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1、大学英语四六级写作、翻译,一点小TIPS,两个关键,句型和用词 适当地用复杂的结构和高级词汇有助于提高得分！,相关技巧举例,1.改变时态The bell is ringing now .(一般）There goes the bell.(高级）2.改变语态People suggests that the meeting be put off.It is suggested that the meeting be put off.3.使用不定式He is so kind that he can do me a favor.He is so kind as to do me a favor.,4.使
2、用过去分词Lisa walked out of the room and many guys followed her.Followed by many guys, Lisa walked out of the room.5.使用V-ing形式When she arrives,please give me a call.On her arriving,please give me a call.6.使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of by the teacher.Her homework was well done.The girl whose homewor
3、k was well done is spoken highly of by her teacher.,7.使用状语从句I wont believe what he says.No matter what he says, I wont believe.8.使用虚拟语气The patient didnt die because there were the efforts of the doctor.But for the efforts of the doctor, the patient would have died.9.使用强调句型I was born in 1990.It was i
4、n 1990 that I was born.10.使用倒装Though Im sick, Ill carry on.Sick as I am, Ill carry on.,关于用词,现象类（图片）的议论文,三段论第一段：描述这种现象目前的现状（描述图片的内容：稍作理解后的），提出自己的观点第二段：现象产生的原因/现象带来的影响（负面、正面、对比说明）第三段：从第二段的论述中重申或强调你的观点，最后提出展望或建议。,As is clearly depicted from a series of cartoons that a man is excessively dependent on th
5、e computer whetherin working and playing or at home and sleeping. The impact of the computer ondaily life is such seriousness that it is high time we paid attention to it. In the first place, due to the wide application of the computer, some people called net friends always take priority over our fa
6、mily and friends in real life. The bulk of each day including our time and energy is spent on the Internet. Whats more, the Internet deprives us of the delight in communication with others. When talking to someone face to face, we can hear their voices, see their expressions, and even hold their han
7、ds if we would like to. Last but not least, the computer will lead to a decline of our skills of face-to-face communication. Thus we may feel embarrassed and find it harder to communicate with people around us.To sum up, we shouldnt be dependent on the computer excessively. No matter how convenient
8、and speedy it is, we should remember the advantage of face-to-face communication.,The popularity of smartphones has exerted great influence on the way people communicate, so much so that an increasing number of individuals contend that face-to-face communication is being replaced by texts and images
9、 on the mobile phone.There are more than one angle to consider this phenomenon. On one hand, it is pleasantly acknowledged that smartphones shorten the distance between families and friends. Even people from different sides of the globe can share pictures, feelings and thoughts through various types
10、 of apps on the phone, thus building a long-distance connection. On the other hand, as the picture warns us, too much smartphone addiction interferes with peoples real-life communication. Statistics show that over 70 percent of face-to-face communication consists of facial expressions and body langu
11、age, which is why people should stay away from mobile phones when they have the chance to actually talk and communicate with others.In a word, mobile phones act as an appropriate platform where people can always stay in tough however long the distance is, but a wise man should know when to put down
12、his phone.,考前突击,一、开头句1.As the proverb says2.When asked about,the vast/overwhelming majority of /most/quite a few people say/think/believe thatBut3.Nowadays,it is commonly/widely/generally believed/ thought/held that，but I wonder/doubt that4.When it comes to， some think/believe5.As a coin has two sid
13、es, there are positive aspects and negative aspects to6.There is a pubilc/general debate/controversy/discussion on/ as to the problem/issue of 7.Now there is a growing awareness/recognition of the necessity to 8.With the rapid growth of ,have/has become increasingly important in our daily life.,二、过渡
14、衔接句1.Besides/In addition to/ Apart from this, other ways /aspects are 2.To illustrate/prove/show this point, let me develop my argument3.To get a full appreciation/understanding of , we have to /must turn first to4.But thats only part of the story/explanation5.On the other hand/ On the contary/By co
15、ntrast6.The opposite is also the case/ Vice Versa7.Further, we hold the opinion that 8.In this respect, we may as well say,三、说明原因1.There are probably three/many/varieties of reasons/causes for 2.Some reasons can explain this trend/fact. First of all, Secondly,Furthermore,3.For one thing, For another
16、4.Perhaps, the main/primary/fundamental reason is 5.Its no easy task to identify the reasons for this phenomenon which involves several comlicated factors.,四、举例说明1.Takefor an example2.There is a concrete example that3.The latest surveys conducted byshow/reveal/demonstrate/indicate that4.As one write
17、r/scientist wrote/commented/pointed out/noted that 5.There are many instances supporting my opinion.,五、结尾句1.From above/ To sum up/In summary2.Therefore, its not difficult to draw the conclusion that3.Taking into account all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that4.From what has been discusse
18、d above/ Based on the points discussed above ,we may reasonablely/safely/finally draw/arrived at the conclusion that5.All things considered, it may be safely said that6.From my point of view, it would be better if 7.Ill conclude by saying ,2016年12月英语四级写作真题解析,options upon graduation a state-owned bus
19、iness VS joint venture find a job somewhere VS start a business of your own take a job in a company VS go to a graduate school,作文解析,破题思路、文章结构： 第一段：话题描述。 第二段：表明观点+阐述原因。 第三段：观点结论。,第一段：话题描述,总体情况描述毕业面临几大选择，每个人的选择不同：一些人，另外一些人提出我的观点 范文一Upon graduation， virtually all college students will confront the prob
20、lem of the career choice，which is truly a tough choice。 Studentsopinions differ greatly on this issue。 Some hold that there is no better way to get a decent job than working in a stated-owned business which will guarantee my life after retirement， but others take the attitude that a joint venture ou
21、tweighs any other jobs as it may provide higher income for employees。As to myself， I prefer the latter view。,第二段：阐述原因。,一句话表明具体观点之后再阐述主要原因 范文一A joint venture， especially a high-salary joint venture， exerts a tremendous fascination on a great number of people， with no exception to me。 Although it migh
22、t be impossible to make sure my retirement pension is good enough， high-salary is exactly what I need just now。 In my view， our career choices largely depend on where we want to stay for the rest of life。 For me， metropolis is the place where I can grasp loads of opportunities and achieve my persona
23、l dreams。 As I hold the view that live in the moment， not the future， and also in order to finance myself in some aspects such as the transportation， the house-renting， or social activities， a joint venture can satisfy my needs for the consumption I mentioned above。,第三段：观点结论,重申观点，或提出呼吁、展望等In short，
24、a joint venture is the first and only consideration in my choice of career。Therefore， it is high time that we took effective measures to improve our own competitiveness。 That is the secret of success in the future employment.,翻译解析,在中国文化中，黄颜色是一种很重要的颜色，因为它具有独特的象征意义。 在封建（feudal)社会中，它象征统治者的权利和权威。那时，黄色是专
25、为皇帝使用的颜色，皇家宫殿全都漆成黄色，黄袍总是黄色的，而普通老百姓是禁止穿黄色衣服的。在中国，黄色也是收获的象征。秋天庄稼成熟时，田野变得一片金黄。人们兴高采烈，庆祝丰收。,参考答案,In Chinese culture, yellow is a significant color, which carries a unique symbolic meaning. It embodies rulerspower and authority in feudal society, where yellow was specifically used for emperors, for examp
26、le, royal palaces were painted with yellow tint and the imperial robes were yellow. However, average people were not allowed to wear clothes in that color. In China, yellow also means harvest. When crops are ripe in Fall, wild field are golden every where. Then people celebrate the good harvest with happiness and gratitude.,
