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1、托福综合写作备考建议 托福综合写作是托福写作中的第一项，综合写作的难点在于它将阅读、写作和听力融合在一起，所以备考过程中不仅要提高写作能力，还要提高听力和阅读能力。今天给大家带来了托福综合写作备考：3点建议助你备考更轻松,希望能够帮助到大家，一起来学习吧。托福综合写作备考：3点建议助你备考更轻松一.快速阅读，记录关键信息英美人写*的总体逻辑可以概括为总分或总分总。而托福综合写作的阅读材料多为前者布局，且多为四段式(首段总起，三段分别展开)。首段主要用来提供背景信息或者提出话题，(注意：阅读和听力是同一个话题，极少考到观点相互补，多为观点相对立。)而作者的立场或论点多位于首段的最后一句，聪明的考
2、生会把注意力多集中于首段的尾句，确定作者的立论点，从而对于下一阶段的听力大致话题和论述做到心中有底。随后的段落即展开给出作者之所以立论的三个分论点或论据，在单个的段落当中，又遵循了西方人惯有的总分模式，单个段落的首句多为topic sentence，考生可以只关注三个段落的首句以快速获取段落主要内容，从而避免全文通读速度不够而导致的来不及看完阅读。二.记下说话人的观点和论点听力环节的笔记很重要，是决定综合写作能否顺利完成的关键因素。没有经过训练或者疏于练习的同学会对于该记什么无从下手，结果就是笔记做了，自己看不懂，或者笔记太过凌乱，毫无可利用性。要知道听力该记什么怎么记，此时应当牢记心里的仍然
3、是西方人的逻辑性。“总分”表明了在听力的开始段是表明说话者立场和论点的，那么按照我们之前分析的，阅读和听力必然是同主题，所以听力开始时候大家不必忙着乱记一通，事实上，什么都不用写，镇定情绪，听清说话者的立场即可。接着，和阅读中相似，说话者会从三个方面阐述支持自己的观点，很多情况下，这三点和阅读中的三点是刚好契合，一一对应的。但听力三方面的分论据往往是从阅读中无法推断的，所以分论点及论据是需要同学进行笔记的，应当记的是key words，切忌洋洋洒洒想记全一句话，最后自己也难以读懂。三.提高记忆力，扩充记忆容量各位考生不妨观察一下自己抄写英文句子的情况。大多数未经训练的第二语言学习者很可能都是每
4、写下一个词就要回去重新读一次才能继续抄下去-有的时候甚至可能需要每写一个字母就要返回文本重看一眼才能继续。这说明此人的记忆容量只能容纳一个词(或者甚至连一个词都容纳不了)。记忆容量大的人理解文本更为容易，又因为能够理解所以记忆文本更加容易，进而又因为能够记得住而联系上下文更为轻松，而记忆容量过小的人基本上连看完一篇*都非常吃力。不过，只要稍加训练，记忆容量就会扩充至足够用的地步。迅速将自己的英文记忆容量提高到“够用”的地步，最好的方法就是通过“跟读”、“朗读”训练平日积累。因为朗读可以非常有效而又迅速地提高文字理解能力。这很关键，记不住的最重要原因并非记忆力差-无论记忆力多好，都很难记住无法理
5、解、无法关联的信息-听得懂才容易记得住。托福考试作文独立写作范文：搬去新地方会失去老朋友吗Agree or disagree:it is often not a good city to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose touch with old friends.真题重现It is not a good thing to move to a new cityor country because we will lose old friends.该题目从题型分类上来讲，不属于常见题型(绝对型、对比型、建议型)，
6、其最显著的特征是题目本身带有一个因果关系：因为会失去老朋友，所以搬到一个新地方不是一件好的事情。严格来讲，如果从同意的角度来写，思路可能会受到题目的限制，即只能想到从失去老朋友这个角度来论证搬去新地方不好。所以这种题目从不同意的角度更容易写出逻辑严谨，内容丰富的*。下面的范文采取不同意的立场，主体段第一段写，搬去新地方不见得会失去老朋友，因为通讯工具日益发达;第二个主体段写，就算老朋友有些疏远，也不能因此断定搬去新地方不好，反而可以开始一段新生活、了解新的文化、结交新的朋友。范文参考一:As the technology of public transportation keeps advan
7、cing, more citizens can choose to dwell in the cities that are beneficial to their own development. Inevitably, there occurs a controversy whether moving to a new city or country will lead to the rupture of relationship among friends. From my perspective, I think the statement is not sensible.Firstl
8、y, moving to a new country or city will not result in the loss of old friends. To be more specific, the maintenance of friendship doesnt lie in how far they live with each other and the development of technology has diversified the ways of interacting with friends. The invention of cellphones break
9、the shackles caused by distance and overseas students can choose to communicate with their family members and friends through a variety of Apps like WeChat that makes video calls possible. Except for that, by looking at the pictures popping up all over the social media like Facebook, people can easi
10、ly capture what is happening to their friends. For instance, my friend Selina took selfie in the Sydney Opera House a week ago and I would learn that she was having fun in the Australia with her picture posted on the Instagram. Therefore, a wide range of advanced electronic gadgets can be used to su
11、stain friendship.Moreover, instead of losing old friends, city migrants can even enlarge their social circles and achieve more success. Restricted in a city for a long period, people may be trapped in a situation that would block their development and they can gain refreshing experience while immigr
12、ating to a new city. My friend of Mine named Michael served as a Market Analyst in a renewed company in Beijing. However, he couldnt see any progress in recent years and then an opportunity comes out. Because of his five-year working experience, a foreign trade cooperation tried to recruit him as th
13、e Market Analyst because the firm was planning to start a new program. Then he grasped the chance and earn a challenging life that he likes even though he was required to work in Shanghai. Our relationship have not experienced any interruption and his strong ability of being adapted to the new envir
14、onment helps him to make lots of new friends. Accordingly, moving to a new city can, occasionally, help to break the deadlock in our professions.Admittedly, it can be sensible that friends can be estranged owing to the long distance with each other. Specifically speaking, the chances to meet with ea
15、ch other will be limited a lot. However, as I just put, for one thing, people can talk with each other through various social network software. For another thing, the distance between cities is not a problem anymore since there have been many public transportation tools like the high-speed trains an
