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1、雅思写作万年5.5分的原因 写了这么久的雅思作文，技巧和方法都到位了，写作分数为什么总是提不上去?今天为大家总结了那些年我们掉进的雅思写作的坑。下面就和大家分享雅思写作万年5.5分的原因，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作万年5.5分的原因误区1. 语法不重要 关键是单词和内容够牛句子结构不对，语法错误一多，哪怕是你用多高端的词，多好的内容都是5.5分。道理很简单，哪怕中文也是。如果通篇白字，写的句法不通，你用唐诗宋词，旁征博引，你的读者觉得你连基本的写作能力都没有，更不要说水平多高了。误区2. 观点无所谓好坏 只要能够自圆其说观点如果选的不好，考官会怀疑你是否已经看懂题目。考试问“使用手机太多是否减少交
2、流技能”，你说“使用手机太多会导致视力下降”，那就是有跑题的嫌疑。观点如果不够有力，解释起来就很费劲。就好比，考试问“出国留学是否好”，你的回答是“要逃避国内父母的枷锁”，就是一个很奇怪的观点。误区3. 字多=高分雅思作文是有字数要求，字数如果低于标准会影响TR的分数。但为了凑字数而闲扯，写些重复或者不切题意的内容，只会适得其反。字数多并不一定会为你加分，决定分数的是*质量。误区4. 换词=加分考官会看学生是否能够用不同方式去表达一个事情，也就是表达的变化是写作能力的一个体现。但是前提是你的表达变化是准确的，地道的。否则，考官只会扣分。譬如说“receive treatment”有些同学觉得r
3、eceive太简单，写成“acquire treatment”。这个学生就是5.5分级别的学生，为什么?因为这不是考官认可的表达，也不符他们的习惯。误区5. 背范文，千篇一律套用范文这可能是中国考生写作的一大特点，无论是英文还是中文写作，都喜欢套用范文。背范文可以帮到你积累词汇和思路，但也存在弊端：1. 被发现可能会被判为模板卷，那么可能你的分数直接从5分起了。2. 严重的被定为抄袭。而且范文很难和作文题目完全切合， 容易跑题，或者因为生搬硬套而降分，不能够达到task response的评分标准。误区6. 常见单词重复太多会扣分像can、will、should这些情态动词或者助动词重复是无所
4、谓的，考官的范文也经常使用这些表达。某些很少有替代的词(如children、parents、advertising等)也不需要硬是换词，要懂得灵活替换表达。误区7. 大作文开头和结尾很重要大作文最重要的部分是主体部分，主体部分的论述决定了四个部分的成绩。扣题、观点和论述的细致决定了TR的分数，句子连接和逻辑决定CC的分数，用词决定了LR的分数，而句子结构和语法准确决定了GRA的分数。开头和结尾因为不涉及论述，所以重要性要低得多。误区8. 写复杂句和分词结构可以加分句子变化是体现一个人的写作能力，但是如果你的复杂句错误，考官会扣分，而不是加分。使用不恰当，譬如说套句，不该用的地方粗暴出现，那么也
5、会扣分。譬如说很多同学喜欢用定语从句，“where have”这就是5.5分。因为where引导的定语从句后面是独立的句子，不可能缺乏主语。考官不是因为你用了where就给分，而是看你用的对不对，恰当不恰当。雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文Fashion trends are difficult to follow these days and its widely believed that they primarily exist just to sell clothes. Some people believe that we shouldnt follow them and that
6、we should dress in what we like and feel comfortable in.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?Model Answer:Its widely believed in todays materialistic world that the latest innovative fashion trends hold great significance. On the other hand, such trends are believed to be set on
7、ly in the pursuit of profits for large designer companies. It seems that in recent times, people are now changing their minds in regards to wearing clothes for comfort and as a personal choice. Personally I agree that we should pay more attention to individuality and comfort in the way we dress.Firs
8、tly, fashion designs exist as a form of creative artistic expression of the designer. Although this may be true, undoubtedly such designs take away individuality once a trend is set in place. By this I mean that there is nothing unique about wearing what everybody else does. More specifically, if ev
9、eryone sports the latest colour and design in summer skirts, do we not look the same?Secondly, It is possible that fashion trends can look extremely stylish to the general public. However, it can be argued that the main purpose of wearing clothes is for more functional reasons. This is primarily due
10、 to the fact that clothes were traditionally worn to protect people from climatic conditions. For instance, clothes are still worn basically to keep people warm and dry in winter and cool in summer.Finally, fashion certainly gives us a sense of confidence and pride in our appearance. While this is c
11、ertainly a good point, it also means that following such changeable trends proves to be expensive. For example, purchasing every latest seasons fashion item will of course blow the budget of many young people.In conclusion, there are various arguments to support the dismissal of fashion trends, cons
12、isting of not conforming, comfort and price, which I strongly agree with.雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文Some people think that it is important to have a single language as an international official language. Others think that it will make it difficult to identify countries and cause a loss of culture.What are your
13、 opinions on this?Model Answer:With the advent of globalization, a common language to facilitate trade and communication seems inevitable. Some oppose the development of a single language on the grounds that it may lead to cultural erosion and a loss of local linguistic knowledge. Yet, I am of the o
14、pinion that it is possible to use an official international language and still retain ones own language and culture.Firstly, many countries already use an official language or languages. For example, in India there are two official languages: Hindi and English. In a country such as India where there
15、 are innumerable languages spoken, there is a need for official languages to ensure communication between different sections of the population and the different states. In China, where different dialects are spoken, Mandarin, the official language, enables people from different provinces to comprehe
16、nd each other.Secondly, in an age of rampant globalization there is no doubt that an international language is inevitability. How is an African businessman going to conduct business in China when there are such differences between languages? In this sense, not only is an international language inevi
17、table, but also a necessity for trade, commerce and economic expansion in the 21st century.The critics opposing the adoption of an international official language argue that it would lead to a loss of cultural identity. However, the use of an international official language doesnt mean that local la
18、nguages will die out. For example, English already functions as a kind of unofficial international language but this doesnt mean that people solely converse in English or they neglect their own language. English is used in specific contexts (trade, business, etc) and native languages are used for ev
19、eryday instruction.In brief, as the world becomes smaller the need for an official international language seems unavoidable. English has already assumed this role although its status is unofficial. In my view, the use of either an official or unofficial international language is necessary to facilitate communication in a time of rapid globalization.雅思写作
