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1、如何才能写好一篇托福独立写作作文 托福独立写作是托福写作考试中的重头戏，也是整场托福考试的压轴项，那么大家应该如何备考托福独立写作，下面就和大家分享如何才能写好一篇独立写作作文，希望能够帮助到大家，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作备考攻略丨如何才能写好一篇独立写作作文?一.托福独立写作要点把握1.写作主体这里的主语我们可以理解成是题目中语法里的主语，即动作的发出者，句子所论述的主体。既然是主语，我们就只能从主语出发去思考和论述问题。2.限定性指的是通过一道独立写作题目我们会发现题目有限定的人群或者范围，如果脱离开题目限定的人群或者范围，显然属于跑题。3.写作点每一道独立写作题目论述都会有一个归题点，
2、就是表述的内容是归在什么地方，是为了突出重要性或者为了某个目的或者达到某个目标，所以我们作文的点也要落在重要性，某个目的或者目标上。二.托福独立写作要点把握实力解析现在我以一道独立写作题目为例，做详细的陷阱剖析，方便同学们的理解。比如下面这道题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The most important aspect of a job is the money a person earns.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer首先，
3、主语显然是The most important aspect of a job，即工作中最重要的一方面，所以我们不管同意还是不同意这个观点，我们探讨的主语也得是工作中的某个方面 ，或者承认工作中的钱确实重要，或者论述工作中的其它方面，比如：培训机会，工作环境，地点，竞争空间等比钱重要。总之我们不能脱离开工作的某个方面去谈，否则就是跳进了陷阱，属于跑题。其次，考虑这道题目限定的人群或者范围。这道题目没有涉及人群，那就默认是针对于所有people, 所以对我们破题没有阻碍，但是因为人群很泛，所以可以考虑是否可以对people 进行分类，我们可以思考一下：对于什么样的人工作中的钱是最重要的，对于什么
4、样的人工作中的其它方面比钱重要，这是陷阱也是我们的破题点。另外，除了限定的人群还应该考虑限定的范围即除人以外的限定。那就是money a person earns，这个地方是重点，因为不是只有money一个词，而是有限定的a person earns所以这里的钱是指的工资，而非大范围的金钱，money有很多种*并不一定是工作所得，所以不要随意去扩展限定的范围，很多学生在这个表述上失分。最后，归题点，这道题最后要归在important重要性上。所以不管是承认薪资的重要还是认为工作中其它方面比钱重要，都要落脚在重要性上。托福考试作文独立写作范文：演艺明星的高薪Some famous athlete
5、s and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. Do you think these people deserve such high salaries? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作范文：Nowadays, the annual incomes of many sports stars and film stars come to millions of dollars. Some people claim that their sala
6、ries are too high. Yet, in my opinion, such salaries are well deserved. They work hard to become famous, provide entertainment for us, and win honors for their countries.First, famous athletes and entertainers make painstaking efforts to achieve fame. Fame is a wonderful thing to have, but it seldom
7、 appears overnight. Famous people have worked hard for years to achieve their fame today and they have to continue their good work to maintain it. For their hard work, sports and entertaining stars deserve to be generously rewarded. Unfortunately, people tend to focus on the huge amounts of money ma
8、de by them. They rarely appreciate the efforts that athletes and entertainers have to make in order to achieve the fame that they have today. For example, in order to win the first place in a 100-meter dash, an athlete has to cover hundreds of miles during training. Famous stars deserve their high s
9、alaries because they have worked hard.Second, sports and entertaining stars provide us with good entertainment. On weekends, many of us attend a football match that includes Beckham, see a movie that stars Julia Roberts, or go to a concert that features Celine Dion. These people help us make good us
10、e of our free time by entertaining us. As a result, we feel inspired as well as relaxed. In other words, we feel energetic again after attending the events. We even feel that we have more to enjoy in life and have new aspirations. For such reasons, these people are worth their high salaries.Third, a
11、thletes and entertainers win honors for their countries. For example, after four years hard work, many athletes win gold medals at the Olympics Games. They are able to make millions of dollars a year after the games. Such high salaries are justified, because these athletes have won honors for their
12、countries in the most competitive arena and have made their people proud, something few people can even dream of. This is true for entertainers as well. Many actors and actresses receive high salaries after they have won Oscars or prizes at Cannes Films Festival. Those people also deserve high salar
13、ies, because they have made a name in films for their country and have made their country better known by people elsewhere in the world.All in all, famous athletes and entertainers merit their high salaries, for their hard work, entertainment they provide, and their contribution to their country. If
14、 I had a chance, I would be a famous star who can make millions of dollars a year.托福考试作文独立写作范文：中学生应该在上大学前花时间工作旅行吗Students should spend at least one year working or travelling before they go to the university.【题目大意】： 中学生是否应该在上大学之前拿出至少一年去工作或旅行。主观点可以同意，因为一让学生放松，二可以让学生学到新的技能。题目：Do you agree or disagree
15、with the following statement:Students should take at least a year to work or travel before beginning college.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: After high school, students should have at least one year to work or travel. Its better than attending university straight away.范文参考一:Th
16、e prevailing notion is that high school students are under huge pressure. Then appears a controversy whether students should have one year to engage in other things before they attend their university. After weighing the pros and cons, I am favor of the opinion that having a gap year can produce man
