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1、英语高考专题复习,短 文 改 错,Warming up,Correct following words.,In the other handBe responsible with sb/sthBe opposed for sthLarge quantity ofHave an effect in sbLose the heartMake a great progressThe accident was happenedIn hurryConvince sb sthAt sight ofA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as possibly
2、,onfortoquantitieson,a oftheequipmentGenerallypossible,Whats the main trouble when correcting a composition?,1.看不出句子有错，越读越觉得对。2.看出句子出错的地方,但无法改正。3.知道改正句子错误的地方,但答案不正确。,Any rules？,Any skills？,How to correct it？,新版：假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写
3、上修改后的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分并不是每一个句子都有错，有些句子并非只有一处错误。,Obey the rules of correction,I love camping.Its my favourite way to spent the summer vacation.Last year,my family and I went camping in the countryside.It was one of the most excited
4、experiences I had never had.We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day.We cook over a fire and the food tasted wonderfully.For a whole Week,I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air.At night,I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree,and I felt so peaceful.It doest cost many to ca
5、mp,and what I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty.,spend,exciting,ever,cooked,wonderful,trees,and,much,to,I love camping.its my favourite way to spent the summer vacation.Last year,my familyand I went camping in the countryside.It was one of the most excited experiences
6、 I had never had.We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day.We cook over a fire and the food tasted wonderfully.For a whole Week,I saw lonely mountain views or breathed fresh air.At night,I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree,and I felt so peaceful.It doest cost many to camp,and what
7、 I believe its the best way to get close nature and enjory its beauty.,spend,exciting,ever,cooked,wonderful,trees,and,much,to,动词,形容词,副词,动词,形容词,连词,名词,副词,代词,介词,近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表,近5年高考短文改错考点分布统计表,项目,年份,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,skills,一、动词形,主要包括两类错误
8、：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。,2008浙江卷 Last winter vacation,some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends,while I chose to take a part-time job.2006安徽卷：Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish.,decided,wishes,2006安徽卷：You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers,magazines and the othe
9、r books,but you are not permit to take them out.2006天津卷：Today,I got a letter that said I had been admitting to a college.,permitted,admitted,二、名词数,指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。,2006浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.2008浙江卷：I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking for studen
10、ts with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope.,envelopes,knowledge,2006福建卷：If you have interests in it,reply to me soon.学生版：Most of the students in our class are now making rapid progresses2006重庆卷：In summer,the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful.,progress,sky,interest,三、还要注意形和
11、副,注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。,2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.学生版：We should work hardly to achieve our goals.,proud,hard,2006湖北卷：A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up.2006辽宁卷：She was usual patient with her students and
12、 never made them disappointed.,strong,usually,四、非谓语，细辨别,这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。,NMET 2003:Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day.,talking,to,2008浙江卷：It is one of the funniest things findi
13、ng On the Internet so far this year.学生版：The big fire burned hundreds of houses,made hundreds of families homeless.,making,found,人称代词，物主代词的使用反身代词oneself 的使用人称代词的主格和宾格不定代词的使用Both,all,either,neither,none的使用.6.Whose 和whos，its和 its的区别,五、代词格，细领悟,（2007全国I）I was only about six when he held his hand out to m
14、e.I took it in me and we walked.,mine,2007陕西：Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!,myself,学生版：We must try ours best to overcome all difficulties to solve this particular problems.,our,主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。,catch a sight of lose the heart in hurry in Sunday afterno
15、on express us such many people,a,on,ourselves,so,六、习惯用法要记住,2007浙江卷：So I didnt lose my heart and kept running.学生版：Because the help you gave me that summer,My life changed.2006福建卷：It is so a beautiful place!,of,such,七、句子成分多分析,不同的句子成分要用不同的词类；不同的语境要选择不同的词语。只有对句子结构和成分作细致的分析，才能找出用词不当的错误。,NMET 2004:I dont
16、know that they dont like to talk with me.2007天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities,but,why,who/that,八、逻辑错误须关注,与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。,2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to what they thought would be a pleasant,uninterrupted me
17、als.学生版:Some students may also save up for our college or future use.,we,their,常考的错误形式有：连词but，and，or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。,2oo7全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things Im doing at the school2007四川卷：An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farms.,a,a,九
