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1、表达的精准性和丰富性,读后续写微技能指导6 虚拟语气在续写中的运用,did (were),had done,would/could/should/might +do,would/could/should/might+have+done,1.did(were)2. should+ do3. were to do,would/could/should/might +do,一、虚拟语气在if条件状语从句中,Review 虚拟语气,Today is a rainy day. The girls boyfriend sent her an umbrella, but she would rather h
2、e.,Guess!,I guess she would rather her boyfriend.,现在:过去:未来:,did,did,had done,二、主A would rather (that) 主B+谓.A宁愿B做某事,You say:“ If only.”,Look at the terrible situation I am in! If only I _ your advice. A. follow B. had followed C. would follow D. have followed,B,现在:过去:未来:,did,could/would + do,had done
3、,三、If only,四、as if /though + Clause,现在：过去：,did,had done,She loves the baby as if it _ her own son.I remember the whole thing as if it_ yesterday.They talked as if they_friends for years. It looks as if he _ drunk.,were,had happened,had been,were/is,表示要求,命令,建议的虚拟语气。,宾语从句中常见动词: 一个坚持, 两个命令, 三个建议, 四个要求。
4、即1). insist 2). order, command 3). advise, suggest, propose4). demand, desire , require, request,五、虚拟语气should类,我们建议Tom 去休息一下。 We suggested that Tom have a rest.他坚决要求我到场。 He insisted that I (should) be present.,If it had not been for Dorothy, I would not have brains. I owed(欠) all my luck to her.- Th
5、e Wizard of OZ 绿野仙踪,“If I _(not quarrel) with Tom and gone into the forest, I _(not be) trapped in the awful place now!” Jane was filled with regret and anxiety and gradually fell asleep with tears in her eyes. -2016.10浙江高考续写：夫妻吵架 森林迷路,We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark. I was almo
6、st on the edge of break down. How I wished I _(not follow) the rabbit into the forest! / If only I _(not follow) the rabbit into the forest!-2018.6浙江续写：骑马遇白兔,“If you had been more careful, Poppy would not have been lost!” I couldnt contain my anger and shouted at Dad.-The Lost Dog,had not quarreled,
7、would not be,had not followed,had not followed,regret,What emotion is conveyed?,regret/ desperation,gratitude,anger,虚拟在写作中的运用,One day Alex decided to explore a cave at the edge of his village. Parents warned children away from the cave but kids were extremely curious about it. Brushing away grasses
8、covering the big hole, Alex jumped into the cave. Crash! The ground collapsed (倒塌) and Alex was down into the depth of the cave. 他挣扎着站起来，发现左胳膊很疼，好像断了(as though). Above him was the hole, which was far out of his reach.,续写：A cave adventure,One day Alex decided to explore a cave at the edge of his vill
9、age. Parents warned children away from the cave but kids were extremely curious about it. Brushing away grasses covering the big hole, Alex jumped into the cave. Crash! The ground collapsed (倒塌) and Alex was down into the depth of the cave. He struggled to his feet and found his arm was sore as if i
10、t had been broken. Above him was the hole, which was far out of his reach.,A cave adventure,How did Alex feel then?,夸张,翻译：被困在这个黑漆漆的吓人的洞里, Alex害怕又后悔。要是他听妈妈关于这个洞穴的警告就好了 (if only) ！此外，他多么希望他把手机带在身边(wish)! 或者至少如果现在有个朋友和他在一起，他也不会这么害怕。,Trapped in the black scaring cave, Alex was filled with fright and reg
11、ret.,被困在这个黑漆漆的吓人的洞里, Alex害怕又后悔。要是他听妈妈关于这个洞穴的警告就好了 (if only) ！此外，他多么希望他把手机带在身边(wish)!或者至少如果现在有个朋友和他在一起，他也不会这么害怕。,If only he had listened to Mums warning about it!,Besides, how he wished he had brought his mobile phone with him.,Or at least if he had a friend with him now, he would not be so frightene
12、d.,Brushing away grasses covering the big hole, Alex jumped into the cave. Crash! The ground fell and Alex was down into the depth of the cave. He struggled to his feet and found his left arm hurt as though it had been broken. Above him was the hole, which was far out of his reach. Trapped in the bl
13、ack scaring cave, Alex was filled with fright and regret. If only he had listened to Mums warning about it! Besides, how he wished he had brought his mobile phone with him! Or at least if he had a friend with him now, he would not be so frightened.,心理描写,What would happened next?,sb was filled with r
14、egret / anger . + 虚拟语气句,However, in the two following two hours Alex and George explored the maze(迷宫)-like cave, attempting to find a way out, but in vain(徒劳). Now Alex was exhausted and his arm was sore. _Suddenly there was light flickering in the distance and there came the faint voice. “Alex! Geo
15、rge! Where are you?” It was their parents who came to their rescue! Both boy ran with all their might into their parents arms. Now they couldnt help bursting into tears and swore to themselves that never would they be so bold and reckless any more.,Writing task：Complete the story, using subjunctive mood -if虚拟条件句 / wish / if only / would rather -1. How could they feel then? 2. What might they think or say? (P.S. write no more than one dialogue.),angry / frightened / regretful,You have 10 minutes to write. Just type out your writing and show it to us.,Assignment,1. Polish your story.,
