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1、,中考作文写作指导 The first period 学校：成家庄中学 教师：薛耀珍,写出高水平作文的应试方法,一、首先句子要符合英语语法1.We live more and more comfortable.2.e can get many informations by reading newspapers.3.There has many programs in TV.4.I think ride a bike can keep our health.,comfortably(副词修饰动词),much information不可数名词用much修饰,there are many prog
2、rams on TV.(there be句型和介词短语),riding a bike(动名词作主语),keep us healthy,大家来找茬,There are many student think they should eat good and put on fashionable clothes.They not have sense of thanks enter society.We have a good chance to educate because our society. We should thank our perants send us to school st
3、udy.We should also thank teachers because they teach our knowledge.Friends always suport and encourage us. We should show sense of thanks to them.,students,well,wear,dont,when they,parents,for sending,us,support,for,M,be educated,二、运用较高级的句式。,He is very young. he cant go to school.2. He is very cleve
4、r. He can work out out the problem.3、Tom is a student. He is 16 years old. He likes runningTom, a 16-year-old student, likes running.,He is too young to go to school.,He is so clever that he can work it out the problem.He is clever enough to work out the problem.,三、多使用短语,I got up quickly.,I got up a
5、s quickly as possible.,He studies English well.,He is good at English. He does well in English.,The girl likes reading.The pretty girl likes reading novels.The pretty girl likes reading novels carefully.The pretty girl who I talked to just now likes reading novels carefully.,四、扩写,五 使用适当的连接词，使文章结构紧凑。
6、,并列关系：and，or，either . or，both . and，not only . but also. as well as转折关系：but，however，yet，although条件关系：if, whether，unless时间关系：when，as，before，after，while，until，since，as soon as因果关系：because，as，since，for，so,六.正确使用两三个好句型如：宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。,宾语从句：I believe Tianjin will be more beautiful and prosperous.状语从句
7、：If everyone does something for the environment, our hometown will become clean and beautiful.动名词做主语：Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes.Its bad for our eyes to read books in the sun.,仔细检查，书写规范,时态正确，语句通顺,过渡自然，表达流畅,收集信息，明确要点,亮点词句，锦上添花,作为一个九年级学生，面对即将来临的中考，你是否感到“亚历山大”呢？请你根据以下提示下一篇80词左右的作文。Do y
8、ou always feel stressed out at present?Tell us one of your experiences to show your pressure.How do you deal with the pressure?,In general concentrate on succeeded in Until instead of realizeDivide betweenandAt the same timebalance,In generalIn general, most students dont like the pressure of exam.S
9、ucceed inI believe in I can succeed in entering my dream high school.Instead on Now I try to walk to school every day instead of taking a bus in order to exercise.,UntilThese days I dont go to bed until I have to finish all my homework.That(关系代词）Every day, I put many books that I need to use into my
10、 backpack.That（从属连词）I realized that I should change my studying styles.,Most students are always being told by their parents to study harder so that they can have a wonderful life.(被动语态和状语从句）I knew this would be a challenge but I didnt realize how difficult it was until my classes in high school beg
11、an.(并列复合从句和状语从句）I knew it wasnt very good and the grades that I got showed that I was not hard-working enough.(定语从句）I realized that I need to find some kind of balance.(宾语从句）Ever since, I have never missed any important things.(现在完成时）Im glad that Ive leaned to balance things and it has prepared for
12、what is coming after graduation.(宾语从句）,Composition 1 I always feel stressed out in my life. Last team, my teacher told me that the final exam was important, so I was upset about the coming exam and scared too much about the results. It made me feel stressed out and it become more and more serious. W
