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1、人物介绍之,Character introduction基础写作,“英语必修4Unit1 Women of achievement 人物写作2014年”精品课程评比 人物写作之基础写作课件 主备：刘雅琴 核审：边慧琼,中山市濠头中学高一英语教研组 2014-4-24,Discussion:What information should be necessary for us to describe a person?,（一）人物简介的写作步骤；(概,貌,育,平,评),概况）age,sex,birth-place,background外貌）appearance,character教育）educa
2、tion生平）big events in ones life(in order of time)评价）evaluation,Group work：Describe a person in groups(choose one part to describe,eg,your friends birth,appearance),A.概况（尽量用非谓语/同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺)1)Born in _,_ is a_.2)_,the son of a _ family,was born in _.XXX,_,is a beautiful girl/handsome boy.仿写：钟南山年出生在广
3、州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一,Chaplin,1889,one of the famous actors in the world,Chaplin,poor,1889,monitor of our class,B外貌,性格(巧用with做定语),XXX是个近视的男生,他戴着一副眼镜 XXX is a near-sighted/far-sighted boy _.XXX很漂亮，有着长长的头发。XXX is good-looking/ordinary-looking/funny-looking _.仿写：我的英语老师是个中年妇女，她长着两只大眼睛，圆脸。,with a pair of glasse
4、s on his nose.,with long hair.,C.教育经历：用非谓语动词使文章精炼,_(在中山大学毕业后）,she went on further education and received a doctors degree.仿写：袁隆平1953年毕业于西南农业大学（Southwest Agricultural College）之后，开始致力于农业事业。,Having graduated from Zhongshan University,D生平(尽量用复合句,倒装,非限制定语从句等，润色文章),1）他不仅对科学感兴趣,而且有音乐天赋。Not only_,but also _
5、.2）孙杨创造了新的游泳的世界记录，为国家作出了贡献。Sun Yang set a new world record of swimming,_.仿写：隋老师不仅得到了同事们（colleagues）很高的评价，而且她还一直深受学生的尊敬和爱戴。,is he interested in science,he has a gift for music,which makes a great contribution to China.,E评价（注意运用一些动词,形容词等短语/词组）,1）他给我们作出了榜样,大家都赞扬他He _,so all the people _him.2）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小
6、说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住.Lu Xun is one of the greatest novelists in China and will _an outstanding man forever.仿写：卓别林（Chaplin）作为一位伟大的演员而被人们所热爱和怀念。,sets us a good example,speak highly of,be remembered as,实战演练,请根据下面提供的内容写一篇人物简介,【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和班级。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考词汇】法国公开
7、赛：French Open女单冠军:singles title大满贯：Grand Slam,How doyoudothe Basic Writing?,The suggested steps:,1.审题:确定文体Step1；审题、人称和时态,2.整合信息:把所有内容整合成5句,3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5.Step5；检查检查,Step1；审题,人物介绍，人称：采用第_人称3.时态：以_为主。,三,一般过去时态,How doyoudothe Basic Writing?,The suggested steps:,1.审题:确定文体Step1；审题、人称和时态,2.整合信息:把所
8、有内容整合成5句,3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5.Step5；检查检查,Step4；联句成篇,注意过渡词的使用,besides,whats more,however,as a result,consequently,therefore,Step5；检查,是否恰好五句话？,是否包括所有内容？,pants纠错原则：1)pattern 2)agreement 3)number 4)tense 5)spelling,How doyoudothe Basic Writing?,The suggested steps:,1.审题:确定文体Step1；审题、人称和时态,2.整合信息:把所有内容整合成5句,3.翻译句子：考虑语法结构,4.连句成篇,5.Step5；检查检查,Peer assessment,Sum up:contents included useful expressionstechniques for writingways of correctioncriteria for grading,
