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1、如何写好书面表达句子,1.A way of saying“Im sorry”2.Patting the stomach before a meal.3.The bread my mother makes is much better than what you can buy at the store.4.To make friends in the school which was not far from my new home.,Practice:判断是否是句子。,(N),(Y),(N),(N),无论字数多少，只要有主语和谓语（动词），而且能表达完整的意义的一句话就是一个句子。(1)I
2、am tired.(2)Pressing ones palm together and resting ones head on the back of ones hand while closing the eyes as if sleeping means“I am tired.”（双手合拢，闭上眼，把头靠在手背上像睡觉 的样子，意思是说“我累了。”）,(1)Come in and sit down,please.(You),省略主语(或主谓语)的句子,(2)What a terrible day!=(What a terrible day it is!),1)Working hard,y
3、ou will make greater progress.2)Work hard and youll make greater progress.3)If you work hard,you will make greater progress.,努力学习，你就会有进步。,1.辨别下列句子种类(简单句/并列句/复合句),1)Working hard,you will make greater progress.简单句:只有一个主语(或并列主语)和一个谓语(或并列谓语).2)Work hard and youll make greater progress.并列句:由并列连词把两个(以上)的简
4、单句连在一起.并列连词:and,not onlybut also,neithernor,but,so,for,or(否则).3)If you work hard,you will make greater progress.复合句:简单句中的某一个成分由一个句子来充当.复合句种类:名词性从句/定语从句/状语从句.,典型错误：1)The old man likes take a walk in the village after supper.The old man likes taking a walk in the village after supper.2)I enjoy talk wi
5、th him over a cup of coffee.I enjoy talking with him over a cup of coffee.,一个简单句不能同时有两个谓语,记住：在英语中,一个句子必须且只能有一个谓语或并列谓语。,(1)要赶上别人，你最好更努力。(2)这事故是怎么发生的？How did the accident occur/happen/come about?,二.常见的五大句型,主语+不及物动词(occur,happen,break out,take place,come about,rise.),To catch up with others,youd better
6、 work harder.,常见的系动词:be,seem,appear,become,go,get,grow,turn,look,sound,feel,taste,smell,2.主语+系动词+表语,他烧的饭菜味道很不错.What he cooks tastes delicious.(2)集邮听起来是个好主意.Collecting stamps sounds a good idea.,3.主语+及物动词+宾语,他不知道Bill是否已逃脱.He wondered if Bill had managed to escape.(2)我原不想这么粗鲁.I didnt mean to be so rud
7、e.(3)我外甥每天下午练习弹钢琴三个小时.My nephew practises playing the piano for three hours every afternoon.,4.主语+及物动词+间接宾语+直接宾语,give,offer,teach,tell,read,bring,pass,lend,write,throw,send,ask,make,buy,do,get,cook,sing,(1)My mother would read me a story before I went to bed.My mother would read a story to me before
8、 I went to bed.(2)Buy me a morning newspaper,please.Buy a morning newspaper for me,please.,5.主语+及物动词+宾语+宾补,Angrily,he found his money stolen.(2)The growth in population made New York the largest city in the USA.(3)你认为一天内完成这任务可能吗?Do you think it possible to finish the task in one day?(4)他让我在大门口等了一小时了
9、。He kept me waiting for an hour at the gate.,高考书面表达部分句型,【N2003】Its a small flat of 25 square meters,with a bedroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.【N2000】The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west.【浙2006】Some others have just the opposite opinion.【N1998】The farm workers gave us a warm wel
10、come.【N2001】The government called on schools to reduce the learning load.,【浙2006】The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.【N2000】I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street.【N2002】40%think that fee
11、s should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers.【浙2005】but the most common way is to hold a birthday party,at which friends get together to have fun drinking,singing and dancing.,记住：如果是一个复合句，主句和从句都应该分别有 自己的主语和谓语。典型错误：1)Those who eat too much will easily ill.Those who ea
12、t too much will easily get ill.2)When he walking in the park,he felt a little tired.When(he was)walking in the park,he felt a little tired.,【浙2006】I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and【浙2006】In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on
13、 it.【浙2004】Besides plenty of examples,it has many notes telling you how to use a word.,三.写作中的句型转换,把其中一句改为分词短语He had finished supper.He went out to have a walk then.,Having finished supper/After finishing supper,he went out to have a walk.,A.合并为简单句,三.写作中的句型转换,2.把其中一句改为介词短语He was brought in.His hands
14、were tied behind his back.,He was brought in with his hands tied behind his back.,B.合并为复合句1.The Chinese artists were to perform here that night.The news cheered every one of us.用同位语从句,The news that the Chinese artists were to perform here that night cheered every one of us.,2.In recent years,Beijing
