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1、GRE写作易错扣分原因分析 GRE作文满分为6分，一般来说，考生如果能考出4分的成绩，就可以说是相当不错了。下面就和大家分享GRE写作易错扣分原因分析，来欣赏一下吧。GRE写作易错扣分原因分析GRE写作词句类扣分原因词汇拼写错误单词拼写错误是GRE写作中最不划算的扣分项，虽然少量的拼写错误可能不会对整体得分产生太大影响，但如果拼错较多，就会影响观感。建议大家写完*后再快速浏览一遍，检查一下是否存在拼写错误。用词重复问题用词重复的问题常见于一些词汇量不足的考生写出的*中。反复使用同一个词汇，会让你的*显得累赘啰嗦，也间接暴露出你英文底子不够词汇准备不充分的问题，是写作的大忌。建议考生在写作时间使
2、用多样化的词汇彰显你的底蕴。用错复杂句式GRE写作不需要用太过于复杂的句式，考生不要为了*好看就强行使用自己没有把握的复杂句式，如果写出的复杂句存在各种语法错误，反而会画蛇添足。记住一句话：用最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息。当然，如果一定要追求句子漂亮，考生可以在作文中放入插入语，伴随状语等形式，这样也可以让*更显出色。GRE写作结构类扣分问题论述逻辑不通老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑，特别是GRE考试考察的一大重点就是逻辑思维能力。而且GRE两篇作文的题材都是很重视*整体逻辑自洽通顺的议论文。所以在GRE作文里请务必把*的分段写清楚，全文逻辑架构最好也能够列好提纲再写，让考官能够一眼就看清楚
3、你的逻辑结构，体现出*的清晰逻辑思路。首尾段没写好作文的开头和结尾都很重要，好的开头能直抒观点，开门见山;好的结尾能总结全文，升华主题。因此，开头结尾对于全文来说会起到很大的作用，切忌头重脚轻，更不能因为时间不够就草草收尾甚至忽略了结尾。GRE写作其它扣分原因作文篇幅太短作文字数不够，*篇幅过短是GRE高分作文的大忌。虽然GRE作文没有硬性规定的字数要求，但无论如何，*一定要具备一定篇幅，篇幅长短从一定程度上代表了考生的创作能力。太短的*既无法讲清楚要表达的意思，也很容易让考生显得缺乏写作能力。GRE作文范文：lawsGRE写作练习题目：lawsIt is possible to pass l
4、aws that control or place limits on peoples behavior， but legislation cannot reform human nature. Laws cannot change what is in peoples hearts and minds.通过法律可以控制或者限制人们的行为，但是立法是无法改变人类本性的。法律无法改变人们的感情和思想。GRE写作范文：Ever since the Code of Hammurapi comes into being， laws have begun to put restrictions on p
5、eoples behaviors and have played an important role in the maintenance of social order. But aside from its impact on shaping public deportment， legislation is of no avail to reform human nature as well as mankind thoughts.Our collective life experience is that we make choices and decisions every day-
6、under a legal system. No one is ever granted the rights to surpass the boundary of laws; otherwise there may be lack of protection for private property and personal right from being violated. Common sense tells us that the laws will punish the wrongdoers severely sometimes so harshly even to sentenc
7、e the felons to death. It is the awe to controlling authority as well as the fear of castigation that made most of the people away from the illicit behaviors. Laws， for better or worse， have put up a paradigm on which people abide by， for the sake of personal interests and the social stability as we
8、ll.Laws can exert their influences on peoples “hands and legs”， but when it comes to mans hearts and minds， it cannot. In the long history of its development， laws change over time and vary from region to region not to alter human nature but to be flexible enough to take account of various circumsta
9、nces， times and places. The end of a legal system impels laws to evolve to keep pace with changing mores， customers， and our collective sense of equity but with little concern for the reconstruction of human thoughts. Bigamy， to be commonly regarded as illegal in most countries， is yet legitimate in
10、 some Arabian countries. For Islamic， outlawing bigamy seems an impinge upon their religious freedom of choosing mates. Instead of bringing about a revolution in the conception of marriage among Islamic disciples， laws give way to the entrenched customers. Still more， from the psychotic analysis ang
11、le， that laws will change nature is further doubted. Sigmund Freud has divided the individual personality into threefold： the id， the ego and the super ego. The ego， as the surface of the nature and the part you show the world， is governed by the “reality principle，” otherwise known as laws.However，
12、 so powerless are laws to extend its impacts on the id and the superego remains below， each has its own significant effects on the personality. A rapist， for example， despite years of imprisonment may still relapse into outrages in that laws fail to civilize the id desires composing of instinctual d
13、rives. By no means can laws alone alter our nature. Were laws by itself be able to cause a change in the human nature and exercise a fundamental influence on peoples hearts and minds， then it would probably be no need for its existence. People at no time can ever have imagined this.In fact， to truly
