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1、Lesson Two,Sentence Skills 句法技巧Jack,教学目标,1）避免雅思写作中的语法错误（如双谓语或不完整句等）2）能够写出长而复杂的英语句子3）写作中能够娴熟使用不同类型的句子，营造出丰富多变的修辞效果,教学内容,1）热身练习改正常见错句；改正中式英语句2）把句子写对巩固写作练习3）把句子写长巩固写作练习4）句式的多变巩固写作练习,什么是英语句子,Have a tryAny topic A“luxury”sentence 5 minutes Then lets share.,什么英语句子？无论字数多少，只要有主语和谓语（动词），而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一个句子。
2、I am tired.Pressing ones palm together and resting ones head on the back of ones hand while closing the eyes as if sleeping means“I am tired.”,从评分标准说起,Task 2（议论文）的三方面评分标准是：1）Arguments,Ideas and Evidence（论证，论点和论据）；2）Communicative Quality（交流质量）；3）Vocabulary and Sentence Structure（词汇与句子结构）。,5分或5分以下的作文一
3、般语法错误较多。6分作文则一般没有致命的语法错误，用词和句子基本准确。而7分以上的作文用词丰富（Variety）、句子结构复杂（Complexity）。,Warming-up Exercise 1,Correct the following sentences.1)Beijing is a beautiful city,I enjoy living here.2)There are many people agree to keep pets at home.3)Although pets may pollute the environment.4)There is a great diffe
4、rence between dining out and to have a snack at home.5)We all against all kinds of terrorists activities.6)The film had begun for 5 minutes when I got to the theatre.7)Our school have taken place great changes.,Beijing is a beautiful city,I enjoy living here.Beijing is a beautiful city.I enjoy livin
5、g there.2)There are many people agree to keep pets at home.There are many people who agree to keep pets at home.3)Although pets may pollute the environment.Although pets may pollute the environment,people still love them.4)There is a great difference between dining out and to have a snack at home.Th
6、ere is a great difference between dining out and having a snack at home.,5)We all against all kinds of terrorists activities.We are all against all kinds of terrorist activities.6)The film had begun for 5 minutes when I got to the theatre.The film had been on for 5 minutes when I got to the theatre.
7、7)Our school have taken place great changes.Great changes have taken place in our school.,Warming-up Exercise 2-Chinglish,Correct the following Chinglish sentencesHe would help you in no word.I have economic condition.Many people read only elementary school.,He would help you in no word.He would not
8、 hesitate to help you in any time.I have economic condition.I have sufficient money to support my study abroad.Many people read only elementary school.Many people dropped out of schools after graduating from elementary school.,中国人常见错句,There are ten students are playing basketball on the sports field
9、.Though he was ill,but the boy still came to school today.I have two pens and both of which writes well.The money stolen,and we had no choice but to ask the police for help.,改正,There are ten students are playing basketball on the sports field.There are ten students who are playing basketball on the
10、sports field.Though he was ill,but the boy still came to school today.Though he was ill,the boy still came to school today.I have two pens and both of which writes well.I have two pens,both of which writes well.The money stolen,and we had no choice but to ask the police for help.The money stolen,we
11、had no choice but to ask the police for help.,把句子写对（1）：成分和种类,1）主语：一句话的中心，整句话的主题My sister is a nurse.Her room is on the fifth floor.2）谓语：说明主语的情况，表示动作或者状态She works in a hospital.She knows a little English.3）宾语：表示动作的承受着或者结果Everybody likes her.She is writing a letter now.,把句子写对：成分和种类,4）定语：修饰名词、代词She is
12、a beautiful girl.I like the book my teacher recommended.5）状语：修饰动词She goes to work very early.She will leave the company if she decides to go abroad.,Exercise,用英语描述下面的图片。尽量使用包含状语和定语的句子。,把句子写对（2）：成分和种类,1）简单句：句子成分都由单词或短语担任，只有一个谓语结构We love our great motherland.2）并列句：句子成分都由单词或短语担任，但有两个或更多互不依从的主谓结构Honey i
13、s sweet,but the bee stings.The traffic is heavy in rush hours,and people are complaining a lot.3）复合句：有一个或更多的成分由从句担任Do you see what I mean?Come again when you are free.,Exercise,用英语描述下面的图片。尽量使用包含并列句和复杂句。,造句中的问题,一、写对句子人治 vs.法治,Example,今天中午吃食堂。一碗饭吃三个人。有事没事，常来坐坐。,不完整句,There are many ways to know the soc
14、iety.For example by TV,radio,newspaper and so on.There are many ways to know society,for example,by TV,radio,and newspaper.He has one purpose in life.To enable his mother to lead a letter life.He has only one purpose in life.He wants to enable his mother to lead a better life.,谓语问题,He has a good job
