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1、GRE高分作文技巧解析 今天给大家带来了GRE高分作文技巧解析，快来学习学习吧，分享下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。GRE高分作文技巧解析俗话说，“知己知彼，百战不殆”。在考试中，也不例外。如果想要获得高分，就要理解出题人的意图，更要清楚评分的标准。这样就能有针对性的给出评分人所期望的答案。今天，我们就通过解析GRE高分作文的一些特点，帮同学们总结拿下GRE作文高分的一些小技巧。迎合GRE考试评卷人的思路每个评卷人对考生试卷的评阅速度非常快，不可能仔细看到每一个细节。考生应该迎合评卷人的评卷思路，用最规范的结构和最清晰的表达来体现自己的思路：首段要鲜明地提出观点，中间段落层次要拉开，每段的开始
2、应该就是该段的主题句。熟练掌握新GRE写作题库为了达到公平，ETS公布了它考试的所有写作题库，那么为了达到能和所有人一起竞争，考生应该在考前对所有题目都进行预习，这样方便自己节约考试时的审题时间，并通过100-150个提纲的写作了解GRE写作的一般结构，通过30-50篇写作来练习自己的写作思路，提炼自己的表达方式。对题库中的题目越是熟练，对考试就会越有利。新GRE写作评分注重三方面首先，从ETS公布的各分数段评分标准看，其评分主要注重以下三个方面：1. 逻辑分析能力(要求insightful);2. *的组织(要求well-organized);3. 语言能力(要求standard writt
3、en English, concise, varied structure等)。尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分满分由于AA的写作不牵涉自己观点的展开，只须指出作者逻辑上的漏洞，因此在经过训练以后，写起来并不困难;而AI的写作需要自己展开自己设立的观点，不但需要逻辑上的洞察能力，还需要论证观点的能力，语言组织的能力，因此对于中国考生来讲比较困难，难以短期内有较大提高。但是这两个部分在总分中的权重是一样的，因此考生的策略应该是尽量提高AI部分的写作能力而力保AA部分高分，甚至满分。因为如果AA部分满分的话，AI部分只需争取在4分以上就可以确保整体作文分数在5分以上了。希望备考GRE的同学
4、可以结合以上技巧，在备考中进行实际应用和练习，稳步提升GRE分数。GRE作文可能用到的金句名言KNOWLEDGE 知识篇Activity is the only road to knowledge .(George Bernard Shaw , British dramatist)行动是通往知识的唯一道路 。 (英国剧作家 肖伯纳。 G.)A free man obtains knowledge from many sources 1 besides books .(Thomas Jefferson , American president)一个自由的人除了从书本上获取知识外，还可以从许多别的
5、*获得知识。(美国总统 杰斐逊 。 T.)A great part to the information I have was acquired by looking up something and finding something else on the way 。(Adams Franklin , American humorist )我的大部分知识都是这样获得的：在寻找某个资料时意外的发现了另上的资料。(美国幽默作家 富兰克林。 A.)If a man empties his purse into his head , no man can take it away from him
6、 , an investment in knowledge always pays the best interest .(Benjamin Franklin , American president )倾已所有追求知识，没有人能夺走它;向知识投资，收益最佳。(美国总统 富兰克林。 B.)Imagination is more important than knowledge .(Albert Einstein , American scientist )想象力比知识更为重要。 (美国科学家 爱因斯坦 A. )Knowledge is power. (Francis Bacon , Briti
7、sh philosopher )知识就是力量。 英国哲学家 培根。 F.The empty vessels make the greatest sound . (William Shakespeare , British dramatist )满瓶不响，半瓶咣当。 (英国剧作家 莎士比亚。 W.)EDUCATION 教育篇And gladly would learn , and gladly teach .( Chaucer , British poet)勤于学习的人才能乐意施教。(英国诗人，乔叟)Better be unborn than untaught , for ignorance i
8、s the root of misfortune 。(Plato , Ancient Greek philosopher)与其不受教育，不如不生，因为无知是不幸的根源。(古希腊哲学家 柏拉图)Genius17 without education is like silver in the mine. (Benjamin Franklin , American president )未受教育的天才，犹如矿中之银。 (美国总统 富兰克。 B.)The roots of education are bitter , but the fruit is sweet .(Aristotle , Ancie
9、nt Greek philosopher )教育的根是苦的，但其果实是甜的。(古希腊哲学家 亚里士多德)GRE写作官方题库高频ARGUMENT题目满分范文分享：reduce on-the-job accidentsGRE作文官方题库ARGUMENT题目：The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Quiot Manufacturing:“During the past year, Quiot Manufacturing had 30 percent more on-the-job accidents than at the
10、 nearby Panoply Industries plant, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts say that significant contributing factors in many on-the-job accidents are fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Quiot and thereby increas
11、e productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that employees will get adequate amounts of sleep.”Write a response in which you examine the stated and/or unstated assumptions of the argument. Be sure to explain how the argument depends on these assumptions and what th
