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1、GRE写作提升论述水平格言金句 GRE写作高分只靠单纯的写作技巧并不够，在论述中考生需要通过一些精选句式来体现英语积累和水平。下面就和大家分享GRE写作提升论述水平格言金句，来欣赏一下吧。GRE写作提升论述水平格言金句1. Waste not,want not.俭以防匮。2. From saving comes having.富有来自节俭。3. A penny saved is a penny gained.省一文是一文。4. Take care of the pence and the pound will take care of themselves.金钱积少便成多。5. Frugali
2、ty is an estate alone.节俭本身就是一宗财产。6. He that regards not a penny,will lavish a pound.小钱不知节省，大钱将滥花。7. Small gains bring great wealth.积小利，成巨富。8. Many a little makes a mickle.积少便成多。9. As the touchstone tries gold,so gold tries man.试金之石可试金，正如黄金能试人。10.Courage and resolution are the spirit and soul of virt
3、ue.勇敢和坚决是美德的灵魂。11.The path to glory is always rugged.光荣之路常坎坷。12.Nothing is difficult to the man who will try.世上无难事，只要人肯试。13.The fire is the test of gold;adversity of strong man.烈火试真金，困苦炼壮士。14.Great hopes make great man.远大的希望造就伟大的人物。15.No way is impossible to courage.勇士面前无险路。16.A smooth sea never mad
4、e a skillful mariner.平静的大海决不能造就出熟练的水手。17.The good seaman is known in bad weather.坏天气下才能识得出良好的海员;要识好海员，须凭坏天气。18.The best hearts are always the bravest.行为最勇敢的人心地总是最善良。19.We must not lie down,and cry,God help us.求神不如求己。20.He that falls today may be up again tomorrow.今天跌倒的人也许明天就会站起。GRE写作满分范文The?Universi
5、ty?of?Claria?is?generally?considered?one?of?the?best?universities?in?the?world?because?of?its?instructors?reputation,?which?is?based?primarily?on?the?extensive?research?and?publishing?record?of?certain?faculty?members.?In?addition,?several?faculty?members?are?internationally?renowned?as?leaders?in?t
6、heir?fields.?For?example,?many?of?the?faculty?from?the?English?department?are?regularly?invited?to?teach?at?universities?in?other?countries.?Furthermore,?two?recent?graduates?of?the?physics?department?have?gone?on?to?become?candidates?for?the?Nobel?Prize?in?Physics.?And?75?percent?of?the?students?ar
7、e?able?to?find?employment?after?graduating.?Therefore,?because?of?the?reputation?of?its?faculty,?the?University?of?Claria?should?be?the?obvious?choice?for?anyone?seeking?a?quality?education.?While?it?is?true?that?the?facts?presented?in?the?above?passage?contribute?to?the?idea?that?the?University?of?
8、Claria?is?a?fine?university,?it?can?hardly?be?concluded?from?the?propaganda?that?the?University?of?Claria?is?the?best?university?for?every?applicant.?For?example,?it?appears,?based?on?the?passage,?that?the?University?of?Claria?is?largely?a?research-oriented?university.?No?where?in?the?passage,?howev
9、er,?is?the?quality?of?the?education?discussed.?The?faculty/student?ratio?is?not?discussed.?It?is?largely?possible?that?while?many?of?the?faculty?are?teaching?at?universities?in?other?countries,?the?students?at?U.?Claria?are?left?being?taught?by?graduate?students?or?non-doctoral?instructors.?Secondly
10、,?the?passage?states?that?75?percent?of?graduates?from?U.?Claria?find?jobs.?One?wonders?where?these?graduates?obtained?their?jobs.?It?is?possible?that?very?few?graduates?are?able?to?find?work?in?their?fields?of?major.?The?number?of?graduates?who?enroll?in?graduate?school?is?also?not?disclosed.?One?w
11、ould?expect?a?large?number?of?graduates?from?a?research-oriented?university?to?pursue?research?careers.?These?students?would?undoubedtly?require?a?graduate?school?education,?rather?than?simply?a?Bachelors?level?degree.?By?stating?that?75?percent?of?graduates?find?employment,?the?reader?is?left?to?wo
12、nder?why?these?students?entered?the?workforce,?rather?than?graduate?school,?since?graduates?with?Bachelors?level?degrees?often?do?not?land?research-oriented?jobs.?Lastly,?the?socioeconomic?status?of?the?institution?is?not?disclosed.?Perhaps?the?University?of?Claria?is?an?expensive?school?located?in?