14、 change the human nature， it is through the synergic efforts associating the education， moral and ethic social interactions altogether that brought about a reconstruction of human nature.In conclusion， in spite the fact that we may live in a harmonious society with the implementation of the laws， it
15、 seems unthinkable for laws to undertake the role as a reformer in rebuilding mans nature as well as hearts and minds.GRE作文范文：成功Success, whether academic or professional, involves an ability to survive in a new environment and, eventually, to change it.GRE作文范文参考：Many wonder the intrinsic impact of i
16、ndustrial revolution over the last century. Is it a blessing or a curse? Ever since the invention of steam engine, mass production enabled factories to make out products in a madly efficient manner, while machines also supplanted innumerous traditionally skilled artisan, forcing them out of work. Go
17、ne are the days when they boasted of their craftsmanship that they assumed to be able support their family all their life. Consumers became more aspiring to novel design instead of durability as goods were made to be discarded.Hundreds years later, with the first installation of integrated circuit o
18、n the chip, another profound turnover took place. Now the computer pervades our life so much that one may find himself half illiterate in absence of input skill. This time, thousands of jobs were created in Silicon Valley, transforming some of the few into billionaire over one night. Nevertheless, t
19、he original inventor might not expect that the ensuing slow down and thus recession in IT sector would approach so soon in less than 10 years, which is obviously less than a presumable 15 years time normal for a periodical change.Positive or negative, one mark that characterizes the technological bo
20、mbardment indicates a constant fact: changes exist ubiquitously and operating at an ever-increasing tempo; those who fail to catch up with the torrent of change would ineluctably engulfed by billows, floating no where and eventually dissolve as negligible bubbles.Favors as well as opportunities goes
21、 to who adapt to the contemporary trend. Fully recognizing this axiom, long before the scientists announced accomplishment of sketches of human genes or earlier successful cloning of Doris, candidates preparing for university admission have smelt the sense. Today, in the U.S., biology and its branch
22、 disciplines become the first choice for top students of senior high, determining that this subject, foretold as the third wave in technology, could bring them brilliant future as “Bill Gates” dreamt the same in the previous wave.In addition to academic realm, respect would be paid to people who tho
23、ugh deprived of their past secure professions, choose not to be a loser in the whimsical society. Like the artisans who lost jobs, a vast number of skilled laborer in Chinas city of Wengzhou have undergone darkness and depression in those old days. However, after years of endeavor and refinement, th
24、ey prove their value again. By accurately posit the economic trend and market demand, they play an active role in almost all economic sectors, garments, catering and lodging, hi-tech industry, you name it.While ability honed in surviving the fickleness of the world makes the path through success sho
25、rter, it is essential for the more ambitious to acquire the pith of reformist and lead the trend. In this way, it could help him distinguish from the mediocracy and platitude. This is absolutely not an easy task. Inborn insight and foresight are needed to tell uncommon out of the commonplace; extrao
26、rdinary perseverance and encouragement is a must to face the coming challenges against his iconoclasm. Very few people crowned with triumph possess this quality, whether the Nobel Prize winner or those who makes coverage on the Times.In sum, as shown in the course of history, success, whether academic or professional,involves an ability to surviving in a new environment and-, eventually, -to change it.Now some elite persons have again forecast that another social change is impending.Are you ready for that?GRE写作
