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1、TOEFL写作高分满分范文点评和思路 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：有助儿童成长的礼物托福写作难点话题一览What gift would you give to help a child develop?A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a childs development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why?
2、 Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析帮助孩子成长发展应该送什么礼物?这个问题其实问的比较大的，因为在不同人眼里怎样才是好的发展本来就有很大差异，假如大家没思路又或是想法太多不知道挑哪个，的建议是干脆采取比较保险的it depends策略，比如不同年龄的孩子可能需要不同的礼物等等。本话题高分范文赏析Childs development is often supplemented by the gifts they receive from important adults in their lif
3、e. It is important to choose these gifts carefully, and foster growth in the right areas. If I were to give a gift to a child, it would be the game of chess. Chess offers a number of advantages to a child. Chess builds social skills, it encourages the child to develop the higher functions of the bra
4、in, and it is a good hobby. As with most games, chess encourages a child to be social with others. As chess is a two-person game, any time children play the game they will be interacting with others. As chess is a competitive game with a winner and a loser, children will have to learn how to lose gr
5、acefully if they hope to keep their chess partners. Building social skills when one is young is very important for future successes throughout ones life. Playing chess is also an excellent way to increase ones thinking abilities. Chess is a game of strategy. When playing chess, a child will build im
6、portant skills such as pattern recognition, strategic thinking, and analytical thinking. All of these skills are very important, especially when going through school. Many subjects a young person must take in school utilize all of these skills, and working on them early in life can be nothing but be
7、neficial. Finally, chess is an excellent hobby for a young person.2019-08-21 20:29:11Playing chess, or any other time-intensive game, keeps children out of trouble. If they are spending their time working on building their chess strategies, they are not out on the streets causing trouble. Many child
8、ren develop behavioral problems because of simple boredom. Chess is an excellent remedy for this, as it is fun to spend ones free time. Thus, I think chess is an excellent present to give to a young child. Chess encourages both personality and mental development, which are very important in a childs
9、 early years. While many gifts will encourage the maturity of one of these types of development, there are few gifts that foster the development of both.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：学生需要上体育课吗托福写作难点话题一览Should we spend all school day studying or set aside some time for exercising?Some people say that physical ex
10、ercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析同意前者更容易写一些。身体健康对每个人都很重要，并且是学习进步的前提。体育训练可以使学生学到很多东西，比如团队精神
11、。合理的课程设置是学校的责任，学校应该想办法保证学生的健康。本话题高分范文赏析Some people believe that it is important to have physical activities as part of a childs everyday curriculum at school. Others disagree, and argue that students should spend all of their time on academic studies. personally, I believe that physical education is
12、 a vital part of an education as it teaches children to take care of their bodies, how to work as a team, and gives them a method of releasing tension and aggression. Humans have always known about the importance of taking care of our bodies, but it seems that in recent years, we have gradually forg
13、otten this important fact. It is absolutely necessary to get some physical activity at least a few times a week, and engraining this idea into children when they are young is the best way to ensure their health for life. Physical exercise usually involves teamwork of some sort. Much of the exercise
14、that young people get involves games such as basketball, volleyball, or football. All of these sports teach children how to work together to achieve a common goal, in this case, winning. I also believe that allowing the children to work together in a fun environment, rather than only on academic pro
15、jects, brings a stronger sense of camaraderie, which helps the children to have healthy relationships with others. Finally, physical exercise is an excellent way to release tension and aggression. If one is particularly stressed about school or life, getting exercise can help the person to relax. As
16、 for letting out aggression, it is much healthier to kick a football than it is to hit someone who has made you angry. Exercise should definitely be a part of a students education. Exercise has much more to offer than simply getting a break from academics. Physical exercise can balance out a student
17、s hectic life, and make it much more pleasurable.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：雕像为谁而塑?托福写作难点话题一览Whom in your country would you choose to build a statue for?Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your country. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to sup
18、port your choice.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目的考点有两个，一个当然是选择哪一位名人来进行展开，另一个则是你对自己的城市到底有多少了解，换句话说，考生不仅要详细说明这位名人的事迹，同时也要把名人和当地的关联性写出来，比如名人是这个城市出身的，或者名人为这个城市做出了哪些贡献等等。这其实就相当于杜绝了很多同学随便扯大旗找一些外国名人来写的思路。If my city has decided to build a statue to honor a famous person in my country, I would choose a late singer, Teresa Te
19、ng. She was born in 1950s, and died of a severe asthma attack at age 41 in May 1995 while holidaying in Chiang Mai, Thailand, triggering an outpouring of grief among her legions of fans in Asia and elsewhere. During her brilliant stage career, favored by fans all over Asia, she moved millions of peo
20、ple. Her famous songs include sweet, story of small town, and the moon represents my heart, etc. It was said that it was her who introduced several generations in China to a certain field of popular music.Her songs have accompanied the growth and development of many people in China. In the home of t