13、hen I realize this problem, I decide to solve it. To deal with the pressure, I always listen to the music that can make me relaxed and ask my teacher for help. My parents told me, “it doesnt matter if I succeed or fail in a test. Only in this way, can you do well in the exam.” So, although I still f
14、eel stressed out in my school life, I have to try, because I have a dreamto go to an excellent senior high school.,Advantages :CompletedSome good words and sentencesDisadvantages :Not very good storySome grammar mistakes第三档作文 7-9分,Composition 2 Recently，more and more students feel stressed out becau
15、se of the final exam. So do I . Last week, I was concentrate on Chinese. It made my English not very good and I had fallen my English exam. I felt sad, even I wanted to give up, I must be something else. In order to improve it and cheer me up, I began to work hard until 12 pm. The next day, I felt s
16、o tied that I couldnt follow my Chinese teacher. From then on, I did badly in both Chinese and English. It made me under too much pressure. I have no reason to give up. I am a nine-grade student, after all. I divide my daytime into two parts for study, and in the night I sleep. One part is to study
17、Chinese, and other part is to study English. In this way, I gradually find a balance between all kinds of my subjects. I believe if keep working hard, I will go into a key senior high school.,Advantages:Good words and good sentences Good storyDisadvantages:Not very fluentlySome grammar mistakes第四档作文
18、：1012分,Composition 3,Recently, I am under too much pressure. Every day many questions crowd my mind. Last Sunday, I was told to write an important essay. However, I had too much homework to do. I didnt have enough time. When I finished my homework, it was too late and I was sleepy. But I still kept
19、on working. After all, I am a monitor. At last, I finished it. I looked at my watch and I was so surprised to see it was two oclock already. I could only sleep for five hours. When the morning came, I really felt too tired to get up. You see, I am stressed about my busy study life. In my opinion, I
20、should improve my efficiency. I need to write and think more quickly. Only in this way, will I succeed in balancing the time. I do believe I will be more efficient in my studies. I do believe I can go to a key senior high school.,Advantages:Fluent and correctGood storyGood words and sentencesDisadva
21、ntages:Not very good handwriting A few grammar mistakes第五档作文 1315分,考生书面表达中存在的问题 书面表达要求学生具有扎实的语言基本功，具备一定的审题能力、想象能力、表达能力和评价能力，所以对学生的综合语言运用能力要求很高，是中考英语试卷中区分度较高的题型之一。一般来说，不同的写作题材，对人物、事件的写作的重点也不尽相同的，但学生在写作过程中所犯的错误却基本一致。中考作文中出现的主要问题有：1.不重视审题，导致信息不完整。 有些考生在写作前没有认真审题就开始动笔写，这样往往会背离主题，导致文章的档次和分数降低。例如：2012年赏析省
22、的中考题书面表达是要求考生根据“你愿意上课外补习班吗？为什么？请给出三个理由。你在闲暇时愿意做什么？”等提示进行写作。不少考生在作文中主要描述自己喜欢的课外活动，没有弄清楚题目的含义和要点。2.逻辑不清，结构松散。 有的学生在动笔前没有动笔的习惯，不清楚哪些内容应该详写，哪些内容应该略写，从而导致整个作文逻辑不清，层次感不强。有的学生虽然在词汇方面能达到基本要求，但由于句子之间没有添加适当的衔接成分，是句子之间缺乏必要的过渡和连贯，影响了信息的传递和表达效果。,3.表达错误多，汉式英文表达较多 由于受汉语的影响，再加上对应于句子结构掌握不好，导致学生常常按汉语的词序来翻译句子。在学生的作文中常
23、常出现这样的句子：I dont very like after-school class. We go to school study. There are 10 students take part in sports meet等。导致语句不通顺，影响得分。4.语法意识弱，语法错漏多。 学生写作之间没有判断整篇文章主要用哪种时态，常出现该用一般现在时的句子，用了一般过去式，而该用将来时的用了完成时。由于学生对各种时态掌握不好，导致常常将所学的各种时态、结构混用。以致出现以下的错误：Im go to the park by bike last week, I told that there a
24、re many flowers there. 除此之外，学生在写作中还存在拼写错误，书写不规范，不工整也影响得分。,按照文体进行写作指导,记叙文应用文说明文议论文,按照话题进行写作指导,学校生活 饮食、运动与健康 兴趣与爱好 旅游与交通 节假日活动 自然与环境语言学习 计划于愿望,.书面表达（共15分）2013年中考题学生综合素质评价的方式多种多样，同伴互评是其中较为有效的方式之一, 它可以让学生不断体验成长和学习过程中的进步，并正确认识自我, 保持自信。某班一个小组正在进行阶段性同伴互评活动，如果你是该组组长， 请结合本组讨论情况，为本组某位同学写一份分激励性评价报告，内容须包含以下要点：t
25、he skill/the advantage/the personal quality the student hasone thing the student did some advice for the student 要求：1词数80词左右；2不得出现真实的人名、校名,.参考范文： Han Mei is an easygoing girl who gets along well with everyone. She is also talented in performing. Whats the most important, she is warm-hearted. Once sh
