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1、How to polish writing,How to polish writing,Tips in the video,_ your readers and what they want_ your writingOrganize your ideas into paragraphs,with _ idea each paragraphCut _ words and sentences,Plan,one,unnecessary,Understand,Tips in the video_,structure,several parts,topic sentence,all points co
2、vered,words,phrases,sentences,variation,richness,content,language,structureseveral partstopic se,tip 1,1.We need to realize the importance to deal with this problem more than ever before.,Low frequency words,1.We need to wake up to the urgency to address this issue more than ever before.,tip 1Low fr
3、equency words1.We,tip 1,Low frequency words,1.“表明，论证”用 demonstrate 替换 show/indicate,“他真正热爱这份工作”表明了他对工作的投入同样还有对祖国的忠诚。（扬州2017一模作文）“He really loves his job”demonstrates not only his devotion to his duties but his loyalty to our country as well.,【秒杀】,tip 1Low frequency words1.“表明,tip 1,Low frequency wor
4、ds,2、“阻止某人做某事”用 hold sb.back from 替换 prevent sb.from,不要让对于失败的恐惧阻止你追求你的梦想。(苏锡常镇2017三模作文）Dont let the fear of failure hold you back from pursuing your dream.,【秒杀】,tip 1Low frequency words2、“阻止,tip 1,Low frequency words,3、“遭遇，遇到”用 be encountered with 替换 meet sth./meet with,当遭遇逆境感到气馁时，自信能够帮助我们克服困难。(通、泰、
5、淮2018高三三模作文）Being confident can help us overcome difficulties when we are encountered with adversity and feel discouraged.,【秒杀】,tip 1Low frequency words3、“遭遇，,tip 1,Low frequency words,4、“不知道”用in the dark/at a loss 替换 dont know/have no idea,而且，没有既定目标，我们也许对要做什么毫无头绪，因而一无所获。(苏北四市2017一模作文）Moreover,witho
6、ut it,we might be in the dark about what to do,thus achieving nothing in the end.,【秒杀】,tip 1Low frequency words4、“不知道,Low frequency words,It can be difficult to figure out what to save and what to toss.It can be _ to figure out what to save and what to toss.It can be _ _ to figure out what to save a
7、nd what to toss.It can be _ _ _ to figure out what to save and what to toss.,a,challenging,struggle,task,a,Herculean,Low frequency words It ca,Low frequency words,It is classmates encouragement and love that help me go through this period of difficult time.（南京、盐城2017二模作文）That is why they dont want t
8、o spend time in learning some basic living skills.（无锡市2018届高三一模）,inspiration,tough,affection,dont bother to learn,Low frequency wordsIt is class,Low frequency words,1.Only in this way can libraries meet the needs of different age groups.(南京、盐城2018一模作文)2.What s more,not only does it increase the risk
9、 of homework-connected argument but also puts pressure on kids mentally.(宿迁2019期末作文),multiply,various,Low frequency words1.Only in,On-line voting becomes more and more popular,and many competitions have people take part in it.(2016江苏卷作文）It is important that tourists should mind their behavior when o
10、verseas.,Low frequency words,enjoys great popularity,get people involved in it,essential,behave themselves,On-line voting becomes more,Tip 2,Phrases come first,He ignored what had happened to his friends,which made them upset.He _ _ _ _ to what had happened to his friends,which made them upset.2.We
11、try our best to promote the traditional friendship between us.We _ _ _ to promote the traditional friendship between us.,spare,blind,a,eye,turned,no,efforts,Tip 2Phrases come firstHe igno,Phrases come first,Your fluency in English makes you better than the other candidates for the job.Your fluency i
12、n English gives you _ _ _ the other candidates for the job.4.We should remember that everyone is the master of his own fate.We should _ _ _ that everyone is the master of his own fate.,mind,advantage,over,an,bear,in,Phrases come firstYour fluency,5.Therefore,Ill spare no effort to read books and mem
13、orize as much as possible.(南京，盐城2018二模作文）Therefore,Ill spare no effort to_ _ _ _ and memorize as much as possible.,Phrases come first,expose,oneself,to,books,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),5.Therefore,Ill spare no ef,Tip 3,Variation of sentences,Trevor puts his gen
14、ius idea into action by doing a favor for three people.He also appeals to the recipients of favor to pay the favor forward.（苏州2017一模）,Not only can Trevor put his genius idea into action by doing a favor for three people but also appeals to the recipients of favor to pay the favor forward.,Tip:transi
15、tional words,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Tip 3Variation of sentencesTre,Variation of sentences,The more involved in kids homework parents are,the more dependent on them the kids are.,Tip:inversion,if parents are more involved in kids homework,the kids are more d
16、ependent on them.（宿迁2019期末作文）,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Variation of sentencesThe more,From my perspective,such an initiative and behavior should be encouraged.(苏锡常镇2018二模）,Variation of sentences,Such an initiative and behavior，from my perspective,should be en
17、couraged.,Tip:change the word order,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),From my perspective,such an i,When people talk about success,they often fix their mind on success itself and ignore some hidden factors.(镇江2018一模）,Variation of sentences,When talking about success,t
18、hey often fix their mind on success itself ignoring some hidden factors.,Tip:non-finite verb,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),When people talk about success,Because there is no enough relevant regulations,some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared bikes.They
19、throw them into rivers or pile them up randomly.(南京2017三模作文）,Variation of sentences,For lack of relevant regulations,some uncivilized people deliberately damage shared bikes throwing them into rivers or piling them up randomly.,Tip:use the phrases to replace sentences,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT
20、),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Because there is no enough rel,Tip4,Enrich your expressions,Tip:attributive words,For the benefit of the future generation,it is our duty to seek a/an_ economic development.,high-quality,healthy,sustainable,continuous,stable,eco-friendly,balanced,steady,高三英语二轮复习-高三
