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1、托福写作举的例子太假不可信 托福独立写作中为了证明一些观点考生经常需要通过举例的方式来增强说服力，但有时候自己编的例子不太靠谱就很容易被考官看穿从而导致说服力的下滑和扣分。下面就和大家分享托福写作举的例子太假不可信，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作举的例子太假不可信?这两个例证使用禁忌不可不知切忌使用过于本土化的例子有的同学在表达的时候，没有考虑到中西文化的差异，有的东西中国人很熟悉，很了解，但是美国人未必清楚，这样会导致他们无法理解，比如说有的同学说某个女孩很漂亮，会说她沉鱼落雁，羞花闭月的，但是这样描述美国人是不太懂的，因为这里面包含着中国古代四大美女的典故，与其这样表达还不如说这个女孩非常漂亮，我
2、楼下的邻居张三每次看到她都激动的口水直流，浑身颤抖。这样的表达美国人就非常容易理解了。例子细节不充分也是大忌其实同学们都明白，平时身边哪来那么多例子，所以例子基本靠“编”的，虽然是在编造谎言，但是也要努力让谎言看上去比较真实一点，在谎言中增加细节是增加谎言可信度的很简单有效的办法，很多中国学生在写例子的时候会使用比如说有一个人这样的表达，这样的表达看起来底气不足，模模糊糊，考官就很难相信确有其事。同学们可以改用另外的表达我有一个朋友叫Jason，他在两年前做了X.X事这样写就看起来舒服多了。在叙述个人类例子的时候，尽量使用具体的人名、地名和时间。这样能使例子看上去更丰满、富有细节，也更像真实的
3、事件，有说服力。托福考官对编造例子的容忍度有多高?对于中国学生来说，很少有学生能够有一个非常宏大的素材库并且任何话题都能从素材库中信手拈来合适的例子，事实上，托福考试仅仅是对于语言能力的测试，只要能用恰当的例子证明自己的观点就可以了，因此，这个为“编造”例子留下了很大的空间，只要“编造”得当，个人的例子或者自己身边的例子对于考官来说也是完全可以接受的。托福考试作文独立写作范文：自己的经验比询问别人更能解决问题Its more important to use your own knowledge and experience than ask others knowledge and expe
4、rience to solve problems.写作参考一:People tend to respond to problems differently given the fact that personalities may vary among different individuals. When it comes to the question of whether or not to solve the problem based on ones own experience and knowledge or solicit others advice, I tend to be
5、lieve that it really depends on the nature of the problem and we can not draw a definitive line here.On the one hand, a rookie without any experience in a particular field can learn a great deal of knowledge and develop useful skills when learning from an experienced individual. For instance, when m
6、y father taught me how to ride a bike, I remember his experience and knowledge were extremely useful. My father sat me on the paddle with one feet hanging in the air, and I hold the handlebar straight and bent my arms a little bit so that I could keep balance. After my dads instruction and guidance，
7、eventually I learned how to ride a bike. Also, in a working environment, the knowledge and experience of senior employees can be very helpful for someone who hold junior positions in the company. The expertise of senior workers have proven from time to time that a certain strategy of business operat
8、ion cannot be paralleled by any other approach. Indeed, a recent study done by the National Society of Organizational Behavior indicates that one enjoys a better chance to be successful in his professional life if he gets intensive coaching and training from senior managers during the first two year
9、s of his job. Consequently, we can conclude that on some occasions it is beneficial for someone to capitalize on others experience and knowledge.On the other hand, for problems, setbacks or major decisions that have a significant impact on the individuals life, it is not rational to be influenced by
10、 others opinions and perspectives. For example, when you have big decisions like which university to attend or whether or not taking on a new career path, it is far better for you to figure it out and sort it through by yourself other than solicit the advice from others. Above all, nobody knows you
11、better than yourself. You are the one who needs to live with the decision and other people wont be the ones with the consequence. Frankly, it takes a lot of courage to stand up and take personal responsibility for your own decision. Any decision made out of assertiveness and confidence should be res
12、pected, however, nobody shows any respect to those who are wishy-washy and hesitate to make their own decisions.In conclusion, we cannot readily draw a definitive line on question of is it better to use your own knowledge and experience than ask others knowledge and experience to solve problems sinc
13、e it has has to be examined case by case.写作参考二:There are abundant of difficulties and problems people need to handle and deal with in ones lifetime. Different ways of handling will lead to different consequences, though they may finally solve the problems. Some people are for the opinion to seek adv
14、ice from other people, for it may be faster and more comprehensive; on the other hand, some people, including me, are more inclining to solve problems using our own resources, for these experience will help us grow.Admittedly, seeking advice from other people may serve as a shortcut to the problem.