26、e knew a girl in her neighborhood had so serious an illness that a large amount of money was needed. She put forward a suggestion calling on all the kids to give away pocket money to the unlucky girl. Besides, she organized a charity show to raise more money. When the girl and her parents got the mo
27、ney, they were really moved. Han Mei should also put more time and energy into study and try to be a student with both a kind heart and good grades.,书面表达（共15分) 2011年中考题 某校进行了“你最喜欢的课堂学习方式”的调查。结果表明，小组合作学习的方式受到了同学们的欢迎。请你写一篇有关小组合作学习的短文，内容须包含以下三个方而： 1小组合作学习的好处； 2让你感受深刻的一次小组合作学习的经历； 3小组合作学习的方式给你带来的收获。 要求：
28、1词敦80词左右。已给出的句子不计人总词数；,One possible version : Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For example, we can not only save time but also encourage each other when we study in groups. I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really h
29、ard time with it. Once in class, I studied with some classmates together. I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didnt feel stressed out at all. At last, I finished my homework by myself for the first time. How excited I was ! Because of studying in groups, I
30、am not worried about physics any more. I get more confidence with my classmates help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.,IX. A) After the exam, I really want to travel to Dalian. I think Dalian is a very beautiful city. I like the sea there. I can swim in the real sea. It
31、will make me relax. Also I can lie on the beach and enjoy the sunshine. How happy I will be! B) You are an outgoing boy. Theres always a smile on your face and everybody likes to make friends with you. We used to play basketball on the playground. Sometimes we went to the park and had a good time th
32、ere. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. At this very moment Im saying goodbye to you, I just want to give you my best wishes;I hope you are happy and healthy forever.I hope you are successful in the future.,2014年预测作文 每一个人,每一个国家，都拥有梦想。“中国梦”是目前最热的话题。作为中学生，你是如何理解中国梦的?你的中国梦是什么呢?为实现你的梦想，你将怎么做呢?假
33、设你叫李红(Li Hong),请以“My Dream”为题，写一篇不少于100词的英语短文。要求： 1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。 2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号和大小写使用正确。 3. 短文中应尽量包括提示内容，可适当发 挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。4. 参考词汇：China dream，come true ,achieve ones dreams., give up， hold on to, make up ofMY DREAM_,MY DREAM Everyone has his dreams. As young students, we have many kinds
34、of dreams. These dreams are our China dreams. The dreams can be very big, they can also be small. In fact ,a big dream is made up of many small dreams. My names Li Hong. I also have a dream. I dream of becoming a great scientist. From now on, I have to study hard to achieve my dream. I must learn as
35、 much as I can. When I meet any difficulty, I wont give it up , I must get it over . Im sure its very important to dream,. Some dreams are more realistic, others are not. No matter what our dreams are, we should hold on to them, they can just come true one day.,一、校园生活篇主要考点：学校环境与教学方式的变化、学校生活、课堂学习方式、英
36、语学习方法、校园生活、和谐校园、师生情谊等。,A假如你们学校正在开展研究性学习（exploring learning strategies），请你根据下表提供的信息写一篇短文， 让更多的学生了解你校开展研究性学习的一些情况。注意：1.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 2.词数：100左右。,Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies._-,Great changes have taken place in our
37、studies since our school began to carry on exploring learning strategies. In the past , teachers kept on explaining the language point in class . We students just listened and took some notes. So we didnt have enough time to think about problems independently. We had to do much homework after class.