13、the?heart?of?a?large?metropolitain?city.?Certain?prospective?applicants?to?the?university?may?not?be?able?to?afford?such?a?costly?school,?nor?may?the?like?the?idea?of?living?in?a?crowded?metropolis.?The?fact?that?the?argument?leaves?our?the?socioeconomic?status?of?the?school?leads?the?reader?to?beli
14、eve?that?the?school?perhaps?has?something?to?hide;?perhaps?its?socioeconomic situation?is?not?something?it?is?proud?of.?In?addition?to?the?sales?pitch?passage,?above,?the?argument?should?include?facts?that?a?diverse?group?of?students?may?find?useful,?such?as?the?cost?of?education?and?the?quality?of?
15、its?teaching?program.?Only?after?evaluating?all?the?facts?might?a?student?strongly?agree?that?the?University?of?Claria?is?one?of?the?best?universities?in?the?world.?Commentary?The?University?of?Claria?is?generally?considered?one?of?the?best?universities?in?the?world?because?of?its?instructors?reputa
16、tion,?which?is?based?primarily?on?the?extensive?research?and?publishing?record?of?certain?faculty?members.?In?addition,?several?faculty?members?are?internationally?renowned?as?leaders?in?their?fields.?For?example,?many?of?the?faculty?from?the?English?department?are?regularly?invited?to?teach?at?univ
17、ersities?in?other?countries.?Furthermore,?two?recent?graduates?of?the?physics?department?have?gone?on?to?become?candidates?for?the?Nobel?Prize?in?Physics.?And?75?percent?of?the?students?are?able?to?find?employment?after?graduating.?Therefore,?because?of?the?reputation?of?its?faculty,?the?University?
18、of?Claria?should?be?the?obvious?choice?for?anyone?seeking?a?quality?education.?GRE写作满分范文Hospital?statistics?regarding?people?who?go?to?the?emergency?room?after?roller-skating?accidents?indicate?the?need?for?more?protective?equipment.?Within?this?group?of?people,?75?percent?of?those?who?had?accidents
19、?in?streets?or?parking?lots?were?not?wearing?any?protective?clothing?(helmets,?knee?pads,?etc.)?or?any?light-reflecting?material?(clip-on?lights,?glow-in-the-dark?wrist?pads,?etc.).?Clearly,?these?statistics?indicate?that?by?investing?in?high-quality?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment,?roller?
20、skaters?will?greatly?reduce?their?risk?of?being?severely?injured?in?an?accident.?The?arguement?is?well?presented?and?supported,?but?not?completely?well?reasoned.?It?is?clear?and?concisely?written.?The?content?is?logically?and?smoothly?presented.?Statistics?cited?are?used?to?develop?support?for?the?r
21、ecommendation,?that?roller?skaters?who?invest?in?protective?gear?and?reflective?equipment?can?reduce?their?risk?of?severe,?accidental?injuries.?Examples?of?the?types?of?protective?equipment?are?described?for?the?reader.?Unfortunately,?the?author?of?the?argement?fails?to?note?that?merely?by?purchasin
22、g?gear?and?reflective?equipment?that?the?skater?will?be?protected.?This?is,?of?course,?falacious?if?the?skater?fails?to?use?the?equipment,?or?uses?it?incorrectly?or?inappropriately.?It?is?also?an?unnecessary?assumption?that?a?skater?need?purchase?high-quality?gear?for?the?same?degree?of effectivenes
23、s?to?be?achieved.?The?argument?could?be?improved?by?taking?these?issues?into?consideration,?and?making?recommendations?for?education?and?safety?awareness?to?skaters.?Commentary?The?first?half?of?this?generally?well-written?but?limited?response?merely?describes?the?argument.?The?second?half?of?the?pa
24、per?identifies?two?assumptions?of?the?argument:?-?that?people?who?purchase?protective?gear?will?use?the?gear?-?that?high-quality?gear?is?more?effective?than?other?gear?These?points?are?sufficient?to?constitute?some?analysis?and?thus?warrant?a?score?of?3.?However,?neither?of?these?analytic?points?is?developed?sufficiently?to?merit?a?score?of?4.GRE