12、e implications are for the argument if the assumptions prove unwarranted.【满分范文赏析】This editorial recommends that Quiot Manufacturing reduce its work shifts by one hour each in order to reduce its on-the-job accident rate and thereby increase productivity. To support this recommendation the author poi
13、nts out that last year the number of accidents at Quiot was 30% greater than at Industries plant, where work shifts are one hour shorter. The author also cites expert reports which indicate fatigue and sleep deprivation are major causes of accidents. There are several reasons why this argument for a
14、 one-hour reduction in work time per shift is not convincing.【本段结构】*采用了标准的Argument开头段结构，即CAF的开头结构。本段首先概括原文的Conclusion，之后简要提及原文为支持其结论所引用的一系列Assumption及细节，最后给出开头段到正文段的过渡句，指出原文的Flaw，即这些Assumption无法让原文逻辑上没有问题。【本段功能】作为Argument开头段，本段具体功能就在于发起攻击并概括原文的结论，即为了减少事故，Quiot工厂应当减少工人的上班时间。本段接下来提到了原文中为支持之前的Conclusio
15、n所提供的证据，即Quiot工厂在比另外一家工厂在工作时间多的情况下事故率要高，同时有专家报告称，工人的睡眠质量能够影响事故发生率。*提及这些信息，为是在正文段中对这些Assumption即将进行的具体攻击做铺垫。First and foremost, the author provides absolutely no evidence that overall worker productivity is attributable in part to the number of on-the-job accidents. While common sense tells us such a
16、 relationship exists, the author must provide some evidence of this cause-and-effect relationship before I can accept the authors final conclusion that the proposed course of action would in fact increase productivity.【本段结构】本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第一个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conc
17、lusion不成立。【本段功能】作为正文第一段，本段攻击原文所犯的第一个重要逻辑错误类比类错误。原文当中假设，工人的生产效率和事故发生率存在着关系。但是这样的关系是否存在只是凭空假设。因此原文的结论，即减少工作事故能够促进工作效率的提高是不成立的。Thirdly, assuming that Quiots workers are fatigued or sleep-deprived, in order to accept the authors solution to this problem we must assume that Quiots workers would use the a
18、dditional hour of free time to sleep or rest. However, the author provides no evidence that they would use the time in this manner. It is entirely possible that Quiots workers would use that extra hour to engage in some other activitybinge drinking, for example, which could increase the overall rate
19、 of accidents on the job. Without ruling out this possibility the author cannot convincingly conclude that his proposal will have the desired effects.【本段结构】本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第三个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conclusion不成立。【本段功能】作为正文第三段，本段攻击原文所犯的第三个重要逻辑错误因果类错误。原文假设如果工作时间减少了，工人们一定能
20、够有更好的睡眠。但是，这种因果关系并不一定成立，因为人们也许会利用额外的休息时间来做其它事情。所以，原文的这个观点是不能让人确信的。Finally, a series of problems with the argument arise from the scant statistical information on which it relies. In comparing the number of accidents at Quiot and Panoply, the author fails to consider that the per-capita accident rate
21、. Second, perhaps accident rates at the two companies last year were aberrations. Or perhaps Panoply is not representative of industrial companies in generally and that other companies with shorter work shifts have even higher accident rates. In short, since the argument relies on very limited statistical information, an audience should not take a recommendation based on it.【本段结构】本段采用了标准的Argument正文段结构，即先是提及原文的第四个逻辑错误，之后分析该逻辑错误的原因，接下来，进一步分析这样的错误为什么让原文的Conclusion不成立。【本段功能】作为正文第四段，本段攻击原文所犯的第四个重要逻辑错误样本类错误。原文假设Panoply工厂的情况是有代表性的，但事实上可能并非如此，因为单一个体的案例并不一定能适用于其它个体。所以原文的这个假设是不合理的。GRE高分作文技巧解析（文库搜索）