38、 But now teachers show the problems to us first ,then we discuss them for a while. We try to find out the ways of solving problems, through which weve learnt how to cooperate with others. After class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to library or surf the
39、 Internet for the useful information and so on.In a word ,now we are the owners of our study and were happy.,假如你有两位同学-芳芳和明明，参加了上个星期二学校组织的英语演讲比赛，他们的不同表现使你深有感触。请你根据下列表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文。,B,要求： 1.词数 80-100； 2. 短文开头已给出，不计入总词 数； 3.要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。,Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech
40、 Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply. Before the contest ,Fangfang thought_,Last Tuesday Fangfang and Mingming entered the English Speech Contest in our school. What they did made me think deeply.Before the contest ,Fangfang thought she was good at English ,and there was no nee
41、d for her to study hard. She spent lots of time choosing the clothes which would be worn on that day. She made few preparations for the English Speech Contest. So she was too nervous to finish her speech in the contest. Mingming prepared for the contest carefully. He learnt from others. Unfotunately
42、, he hurt his leg two days before the contest, but he didnt give up. Mingming did well in the contest.We should learn from Mingming.,C,某学校进行了“你最喜欢的课堂学习方式”的调查。结果表明，小组合作学习的方式受到了同学们的欢迎。请你写一篇有关小组合作学习的短文，内容须包含以下三个方面：1.小组合作学习的好处；2.让你感受最深刻的一次小组 合作学习的经历；3.小组合作学习的方式给你带来的收获。要求：1.词数：100-120（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2.文中不得
43、出现真实的人名、校名。,save time,express onesown idea,encourageeach other.,open your mind,get on well withothers,improveyourself.,Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular.,Studying in groups is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages. For example ,we can not only save time but also e
44、ncourage each other when we study in groups. I still remember when I was in Grade 8, my physics was very poor. I had a really hard time with it .Once in class ,I study with some classmates together .I was very relaxed and asked my classmates a lot of questions about physics. I didnt feel stressed ou
45、t at all. At last , I finished my homework by myself for the first time . How excited I was!Because of studying in groups ,I am not worried about physics any more . I get more confidence with my classmates help. It also gives me more chances to improve myself in many ways.,D,世界在发展，文化在交融，英语已成为人们沟通的桥梁
46、，怎样才能学好英语是我们一直在求索的问题。几年的学习经历，你一定积累了许多成功的经验。请从听、说、读、写四方面谈谈你的建议。要求：1.词数：100左右（题目、开头已给出，不计入总数）2.字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。,English is important and useful. How can we learn it well? Here are my suggestions.,How to study English wellEnglish is important and useful. How can we learn it well? Here are my sugges
47、tions. There are four key points to study English : listening ,speaking ,reading and writing.Firstly ,we should be brave to talk with others in English .Secondly, we should try to listen to all kinds of English programs as much as possible. Thirdly ,we should often read English books .when we come a
48、cross (meet) a new word ,we should guess its meaning through the text first. Then look it up in the dictionary to have a check. Fourthly ,we should practice our writing skills.As long as we listen ,speak ,read and write more ,we are sure to make more progress.,二 、快乐成长篇 主要考点： 如何感恩家长、老师和朋友；如何释放学习压力，调节
49、情绪；如何处理同学关系以及健康成长等。,A,在日常学习和生活中，你一定得到过很多人的帮助和关爱办，此时此刻你会有很多感谢的话要说。请根据下列提示写一篇短文。提示：1.感谢的人：亲人、老师、同学.2.感谢他们的原因：生活方面、学习方面.3.语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范；4.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。,In my life ,I get lots of help and love from many people .Now ,I want to express my thanks to them . First,_,In my life ,I get lots of help and
50、 love from many people .Now ,I want to express my thanks to them .First, I want to thank my parents .They provide a happy life for me .They do much for me and give me so much love .Second , I want to thank my teachers .They are so hard-working. When I have problems with my study, they are so patient