16、d airplanes that will lead us to anyplace we try to go in a very short period.In a word, moving to a new city or a new country is good choice under some circumstance. Besides, the highly developed technology can help to strengthen the relations with our friends and the possibilities of living a diff
17、erent life and achieving success can both explain why I stand by the statement that it is a good thing to move to a new city.写作参考二:In this day and age, globalization allows people from every corner of the world to travel around and even settle down easily at almost any place they favor. Is it a good
18、 thing for people to move to a new town or new country? Opinions vary about this issue. Some people oppose it by arguing that moving away means the loss of old friends. From my view, it is not true. Instead, moving to a new place might lead one to a new world.To begin with, moving to a new place doe
19、s not necessarily weaken the bond between friends. This is mostly because modern means of communication allows people to keep close contact with friends even hundreds of miles away. Therefore, it is not uncommon that friends who have not seen each other for years might know about one anothers life q
20、uite well and still have much in common. For example, a person moving from Shanghai to New York can easily get in touch with his friends at home through the simultaneous communication tools such as MSN, Weichat and so on. It is incredible that these tools can make it possible to transmit not only vo
21、ice and image but also real time video! Chatting with friends like this is of no difference from talking face to face. Besides, the popular online social network such as Facebook provides a platform for people to share important moments with friends by posting pictures and videos online anywhere and
22、 anytime. It is not exaggerated to say that technology has transcended space and time; distance, a traditional friendship killer, would beat a retreat in front of modern technology.Secondly, even if old friends are not as close as before, it is not justified to say that moving to a new place is not
23、advisable. People move to different places for a variety of reasons ranging from career development to a new start of life. In this case, old friendship should not become a hindrance to ones development. On the other hand, old friends might be strong supporters of those who have decided to move. A n
24、ew job opportunity in a larger market might exploit the greatest potentials of a sales person, whose talents would otherwise be stifled in a small retail store at home. A lady troubled by marriage issues might start a new family and open a new page of life in another country, where no one knows abou
25、t her past. Thus, the possibility of losing old friends is not strongenough to judge whether moving to a new place is good or not.In conclusion, even though moving to a new town or country might risk the loss of friends, moderntechnology has managed to minimize such risk. Besides, choosing where to
26、live depends on a combination of factors, which is too complicated to be justified by the state of old friendship.写作参考二:With the progress of urbanization, an increasing number of people are leaving their hometown and moving to a new place, which has aroused deeply social concern. When asked about wh
27、ether it is advisable to move to a new city or country, many people, if not the most, are strong believers of the claim that moving to a new place leads to the loss of old friends. However, in my eyes, the above claim doesnt bear more analysis.First of all, moving to a new place does not necessarily
28、 mean loss of old friends, in that the distance between people is no longer an obstacle for maintaining a friendship with the help of advanced communication devices and means of transportation. For one thing, such communication devices as telephones and the internet have made it possible to keep in
29、touch with friends living far away from us. With the camera and microphone, our facial expressions and voice can be immediately transmitted to others, which is just like a face-to-face communication. For another, by using the well-developed transportation system , we are able to reach nearly anywher
