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1、环境细节描写,by Kevin Soy,读后续写专项训练 3,It was dreadfully cold;it was snowing fast,and was almost dark,as evening came on-the last evening of the year.In the cold and darkness,there went along the street a poor little girl,bareheaded and with naked feet.When she left home she had slippers on,it is true;but t
2、hey were much too large for her feet slippers that her mother had used until then,The snow flakes fell on her long flaxen hair,which hung in pretty curls about her throat;but she thought not of her beauty nor of the cold.Lights gleamed in every window,and there came to her the savory smell of roast
3、goose,for it was New Years Eve.And it was of this which she thought.,Yet she dared not go home,for she had sold no matches,and could not bring a penny of money.Her father would certainly beat her;and,besides,it was cold enough at home,for they had only the house roof above them;and though the larges
4、t holes had been stopped with straw and rags,there were left many through which the cold wind whistled.,小结,紧扣主题。在有限的篇幅内选择景物要慎重，一定要与主题有密切关联。细致深入。所选景物一定要运用所学过的词汇和语法进行细致深入的描写。相辅相成。环境描写一定要与动作和心理活动等相结合，才能更好完成写作任务。,1.请描述自己迷路的经历，运用对环境的描写来营造氛围，为后文做铺垫、烘托自己的心理及体现个人的性格。80词左右。_,1.请描述自己迷路的经历，运用对环境的描写来营造氛围，为后文做铺垫
5、、烘托自己的心理及体现个人的性格。80词左右。迷路会引起人的不安和焦躁的心理，与之对应的环境描写，可以是天气，比如雨雾等，还可以描写陌生的建筑和自然景色。,I was lost in the mountain which was settled by almost no people.I had a map in my hand but had no idea where my position was.The air seemed wet,as though the symbol of mountains the high concentration-of-oxygen air was re
6、placed by the uncomfortable,choking water.It was going to rain.The fear surrounded me like a devils frozen,sharp hands.I struggled to adjust my mood but in vain.,2.午夜时分，咖啡馆里只剩下最后一位顾客，他是位双耳失聪、孤寂苦闷的老人。请根据所给的时间和地点及老人的特点，针对小餐馆及周围的环境，设计一段描写，词数80左右。It was very late and everyone had left the caf except an
7、old man._,2.午夜时分，咖啡馆里只剩下最后一位顾客，他是位双耳失聪、孤寂苦闷的老人。请根据所给的时间和地点及老人的特点，针对小餐馆及周围的环境，设计一段描写，词数80左右。,时间：午夜地点：咖啡馆为了符合午夜和老人的内心特点，需要营造寂静的周围环境。可以添加一些附加信息，如天气和周边的景物等（斑驳的树影、昏暗的路灯和寒风）来营造阴郁氛围。除了老人，其他人也是故事环境的有效组成部分，如冷漠的服务员或是零星的路人。,It was very late and everyone had left the caf except an old man.He sat in the shadow o
8、f the leaves of the tree that swung lonely in the cold wind.The street light was slightly gloomy.In the day time the street was noisy and dusty,but at night silence settled the dust.The old man liked to sit late because he was deaf and only at night,when people were fewer and fewer,could he feel the
9、 difference.The two waiters there knew that if he became too drunk he would leave without paying,so they kept watching on him.,实战演练,3.王姥姥第一次进城看女儿，在车站周围看到“好运大抽奖”的活动遍毫不犹豫地参加了。为了赢得终极大奖：40寸大彩电，她连续参加五次，把身上仅有的200块钱都花光了也没有赢到奖，请设计一段环境描写突出表现离开的路上王姥姥受骗后的心情。Grandma Wang was extremely blue having spent all the
10、200 yuan._,Grandma Wang was extremely blue having spent all the 200 yuan.She stood rooted to the spot with her mind totally blank.Recalling the moment when they noticed she had no more money to continue the game,their faces turned from flower to ice,Grandma Wang quickly escaped from the bustling sta
11、tion.People on the street,not like the villagers,came and went,nobody greeting each other.The high buildings alongside the streets covered most of the sunshine,which was exactly different from the countryside.She thought trust among people is as warm as the sunshine,and she couldnt live in the shadow of these tall buildings.,
