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1、书面表达,-申请信,What makes a good composition?,Keeping to the pointPrecise languageVarious sentence patternsAdvanced vocabulary and expressionsProper linking wordsHandsome handwriting,Learn to write a letter of application!,apply to beapply for sth applicationposition/postadvertise forgraduate fromina gra
2、duate of Tsinghua Universitywork as working experience in be suitable/fit/qualified forhave some related knowledge about,申请成为,申请,申请,职位,从事,毕业于学校专业,登广告招聘,一个清华大学毕业生,在方面的工作经验,适合/胜任,be good/skilled atmeet your ability requirementshave a good command ofcommunicate withability of communicationbe in good co
3、nditionwarm-hearted and patientteamwork spiritmake every effort to do sthspare no effort to do sthhave an advantage over sb in sth,擅长,符合你的能力要求,与交流,交流能力,努力做某事,热情和耐心的,身体健康,团队精神,不遗余力做某事,比某人有优势,精通/掌握,申请信一般包括以下要点：1、自我介绍+写信目的2、申请理由+具备的条件3、恳请考虑自己的申请+表达谢意及期盼期盼回复的心情,Dear Mr.Smith,Ive read your advertisement
4、for an assistant teacher.I am so interested in this position that I am writing to apply for the job.Now I would like to introduce myself to you.I am outgoing,energetic,and responsible;Besides,I love working with children and I am always an good helper to my teachers.And most importantly,I can speak
5、fluent English,which enables me to communicate freely and effectively with students.So I would be pleased to be an assistant teacher.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your early reply.,文章结构?,1.几个段落？2.人称、时态？3.过渡词？,开头中间结尾,1-2句表达写信目的36个介绍个人优势1-2句表达请求和盼复,第一人称,人称时态,过渡词,
6、书信类型,besides,so,most importantly,一般现在时、一般将来时,开头：中间：结尾：,申请信,段落结构,篇章结构,佳句：定从,Dear Mr.Smith,Ive read your advertisement for an assistant teacher.I am so interested in this position that I am writing to apply for the job.Now I would like to introduce myself to you.I am outgoing,energetic,and responsible
7、;Besides,I love working with children and I am always an good helper to my teachers.And most importantly,I can speak fluent English,which enables me to communicate freely and effectively with students.So I would be pleased to be an assistant teacher.Thank you for considering my application and I am
8、looking forward to your early reply.,大声朗读,佳句：sothat,Yours,Li Hua,1.Having read/learned from the newspaper that 2.I am writing to apply for the job.,3.I would like to introduce myself I have a good command of I like/am fond of I am well acquainted with sth,4.Thank you for and I am looking forward to5
9、.I would be grateful if you could,背诵下列常用句型：(2mins),我精通.,我喜欢,我非常熟悉,假设你是李华，从网上得知一所美国中学正在招募中国中学生志愿者。本次招募旨在通过网络帮助美国学生体验春节。请用英语写一封电子邮件提出申请，内容包括：1.愿意参加 2.自身优势 3.计划与愿望注意：1.词数：100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯,Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua,a senior high school student from China.Having learned that your school is lookin
10、g for volunteers to help your students experience the Spring Festival.Im writing to see if I will be lucky enough to be involved in the activity.I think Im fit for the job.In the first place,I have learned English for ten years,which enables me to speak good English.Besides,being good at using compu
11、ters makes it possible for me to share pictures and videos of the Spring Festival with your students.More importantly,well acquainted with the customs and traditions of the Spring Festival,I am more than happy to answer your questions about the Spring Festival.Looking forward to your reply.,Lets ass
12、ess your writing!,Step 1:Each group chooses one composition.Step 2:Give your score reasonably.Step 3:Assess and improve the composition.Step 4:Present the results.,Read wonderful sentences!,互评作文(5mins),任务：1.看看你觉得疑难的地方，别人怎么表达 2.找出文章的优、缺点 3.打分,第一档:2125分（很好）内容要点齐全，少错误第二档:1620分（好）因使用复杂句有错误第三档:1115分（适当）有
13、错误，但不影响理解第四档:610分（较差）词汇、句子较多错误第五档:15分（差）明显漏掉主要内容,评判标准（80-120字）1.卷面是否整洁？2.内容是否完整？3.句子是否基本通顺？4.是否有好词好句,How to polish your writing:,.Use advanced vocabulary,1.You can find your seat easily.,.Use various sentence patterns,1.The concert will be held at the center.(强调句),2.Youll feast your eyes when you co
14、me.(Only+状语倒装句),It is at the center that the concert will be held,Only when you come will you feast your eyes.,Youll have no difficulty finding your seat.,3.It excited me that she would hold a concert.(同位语从句),4.The girl is gifted.Her songs are well written.(whose引导定语从句)5.Though it is expensive,Ill b
15、ook a plane ticket to the concert.(as引导部分倒装),The news that she would hold a concert excited me.,The girl whose songs are well written is gifted.,Expensive as it is,Ill book a plane ticket to the concert.,6.To my delight,they have a happy ending.(What引导主语从句),7.I went to the concert.I met an old frien
16、d.(where引导定语从句)8.If I _ you,I would go to the concert without hesitation.(if.虚拟语气),were,What delights me is that they have a hapy ending.,I went to the concert where I met an old friend.,9.使用非谓语动词(1)面对很多困难，她从不放弃。(2)做完作业后，她回家了。,Faced with/Facing many difficulties,she never gives up.,Having finished h
17、er homework,she went home.,Self-evaluation,大家共同评价学生习作,学生优秀习作欣赏,Dear sir/madam，My name is Li Hua and Im 17 years old.I am interested in joining the Chinese and Western Cultural Communication Club.I do well in English reading and can speak English fluently.Whats more,Im very interested in Western cult
18、ure,especially literature and painting.In addition,Ive read many great works by famous writers,such as Gone with the Wind and Jane Eyre.To be frank,Im good at communicating and expressing myself.,By joining the club,I hope I can make friends with people from all over the world so that we can exchang
19、e our cultural experiences.Id like to know more about the differences between Chinese and Western traditions and history.I hope to be admitted to the club and look forward to hearing from you.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,Dear Sir,I am Li Hua,a 16-year-old student studying in England currently.Having known
20、 that there is a club about the communication of the culture between China and the west,Im writing to apply to be the member of the club.Initially,I have a rich knowledge of English,enabling me to speak with a native speaker without difficulty.And I am more than interested in western culture.For ins
21、tance,I am often absorbed in books describing western culture and history,from which I have learnt a lot about western customs and so on.In addition,as an outgoing and enthusiastic boy,I believe I can get along well with other members immediately owing to my strong communication ability.Not only wou
22、ld I like to listen to others carefully,but I am ready to share my own experience and something about Chinese culture with them.Last but not least,why I feel like joining the club is that I want to make more friends who have similar interests with me,and it is also my aim to master more about the differences between Chinese and Western culture.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into account.Looking forward to your early reply.,
