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1、中考书面表达解题策略,大南坂中学 林文全,目录,1,2,3,4,考情分析,方法指导,典例精析,热点演练,20122015年漳州市英语中考考情一览表,考情解读：从漳州近四年中考真题统计结果可知，书面表达常见的类型为：命题作文和半命题作文。文体2013年和2014年以议论文为主，2012年和2015年都是先议后叙，议论和记叙两者相结合。话题贴近学生学习和生活，学生可根据自身经历和所学知识自主发挥，所写的短文没有固定的标准答案，有利于开拓学生的发散性思维。时态以一般现在时为主，偶尔也用到一般过去式和一般将来时，词数都是80词左右。分值除15年是14分之外，其余的每年都是12分。预计2016年中考书面
2、表达仍会以议论和记叙两者相结合的形式，话题贴近现实生活。,书面表达旨在考查学生综合运用所学语言知识与技能的能力，要求学生所写文章语言流畅，语法正确，内容要点清楚，表达形式多样；能正确、完整、连贯地表达试题要求的内容；能适当使用一些较复杂的语言结构或较高级的句型结构；能注意文章段落结构分布；书写清楚，字母大小写、标点等运用规范。在做书面表达时，可以采用以下写作步骤：,一. 认真审题，明确要求，理清思路认真审题。审题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，细读题目中所给的提示信息，弄清题意，明确文章主题，确定文体、时态、人称等。了解所要表达的要点，并将写作要点连贯起来，构筑文章的整
3、体框架。,2012年中考 为了促进家庭和睦、幸福，联合国把每年的5月15日定为“国际家庭日（the International Day of Families）”，假如你们学校在这个节日来临之前，开展题为“A day for my family”的征文活动，请你根以下要求写一篇英语短文参与投稿。要求：1.请你设计一个活动与父母共度国际家庭日，来促进与父母的交流，表达对父母的爱。2.数：80词左右。3.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称。 （ 12分 ）,2012年中考 试题中可以发现以下几个方面的内容：1.开展题为“A day for my family”的征文活动为可看出：这是一个以“A d
4、ay for my family”命题作文；2.请你设计一个活动与父母共度国际家庭日，提示本文以第一人称，并以记叙文的形式来写，时态用一般将来时；来促进与父母的交流，表达对父母的爱。 （用议论的形式）3.要点：举行一次与父母共度国际家庭日 表达对父母的爱4.字数：80词左右。5 .12分 大约分六个小点,二. 抓住要点，拟定提纲，确定句型 抓住要点，拟定写作提纲，用自己熟悉的短语、句型将理顺的要点逐句表达出来。,2013年中考 短文写作（12分) 我市将承办2014年第15届省运会，为此组委会委托某英语报社向全社会征集建议，假设你是李平，请联系实际，就“政府部门，市民(citizens)及学生
5、该为办好这次盛会做些什么？”提出建议要求：1.根据所提供的信息，给该报社写”一封建议信；2.词数：80词左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数)； 3.文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称Dear Editor, My name is Li ping , a middle school student . Im excited to know that the 15th Games of Fujian Province will be held in our city in 2014 . To make it successful ,_li Ping,1. be supposed to do sth T
6、he governmentis supposed to build more new gyms for the players2.take measures to do sth The government is supposed to take more measures to improve the environment Of our city.,3. ought to do sthThe citizens ought to be polite and ready to help others. 4.had better do sthThey had better talk with o
7、thersin Putonghua., 5.should +do sth Students should try their best to keep the city clean and tidy. Students should do more exercise to keep fit and try to be volunteers of the Games.6.makes a contributionIf everyone makes a contribution, the Games will be more successful.,三 依据提纲，恰当运用关联词句，使文章各个部分衔接
8、自然。依据提纲，将写好的句子连贯地组织起来，注意要把题目要求的内容无一遗漏地写进去，确保内容的完整性。同时，要注意上下句的逻辑关系，适当使用表示递进、让步、转折等的连接词语，使文章层次分明，过渡自然。写作时一般要求学生多用简单句，少用无把握的复合句。若遇到表达障碍，也可运用同义句来表达。,让学生掌握一些常用的衔接性的句子或短语 提出个人看法：1.Here are some of my suggestions 这是我的一些建议 First. Second. finally.第一；其 次最后 2.I think there are some reasons (on.) 我想有几种（关于.的)原因3
9、. I think everyone is supposed to (ought to). 我想每个人应该.4 . I hope that.我希望.5. As far as I am concerned.据我所知6. In my opinion.依我看,开头 1.first of all 首先 2.as we know 总所周知 递进1. Whats more,不仅如此 2. .whats worse 更糟糕的是转折1.on the other hand 在另一方面 2. however,然而结尾（总结）1.as a result结果 2.In a word，总而言之，总之其他 1. 2.fo
10、r example./such as .例如. 2.some.,others. 一些.,另一些., 让学生学会套用一些常用句型1. Its important/.+adj.for sb to do sth.对于某人来说做某事是重要的/ . 2. . is very useful in our daily life. 在我们的日常生活中.是有用的。 3. You should .as much as possible. 你应该尽可能多地。 4. .is getting more and more important. . 变得越来越重要。,5. I think its my duty to do
11、 sth. 我认为.是我的职责。7. We must take measures to do sth. 我们必须采 取措施做某事。 8. The best way to.is.最好的方式是 9. If we have difficulties in sth.， we can. 如果我们在某方面有困难，我们可以 10. Let me tell you something about. 让我来告 诉你一些关于,11.as the saying goes, every coin has its two sides,.has its advantages and its disadvantages.正
12、如谚语所说的:任何硬币都有两面,.有它自己的优点和缺点.12.but as a student,we should put our heart into our study 但是,作为一名学生,我们应该把心放到学习上.13,Nothing is more important than.to .没有.比.更重要14.There is no doubt that. 毫无疑问.15.is the most .that I have ever. .是我见过的最.的,4. 明确评分标准,通读全文， 细致检查，查漏补缺 写完书面表达后要从头至尾读一遍，检查一下文章是否通顺，是否有逻辑错误，标点符号、单词拼
13、写和时态运用是否正确，是否漏掉题目所提示的要点。,短文写作当中常见的几种问题1.时态错误(扣分多)。2.中国式英语。3.名词单复数，单词拼写错误及大小写错误。4.主谓不一致，惯用法及句型用法不得当。5.词数不够，字数少于规定的字数超过10个单词以上。6.所写要点不齐全。7.书写不规范，卷面不整洁。,2015年中考英语评分标准,短文写作评分建议： 一档(1314分)：能紧扣主题，内容具体、丰富。用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达完整、字迹清楚、几乎没有语言错误、具备较强的语言运用能力，完全达到了预期的写作目的。 二档(10一12分)：能紧扣主题，应用的语言结构和词汇能满足任务要求，句子较通顺、表
