them hold the opposite opinion. / People who are against it dont think so. Firstly ,Secondly (besides ) ,Thirdly (finally)， For my part， the former is s
21、urely a wise choice .,影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素1.语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句5 .卷面整洁,书写工整,Homework: Improve your composition and hand it in tomorrow.,Thank you!,Practice makes perfect!,表示观点对比类写作套语,A.总起: Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different / opposite opinion
22、s. People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem. People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一: of them hold the opinion that . of them are in favor of the idea that People who are for the idea think ,C.表达不同观点之间的衔接:However, of them hold
23、a different view. / of them hold the opposite opinion. People who are against it dont think so. However, every coin has two sides. Different from those., people think .On the other hand, people think .D.结尾常用套语: In my opinion/Personally/ For my part As far as Im concerned, In short/ in brief/ in a word, ,表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/ First of all/ To begin with, . Secondly ThirdlyIn the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/ Last but not least/, .表示递进、强调的关联词. Besides/Apart from/ Whats more/ In addition/ Furthermore/ Moreover/worse still/ to make matters worse,