15、 has been advancing very fast.All this makes peoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.用非限制性定语从句,In recent years,Beijing has been advancing very fast,which makespeoples lives convenient,pleasant and colorful.,C.把复合句改为简单句,She was anxious to find a job after she finished her studies.,Having finis
16、hed her studies/After finishing her studies,she was anxious to find a job.,1.把从句改为分词短语,C.把复合句或并列句改为简单句,2.把其中一句改用介词短语,We are having classes and the doors are open all the time.,We are having classes with the doorsopen all the time.,四.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,1.Though he is wealth
17、y,he works hard.,Wealthy as/though he is,he works hard.,In spite of/Despite his wealth,he works hard.,四.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,2.He didnt get up until 7 oclock.,It was not until 7 oclock that he got up.,Not until 7 oclock did he get up.,3.As soon as we arrived at the village,w
18、e were warmly welcomed by the villagers.(尝试多样化表达),On arriving at the village，we were warmly.,The moment/minute/instant we arrived at the village,we were,We were warmly welcomed by thevillagers immediately/directly/instantly we arrived at the village.,No sooner/Hardly had we arrived at the village th
19、an/when we,五.using“advanced words”,使用词组、习语谚语、表强调的词来代替一些单词，以增加文采。,1.Dont worry about your expensesfor university education,and we will try to help you.,and we will make the greatesteffort/do our best/try every meansto help you.,2.At that time the taxi driver had to ask the tourist for help.,At that t
20、ime the taxi driver had no choice but to turn to/couldnt help but turn to the tourist.,I came up with a good idea.,3.I had a good idea.,A good idea occurred to/struck/came to me.,简单句,分词短语,介词短语,复合句,把复合句改为简单句,把从句改为分词短语,把从句改为介词短语,三.避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如倒装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语等.,四.使用高级词汇代替一些单词，以增加文采。,一.写对每一个简单句
21、,二.句型转换,-写好书面表达句子,1.They arrived at the school.They felt the happy atmosphere.,Practice-合并下列句子,When they arrived at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,Arriving at the school,they felt the happy atmosphere.,2.I will be given another chance.I will succeed.3.He wants to improve his English.He s
22、tudies hard.,If I am given another chance,I will succeed.,Given another chance,I will succeed.,In order to improve his English,he studies hard.,听到这个消息,他们变的很激动._the news,they got excited.2.尽管被告知许多遍,他仍然重复这个错._many times,he still repeated the mistake.3.除非被邀请发言,你应该在会议上保持沉默.Unless _to speak,you should ke
23、ep silent at the meeting.,Hearing,Having been told,invited,用非谓语动词形式填充,用非谓语动词形式翻译,1.面对困难时，他从不放弃。2.引入市场后，该产品大获成功。3.做完作业后，他回家了。,Faced with/Facing difficulties,he never gives up.,Introduced to the market,the product made a great success.,Having finished his homework/After finishing his homework,he retur
24、ned home.,On the other side of the street stands a clock tower.,她怀里抱着个婴儿在校门口等人.(用介词短语),She is waiting for someone at the school gate with a baby in her arms.,街的另一边有一座钟塔.(用倒装结构),尝试多样化表达方式,一就受到欢迎,As soon as Lien Zhan and his wife arrived at the airport,they were warmly welcomed.On arriving at the airp
25、ort,Lien Zhan and his wifeLien Zhan and his wife were warmly welcomed directly/the moment they arrived at the airport.No sooner/Hardly had Lien Zhan and his wife arrived at the airport than/when they.,2011年一位用行动宣讲环保概念的年轻人“低碳哥(Low-carbon Brother)”在网上走红了。他的主要做法有：1.捡起废纸，用空白一面写字。2.不开灯看电视，还把电视亮度调到最低（mini
26、mum）。3.上班骑自行车，不开车等。请根据以上提示，写一篇短文介绍低碳生活（生活作息时所耗用的能量要尽力减少，从而减低二氧化碳的排放量）并阐述自己对这种低碳生活的看法。注意：1.对所给要点逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。2.词数120左右。,A young man called Low-Carbon Brother became a hit on the Internet in 2011.He suggests living a low-carbon life,which means using less enery in our daily life so that we can hel
27、p reduce carbon dioxide in the air.For example,he always picks up some waste paper on the street and uses the blank side to write something.While he is watching TV,he always turns down the brightness to the minimum and turns off the light.Besides,he goes to work by bike instead of driving.Some people think what he is doing is just a show.No one can live such a simple life with so many modern inventions around us.As far as I am concerned,I strongly support his idea and his behavior.,Bye-bye,