15、A person is not a lonely island in the world. With more ideas and opinions, one can easily find one of the most appropriate ways to solve their problem, be it money ones or the career ones. People will feel much easier to raise funds for urgent uses with friends assistances; one will also be relieve
16、d or soothing with others encouragement when finishing something difficult. It is those helping hand that help us go though the tides and solve the problems. However, other people cannot think in our own position, thus may not help us solve the problems from the deep root. Besides, solving problems
17、by oneself can hone many cherished characters, which definitely cant be gained with others help.On the one hand, solving problems on ones own is conducive to cultivate ones independence. As an integral part of people, being independence can help people think and solve problems on ones own, for it is
18、 people themselves can help them out. This kind of ability can well help adapt to the society, for one will encounter different kinds of problems in a lifetime, some of which can not be solved with others help, like tests, races and other important occasions. While others help serves as an outer fac
19、tor, it is ones own ability that matters and helps one grow. For example, a lot of people, especially successful people, are independent in almost everything, which are trained and cultivated in cracking problems. Relying on other people for advice may end up in disappointment. Thus, solving problem
20、 using ones own experiences and knowledge ameliorate ones independence and adaptability.On the other hand, solving problem on ones own is beneficial for cultivating ones social responsibility. As a people, one must be responsible for what he/she has done. During problem-solving process, one would de
21、finitely experience all kinds of situations, thus knowing what kind of solution would work out best for them. If one fails to solve the problem, he/she will draw the experience and do better next time; if one happens to solve the problem with his/her own experience and knowledge, one will prepare fo
22、r not having the same problems in the future. One will gradually know how to be responsible for ones own decision and life, be it a bad or a good consequence. Therefore, solving problems on ones own serves as the important step for one to be mature and responsible.In a nutshell, it is strongly recom
23、mended that solving problems using ones own experiences and knowledge, which cannot only cultivate ones independence but also ones responsibility.写作参考三:With the society becoming increasingly complicated, we find that everyone will inevitably encounter countless problems throughout his or her whole l
24、ife. When it comes to how to address these problems, the senior strongly recommend that it is better to use ones own knowledge or experience rather than to ask others for advice, while the young adults may view the issue from the opposite angle. As far as I am concerned, the latter stance is more re
25、asonable, with the reasons as follows.First, one conspicuous benefit of seeking suggestion from others is that people can solve the troubles or problems more efficiently. As is common sense, the knowledge and experience owned by any individual is limited to some extent so that it may take longer tim
26、e to work out a complex problem without help from others. By contrast, asking others for advice is a totally different picture. My own experience is a good case in point. Back to my high school life, the chemistry class was a disaster for me because I had great difficulties in memorizing the chemica
27、l elements. Given the above situation, I asked my chemistry teacher, an experienced expert in chemistry, for help. According to his suggestions, I had a thorough review of the table of chemical elements and learned the internal relation between each element, thus gaining a satisfactory score in the
28、midterm test.Secondly, what also cannot be neglected is that turning to others for advice can help to enlarge our social network. For one thing, the course of seeking and receiving suggestions from others is one of the most typical form of communication, which can make us grasp the important princip
29、les and skills of establishing close relation with other people. To illustrate, it is of great necessity to maintain humble and modest when you want others to do a favor for you. For another, while being asked to give some advice, people will feel that they are valued and recognized by advice-seeker
30、s so that they are more likely to have a soft spot for those who seek counsels. Obviously, ones humble personality and the mutual appreciation will definitely contribute to the enhancement of interpersonal relationship. Nevertheless, working on a problem individually will greatly reduce our opportun
31、ities to communicate with others and thus weaken our social ability, with the worst consequence of isolating ourselves from the whole society.Factoring what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that asking others for advice is a better choice, in order to tackle the problems in a more efficient way and enlarge social circle.托福写作举的例子太假不可信