18、、冠词、连词常光顾,2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.学生版：Although my bike is old,but it is in good condition.,when,动词形，名词数，还要注意形和副；非谓语，细辨别，代词格，细领悟；介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住；句子成分多分析，逻辑错误须关注，冠词连词常光顾。,短文改错口诀：,短文改错应注意的问题,四不改:标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在句中不可能用错,Dont forg
19、et!,【解题步骤】,1 浏览全文，掌握大意,2 分句阅读，逐行找错,3 检查核对，攻克难点,解题技巧,1，从语篇入手，抓大意。2，注意瞻前顾后，不要见木不见林。3，先易后难。难的句子放在最后改。,改错练习,History of Halloween Many people believe that the popular customs of Halloween come from Roman celebrations related to religious activities,but in fact it is not a religion festival.It actually ha
20、d its origin on old believes about the return of the spirits of dead people,who might die of starve.So people offer food to the dead in honour of them.Todays celebration are different from what they were in the past.People will dress as monsters or clowns.There is also the giving of candy or other s
21、weets.Children are full of energetic and go around their neighbours to ask for“Trick or Treat”.Because so many households now offer”treats”,children will not play trick on people.As a result,it is obviously that children love to get together to have a fun with each other.,religious,in,beliefs,starva
22、tion,celebrations,up,energy,tricks/a trick,Task6 Correction:Li Ming wrote a passage about Halloween,but he made some mistakes,please find out and correct them.(10 mistakes),obvious,Writing skills for high marks,How to achieve the goal,书面表达复习专题,高考评分标准：(很好)；(21-25分)1.完全完成了试题规定的任务。2.覆盖所有内容要点。3.应用了较多的语法
23、结构和词汇。4.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。5.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。6.完全达到了预期的写作目的。,How to improve writing skills（Three useful writing skills）,能使用较高级词汇能使用较丰富句式能使用恰当的衔接词,怎样使用较高级的词汇,1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable（thanks to),Thanks to the good weather,our journey
24、 was comfortable.,2.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(occur to),A good idea occurred to me.,3.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of),We all think highly of him.,4.The students neednt pay for their books.(getfor free),The students can get their books for free.,5.She went to Australia in o
25、rder tostudy music.(for the purpose of),She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.,6.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more),The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.,怎样使句式丰富多彩,1.使用感叹句,I was happy when I received your letter.,How happy I was when I received you
26、r letter!,2.使用强调句,This young boy helped the old man.,It was this young boy who/that helpedthe old man.,3.使用倒装句,You can solve the problem in this way.,Only in this way can you solve the problem.,4.使用省略句,They read while they are walking or riding on a bus.,They read while walking or riding on a bus.,5
27、.使用with 复合结构,I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street and carried a handbag in her hand.,I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.,6.使用定语从句,He didnt pass the exam,and it made him very sad.,He didnt pass the exam,which made him very sad.,7.使用各种状语从句,Time passed
28、 quickly before we knew it.(not until),Not until time passed quickly did we know it.,8.使用各种名词性从句,That is what I should do.,What surprises us most is that the boy knows so many things.,What is needed most during the class break is instead of,You pretend to know what you dont know.(Its no good),It is
29、easy to get on with Pam.I find.,Its no good pretending to know what you dont know.,I find it easy to get on with Pam.,9.It作形式主语或形式宾语句型I find/think/consider it+adj.+to doIt is a waste of time/no use/no good+doing sth,10分词结构代替状语从句,Tom met his good friends when he was walking on the street._,Tom met hi
30、s good friends.,AS my friend was frightened of Losing his job,he said nothing to the police._,my friend said nothing to the police.,Walking on the street,Frightened of losing his job,怎样使用恰当的衔接词,衔接词的使用：,1、表示平行、对等或选择关系：and,bothand,as well as,as well,neithernor,or,eitheror,not only.but also等,2.表示转折关系：b
31、ut,yet,while,however,on the contrary,on the other hand,in spite of,nevertheless,although,otherwise,3.表示因果关系：for,so,therefore,as a result,because of,due to,owing to,thanks to,4.表示解释,说明：that is(to say),namely，in other words,such as,for instance,actually,to tell you the truth,frankly speaking（坦率地说）,acc
32、ording to,as a matter of fact,in this case 等。,5.表递进:whats moreworse,besides,apart from,in addition,worse still,to make things worse,moreover,furthermore,6.表示总结的连接词：in short,in brief,all in all,in a word,in general,generally speaking,on the whole,to sum up 等,7.表示比较:compared to/with,与相比in comparison w
33、ith,与相比 in contrast to,与形成对比/对照similarly,同样地 In the same way,同样地8.其它连接词,In recent years,TV programs have become more boring,so I am not interested in any of them.What I get from TV is only news,which I can also get from the Web.That is to say,TV is no longer an attraction to me.On the other hand,as
34、high-tech tools of communication,cell phones and the Web bring more convenience to me.No matter how far the person I want to contact is,I can speak to him by just dialing the number or logging in MSN.Most importantly,I can get latest information in no time.,学生习作片段中连接词运用,Group work 1,Compared with TV
