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1、7分考生分享雅思写作技巧经验 7分考生分享雅思写作经验一文由一位雅思2战考出7分成绩的考生分享了他的雅思写作备考经验。他的经验就是从死记硬背模板改为自己组织写作思路。下面就和大家分享7分考生分享雅思写作经验,希望能够帮助到大家,来欣赏一下吧。7分考生分享雅思写作经验雅思考了两次,一月之间写作提了一分,第一次备考脑洞比较大,还残留着高中题海战术+坚持不懈就能首战过的想法,现在回头看看,真是too young too simple,2战终于分手,第二次调整了一下备考方案之后每天花的时间少了,分数却提了很多把自己这一个月的心路历程分享,希望大家也能快点摆脱雅思!说一下我的背景吧,老牌211 985工
2、科生,多年不碰英语四六级低空飘过,不过高考120+底子还是有一点的,目标是6.5第一次备考每天都至少留3个小时复习雅思,当时写作跳的坑是这几个坑1:写作狂背词伙1h:坑2:每天写一篇大作文+一篇小作文坑3:套用写作模板就酱紫过了三个月,然后L6R7W5S6。说好的特别好呢 呵呵,说好的神一样的写作词伙之后低沉了好几天,啥都不想做,但是无奈连着报了两次,几千大洋啊,不说了,说多了都是泪。 后来静下心来,也问了很多人(感谢陪我一起烤鸭的小伙伴,还有一直无私回答我问题的小伙伴,感受到了家庭的温暖呀TAT),才发现了自己之前的几个做法有点问题首先:X北用的人太多了,都又老又旧了,考官的眼睛是雪亮的,一
3、些所谓的高大上词伙prolong ,make it adj for sb to do,他们看到都想吐了,其实一点朴实一点的词语不影响分数的;然后,我写的作文,都没有找人改过,就是写完看了一下范文觉得哇哇哇作文写得真好啊然后,但实际上根本没有思考过自己的问题在哪里,怎样可以写的和他们一样好;最后写作不要随便套模板写作不要随便套模板写作不要随便套模板尤其是开头套模板,如果你的分数要求是6分以下,那你大胆的套吧如果想上6分或7分甚至更高,就不要用那么多的模板,其实根本没用,反而会让你分数低。为啥呢?转一句在某瓣看到的话:考官其实不是讨厌那些模板,他们反感的是高级的模板与你写的*的语言水平根本不是同一
4、个层次的,写出来的一篇*里层次相差太大。想想看,读一篇中文的作文,如果每段的开头结尾转折的地方都用些华丽丽的词、文言文、诗句什么的啊,但是接下来却是用最普通易懂的语言,你看了会怎么想呢?如果你是模板党,常年6分,还不知道自己为什么跪的,那现在你可以瞑目了第一次屠鸭的悲剧让我意识到,写作脑中无结构,什么单词什么预测都是浮云,所以每天不再花1h背单词了,转而开始学习梳理写作结构;下面内容有点长,但都是我觉得最重要的内容,每一个字都是我的血汗啊!请不要嫌我啰嗦啊拜托!包括这一个月中:每日作文备考,我做了啥大作文经验小作文经验相关备考资源补充tips雅思写作评分标准1. 每日作文备考,我做了啥每日写一
5、篇大作文+小作文(题目来自剑4剑10)看雅思范文+解析2. 大作文经验大作文我头最大的是这两个问题:问题1:写作没思路,速度慢一开始我总觉得思路打不开,写大作文就像挤牙膏一样痛苦,一句一句的挤啊。然后常常超时(建议大家写大作文的时候养成计时的好习惯,把时间控制在40min左右)没有思路的原因是一来脑子没料,二来练得不够我指的练不够不是指我的作文写得不够,第一次考完的时候作文已经写了整整一本了,但是却没有什么卵用,盲写其实并不能很好的帮助写作提速,因为没有养成一个良好的思维习惯,每次都是漫无目的的凑句子;培养一个习惯性的万用思路,然后围绕着这个思路针对各种题材联系,让它可以应对各种标题;要是你完
6、全不知道用什么思路,可以参考一下范文来说一下我的思路基本是这样的:开头就是先描述这个现象,然后说说它的原因,再接着是利和弊,分两段,利和弊中间的过渡可以装得纠结一点,两者之间透露出你的立场,像(While I admit that, I am convinced that .)外加给些solution,无非就是政府介入,raise awareness什么的,最后来个欢快结个尾,两句话以上。脑子里的料的话,只能靠积累了,读精了,会很加分!当然,平时的那些reading也都是可以拿来学习的,句式啊什么的,甚至,雅思阅读里面的*也可以借鉴的,只要心中有雅思,就处处是雅思哈哈但是当时备考时间只有一个月
7、了,所以就只是看了剑桥的范文看(网上有个叫大漠的把剑1-7的范文全都罗列出来)。7.5的,7分的sample也是可以看看感受一下的啦分低的就不要去瞄了,不吉利喵问题2:容易跑题审题很重要!你写的再好跑题跑到西伯利亚了也是扯谈啊!记得第一次考的时候本来是要写科技发展是positive还是negative,当时时间没有控制好,顾不上列大纲了冲上去就开始写,写着写着就开始论证父母该不该让孩子玩高科技,出来之后我就觉得自己跪了。如果你连题目都看不懂的话,我教不了你审题,还是乖乖恶补单词吧,但是正常情况下,列一个大纲就可以切掉审题的问题,不用太详细,结合你自己的万用思路:思路是骨头,你的大纲就是肉对照着
8、,一项一项的填进去,就可以了!像酱紫列一个能清楚表达你思路的大纲,不会超过两分钟滴切记:时间不够就急匆匆乱写是大忌,结果思路是散的,写的慢不说还容易跑题,而且还会影响后面答题的心情!3. 小作文经验小作文的练习,不能写完就算了,要参照范文总结思路,小作文去来去去都是那几种类型,实在不行,就每一种都参照范文来写思路,不要抱着侥幸的心理欧,第一次懒得看流程图,和地图。然后悲剧地被考到了。哈哈哈。我总结了一下:3.1单图题(一个图的小作文小心字数不够,用长点的句子,描述要完善):线图:主题段就写一段,尽量详细吧每个点都标清楚,拐点,极点,小趋势,总趋势可以最后总结。饼图:主题段开始表述由哪几个部分组
9、成,然后可以按照大小(相似种类)分类描述比较(如bulk的和small portion的)。柱状图:分类,有时间的比较趋势。表格图:横向比较加纵向比较(比较时间随变化的趋势和同时间的特色点或极值)3.2组合图(两个图):基本表述方式和单个图一样,但是要抓最有特点的点和趋势,不然来不及,结尾段比较下两个的关系或者合理的原因。3.3流程图可以合理的分类(可以参照有个剑桥真题里的一个天气预报的流程图),然后用各种连词把每个流程都串起来(能改写原有的步骤尽量改写,但是不认识的专有名词一般不用)最后再整体合理总结一下流程(貌似有个什么蚕丝的真题就可以总结为制丝绸不是很复杂)。3.4地图题历史变迁类:跟流
10、程图差不多,用好方位词,和描述建筑转换的词(rebuild,modify,expand,stretch等)。比较选址题:仔细看每个地址的特征,两个都要有一定描述再比较,用类似(proposed,prospective,potential site/location换着说可能的地址)。得出合理的结论即可。可以参照剑桥supermarket的选址比较题。4. 补充tips4.1作文最好找人改一改你要是不找人改的话很难知道自己的问题在哪里,毕竟当局者迷嘛你自己看着蛮好的作文其实在别人眼里就是一坨X.X,而且也不用每一天都改,我一周改一篇大作文一篇小作文。考前预测可以用来练手虽然很多人苦口婆心的说预测
11、信不过,但因为当时觉得太没把握了,就还是看了预测。以上就是7分考生分享雅思写作经验的全部内容,我们可以看出此考生从5分时段的背单词被模板的写作形式改为了整理写作思路创造原创作文的思路。这样的思路转变使这位考生的雅思写作分数得到了相应的提高。因此,雅思写作的一个重要点就是作文的逻辑性,这位考生抓住了这个得分点从而提高了分数。雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文Write about the following topic:Some people think women should be allowed to join the army, the navy and the air force jus
