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1、班 级：高 班 时 间：2020.09,英班 级：高 班 语写作,What makes a good writing?,A Good Writing,What makes a good writing?A,作文评分标准,要点完整；语言准确且多样；结构清晰；逻辑连贯交际得体书写美观,好作文标准：,作文评分标准分数档要 点词 汇语 法交 际逻 辑2,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法),审 题体裁时态人称要点,列提纲结构要点关键词,补充细节,语言表达准确地道词汇句式,连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇,润色修正美化句子高级替换,定稿,审,列,补,表,连,润,定,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审 题列提
2、纲补充细节语言表达,假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展，请写一封信申请做志愿者。内容包括：1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事注意：1.词数120左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好 Dear sir or madam,_ _ I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Li Hua,(2019 全国1卷),假定你是李华，暑期在伦敦学习，得知当地美,体裁人称时态 要求,一般现在时,120左右,gallery,art center,应用文（申请信）,第一人称,A Chinese pai
3、nting exhibition其它相关表达：中国画Chinese paintings,traditional Chinese art,the artworks.,字数内 容,a volunteer,the voluntary job,the position,写作背景:(抓关键词)美术馆 中国画展 志愿者内容要求：,1.写信目的;2.个人优势;3.能做的事,1、审题,体裁一般现在时 120左右 gallery,art cen,自我介绍+写信目的,开头正文结尾,Para.1Para.2Para.3,个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）,总结意愿,2、列提纲,自我介绍+写信
4、目的开头Para.1个人优势+能做的事（具体说,自我介绍+写信目的,Para.1,+,我是李华，是从中国来的一个留学生；得知你们美术馆要举行中国画展，正在招募志愿者；我迫不及待地写信想申请这个工作。,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,I am Li Hua,an exchange student from China.,+,an exchange student;,the coming Chinese painting exhibition;,the local gallery;,cant wait to do;,apply for the position;,I Hear that vol
5、unteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery.,I can t wait to apply for the position.,自我介绍+写信目的Para.1+我是李华，是从中国来的一个留,个人优势+能做的事（中国画展）,Para.2,因为对中国传统艺术非常感兴趣并且受到过良好训练，所以我非常了解中国画。我不仅可以给游客解说画美在哪里，还可以讲述他们背后的故事。,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,traditional Chinese art;,I am deepl
6、y interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art,so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.,be deeply interested in;,have a good knowledge/grasp/understanding/command of;,not only but also;,explain to,I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the p
7、aintings,but also tell the stories behind them.,个人优势+能做的事（中国画展）Para.2因为,个人优势+能做的事（在伦敦的中国人）,我的英语很流利，这使得我在与别人交流方面没有障碍。,have a good knowledge/grasp/understanding/command of;,I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating with others.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,communicate with
8、 others;,have no trouble/difficulty in doing,个人优势+能做的事（在伦敦的中国人）我的英语很流利，这,个人优势+能做的事（申请做志愿者）,我非常热情并且有责任心，我相信我完全胜任志愿者工作。,enthusiastic and responsible;,I am enthusiastic and responsible,so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,be qualified for,个人优势+能
9、做的事（申请做志愿者）我非常热,总结,具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我就是你要找的合适人选。,As is mentioned above；,With all these qualities mentioned above,I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.,Para.2,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,with；,qualities,总结具备了以上提到的所有品质(如上所述)，我可以肯定的说，我,表达感谢和期待回复,Para.3,如果你能考虑我的申请，
10、我将十分感激。期待你的回复。,I would appreciate it if;,I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.,+,补充细节：,语言表达：,连词成句：,+,take my application into consideration/account/take account of/seriously,Looking forward to your early reply.,表达感谢和期待回复Para.3如果你能考虑我的申请，我将十分,first;firstly;second;
11、secondly;last but not least;at first;first of all;in the first place;at last;last of all;for one thing;for another thing;on the one hand;on the other hand;finally,and;too;as well as;along with;together with;both and;not only but also,for example;for instance;like;such as;as follows;take as an exampl
12、e,but;however;while;though;on the contrary,because(of);since;owing to;due to;thanks to;as a result/consequence(of);thus;therefore,in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion;in general;in summary;on the whole;in brief,whats more;besides;furthermore;in addition;additionally;to make matters worse;whats
13、 worse;worse still;,6、连句成篇：,（使用恰当的连接词使文章流畅）,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇排序关系,自我介绍+写信目的,开头正文结尾,Para.1Para.2Para.3,个人优势+能做的事（具体说明能胜任此工作的理由,3个优势）,总结意愿,自我介绍+写信目的开头Para.1个人优势+能做的事（具体说,first;firstly;second;secondly;last but not least;at first;first of all;in the first place;at last;last of all;for one thing;for another t
