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1、Unit 1 My name is Gina. 创新写作指导【三步五要素法介绍自己】写作思路分三步第一步：确定自我介绍的内容和顺序。第二步：列举自我介绍的句型，多多益善。第三步：成段成篇，修订完善。文章的内容五要素 1姓名：（姓、名、中文名英文名）My name isMy first/last name is 2年龄：I amyears old. 3性别：I am a girl/ boy. 4所在学校和班级：I am atMiddle School, I am in Class，Grade 5联系方式（电话号码、QQ号码、邮箱等）：My telephone number is 可拓展内容：生日
2、、出生地、职业、兴趣爱好等。【范文欣赏】 Brief introduction about myself Hello, everyone, now I want to give you a brief introduction about myself. My name is Gina Green. Gina is my first name and Green is my family name. I am a girl at the age of 12, and I graduated from Nanjing Foreign Language Primary School. I like
3、 chatting on the Internet（上网）,and my QQ number is 7845362. Whats yours?点评：该文作者开开门见山地介绍了自己的姓名，并运用到了本单元的重点句型；文章恰当运用连接词now, and分层介绍自己的个人信息，而且在结尾时候介绍了自己的联系方式，符合文章写作要求；最后收篇提出了了解其他同学QQ的想法，作为自我介绍很自然的收尾。【写作针对性训练】 假设你是Kate Jane Brown，你刚刚结交了一位新的笔友Jennifer。请写信告诉她你的个人情况和在校的情况。要求：1.词数60左右。 2. 叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯。 3文中
4、不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇 1单词：and，but，student，my，old 2短语：first name，phone number, last name, middle name, full name 3句子:I am .years old. I am a girl.Dear Jennifer, Yours, KateUnit 2 This is my sister. 创新写作指导【总分总三步法介绍家庭】 总：第一步总体介绍家庭人口数量。 分：第二步分述各自家庭成员的职业，也可加上兴趣爱好等。 总：第三步再进行对家庭的感情表达或评价，起到画龙点睛的作用。【范文欣赏】Dear To
5、m, Thank you for your letter and the photo of your family . Its a nice photo. I like it very much. Now let me tell you about my family. There are three people in my family. They are my father, my mother and I. Here is my family photo. This is my father. He is a worker. This is my mother. She is a nu
6、rse. This is me. I am a middle school student. I love my family. Wish you happy every day! See you soon! Your friend, Zhan Hui点评：本文中格式与四要素方法一致，全文结构如下：称呼Dear.正文对收到来信致谢： Thank you for your letter.介绍家庭情况： There are.people in my family, This is. / She(He) is/I am表达祝愿：Wish you happy every day!/ See you s
7、oon!结束语Yours, /Your friend,. 用到的短语，如中的of所有格为本单元中内容；在正文介绍家庭部分中，首先用一句话过渡，即；之后用there be句型介绍家庭中人员的数目以及成员，然后用介绍人的句型，之后介绍三人的职业，最后点明自己的感情。全文行文流畅、自然、完整。【写作针对性训练】 假如你是Vera，准备将自己全家福寄给在上海的笔友Rosie，并写信向她介绍你的家庭成员。 要求：1词数：60词左右；2介绍家庭成员，可添加姓名、职业、年龄等。 参考词汇： 1单词：father，mother，family 2句型：There are. People in my family
8、. Unit 3 Is this your pencil? 创新写作指导【六要素法写失物招领寻物启事】写作内容六要素物品名称丢失捡到时间姓名物品特征丢失捡到地点联系方式【范文欣赏】Lost : I lost my notebook. Its yellow. My school ID card is in it. My phone number is 8339669. Please call me at this number. Thank you. Jane 点评：首先用Lost点明是寻物启事。说明笔记本的特征。介绍联系方式以方便拾到者归还。此句表示感谢。 全文内容全面、条理清晰、结构合理，写
9、得不错。【写作针对性训练】 假如你是露西，1月1日你把你的一个黑色笔记本遗失在学校操场，你的手机号码是15811583511，请写一则30词左右的寻物启事。 Unit 4 Wheres my schoolbag?创新写作指导【范文欣赏】 Hi, every one! This is my room. It is not very big but very nice. There are many things in it. First, you can see the desk. Some books and a computer are on it. Under the desk, it i
10、s my chair. Beside the desk there is a bookcase. I like books very much. So I have a lot of books. Wheres my bed? Its beside the bookcase. I like my room. What about you?【写作针对性训练】 介绍一下你的卧室(bedroom)。 要求：1.不少于60词； 2.可适当发挥。 Unit 5 Do you have a soccer ball?创新写作指导【三步三层法谈论物品收藏】1写作思路分三步： 第一步：确定谈论的对象，如“我的体
11、育用品收藏我爸爸的邮票收藏等”。 第二步：运用动词have/has来具体谈论收藏品的数量、颜色及其他特征。 第三步：结束语来说明此人对收藏的感受或对收藏喜爱 的程度等。2文章的结构分三层： 第一层：起篇（开头句） 第二层：正文主体部分，谈论收藏品内容，如数量、颜色、大小、外形等，以及对个别物品的感受。 第三层：收篇（结尾句）【范文欣赏】 Sam has a great sports collection. He has six basketballs, eight volleyballs and ten ping-pong balls. He has four baseball bats an
