GRE写作4条学习经验.doc

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1、GRE写作4条学习经验 GRE写作中能够同时兼顾立论文ISSUE和驳论文ARGUMENT两篇作文高分的考生较少,许多同学都是在保证一篇*平均水平的前提下努力写好另一篇*来提分的。下面就和大家分享GRE写作4条学习经验值,来欣赏一下吧。GRE写作4条学习经验合理使用模板摆脱依赖心理很多同学很依赖写作模板,但其实对于写作来说,那不是最好的办法,模板就好比克隆,缺少了独一无二的特点,这样的作文会无法引起大家的共鸣,作文的手段感觉很重要,作文的字数不用特意的去限制,我考试那篇写的很长,照样是满分,大家要稳住心态,然后接下来就自由发挥好了。控制*字数篇幅保证质量很多考生说作文写个500-600够了,还有

2、的人说高分大概需要600可以了。但是我考试的作文大概写了750-800字呢,感觉上我是一个以量取胜的人,虽然训练初期我也只写500左右,但是积累到40多篇以后,我感觉自己的作文水平就有了质的飞跃,我觉得一般的*都能写到700字,有些难度的也能写到600字左右,或许字数多未必能够拿满分,但是字数多了绝对是你词汇量掌握的多的体现。列提纲练习尽量覆盖整个题库issue的提纲我大概写了160累都累死。虽然我知道没有必要全写完,而且写到后面都大同小异了,但是我觉得写提纲不能只写中心句,还应该包括怎样展开的思路,和一些经典的例子, 如果自己不会展开的论点是一点意义都没有的。所以我认为写提纲其实是比较痛苦的

3、,尤其是对文思不敏捷的数理科生来说,还是很有必要。考前机经作文题需反复练习我想对于机经的重要性我不用再说了。因为机经对于我们来说太重要了呀,我抽到的题目就是写过的,而且幸运的是我在考前几天还看过,精心准备过,这一点我得感谢老天的眷顾。GRE写作满分范文Our?declining?environment?may?bring?the?people?of?the?world?together?as?no?politician,?philosopher,?or?war?ever?could.?Environmental?problems?are?global?in?scope?and?respect?

4、no?nations?boundaries.?Therefore,?people?are?faced?with?the?choice?of?unity?and?cooperation?on?the?one?hand?or?disunity?and?a?common?tragedy?on?the?other.?Environmental?problems?will?require?a?joint?efferct?amoung?people?to?solve,?however,?environmental?problems?may?not?cause?people?to?come?together

5、.?Should?the?problems?continue?for?an?extended?period?of?time?before?any?effert?is?made?to?solve?them,?they?will?reach?a?point?of?no?return?no?matter?how?people?come?together?to?work?on?it.?When?this?happens?there?will?be?increased?shortage?in?our?natural?resouses.?As?supply?of?our?resouces?goes?dow

6、n?and?demand?remains?the?same?or?goes?up?there?will?be?increased?presure?to?claim?what?resouces?remain.?So?instead?of?people?working?together?to?solve?the?problem,?they?will?be?fighting?for?whats?left?by?the?problem.?To?solve?this,?people?need?to?come?together?before?the?problem?reaches?a?state?of?n

7、o?return.?This?may be?hard?to?do?since?the?effects?of?environmental?problems?are?not?yet?felt?by?a?large?degree?(if?felt?at?all)?by?everyone.?At?this?point?in?time?many?feel?it?is?not?there?problem?to?worry?about?since?it?does?not?immediatly?effect?them.?To?remidy?this?people?should?become?more?awar

8、e?of?their?current?environment.?Comments:?This?response?is?seriously?flawed.?Its?strongest?feature?is?a?fairly?clear?position:?it?agrees?with?the?claim?that?environmental?problems?will?require?cooperation?and?presents?a?scenario?for?what?will?happen?if?there?is?no?cooperation?-?conflict?over?diminis

9、hing?resources.?However,?the?writer?offers?little?support?for?that?position.?Threatened?resources?and?the?effects?of?environmental?problems?are?mentioned?but?not?specified,?and?the?paper?provides?no?examples?of?how?people?might?come?together?to?address?the?problem?or?how?they?might?become?more?aware

10、?of?their?current?environment.?Some?of?the?sentences?are?worded?clearly?(So?instead?of?people?working?together?),?but?others?are?so?flawed?by?imprecise?word?choice?that?the?meaning?is?difficult?to?understand:?t?yet?felt?by?a?large?degree?(if?felt?at?all)?by?everyone.?Also,?run-on?sentences?(the?firs

11、t?sentence,?for?example)?and?unclear?pronoun?references?add?to?the?confusion,?reinforcing?the?score?of?2.?GRE写作满分范文Our?declining?environment?may?bring?the?people?of?the?world?together?as?no?politician,?philosopher,?or?war?ever?could.?Environmental?problems?are?global?in?scope?and?respect?no?nations?