14、hing;on the one hand;on the other hand;finally,and;too;as well as;along with;together with;both and;not only but also,for example;for instance;like;such as;as follows;take as an example,but;however;while;though;on the contrary,because(of);since;owing to;due to;thanks to;as a result/consequence(of);t
15、hus;therefore,in a word;in short;to sum up;in conclusion;in general;in summary;on the whole;in brief,whats more;besides;furthermore;in addition;additionally;to make matters worse;whats worse;worse still;,6、连句成篇：,（使用恰当的连接词）,逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇排序关系,6、连句成篇：,Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua,an exchange student fr
16、om China.I Hear that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting exhibition in the local gallery.I can t wait to apply for the position.At first,I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and I have received a good education in art,so I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.I c
17、an not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.Besides,I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating with others.Additionally,I am enthusiastic and responsible,so I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volun
18、teer.With all these qualities mentioned above,I can say with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.,6、连句成篇：Dear Sir or Madam,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法),审 题体裁时态人称要点,列提纲结构要点关键词,补充细节,语言
19、表达准确地道词汇句式,连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇,润色修正美化句子高级替换,定稿,审,列,补,表,连,润,定,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审 题列提纲补充细节语言表达,二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力,四.尝试多样化表达方式,一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力,强调句,With短语复合结构,定语从句,名词性从句(主宾表同从句),各种状语从句,被动语态,7、润色修正方式,二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力四,一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力（形容词做状语，对谓语动词强调）,I am enthusiastic and r
20、esponsible and I believe I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,Enthusiastic and responsible,I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.,7、润色修正,一.使用较高级词汇与句型使文章增加吸引力（形容词做状语，对谓,Deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and having received a good educ
21、ation in art,I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.,二.使用非谓语动词使句子简洁高档,I am deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and have received a good education in art.I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.,7、润色修正,Deeply interested in t,I can not only explain to the visitors the beauty of the
22、 paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.,三.巧用倒装增强句子表现力,Not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories behind them.,7、润色修正,I can not only explain to,I am quite satisfied that I have a good command of English,so I have no difficulty communicating
23、with others.,四.尝试多样化表达方式,(主语从句+表语从句),What satisfies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty communicating with others.,7、润色修正,I am quite sati,Dear Sir or Madam,I am Li Hua,an exchange student from China.Hearing that volunteers are needed for the coming Chinese painting
24、 exhibition in the local gallery.I can t wait to apply for the position.Deeply interested in traditional Chinese art and having received a good education in art,I have a good knowledge of Chinese paintings.Not only can I explain to the visitors the beauty of the paintings,but also tell the stories b
25、ehind them.Besides,What satisfies me most is that my good command of English makes me have no difficulty communicating with others.Additionally,enthusiastic and responsible,I do hold the belief that I am perfectly qualified for the job as a volunteer.With all these qualities mentioned above,I can sa
26、y with certainty that I am the right person you are looking for.I would appreciate it if you could take my application into consideration.Looking forward to your early reply.,8、定稿,Dear Sir or Madam,8、定稿,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法),审 题体裁时态人称要点,列提纲结构要点关键词,补充细节,语言表达准确地道词汇句式,连词成句+过渡词逻辑连贯流畅连句成篇,润色修正美化句子高级替换,定稿,审,列,补,表,连,润,定,好作文的写作步骤(写作七步法)审 题列提纲补充细节语言表达,假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的外国中学生。请你写信应聘，内容包括：1.口语能力2.相关经验3.应聘目的注意：1.词数100左右 2.可以适当添加细节，以使行文连贯 3.结束语已为你写好 Dear sir or madam,_ _ I am looking forward to hearing from you.Sincerely,Li Hua,假定你是李华，你校英语协会招聘志愿者，接待来访的外国中,