21、英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Tip4Enrich your expressionsTip,Enrich your expressions,_ laws and regulations(v.),negotiate/strengthen/launch/observe/enforce.,launch _ laws and regulations(adj.),effective/relevant/strict/specific,concerning/with(in)regard to/intended to/aiming
22、 to,issue effective laws and regulations _(topic of the writing),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Enrich your expressions_,It is high on the agenda that we should issue some relevant laws and regulations concerning the development of rural regions,including increasin
23、g public investment and improving public services in rural areas,as well as accelerating integrated development to narrow the gap between urban and rural areas.,It is high on the agenda that/It is of top priority that we should,including A,B as well as C.,More efforts are urged to address this issue
24、,including A,B as well as C.,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),It is high on the agenda that,have a try,have a try,高级词汇替换练习(1)1.When the teacher entered the classroom,all the students were busy reading.When the teacher entered the classroom,all the students were_ in r
25、eading.2.The two parties have reached an agreement after the talk.The two parties have reached a _ after the talk.3.More and more people have an interest in soccer.An _ number of people have an interest in soccer.4.The reasons for doing that are different from people to people.The reasons for doing
26、that_from people to people.,occupied,consensus,increasing,vary,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),have a try have a try 高级词汇替换练习,5.She was famous as the first woman to swim the Channel.She had the _of being the first woman to swim the Channel.6.He spends all his spare
27、time in reading.He _ all his spare time to reading.7.The drivers carelessness led to the terrible accident.The drivers carelessnesswas the _ to the terrible accident.8.The increasing population has changed the landscape and structure of local industry structure.The increasing population has_ the lan
28、dscape and structure of local industry structure.,distinction,devotes,invitation,transformed,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),5.She was famous as the first,高级词汇(2)：尽可能使用短语来完成句子（每空一词),1.What you do will be very important.What you do will _ _ _.2.This country has a lot
29、 of natural resources.This country has _ _ _ natural resources.3.This book is for young children.This book _ _ _ young children.4.They could do nothing but fire Mr White.They _ _ _ _ _fire Mr White.5.Everyone should realize the importance of protectiong the environment.Everyone should _ _ _ _ the im
30、portance of protectiong the environment.,make a difference,is rich/abundant in,is intended for/aimed at,have no choice/alternative but to,develop/raise/promote his awareness of,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高级词汇(2)：尽可能使用短语来完成句子（每空一词)1.W,6.I felt really nervous bef
31、ore the interview.I felt really_ _ _ _ _ before the interview.7.Anyhow,you shouldnt lend Paul any money._ _ _,you shouldnt lend Paul any money.8.This term the bright boy worked harder than last term._ _ last term,the bright boy worked harder,have butterflies in my stomach,on no account/at no time/un
32、der no circumstances/in no case,Compared with/to,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),6.I felt really nervous befor,复杂结构训练,1.When I look back,I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons.It can enrich my life.(分词结构+定语从句)_ 2.Though he was unsatisfied w
33、ith the payment,he took the job just to get some work experience.(倒装)Unsatisfied as/though he was with the payment,he took the job just to get some work experience.,Now looking back,I am so glad that my parents encouraged me to take music lessons,which can enrich my life.,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34
34、张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),复杂结构训练1.When I look back,I a,复杂结构训练翻译句子：1.只有通过这种方式，我们才能生活在更加美丽舒适的环境中。（倒装句）2.经验告诉我，不是你得到的东西而是你如何利用它决定了你是怎样的一个人。（强调句）3.随着英语学习人数的增加，对于他们而言，在上下文中理解这些单词的意思是不难的。（with的复合结构）,Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.,My experience tel
35、ls me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.,With the number of English learners on the rise,it is not difficult for them to understand these words in contexts.,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),复杂结构训练Only in this way
36、 can we,1.Is the writing divided into parts?,2.Are there any topic sentences?,3.Are all the points clearly stated?,4.Does the writer use any transitional words?,5.Is there a variation of words and phrases?,6.Are various sentence patterns used?,7.Are there any mistakes?,A good handwriting counts a lo
37、t!,Checklist,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Content 1.Is the writing divi,Peer assessment,Comment on the given writing from the three aspects mentioned,Mark the writing Polish the writing,structure,content,language,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高
38、指导教学课件(共34张PPT),Peer assessmentComment on the,I think its unnecessary for parents to do so.Doing homework with kids brings bad results,as opposed to doing both parties favors.The more involved in kids homework parents are,the more dependent on them the kids are,which will deprive kids of their self-
39、reliance ability as well as independent thinking.Whats worse,not only does it multiply the risk of homework-connected argument but also it puts heavy pressure on kids mentally.No memory is more painful than that of my primary school,when my mother accompanied me when I did my homework.I was overwhel
40、med by frustration and insecurity in that once my homework failed to live up to my parents expectations,what awaited me was nothing but a scolding,which would trigger a bitter argument.,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共,Tips,You learn to write by writing.There is no good writing,only good rewriting.,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),TipsYou learn to write by writ,THANK YOU,高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导教学课件(共34张PPT),THANK YOU高三英语二轮复习-高三英语作文提高指导,
