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1、托福写作范文附思路解析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福写作范文附思路解析，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作范文附思路解析11. Why people attend college?People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use spe
2、cific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析说明人们选择上大学的具体原因(一个或者多个)：增加经验、拓展知识、开阔视野为了实现理想(ideal; idealistic)(如，周恩来就是为中华之崛起而读书)为了保证将来的就业机会 父母要求子女上大学 别人都上大学了，所以自己也选择读书 找不到工作(无知，总是一部分人做出某个选择的理由。上大学如是1，去博物馆如是12，从事危险运动亦如是43。)相关题目：168范文After graduating from high school many young people have the opt
3、ion to directly enter the work force. Most students who have the opportunity, however, decide to go to college before finding jobs (They attend college to obtain more choices,-higher salaries, and more opportunities for advancement in an increasingly competitive job market. Before attending college,
4、 students have a limited opportunity to specialize. After obtaining a specific college degree a job applicant can be competitive for previously unavailable jobs. For instance, applicants with Computer Science degrees would not only be qualified for jobs in high-tech companies, they would also be wel
5、l prepared for any job with computer skills as a prerequisite. With a larger range of potential jobs to choose from, degree holders are more likely to find a job that suits their particular needs and interests.Additionally, employers are willing to pay a premium for highly qualified applicants. For
6、example, many companies desire employees who are competent in more than one language and offer higher salaries to attract them. Even if a job applicant without a college degree has high standardized test scores, employers may still place a higher value on an applicant with similar test scores who al
7、so possesses credentials from a well-known university. Because of the extent to which a college degree is accepted by employers as proof of competence in a given field, college graduates are not only more likely to receive more job offers, they can also command higher salaries than applicants who la
8、ck college diplomas.Finally, in addition to offering more choices and higher salaries, a college degree offers access to jobs with a clear path towards professional advancement. A B.S. in biology, for example, could allow a student to find a job in a lab after graduation, a first step on the road to
9、wards a career in scientific research. The same major could also be used to apply to medical school, and a career as a doctor. Both of these avenues would be unavailable without taking the first step of an undergraduate degree in biology.2. Are parents the best teachers? Do you agree or disagree wit
10、h the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.分析因观点绝对而不能同意。不是所有的父母都是好老师最好的老师不仅仅是父母有些父母尽管善良，但对教育孩子一无所知z有些父母不配做孩子的老师，对孩子有不良影响范文Obviously, in most cases the earliest teachers people have are their parents, and parents are generally mo
11、st concerned about the development of their children. However, it is not completely true to say that parents are the best teachers.First of all, not all parents are good teachers. As normal individuals, some parents more or less have some bad habits. Even though parents almost instinctively devote t
12、hemselves to cultivating their offspring, the outcome might turn out to be disappointment, for all children tend to unconsciously or subconsciously copy everything including bad ones from their parents. Another deficiency of parents as teachers is the fact that most parents are lack of common senses
13、 of education. All too often we observe some parents tend to pursue their cherished but failed dream by forcing their children to develop in a prearranged direction. Ironically, when their children do not follow the instructions, the children will be regarded as disobedient or allegedly rebellious.
14、In fact, it is parents rather than their children that virtually disobey common sensesMoreover, some parents are qualified as good teachers, but not all of them are the best ones. When children are in the preliminary school, it is not surprising that parents are perhaps capable of teaching their chi
15、ldren almost every subject even better than professional teachers in the school. But the situation will not last long. We live in a world where knowledge is accumulated by multiplying and at the same time becomes more and more specialized. Therefore, to be a professional in a certain field today tak
16、es much longer time than has ever been before. No parent is able to be professional in all fields, though they might be experts in one or more fields. Wise parents often release rather than charge their children as early as possible. They are aware of the possibility outside the family.Parents may,
17、nevertheless, help their children much more than do good teachers. Most parts of children education are virtually beyond teachers reaches. It is parents that supplement. Psychology studies have shown us that parents love sometimes has astonishingly magic power to their children. Albeit Einsteins mot
18、her and that of Forest Gump are both good examples. On the other hand, parents might do their children harm more than do bad teachers as well. The natures of those children whose parents have divorced are often severely distorted.In a word, it is rather superficial to simply say that parents are the
19、 best teachers.3. Does easier-prepared food improve the way people live?Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.托福写作范文附思路解析26. The most important thing you want to change about your hometown I
20、f you could change one important thing about your hometown, what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.分析改变其环境，因为一个好的环境会使人们更加快乐更加健康更加有效率相关题目：52、141、165都可以选择改变其环境。这些题目实际上可以用一篇*应对。范文I was born in a small town named Hailin, located in the North-East of China. The mo
21、st serious problems in my hometown are the backward ideas about a womans place in the family, school, workplace, and society. These negative stereotypes hurt not only women, but all of society as well. If possible, I would change the attitudes of the people in my hometown so they would view men and
22、women equally. Discrimination against women in my hometown begins before they are even born. Because people here believe that only a man can carry on the family line, every family wants to have at least one son. Each family is only supposed to have one child because of the overpopulation problem. Th
23、is means that if a family can find out a fetus is female before it is born they might abort it. Or in other cases, people will have many female babies before they have a son, which only makes the population problem worse. If female babies were considered as important as male babies, then these two p
24、roblems probably would not exist. Discrimination against girls continues as they go to school and work. The prevalent stereotype is that women are not as smart as men and we shouldnt waste time and money educating them. Families often insist that their daughters stay at home and help with housework
25、while sending their sons to school. Girls are born every bit as smart as boys and equally deserve to reap the benefits of education. Many of the worlds famous scientists and leaders are women, from Marie Curie to Margaret Thatcher. We need to eliminate the stereotype that women are less intelligent
26、than men so that our community can benefit from the achievements that women are capable of making when armed with education. In fact, women need to be respected enough to hold professional and leadership jobs in our community. This would mean that in the classified section of newspapers, there would
27、 no longer be jobs for men only. We will never know how many women could have done those jobs better than a man could have until the parents of every baby girl decide that their daughter is worth as much as their son. This is probably the most important thing that I want to change about my hometown.