17、y benefits.First off, students can benefit a lot from traveling. As everyone knows, to maintain strong competitiveness, high school students are required to accomplish a wide range of either required or optional curriculums at school and the rights to develop their own interests have been deprived r
18、elentlessly, which has proven to be a detriment of their growth. Instead of pursuing their bachelor degree without pause in the college, traveling can help them regain chances to cultivate and perfect their personalities and release pressure. For instance, many more college graduates are reported to
19、 be indifferent to the society and show no mercy on those in need, part of which owes a lot to the fact that schools lay more emphasis on cultivating students academic abilities and downplay the importance of developing their overall qualities. Traveling to those places in poverty can give students
20、a sight of those impoverished families to call on the sense of responsibility. Besides, by paying a visit to some places of interest like the Great Wall or the pyramid in Egypt, students can approach the greatness of diverse culture. Whats more, the direct access to the natural world can appease stu
21、dents inner uproar. Accordingly, a gap year can be a great asset for high school graduates.Secondly, by taking part-time jobs, not only can students accumulate sufficient social experience but also earn some money to reduce financial stress on their families. Though economy in China keeps growing at
22、 a rate of almost 9 percent in the recent, average citizens still suffer huge pressure especially when the slump of stock market took a heavy toll on them and the majority of stock investors withdrew their money and reinvest to the real estate, further increasing pressure on the ordinary because of
23、the increasing prices of housing. For most families from small cities and rural areas, college tuition still appears to be a great burden on them and by taking part-time jobs, students can earn some wages to relieve financial pressure, such as serving as a restaurant attendant that enables students
24、to better develop their communication techniques and learn more about how to meet the demands of consumers or working as a salesman that will be an entirely different experience from high schools and can lead to the cultivation of the ability of presenting customers the advantages of products. Obvio
25、usly, a gap year means a lot to high school graduates.Admittedly, there is another voice that high school students are supposed to start their campus life immediately after graduation from high schools. To be more specific, maintaining high-efficiency study can lead students to be better acclimated
26、to their college life. Instead of going to college soon, a gap year may disrupt their study schedule and weaken their learning skills. It appears to be sensible, however; the ultimate goal of attending a university is to seek a decent job and gaining social experience in advance makes students more
27、conscious of which kind of area they are more interested in in the near future such as the serving industry or high-tech fields.In conclusion, high school graduates had better live a different life temporarily before they go to college.写作参考二:Gap year, a break between high school and college, has bec
28、ome a trend among many American and European students theses years. As the popularity of gap year has grown, so to has its appeal. Generally, it can be constructed (working in a company, taking time off to improve coding skills, learning a language, working on personal projects) or unconstructed (tr
29、avelling, figuring out what to do as it comes). The idea of gap year has been strongly questioned by some nervous parents, however, some supporters contend that it will be a lifelong treasure which enables one to have the full command of his life. From my perspective, taking a year to work or travel
30、 before college brings about more advantages than shortcomings.To begin with, a gap year helps guide students future education and life goals. Most of young students do not know exactly what they wanted to do once they left high school or even half way through college. Working or travelling a year w
31、ill give them some “real world experience” as well as insight into their interests and strengths which will help them shape a path to a successful career. Once students learn a whole lot about themselves, they are likely to take full advantage of college. Take an Australian boy for an example. Enjoy
32、ing his gap year in Nepal, he helps the locals in Pokhara to build their organic farms. He is so passionate about what he is doing now and he decided to pursue environmental science after he comes back to university. The internships and professional experience gained over the gap year will have much
