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1、The secret of successThe secret of success My aim is playing an important part in our life. living without an aim is like sailing without a compass. As JWGoethe said：“The important thing in life is to have a great aim，and the determination to attain it”.Therefore, we must have brave and willpower to
2、 come true our dreams. Then there is a need for us to persevere . As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence can have what he will”.Whats more，we should be unremitting when we face aim.And dont be afraid of failure. If you fail，dont forget to learn your lesson. Keep on going，never say di
3、e！And you should also have a belief that you are sure to succeed as long as you keep your direction all the time. In a word，success belongs to the persevering. 1行文逻辑严密清晰，引出了成功秘密的目标，并发表了自己的看法。能较好地运用Goethe所说的：“The important thing in life is to have a great aim，and the determination to attain it”。来加强文章
4、的说服力。 2.写句子的能力很强，能运用一些多样化的句式和句法结构：Keep on going.;as long as you keep your direction. 3.文章结尾用了In a word，增加了亮点，表达了成功属于那些坚持不懈的人。 The secret of success If we want to succeed，we should have own dream and a clear goal. If we dont have a goal，we will lose right directions，it is like sailing without a compa
5、ss. As an old saying goes the fire is the test of gold，adversity of a strong man. Though the way to succeeding is tough，we still have encourage and persistence to come true our dream，As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence，can have what he will.”Then，we also face trouble bravely，and d
6、o well in learning from failure to search for experience. Believe in ourselves, success belongs to the persevering people. 1.文章开门见山，引出了：如果我们要成功，就应该有梦想和目标。并发表了自己的看法，引用了一句古语：As an old saying goes：“the fire is the test of gold，adversity of strong man.” 2.写英语句子的能力强，文章结尾很有说服力：Believe ourselves，success be
7、longs to the persevering People. The secret of success People should set up a dream and a goal. We know “Dont have goal as if you dont have a compass to go to slide into boat”，we should make a brave person，we needs to insist on our dream to achieve by ourselves。And what we want to succeed must have
8、a long time. As Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence，can have what he will。”we are make good use of time，dont waste time，insist on our goal。Dont worry about failure，We are good at looking for experience from failure。Thus，I believe in myself，Come on! 1.文章一开始写出：人生应该有理想、有目标。要点齐，能发表看法，并引用
9、了Franklin said：“he can have patience and persistence can have what he will。”增强了文章的说服力，点明了成功的秘诀。 2.并激励自己好好利用时间，坚持不懈地努力，树立自信，最终会获得成功。 The secret of success If a person doesnt have goal and dream as a sail doesnt have a compass, So I think that everyone must set up a belonging to own dream and goal，the
10、y can take you still ahead, when we are ahead，not only must we still hard，but also we need brave to face and go over difficulties，sometime，brave is a power，only when we have enough brave，we can come true own dream，As Franklin said，he can have patience and persistence can have what he，From the words，
11、we know that when we face difficult，we shouldnt be afraid，we should be persistence own goal，we meet with difficulties，we dont give up or run away，too。Dont be afraid of failure，as the saying goes，failure is the mother of success，when you have a failure experience，you should feel happy，because experience is the best teacher。 1.文章逻辑：引出主题列举要点阐述观点。较好地运用了谚语：failure is the mother of success。 2.能写出一些复合句，增强文章的活力。 When you attain a failing experience, you should feel happy. Experience is the best teacher.