14、达较清楚、有少量语言错误，基本达到了预期的写作目的。 三档(79分)：基本能扣主题，内容不够丰富、具体，字数较少。语言表达过于简单、句子不够通顺、行文不够连贯、有部分语言错误。 四档(46分)：所写的内容与主题有关，但内容较少、语言不规范、句子无条理、行文不连贯、语言错误较多。 五档(0一3分)：所写内容与主题几乎无关，内容杂乱，不知所云。语言很不通顺，用 词很不准确，错误过多，几乎难以读懂。 说明：1相同的错误不重复扣分。 2多写不扣分。,典例一,(2015年漳州中考 )短文写作（14分)学会分享很重要。你有哪些东西要分享？采取哪些方式分享? 根据图示内容，结合自身一次经历，写一篇短文，并阐
15、述分享的意义。要求：1要点齐全，并适当发挥；词数：80词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 SharingIts very important to learn to share with each other._,【写作指导】第一步：明确要求，理清思路本篇书面表达是一篇命题作文，要求考生结合自身一次经历以“Sharing”为题，阐述分享的意义.首先，用议论的形式来表达分享的种种方式及如何分享；然后，通过用记叙的形式来描述自身经历，写出自己如何与别人分享，分享什么及分享的感受。本文时态应以一般现在时（表达分享）和过去式（描述经历）为主，人称以第一人称为主。写作
16、时，可使用一些复合句来增加文章亮点。,第二步：抓住要点，确定句型，拟定提纲,Its very important to learn to share with each other.,3. I can share some beautiful pictures, favorite music, different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, e-mail,2. I have many things to share in different ways,4. I hoped to cheer her up.,5. I shared my fa
17、vorite books and chatted with her after class.,6 sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up.,7.We can learn a lot from sharing,第三步：依据提纲，连句成篇,Sharing Its very important to learn to share with each other. I have many things to share in different ways. For example, I can s
18、hare some beautiful pictures, favorite music, different ideas with others face to face or by QQ, e-mail which are widely used. Now Id like to share one of my unforgettable experiences with you. Emily was lonely and unhappy. I hoped to cheer her up. So I shared my favorite books and chatted with her
19、after class. As time went by, she became used to sharing her feelings with me. Now were good friends. In a word, sharing is not only interesting but also helpful and it makes us grow up. We can learn a lot from sharing and enjoy our lives more.,4,热点演练, 1.近来，微信 Wechat 变得时尚而受欢迎，许多人加入了抢红包游戏活动，但也有人表示担忧。
20、加入你叫李华，你班最近开展了一个有关抢红包游戏活动的调查，请根据调查的结果及你自己的观点，写一篇短文。,注意;1.语言通顺，意思连贯，调理清楚，书写规范2.词数;80左右，短文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数 参考词汇：grabbing red packetsHere is the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class._,微信红包,Here is the survey on the activity of “Grabbing red packets” in our class .About 70% of the
21、 students took part in the game in my class. About 75% of them think it can bring the more fun and they can make more friends. However,about 25% of them are worried about the activity. They say some people spend too much time grabbing red rackets. Whats more, they dont have enough communication with
22、 their family members .As a result, they may feel a little lonely from time to time. I think this game is really exciting, but we should spend more time communicating with our family members., A.在家庭里、在社会中，只要我们从自身做起，我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会（harmonious society）起到推进作用。你们学校的English Newsletter正在以Doing Our Part（从自
23、身做起）为题举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Doing Our Part We have grown up and its time for us to do something for our family and society. At home, _,2. 构建和谐社会,We have grown up and its time for us to do something for
24、our family and society. At home, we should help our parents do the housework. They go to work during the daytime and they must be tired after a full days work. We do the house in order to let them have a rest. We should also talk with them more, it can help us understand each other better. In societ
25、y，do not throw rubbish everywhere, we should throw it into the dustbin. It can make our environment more beautiful. Dont use plastic bags when going shopping, wed better use shopping baskets. If we use them too often, it will become white pollution. In a word, if each of us do our part from now on,
26、our world will become a harmonious society, B 假设你是李平，是渭河中学的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。1人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心；2人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助；3人与自然：能源、环境、动植物，爱惜保护；4你的态度：内容由考生自己拟定。注意：1词数100左右；2倡议书的开头、结尾以及提示句已为你写好，不计入词数；3内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。 Build a Harmonious Society Dear fellow students, From WeiheHigh