12、t like men.To what extent do you agree or disagree?Model Answer:Whether women should be allowed to serve in the military has triggered spirited debate. Some assert that women should be allowed to defend their country in the same capacity as their male peers. Personally, I agree with their assertion
13、for two reasons.History has shown that women are fully capable of performing well in the military. Historically, there were a host of valiant women soldiers whose achievements really put their male counterparts to shame. One need only look at the classic examples of Joan of Arc and Mulan to see how
14、exceptionally women could perform on the battlefield. In my observation, their determination, courage and dignity, to this day, are still being admired by male soldiers and civilians alike throughout the world.Moreover, from an enlightened standpoint, female patriots should be granted the right to g
15、o to the front line when their motherland is involved in a war. Admittedly, gender inequality was a highly controversial issue in the twentieth century. However, now twelve years into the new millennium, women can learn and teach, work and supervise, vote and voted in most countries just like men. I
16、n light of this sweeping progress in gender equality, there is no sense in denying them the right to defend their home country when a war breaks out.In sum, keeping military services out of bounds of women in the information age is unwarranted. I have been convinced that it is in the best interest o
17、f a nation if women are also granted equal rights in this particular arena.雅思写作Task2社会类考官范文Write about the following topic:Is freedom of speech necessary in a free society?Model Answer:In the last decade, there has been considerable debate over the role of free speech in a free society. Some object
18、to absolute freedom of speech. Others advocate free speech, arguing that the freedom of speech is the single most important political right of citizens in a civilized society. Whilst I believe that there are strong arguments on both sides, I would suggest that freedom of speech should be protected i
19、n all but extreme circumstances.The freedom of speech is important at all levels in a society. Yet it is most important for the governments. A government which does not know what the people feel and think is in a dangerous position. This is how the communist regimes of Eastern Europe were toppled in
20、 the 1980s. The same is happening again in other regions of the world today. The governments that muzzle free speech run a risk of pushing their people to behave destructively or to rebel.Furthermore, without free speech no political action is possible and no resistance to injustice and oppression i
21、s possible. Without free speech elections would have no meaning at all. Policies of contestants become known to the public and become responsive to public opinion only by virtue of free speech. Between elections the freely expressed opinions of citizens help restrain oppressive rule. Without this fr
22、eedom it is futile to expect political freedom or consequently economic freedom.In conclusion, I believe that the importance of free speech as a basic and valuable characteristic of a free society cannot be underestimated. It may be challenging for society to allow differences of opinion out into the open; however, the consequences of restricting free speech are likely to be more damaging in the longer term.英语写作