35、,cell phones and the Web are more useful for me.I can call my friends,parents and teachers.I can communicate with them in order to improve my study.I can search for something I want to know on the web.That is really helpful.Thirdly,the Web has many functions.We can chat with friends or parents onlin
36、e.Now the online shopping become fashionable.We also watch movies or plays.,Work in groups of four to beautify passage with transitional words and phrases.把以下段落用恰当的衔接词进行美化。,In contrast to TV，cell phones and the Web have a clear advantage.For example,I can keep in touch with my parents and friends as
37、 well as consult my teacher to improve my study.Apart from that,I can surf on the Net for something of great use.Thanks to the multi-function web,not only can we chat with friends or parents on line,but also we can enjoy movies or plays.In addition,through online shopping,we may get real bargains,fo
38、llowing fashion.,I like basketball best.Basketball is very popular in China.I often play basketball with my classmates after school.I like basketball stars _.I think basketball is a game_needs strength and skills.Playing basketball is of great benefit to us.It can make us build up our body _ keep us
39、 healthy.,It can help us learn to cooperate with each other._my favorite sport is basketball.I want to be a great basketball player,So I also try my best to practice it.,that/which,not only,but also,Whats more,In short,Of all the sports,as well,Pair work 2用适当的连接词填空,As we know,the global water shorta
40、ge is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming,environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.Therefore,its high time we did something about it.Firstly,an effective way,I think,is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly,new methods need to be develop
41、ed to use the existing water resources,for example,turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly,we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least,its everyones responsibility to make good use of water,such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion,people around the world shoul
42、d be aware of the real situation of water shortage,protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.,Individual work 3,As we know,the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming,environmental pollution and the ever-increasing popula
43、tion.Therefore,its high time we did something about it.Firstly,an effective way,I think,is to reserve water in a scientific way for future use.Secondly,new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources,for example,turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly,we must stop water pollu
44、tion by law.Last but not least,its everyones responsibility to make good use of water,such as recycling and saving water in our daily life.In conclusion,people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage,protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scie
45、ntifically.,As we know,the global water shortage is becoming increasingly severe mainly due to global warming,environmental pollution and the ever-increasing population.Therefore,its high time we did something about it.Firstly,an effective way,I think,is to reserve water in a scientific way for futu
46、re use.Secondly,new methods need to be developed to use the existing water resources,for example,turning sea water into fresh water.Thirdly,we must stop water pollution by law.Last but not least,its everyones responsibility to make good use of water,such as recycling and saving water in our daily li
47、fe.In conclusion,people around the world should be aware of the real situation of water shortage,protect the present water resources and explore potential ones scientifically.,书面表达训练,假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。1.赞成迁出:(1)游客多，交通堵塞(2)郊区环境好、2.反对迁出:(1)建于1906年，中外闻名(2)
48、搬迁易造成动物死亡 3.你的看法：注意：1词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。2可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3参考词汇：郊区suburb Dear Editor,Recently,in our class there has been a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.Yours truly,Li Hua,假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑假来北京旅游，来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信，简单介绍以下内容：,1，简况：长800余米、6
49、00多年历史、300余家商铺；,2，位置：天安门广场南面,3，交通：公共汽车17、69、59等路，地铁2号线,4，特色：步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。,参考词汇：步行街 pedestrian street,当当车 trolley car 地铁 subway,注意：,1，词数100左右,2，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯3，开头语已为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。,近3年的新疆高考英语作文题目 2009年新疆高考英语作文题目,2010年高校招生全国统一考试英语（全国II卷）作文题目假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内
50、容主要包括：1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。2、授课对象：高中生（至少三年英语基础）3、工作量：-每周12学时，任选三门课-担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问（advisor）注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已经为你写好，请将完整的回信书写在答题卡上。,2011年高校招生全国统一考试英语(新课标)作文题目假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心（Learning Center）的帮助。根据学校规定，你须书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1.本人简介；2.求助内容；3.约定时间；4.你的联系方式 m
