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1、雅思写作大作文犯罪类话题思路指导 犯罪类话题出现频率不高，但考生平时写作备考中依然要重视这类话题的训练。本期的写作思路指引就为大家分析，如何做好犯罪类话题的写作思路分析，下面就和大家分享雅思写作大作文话题思路指导，来欣赏一下吧。雅思写作大作文话题思路指导：犯罪类首先我们来看一下关于犯罪类写作话题有哪些，主要有分析犯罪的原因，青少年犯罪问题以及如何降低犯罪。话题题目如下：The news about violent crimes may frighten people or, on contrary, encourage them to commit a crime. Therefore, so
2、me believe that these types of news should not be reported in newspapers or on TV. To what extend do you agree or disagree?In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. What are the causes? How should these young criminals be punished?In many countries crime is incre
3、asing. What are the main reasons for this? What can be done to improve the situation?下面我们就一一分析一下。首先：关于犯罪的成因。无论是青少年犯罪或者成年人犯罪，首先应该想到的是经济问题，经济问题会影响社会的稳定，如失业率的提升，失学、食物匮乏、家庭负担加重甚至破产，这时就会滋生犯罪。而贫穷落后地区的儿童往往面临失学问题，也是造成青少年犯罪的重要原因。由经济层面进入教育层面，大部分暴力犯罪者的受教育程度比较低，他们因为贫穷过早的进入社会，或者失业导致流落街头，这类人群冲动易怒，易发生冲突。心理健康问题，这是比
4、较容易忽略的问题。校园暴力者本身会存在心理问题，甚至场景是校园暴力，家庭暴力的受害者。这里有一些特殊的犯罪比如网络诈骗、经济犯罪这些则是其他原因，要单独说。由于信息技术发达，个人信息安全遭到窃取，给网络诈骗可乘之机。还有就是一些机构腐败滋生。高科技犯罪者本身的受教育程度可能很高，智商也高，这时候我们要转换思路，这类高科技犯罪背后的原因是法律意识淡薄。犯罪情节由轻到重包括：校园暴力、盗窃、杀人，经济犯罪、网络诈骗等。近年来青少年犯罪的相关新闻比较多见，建议考生多关注相关报道，新闻中会给出相关的事件分析。分析完成因，后面就要考虑如何降低犯罪，按照情节的严重程度做不同的处理。情节轻微的，小惩小戒，情
5、节严重者就要毫不留情的处罚，甚至拘禁。面对青少年犯罪，对于情节较轻的一般采取纠正引导。情节严重的如盗窃、伤人，那么就需要采取一定处罚措施，情节严重到伤人的，则应该依法采取措施。有严重暴力倾向，反人类的行为的青少年，建议采取心理治理和法律约束。同时对被害人也需要进行心理治疗。然而预防青少年犯罪才是从根本上减少或降低犯罪伤害的有效措施。来自学校，管教所和家庭的教育很重要。最后，为了避免再次误入歧途，视情况为青少年罪犯提供必要的帮助和就业指导等。最后，如何有效地降低犯罪或抑制犯罪，当然是提高就业率和加强国家的安全意识。关于反复犯罪，并不能完全依靠监狱解决，监狱能关住的只有严重暴力倾向的罪犯，而大部分
6、初犯者，他们的人生还很长，需要社会的重新接纳。雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Parents or other adult relatives should make important decisions for their (15 to 18 year-old) teenage children.Model Answer:Parents are in most cases our first teachers and friends. From my everyday experie
7、nce I have to agree with the statement that important decisions should be made by our parents or adult relatives. In the following paragraphs I will give my reasons to support this statement.First of all, teenage children have the tendency to live in their own fantasies. They do not clearly understa
8、nd the rules of a real life. When I was 18 years old I thought that the world was perfect and everything seemed to be simple. Teenagers are basically inexperienced; they aspire for independence and try to make their first steps towards freedom. I think that it is like starting to walk when a baby ne
9、eds its parents for support. An independent life is a big and significant part in a persons life. So, my point is that it is very important to make this step right.Second of all, I think that parents have right to interfere in their childrens lives. They need to know what kind of friends their child
10、ren have and how children spend their spare time. For example I had an eighteen years old friend who got really angry with his parents when they prohibited him to be friends with a young man. Somehow his parents found out that that young man was occasionally taking drugs. That man was dead in a year
11、 because of drug abuse. After that accident my friend thanked his parents for that interference.Finally, I think teenage children should be more open-minded with their parents. It will help them to make the right choice and avoid many mistakes.To sum up, I believe that young people should trust thei
12、r parents because they wish their children only the best.雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文A person you know is planning to move to your town or city.What do you think this person would like and dislike about living in your town or city? Why?Model Answer:I am from Saint-Petersburg, Russia. It is a very beautiful city
13、 that attracts many people every year. My close friend is going to move here after her graduation. She already found a job and she asked me to help her with an apartment. Knowing her very well I think I can enumerate the majority of things she will like and dislike about my city.First of all, I beli
14、eve she will like a huge amount of museums, theatres, movie theatres, etc. My friend is from a small town, so, she can not enjoy all these benefits at her native town. Second of all, it seems to me that she will like the way people live here. The pace of life is much faster here then in a small town
15、. People are always in a hurry, they try to catch a bus, and then they run to the nearest subway station, go to an office, meet new people, etc. Also, I think my friend will like people here. They are very friendly and ready to offer a help to those in need.Unfortunately, my friend will not surely l
16、ike some things. As a result of a huge amount of cars and factories the air is polluted here. One more thing she will definitely not like is the weather. It is quite humid here.However, I think she will also like the public transport here. The bus services are run by the Government and it is quite regular. If one in a hurry he can take a taxi, which also is quite cheap and provide a good transport.In conclusion, I believe that in spite of all mentioned above disadvantages she will like this city.英语写作