12、d two ping-pong bats. And he has a sports T-shirt and three pairs of sports shoes. Sam likes sports, but he doesnt play sports-he only watches them on TV.【写作针对性训练】根据下列图表中的物品，谈一谈Amy的体育收藏。不少于50词。six basketballseight ping-pong batsnine volleyballsten tennis racketsten tennis ballsfour baseball batstwel
13、ve soccer ballstwenty pairs of sports shoes eight baseballsfive sports T-shirts Unit 6 Do you like bananas?创新写作指导【三层次三要素法写谈论好恶及餐饮食】1写作思路二层次：表达喜欢的事物；表达不喜欢的事物。2写作内容三要素：早餐、午餐、晚餐【易错点点提示】1本文主要用like句型like+sth.，可数名词复数表示一类。2. like的否定形式dont/doesnt like.3谈论三餐饮食用句型For breakfastlunchdinner.，注意介词for。4注意可数名词和不可数名
14、词。5注意第三人称单数。【典例】根据下面表格的提示，写出你和你的朋友Mike一日三餐喜欢吃什么和不喜欢吃什么。(60词左右)YouMikeBreakfast eggs, hamburgers/tomatoes, breadLunch/cola(可乐) ,French fries broccoli(西兰花)，apples/Dinner/vegetables, meatdessert(甜点)，chicken/【参考词汇】单词：breakfast, eggs, hamburgers, tomatoes, bread, cola, French fries, broccoli, apples, lun
15、ch, vegetables, meat, dessert, chicken, dinner 短语：for breakfast/lunch/dinner 句子：1. I like . for breakfast/lunch/dinner. 2. He likes. 【范文欣赏】 I like eggs and hamburgers for breakfast. Mike doesnt like tomatoes or bread for breakfast. I dont like broccoli or apples for lunch. Mike likes cola and French
16、 fries for lunch. Mike likes vegetables and meat for dinner. I dont like dessert or chicken for dinner.点评：本文谈论自己和朋友Mike -日三餐喜欢的食物和不喜欢的食物。 短文从早餐到晚餐，列举具体喜爱的食物或不喜爱的食物，条理清晰，所用语言简洁，全篇行文流畅。从句子可以看出，文中使用了句型“I like.”和“Mikelikes.”表达喜爱。用“I dont like.”和“Mike doesnt like.”来说出不喜欢的食物，作者正确地表达了喜恶。【写作针对性训练】 根据实际情况，描写
17、自己及一位家庭成员的一日三餐好恶。 Unit 7 How much are these socks?创新写作指导【首尾呼应法写广告词】1. 开门见山进行宣传，多为号召性语言。 如：Come and buy your clothes at great sale! Come and look at the clothes for yourself.2介绍产品物美价廉，有各种样式可供选择，针对不同人群有不同样式，达到激发顾客购买欲望的目的，细节要具体到品种、颜色、价位等句式可有：品种：Do you need.? / Do you like？/ For，we have/ You can buy/ We
18、 sell颜色：We havein价位：We haveat very good prices/We haveonly for/We sell.only for.3画龙点睛，首尾呼应，再次号召：Come to buy some good clothes!【易错点提示】在写价钱的时候，注意美元“$”，元“RMB”的符号，如果用符号，钱数要跟在其后，yuan单复数同形，而dollar的复数需加s。【典例】毛毛服装店开张了，请你根据提示写一篇60词左右的广告。要求：广告简单易懂，同时突出商品的亮点。 要求灵活运用所学过的单词、短语及句子。 要写清商品及价格。【参考词汇】：单词：store, hat,
19、bag, socks, skirt, sweater. price, yourself, color 短语：at a very good price, bags for sports, football socks, come and see, have a look at., different colors句子：We have.for. For boys, you can buy. For girls, we have. .【建议模块】开头：（点出商店名字）Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Clothes Store!正文：（所售商品及价格）We ha
20、ve + 商品名 (hats, bags, skirts.) + for + (价格). For boys. For girls.结尾：（宣传语） Come and see for yourself!【范文欣赏】 Maomao Clothes Store Sale!Come and buy your clothes at Maomao Clothes Store! Do you like hats? We have black and blue hats for Y12. We have sweaters at a very good price-only￥60 ! Do you need b
21、ags for sports? We have great bags for only￥45. For boys, you can buy football socks for only￥8. For girls, we have skirts in different colorsfor only￥18! Come and see for yourself!点评：全文简单明了，开篇点明服装店名称，用了号召句型如句；后又用几个疑问句引出所谈商品如句和句，亲切而自然，句式灵活；句子运用准确如句，We have.；短语运用也恰当如in different colors，让人印象深刻，语言流畅，重点
22、突出；最后句与首句呼应，再次点题。【写作针对性训练】 请根据所提供的信息，给一家商店写广告词。1. skirts 2. shirts 3.T- shirts 4. trousers 5. shoes 6. socks Big Sale ! Liangli Clothes Store Come to Liangli Unit 8 When is your birthday?创新写作指导【三步五要素法介绍自己朋友家人】1.写作思路分三步 第一步：确定介绍的对象、内容及其顺序。 第二步：列举介绍自己朋友家人的句型，多多益善。 第三步：成段成篇，修订完善。2文章内容的五要素 姓名性别：（姓、名、中文名