30、e in the world within a day. Take my own experience as an example. Last summer, Jack, one of my best friend, went to America for his masters degree while I stayed in China for my study. However, this distance has never alienated our relationship, in that we often chatted online with Skype and even I
31、 took the international flight to visit him several times. While staying in America, we traveled together and had lots of fun, which would definitely enhance our friendship.Furthermore, moving to a new city or country will provide us with a good opportunity to meet new friends and gain more opportun
32、ities to achieve success. On one hand, it is self-evident that a new environment enables us to make acquaintance with more people from different background, thereby enlarging our social circle. This is especially true of moving to a foreign country. While staying in a foreign country, we can not onl
33、y experience the exotic culture and conventions but also establish friendship with native people there. On the other hand, moving to a new city matters a lot to job seekers, especially those coming from rural areas. My brother, a bachelor of art, is a good case in point. While staying in hometown, h
34、e had no choice but to work in a local factory with low salary and little possibility to get a promotion. However, when he moved to Beijing, the situation became totally different. He used what he learned in college to land a good job in a large advertisement company and excelled at his jobs. Now he
35、 has become the manager of designing department. Therefore, I believe that it is the moving that has changed his path of life .To sum up, we can conclude that it is a good choice to move to a new place because we can make more new friends and obtain more opportunities instead of losing old friends.
36、Therefore, a new environment is full of challenges and fun.托福考试作文独立写作范文：现在父母养孩子更容易了吗Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for parents to raise their children than 50 years ago.写作参考:Taking a panoramic picture of human evolution, family education has been playing a very i
37、mportant role, especially in modern days. When it comes to the question of whether or not raising kids is easier than before. I, personally, think that parenting has becoming more and more difficult based on the following reasons.First off, with the advent of technological gadgets kids are now more
38、susceptible to negative information on-line, making it tough for parents to monitor and guide their kids behavior and mindset. As we all know, with the appearance of smart phones, tablets and computer laptops, it is easier for people of all age groups, including adolescents and teenagers, to get acc
39、ess to all kinds of information. To be more specific, celebrities especially entertainers, like movies stars, sports giants and pop singers are such bad exemplars for kids since they are constantly involved in sex scandals, abusive use of drugs, random hookups, getting rehabilitation. Kids, who are
40、in their formative years, are not immune to these negative influence. Therefore, it is becoming absolutely tough for parents to guide them and any negligence might lead to be catastrophic for the kids future development.Additionally, parents are so overwhelmed with their career and they tend to be n
41、egligent about their kids. Kids, on the other hand, without guidance from their parents tend to have both psychological and physical problems. A recent study done by National Society of Developmental Psychology indicates that there is a positive correlation between the parents working time and the l
42、ikelihood for kids to experience psychological and physical problems in their adolescence. Indeed, fathers and mothers are more stressful and inclined to work more hours than those who did a few decades ago, leaving them little time to hang out and caress their kids. To make matters worse, kids who
43、might experience unparalleled peer pressure, bullying and other kinds of school clich are not able to get appropriate and timely instruction and encouragement from their parents, increasing the risk of a series of developmental problems. For instance, they might get addicted to computer games, invol
44、ve in early sex, and even have marijuana and drinking problems.In conclusion, due to the susceptibility of kids when exposed to negative information on-line or else and the parents lack of time spent with their kids, it is getting more difficult to raise kids now and kids are inclined to have both psychological and physical problems in their formative years.托福
