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1、规范问题,字数不够 要求150字左右应使用5个以上下划线的词：不要自己划忘记划下划线书面语和说话的标点符号人称，时态，衔接,跑题、偏题,This was the first time the youth realized that mothers work was so difficult. However, I didnt know that before. I studied very hard and got good academic achievements.,衔接问题，尤其首句,This was the first time the youth realized that_第一个字
2、母是大写接的是句子什么语序？How difficult his mother was?Why his mother never allowed him to help her wash the clothes?,语法问题,To avoid 低级语法错误时态Im think my academic but Im appreciate my mother more.To use 高级词汇、高级语法 （非谓语、从句、强调句、倒装句、倒装等）,His mom was so loved him.If I without youSaid what, did whatI didnt think harm y
3、ouI not help you beforeI very regretHand hug,I regretted not helping mum.Feel regretful/guiltyHardship reward repay give back My efforts paid offBring me up Want sb to do live up to ones expectationCare for sb more take for grantedTake on responsibility grant my appication,He cried.He burst into tea
4、rs/ out crying.Tears ran down his face/his cheeks.His eyes were full of tears.His eyes were filled with tears.He shed bitter tears.The youth realized that how great/hard his mother was to bring him up./to pay for his school fees.he intended to do something in return for mothers love.Without his moth
5、er,he wouldnt be himself today.,文本的理解,Time is important!,情节的完整,Para 1. 给妈妈洗手，董事长的要求 年轻人有所感悟和感触（妈妈这双手和他成就之间的关系） 他做了什么？（轻轻地洗/和妈妈对话/帮妈妈洗衣服）Para 2. 年轻人的回答 故事的结局,This was the first time the youth realized that it was this pair of hands that washed the clothes every day to enable him to pay the school fee
6、s. The bruises in the mothers hands were the price that the mother had to pay for his graduation, academic excellence and his future. Having finished the cleaning of his mothers hands, the youth quietly washed all the remaining clothes for his mother. That night, mother and son talked for a long tim
7、e.,The youth responded, “ I know now what is appreciation. Without my mother, there wouldnt be my success today. By working together and helping my mother, only now do I realize how difficult and tough it is to get something done. Besides, I have come to appreciate the importance and value of family relationship.” The director said, “This is what Im looking for to be my manager. I intend to recruit a person who can appreciate the help of others. You are hired.”,