27、 School,Build a Harmonious Society Dear fellow students, Our government is going to build a harmonious society. I think it is everyones duty to work hard to achieve this goal. As high school students, what should we do ? First of all, we should love our motherland. Lets take a great interest in the
28、development of our hometowns and take an active part in our schools activities. Secondly, lets fill the world with love. We should show our respect for old people, our parents and our teachers. We should also care for each other and help those in need. Most important of all, all of us must be faithf
29、ul and honest in our daily life. Finally, lets work together to save energy and protect our natural environment, including animals, trees, flowers and grass. As for myself, I will study even harder and try my best to do all the above .Dear fellow students, lets start right now and spare no effort to
30、 do a little bit every day,every hour, and every minute! Li Ping From WeiheHigh School, 在英语课上，老师向同学们介绍了2015年度“最美孝心少年”的感人事迹，你深受感动。请你用英语写一则日记，写出自己的感受。内容要点及要求：1 表明自己将向“孝心少年”学习2.你将在日常生活、学习中做些什么来孝敬父母3.词数：80左右。开头部分以给出，不计入总词数。提示词：learn from. respect, care for ,do some housework, study hard Monday, June 30
31、sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about? the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2015”_,3 孝敬父母,Monday, June 30 sunny This morning, our English teacher told us some stories about “the most beautiful filial piety youth in 2015”.I was deeply moved. Those teenagers set us a g
32、ood example in respecting and caring for parents. I used to make my parents unhappy and now I feel ashamed about it .I think I should learn form them. I will help them do some housework and take care of my mum and dad. when they are ill. I will try my best to study hard so that I can enter the key h
33、igh school in our city. I hope I can become a filial piety youth like them.,孝敬父母,为了进一步增强中学生的安全 意识，提高自我保护能力，某校开展了 以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根 据以下要点提示写一篇演讲稿。 注意：内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可 适当发挥,4 安全防范,As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions. First, we
34、should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Last but not least, summer is coming,
35、 and we must remember its dangerous to swim in the river. In short, safety must come first!,安全防范,最近，你们班 召开了以“我的中国梦”为主题的班会活 动，每位同学都畅谈了自己对中国梦的理 解。请写一篇日记，记述班会情况及自己 的感受。 内容要点： 1.谈谈自己的梦想。 2.为什么有这个梦想。 3.如何实现自己的梦想。,5 计划与愿望,Everyone talked about his understanding of the Chinese Dream. We all believe that th
36、is dream will come true in the future. I also talked about my own dream. My dream is to be a doctor. Let me tell you why I have this dream? When I was in Grade Seven, I was sick and often went to see doctors. The doctors were very friendly to me and they often cheered me up. With the help of them, I
37、 was getting better. Now Im very healthy. Since then I have hoped to become a doctor. How will I make my dream come true? I will study hard to get good grades. Ill read more books about medicine. I believe Ill be a good doctor in the future.,计划与愿望,假设你们班级即将召开以“感恩”为主题的 班会，要求向大家介绍一下你最想向谁表 达感恩之情，他或她为你做了
38、什么，你又 将怎样回报他或她的付出。请结合上文内 容，以“Thank you, my”为题写一篇发言稿。 要求： 1.句子通顺，语意连贯。 2.包括所有提示内容。 3.不少于80词。,6.表达感恩之情,Thank You, My Mother Wherever we are today, whatever we are, we owe it to our parents who have given and taught us so much, so we should thank them, especially, thank our mother. I think my mother is
39、 one of the best mothers in the world. She is the busiest one in my family. She does chores for the family and cares about my study. She has taught me a lot. She does lots of things for me. But she never wants anythings in return. How will I show my thanks to my mother? First, this year, I am going to give her a surprise birthday party and buy her a special present. Second, Ill do well in school. Third, Ill help her do housework when Im free. I want to make her happy. In a word, I love my mother.,表达感恩之情,Thank you for your listening！,