12、boundaries.?Therefore,?people?are?faced?with?the?choice?of?unity?and?cooperation?on?the?one?hand?or?disunity?and?a?common?tragedy?on?the?other.?Our?declining?environment?may?bring?the?people?of?the?world?together?as?no?politician,?philosopher,?or?war?ever?could.?Environmental?issues?are?a?growing?co

13、ncern?in?our?country?today.?It?is?an?issue?that?concerns?every?person,?no?one?is?excluded.?Facing?and?solving?environmental?issues?calls?for?unity?and?cooperation.?Prejudices?should?be?put?aside?in?this?time?of?need.?Without?unity?our?world?as?we?know?it?will?not?exist?in?twenty-five?years.?People?a

14、s?a?whole?need?to?take?action.?Without?unity?and?cooperation?little?will?be?accomplished.?There?are?many?environmental?issues?we?are?facing?today.?For?example,?recycling?is?a?simple?and?effective?way?to?help?the?environment.?If?everyone?did?a?small?part?the?results?would?be?enormous.?Recycling?is?a?

15、good?example?because?it?is?something?every?single?person?is?capable?of?doing.?There?are?many?ways?people?of?any?age,?race,?or?sex?can?contribute?to?help?the?environment.?Emissions?testing?for?exhausts?on?automobiles?is?one?way?to?help?keep?unnecessary?pollutants?from?contaminating?the?air.?Very?few?

16、cities?require?emissions?testing?for?automobiles.?Columbus,?for?example,?does?not?require?emissions?testing.?My?small?hometown?of?Amherst,?Ohio?does?require?this?test.?I?believe?the?government?needs?to?implement?stricter?regulations?regarding?environmental?issues?and?also?increase?the?funding?that?i

17、s?allotted?for?it.?Mandatory?recycling?laws?with?a?stiff?penalty?for?breaking?the?law?is?one?solution.?Funding?for?groups?to?do?research?is?imperative.?Without?research?there?is?very?little?we?would?know?about?anything?including?diseases?and?microorganisms.?People?of?the?world?need?to?understand?the

18、?situation?our?generation?and?generations?to?come?are?faced with.?This?understanding?needs?to?come?from?education.?The?United?States?has?always?been?a?forerunner?in?wars,?peace?talks,?etc.?It?is?now?time?for?the?United?States?to?be?the?leader?in?solutions?to?environmental?concerns.?The?greatest?barr

19、ier?in?any?situation?is?communication.?If?we?communicate?with?each?other?and?work?together?instead?of?apart?results?would?be?seen.?Education?is?another?great?concern,?especially?in?underdeveloped?countries?and?third?world?nations.?There?is?a?lack?of?education?in?many?of?these?countries.?Education?is

20、?the?key?to?success.?In?summary?I?would?like?to?emphasize?the?importance?in?unity?and?cooperation?on?global?concerns?such?as?the?environment.?Also?education?is?very?important?in?making?headway.?I?also?believe?the?government?should?get?more?involved?in?these?issues.?Comments:?This?paper?presents?and?

21、supports?an?adequate?analysis?of?the?issue.?After?stating?the?need?for?cooperation?on?the?environment,?the?writer?proposes?several?very?specific?remedies?for?environmental?problems:?recycling,?emissions?testing,?research,?education,?and?communication.?The?detailed?description?of?emissions?testing?is

22、?useful;?however,?the?other?remedies?(recycling,?research,?etc.)?are?not?developed?fully?or?persuasively.?In?some?areas?the?response?suffers?from?needless?repetition.?Paragraph?six,?for?example,?moves?from?education?to?communication?and?back?to?education.?The?conclusion,?moreover,?adds?little,?merel

23、y?repeating?earlier?statements.?The?control?of?grammar?and?usage?is?generally?competent,?but?the?sentences?tend?to?be?choppy.?Although?most?of?the?ideas?are?stated?clearly,?the?relationship?between?the?ideas?is?not?always?made?clear:?Also?education?is?very?important?in?making?headway.?I?also?believe?the?government?should?get?more?involved?in?these?issues.英语写作(文库搜索) 高考英语写作40个高级句型整理分享 2020年高考英语写作万能模板 英语满分中考作文10篇合集 英语作文 英语作文初二10篇【精选】 2020年英语作文万能模板 高三英语作文写作技巧 2020中考英语写作技巧总结 my dream 英语作文范文6篇 精选高三英语作文赏析三篇

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