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1、例谈如何在续写前进行有效阅读,有效阅读是续写的前提,以2016年10月新高考首考试题为例,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 One weekend in July, Jane and her husband, Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached
2、the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom, “Im going to find a better spot for us to camp” and walked away. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she had climbed to a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but
3、 forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she was lost. “Tom!” she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall,
4、 Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落) somewhere at a dista
5、nce. Quickly she followed the sound to a stream. To her great joy, she also saw some berry bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her wa
6、y carefully along the stream, Jane heard a helicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if th
7、ey came back again. Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasdark._ ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup._,. Type of writing _. In what order is the material developed? . Three elements (要素) for a narrative: Character Setting Plot,1. Analyze the material,Narrative 记叙文,Jane, Tom,In the forest,Timesequence,One weekend
8、in July, Jane As night was beginning to fall, Jane Jane rose at the break of the day, But and it was getting dark again. It was daybreak when Jane woke up.,方法1：绘制思维导图,quarreled walked away,Beginning,lost,drank ate,stoppedmissed (wanted),missed a chance (heard)got a plan (thinking),Find out the key v
9、erbs showing the development of the plot.,Plot,Climax,Ending,quarreled walked away,Beginning,lost,drank ate,no helicoptersgetting dark,stoppedmissed,missed a chancegot a plan,Climax,Ending,daybreakwoke up,struggle? fear？,rescue?,Jane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, stream, at a distance, to her great j
10、oy, helicopter, yellow blouse,2. Plot Deduction（推理）,Jane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, stream, at a distance, to her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse,key words given,Clue:Characters:Behavior:Places:Feelings/comments:,helicopter; yellow blouse,Jane; Tom;,walked; climbed,lake; stream; at a distance
11、,to her great joy,Tip: Classify the 10 key words to help plotting,regretful, homesick, miss, in despair, anxious, give up, panic, lonely, desperate, break down, cheerful, to her great joy,Qualities:,catch sight of, wave, flag, laugh, burst into tears, dash, hug, shout, struggle, attempt, reunite,get
12、 injured, cold night, wild beasts, suffer, tired, lack of confidence,3. Brainstorm for words and expressions,Difficulties:,calm, firm belief, courage, clever self-assured,Emotions:,Actions:,4. Writing Tips,Add proper mental activities,Let the surroundings speak,Describe actions specifically,1. Amid
13、the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild beasts were heard. 2. hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the setting sun,1. She rushed to the rock, climbed onto it and waited. 2. She waved her yellow blouse madly to the passing helicopter.,1. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldn
14、t be trapped here,” she thought to herself.,Para. 7But no more helicopters came and it was dark.,Para. 8ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.,Time: the night before,slept,Feeling: disappointed,Find a place to sleep,Predicting the Development,try to get out,Para. 7But no more helicopters came and it was dark.
15、,Predicting the Development,cold, scared,think about Tom,Find a place to sleep,fall asleep,tired, hungry,regretful,Jane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, at a distance, stream, To her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse,Predicting the Development,Jane took off her yellow blouse, thinking that she should
16、 go to an open area and flag them if they came back again. (Para. 6),yellow blouse,helicopters,go to an open area,What would Jane do?,Jane,try to get rescued by the helicopter,Para. 8ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.,Jane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, at a distance, stream, To her great joy, helicopter, y
17、ellow blouse,Predicting the Development,Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. (Para. 5),walk,lake,stream,What would Jane do if there were no helicopter or she failed to be noticed?,follow the stream to find the lake,Jane,Jane, Tom, lake, walked, climbed, at a di
18、stance, stream, To her great joy, helicopter, yellow blouse,Predicting the Development,She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. (Para. 4),Would Jane get out of the forest?,Yes.,How would she react when seeing Tom?,held Tom and told him she loved him,Continuing the story,Possible d
19、evelopment,3. V-ing 作状语,Lying awake in the dark, Jane wanted very much to be,Never in her life had she tasted anything better.,1. If only 虚拟语气,2. Never 倒装句,If only she had not left her mobile phone,4. so that ,As night, Jane was so tired that she had to stop,5. With 结构,With no path to follow, Jane j
20、ust walked on .,6. The more, the more,the farther she walked, the more confused she became.,7. 形容词作伴随状语,Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty.,Reading for Language,Paragraph1: But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Amid the dreadful darkness, strange sounds of wild b
21、easts were heard. Jane was lonely and seized by extreme panic. “If it werent for that stupid quarrel, I wouldnt be trapped here,” she thought regretfully and then burst into tears. Many times, Jane was on the edge of breaking down. But in the end she convinced herself that all hope was not lost. Tir
22、ed and hungry, Jane fell asleep. Paragraph2: It was daybreak when Jane woke up. A moving dot on the horizon was spotted. As it drew nearer, Jane saw it clearly. “The helicopter,” Jane murmured, sprang up and dashed to the center of an open area. She waved her yellow blouse desperately to it. To her
23、great joy, this time she was spotted. Soon afterwards, the helicopter landed steadily on the ground. There jumped out her Tom. The moment Toms eyes fell upon her, Jane threw herself into his arms. “Honey, Never will I leave you again.” Jane sobbed in tears. The reunited couple hugged each other tightly in the warm light of the rising sun.,Appreciation,立足课堂，关注过程,Thank You!,