33、 more influence on the development of ones future than college.In addition, taking a year off can refresh the tired-out high school graduates. In general, it will take at least ten years before jumping into the long and challenging years of university. There is no doubt that studious students will s
34、pare no effort to improve their academic performance with the expectation that they will receive offers from their dream schools. Under the competitive pressure of high school, they will not only prepare for exams such as SAT or ACT but also seek for voluntary opportunities to enrich their Curriculu
35、m Vitae. My younger sister used to travel to Cuba to volunteer with brown bears for three months. After that she went to Europe driving her Vespa across more than 20 cities. She said it was so different from school. She wont have to attend a test at then end of the trimester, which means that there
36、is no peer pressure or any pressure from outside. At the same time she can reorganize her mind which was full of chemical equations, historical events as well as verses from poems.It is true that students who choose to drop a year are more likely to lose their study skills. During the gap year, ther
37、e will be less chances for them to participate in actual classes in college. Without attending lectures given by famous professor and communicating face-to-face with classmates, the whole learning process will be incomplete. Many of study skills could not be developed and trained, which leads direct
38、ly to the deprivation of both academic ability and motivation. However, it wont be a potential problem nowadays because most of top universities offer MOOC (Massive Open Online Courses). Students can study random topics through free online classes. Although they dont have any college credit, they le
39、arned a lot, met wonderful people, and keep their brains in shape for college.Ultimately, the benefits of gap year far outweigh the only drawback because it can help exhausted students relax both mentally and physically and provide them with the opportunities to take a step back to focus on their go
40、als, leading to a stronger sense of direction once theyre back in the classroom.!写作参考三:Under the educational system of many western countries, taking a gap year, a period of time when students can take a break from formal education, has become quite common. When it comes to the pros and cons of spen
41、ding at least one year working or travelling before attending university, people preference may vary from one to another. As for me, it is advisable for high schoolers to have a year off to work or travel, in order to relax themselves and gain new skills.In the first place, spending a year travellin
42、g will provide high school students a good chance to escape the daily grind. As is common sense, the life of high schooler are filled with countless assignments, various quiz and exams, which nearly drive them to be stressed out. Obviously, what they need most is the vent for releasing all the tensi
43、ons and pressures accuring in the rapid rhythm campus life. Consequently, taking a break from educaion and going away for while can fulfill this function well. During the gap year, students can surf in Hawaii, wake boarding in Italy, go bungee jumping in New Zealand and enjoy the sunbath on the seas
44、hore of Miami. Such a short escape from the daily bustle and hustle will be conducive to their mental and physical wellbeing. Not only this, but travelling during a gap year can provide a renewed vigor for stuy and a more focused approach to learning.In the second place, taking a year off to do some
45、 internship can help high school students acquire more new pratical skills and thus adapt to the university life more smoothly. Many gap year students choose to do voluntary work. This could include teaching in the mountains in Nepal, a conservation project in Madagascar, an expedition in Costa Rica
46、 or an internship in Japan. All these experiences of taking voluntary jobs during a gap year will provide you with much more than any classroom setting ever can. We can learn a lot in the classroom, but it isnt until we put it into practice in the real world that we really understand whats going on.
47、 To be specific, throughout school we are surrounded by the same folks at similar ages. However, while working in a company, we are bound to discover others, make new friends, and interact with people from all walks of life, which will defnitely hone our social skills. It is undoubted that people with strong interpersonal competence can enjoy great popularity among classmates and teachers.In a nutshell, it is a wise move to spend at least one year travelling or working for the sake of taking a break from daily routine and acquire new skills.如何才能写好一篇托福独立写作作文