23、英文名）My name is./My first/ last name is. 年龄出生日期出生地：I am. years old. 爱好：I like playing the piano. 所在学校和班级：I am at. Middle SchoolI am in Class.，Grade.。 联系方式（电话号码、邮箱等）：My telephone number is. 补充：如果所介绍的朋友是外国人还需要介绍其国籍。【范文欣赏】 My name is Jin Lin. I am at the age of thirteen. And I am a student at No.2 Middl
24、e School. My birthday is on October 3rd. In my family, there are four people. They are my father,my mother, my sister and me. My father and my mother are both doctors. My fathers birthday is on April 13th, and my mothers birthday is on July 10th. When is my sisters birthday? Its on August 14th. And
25、she is nine years old this year. When is your birthday?点评：该文采用“三步五要素法”介绍自己和家人。作者开篇充分运用本单元重点句型介绍自己的姓名、年龄、职业、出生日期等信息，如厕线部分；接下来又介绍了自己家庭成员的信息，也都运用到了本单元重点句型及日期表达法；收篇时作者用所学句型提出问题，自然结束；该文章条理清楚，语句通顺，用词得当。将提示中的信息都写入了文章。【写作针对性训练】 根据下面的信息写一篇短文，了解和介绍这些名人。Edison爱迪生1847 -2 -11 AmericaLu Xun鲁迅1881-9 - 25 ChinaLi S
26、iguang李四光1889 -10-26 ChinaNewton牛顿1643 -1-4 EnglandCurie居里夫人1867-11-7 French要求：1.词数60左右。 2介绍中包括名人的姓名、出生日期、国籍等。 3可适当发挥参考词汇：be from.来自， was born on，出生于（天）scientist科学家， writer作家 Unit 9 My favorite subject is science.创新写作指导【三步三层法写信发邮件谈论个人喜好】1写作思路分三步 第一步：确定写信的对象及谈论的话题。如最喜欢(不喜欢)的学科、老师、一天等； 第二步：运用品质形容词来谈论喜
27、欢（不喜欢）的理由； 第三步：描写自己最喜欢的事物及平时的一些做法。2文章的结构分三层 第一层：起篇（开头句）； 第二层：正文谈论自己最喜欢的事物，同时运用品质形容词来描述喜欢的原因； 第三层：收篇（结尾句）。【范文欣赏】Dear Frank, As a middle school student, I go to school from Monday to Friday. I have seven classes every day: four in the morning and three in the afternoon. Among all the lessons, my favor
28、ite subject is English because English is very important. Whats more, my English teacher Ms Li often makes her class very interesting. And she is very friendly to me. So I often listen to her carefully in class. After class I often ask her questions about English. Ms Li also tells me to watch Englis
29、h movies on weekends. It is really useful. I love English best, and l will study very hard to get good grades. Yours, Tom点评：作者开篇介绍自己的身份及自己每天的课程；正文部分运用because, so. and, also, whats more等连词分层介绍自己喜欢的课程及理由，而且介绍了自己的做法；最后收篇介绍自己今后的想法。【写作针对性训练】 假设你是Gina，你的笔友John写信想了解一下你目前所在的年级和在校的学习情况，请你写信告诉他你最喜欢的科目及原因，并向他介
30、绍你最喜欢的老师及原因。要求：1.词数80左右；2叙事清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯；3文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。参考词汇：1表示并列、转折或原因的词：and，but，because.2表示喜好的词汇：like，lovefavorite.3表示品质的形容词：interesting, kind, friendly.4拓展词汇：among.在之中（三者以上）， whats more而且， be strict严格的， get good grades取得好成绩Dear John， 创新写作针对性训练参考答案Unit 1 创新写作 参考答案Dear Jennifer, My full name is Ka
31、te Jane Brown. Kate is my first name and Jane is my middle name. Brown is my last name. I am a student at No. 2 Middle School in Nanjing. I am /n Class 12, Grade l, and I am 12 years old now. My favorite color is blue. My telephone number is 184-3546. I have a good friend at school Her name is Mary.
32、 Her phone number is 254-3975 Whats your telephone number? Can you write and tell me about you? Yours, KateUnit 2 创新写作 参考答案Dear Rosie, Here is a photo of my family. There are ten people in my family. These are my grandparents. And this is my father and that is my mother. My parents are teachers. The girl is my sister. Her name is Anna. This boy is my brother, Tom. Those are my uncle and aunt. And that boy is my cousin, M