15、 has made me very happy.,词性误用,None can negative the importance of money.None can deny the importance of money.,词性基本使用规则练习：请举例,动词+名词形容词+名词动词+副词形容词+副词名词+动词+名词（主谓宾）,Write Long Sentences,把句子写长，写复杂利用同位语、插入语、独立主格、分词短语、动词不定式、介词短语等，变换句式结构,Our Object：From bad to good,and the better,写作“境界”之不同,Tom saw a bird.T
16、he bird was wounded.He took the bird to the zoo.The workers in the zoo praised him.He arrived home late.He was happy.Tom saw a wounded bird,so he took the bird to the zoo.The workers in the zoo praised him.Though he came home late,he was happy.On the way home,Tom,our monitor,saw a wounded bird that
17、seemed to be dying.Without the slightest hesitation,he took the bird to the zoo nearby as soon as possible.Having known what had happened,all the workers in the zoo praised tom for his deep love for birds.Tom didnt go home until the bird was saved and treated properly in the zoo.It was very late whe
18、n he arrived home,but he was happy indeed.,改正下列句子谓语问题,He sits here drinks a cup of water.He likes the book makes me very happy.Seeing from the mountain top,the city is very beautiful.,Example,He sits here drinks a cup of water.He sits here and drinks a cup of water.Sitting here,he drinks a cup of wa
19、ter.He likes the book makes me very happy.That he likes the book makes me very happy.He likes the book,which makes me very happy.Seeing from the mountain top,the city is very beautiful.Seeing from the mountain top,we find the city very beautiful.,Have a try：尽量使用长句,Topic:traffic jams Requirement:at l
20、east 60 words.,如何写出长句？,同位语 After her brother died,the little girl had no choice but to live in the countryside with her grandmother,(who was)a really kind-hearted woman.,插入语,The general atmosphere of the country and temperament of the people,and also the favorable climate,will undoubtedly offer many
21、 opportunities for an interesting social life.,独立主格,A big book tucked under arm,he entered the room.Traffic jams completely eradicated,peoples driving becomes pleasant and enjoyable.,分词,Justice theories have a long tradition,dating back to Plato and Aristotle.,III.句式多样性,句式形式多样化，会使文字语言生动，是为作文增色的有效手段。
22、1）长短句交错运用，混合使用各种句式 Generation gap is inevitable.This gap,resulting from the differentiation of experience and value,comes into being and gives birth to various conflicts between the young and the senior.No doubt that it must be tackled with caution.,Weak-revised,The house is old,bare and quiet.It is
23、 almost frightening.It has dim lights.The walls are green and shabby.The floor is gray.The furniture is black.All these produce a cold atmosphere.They remind the visitor of ghosts.The house is old,bare,quiet and almost frightening.Its dim lights,green and shabby walls,gray floor,and black furniture
24、produce a cold atmosphere that reminds the visitor of ghosts.,2）主语多样化汉语多人称主语，英语多用无灵主语A terrible thought suddenly struck me-had I locked the door?It is generally felt that his appointment was a grave mistake.,3）开头多样化同位语An expert in forest fire control,the forest ranger talked to the campers about saf
25、ety in the woods.形容词短语Tired and dirty,the boys returned to the camp.,现在分词短语Jogging every day,I soon increased my energy level.Attacked by terrorists,the U.S.suffered a severe blow to its economy.不定时短语To succeed in that course,you must attend every class.,3）倒装In the corner of the house stood a large
26、vase.4）复合从句Because he was tired and discouraged,he did not want to rewrite the paper.,Example,Improve the following paragraph by polishing the sentences in it.My English Learning I have been learning English for over 6 years.I have made some progress in my English.But I always feel English is hard t
27、o learn,especially some English idioms are difficult.I will work hard at this useful foreign language.I will try hard to grasp this foreign language.,Improved Version,It is six years since I began to learn English.With the help of my teachers and classmates,I have made progress in my English.Now Im
28、doing well both in writing and reading in English.But I still find it hard to learn English,such as some difficult idioms.Difficult as it is,I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.,Writing Practice,Paragraph writing Topic:Classification of love Gambling should be banned My understanding of success Requirements:try to use various types of sentences.,