21、hese generations soul, her sweet voice has become immortal beauty and memory. Although shes gone, her sound of singing has never vanished. She is constantly commemorated; from Beijing to Taipei, Hong Kong to Singapore, her ubiquitous fans observe her commemoration from time to time, cherishing her i
22、ncredible beauty, and her voice that sounds to come from heaven. Her sweet songs made her a legend, and are still regularly heard on radio, and continue to have a following in Chinese communities all over the world.She should be remembered not only because of her beauty and voice, but also because o
23、f her great charity. She founded Teresa Teng foundation during her lifetime. The purpose of the foundation is to cultivate and support gifted artists, and at the same time the foundation includes a trust to distribute scholarship to make sure that art students have opportunities to accomplish what t
24、hey actually can. Every year, The Teresa Teng Foundation also send a great amount of money as a charity to help homeless children. And these activities are supported by her fans all over the world.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：为何参加危险运动托福写作难点话题一览The attractions of dangerous activitiesWhy do you think some people
25、 are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目可能不太好展开，危险运动的定义可能很多同学都不是特别清楚，大家不妨按照极限运动来进行联想，就是那种对人身安全可能有危险性，非常规性质的运动项目，比如跳伞蹦极之类的运动。而这类运动能够吸引人参加，原因多半是体验刺激、金钱利益之类的因素，大家可以从这些点着手论述。本话题高分范文赏析People engage themselves
26、 in dangerous activities for various reasons, which probably includes money, pleasure, and perhaps ironically, nescience. Perhaps the most direct drive might come from money, which is needed for everyone, any time and everywhere. People have enough wit to balance their certain choices, especially wh
27、en they fa danger and money. Those stunt men or women in Hollywood movies, photographers who shoot sharks or crocodiles, or those who participate in stock car racing, are always sophisticated enough calculate whether the outcome overweigh the risk. If they are willing to take the risk, they must hav
28、e evaluated well. They know exactly the rule: the more risks they take, the more they might get. There also is another kind of people in this world. Money is of almost no importance to them They perform dangerous activities just for their own pleasure. Perhaps the most appropriate example involves s
29、ports. Actually every kind of sports is dangerous, and even can be deadly. Danger always exists, but people tend to simply ignore it. Take parachuting for example, who can refuse the fascination of flying in the sky like a bird? On the other hand, it seems that danger itself makes the activity so fa
30、scinating as too hard to refuse.To conquer is the very nature of human being from the very beginning. Pheidippides said seconds before dropping dead two thousand years ago, Rejoice, we conquer! And it seems perfectly logical for some people that celebration follows conquer. Ironically, sometimes bli
31、nd brave comes out of nescience. Sometimes people simply dont know the activity is hazardous or how perilous it exactly is. It can be exemplified by a recent incident. Five students (three of them have a masters degree) lost their lives in a mountaineering expedition. Those students reportedly didnt
32、, and it seems highly probable, make an adequate preparation before expedition, which made the tragedy ineluctable. People always praise alpinists with words such as strong, brave, courageous, but in this case none of these words is appropriate Those young students traded their springtime with blind
33、 brave, and died in vain.托福写作高分满分范文点评和思路解析：科技让生活更舒适Has technology made the world a better place to live? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析科技让世界变得更适宜居住。这道题目正反
34、面都有很多个点可以展开。支持这个观点可以大谈科技带给人们生活的各种便利，衣食住行相信大家都能想到不少主意。从反面来展开也很容易，大家可以多写一些环境污染温室效应之类的话题，这些都可以算作是科技发展造成的负面影响。本话题高分范文赏析Technology is a tool for humanity. As such it merely supports human actions, good and bad, and does not contribute in and of itself to the progression of the world. Nevertheless, while
35、people have utilized technology to improve their living conditions and also as a means to control and harm others, I believe that technology has allowed and will continue to allow mankind to solve our most serious problems and thus make the world a better place to live.Technology has aided us in the
36、 fight against the two most serious threats to human life, hunger and disease. With the help of technology we have been able to save millions of lives by developing vaccinations, cures, and treatments for diseases that used to be considered fatal. Similarly, technology has figured prominently in the
37、 area of food production and may one day allow us to stamp out hunger all over the world. The development of telecommunication and information technologies has encouraged communication between countries and their peoples and thus prevented political conflict.Of course, technology has also helped man
38、kind to become more destructive and exploitative. The ever-growing arms industry has been able to build bigger bombs and more efficient killing machines. As a result, armed conflicts have become more and more devastating and cost more human lives than ever before. In addition, governments have used
39、technology to limit information and suppress opposition, and businesses continue to use it to maximize profits by replacing workers with machines. None of these practices can be considered beneficial to humanity.However, while the development of technology might have contributed to some of these con
40、temporary problems, it offers the most likely solutions to many of them. People in many parts of the world still die of starvation, and further developments in food science will hopefully end this unfortunate situation. Also, the global energy shortage presents a problem only technology can solve, and the further development of existing technology is necessary to reduce and stop environmental pollution and degradation.