28、7. The influence of movies or television on peoples behavior How do movies or television influence peoples behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.分析电影、电视等大众传媒(mass media)往往可以对人们的行为产生影响通过改变人们的价值观、世界观、审美观而改变人们行为通过制造“社会热点”而使大众不停地讨论一件事情通过满足人们的幻想，或使人们处于平衡状态，或使人们一定程度上失衡范文The im
29、pact that movies or television has had on our daily life, and society in general, is undeniable. No doubt it will become even greater as the scope of which continues to grow, and as the relevant technologies become more and more sophisticated, and so fascinating that virtually nobody will be able to
30、 escape. Already, it can be seen how western movies are exercising influence on our youth generation: they grow long-hair regardless of their gender, commonly part of which is dyed in gold; they wear jeans in each and every season, usually the knees of which are deliberately tattered; boys are fond
31、of earrings or other odd pendants; and girls are keen on Marlboros and weird bad words. The major means that movies and television influence the public is by creating topics of discussion in the society. Movies offer people (the consumers) issues to talk and think about. Titanic had brought a worldw
32、ide uproar by its extolling of fascinating immortal love; Prime Color and Wag the Dog met the national debate on right and duty of the president of the United States. Antiwar movies such as Tears of the Sun and All Quiet on the Western Front among numerous others have been raising the question that
33、is any war really to uphold justice or is it really worthy that an individual makes sacrifices to his country and at the same time ignores his own family or his personal values? Television also shapes our understanding of what is important and what is not important (to know). The important issues ar
34、e being discussed over and over or in the beginning of a program. The not important stories are the ones that are not being told at all. The not very important stories are probably very short and hidden in the last part. By prearranging public issue, movies and television make decisions for us. Even
35、 though there are critical thinking individuals in any society, they are definitely in minority; the public in whole indeed lack skills of critical thinking, and therefore they are often led by the movies and television. In brief, movies and television, by offering topics and affecting the ways in w
36、hich we discuss the important issues, has a strong influence on our perception of the truth, of the world or of the structure of our society. We have to admit that it has a role in our lives as a source of information, experiences, entertainment, amusement andrelaxation.8. Has television destroyed c
37、ommunication among people? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.托福写作范文附思路解析311. Should universities finance students sports activities equally as libraries? Do
38、 you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.分析不能完全同意。same是一件做不到的事情。普通大学，应该或更多的钱在图书馆上 体育专科大学，当然应该花更多的钱在体
39、育设施上资金分配的重要原则：产出应该大于投入大学的办学原则：要better brains;也要better bodies.相关题目：Related Topics: 147. Some relevant issues about public investments: 1) investment vs. profit; 2)immediate needs vs. long-term benefits; 3) profit-making organization vs. nonprofit-making organization. Topicsabout money allocation: 11.
40、 19. 56. 95. 100. 167. personal attitudes of money: 32. 33. 48. 53. 131. 173. 177.185.资金分配问题：资金的有效运用(efficiency of money allocation)的重要体现是投入产出比(input-output ratio)。即便是nonprofit-making organization也要保证资金的投入产出的平衡(balance of input and output)。范文The main responsibility of a university is to develop a st
41、udents academic ability. While physical health is an important prerequisite for mental health and academic achievement, sports should play a comparatively small role in college students lives. Since a students main activity outside of the classroom is studying, occupying from four to eight hours of
42、their day, a peaceful studying environment plays an important role in a students academic development. College dorm rooms can have up to eight students sleeping in one small room and are not good environments for students to study in. To provide excellent studying environments for their students, un
43、iversities must build large librariesdesigned to accommodate students as well as books. Since sports should occupy a much smaller part of the students time, perhaps only an hour a day, sports facilities need not be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries. In addition to the costs of building adeq
44、uate library faculties, a university must also pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. The goal of every university library should be to have the most current books and materials its students need in order to study and do cutting edge research. The larger the student bod
45、y, the more comprehensive a librarys collection must be. A well-trained staff must also care for the materials and help the students. Continuing costs for sports, on the other hand, are relatively low, requiring only a few part-time staff and maintenance routines. For the most part, students are hap
46、py to organize their own sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school. Although a students health is critical to their academic success, the investment that a school needs to make to ensure a physically fit student body is relatively small. Considering that the main missio
47、n of the school is to develop a students mind and not their body, the school should put more of its resources into its libraries and not its sports activities.12. Why people visit museums?Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific re
48、asons and examples to support your answer.分析精彩内容第二页继续.个人偏好，或者习惯，比如喜爱历史。可以短时间内了解一个地方的历史、文化。85提提供了一个线索：因为他只有一天的时间!可以看到珍贵的艺术、文化、历史、科学等收藏。著名的博物馆周边，由于游客众多，一般也会有很多其他值得参观的地方，也会有很好吃的餐馆。另外，也有些人去博物馆，没有什么特别的理由。别人都去，于是他也去了1、42 。范文People travel to new places for many different reasons. One of the most common reasons is to see a new place, culture, or way of life. For a total outsider with only a short amount of time, museums offer a glimpse into these ways of life through specially designed education, cultural insights, and entertainment.People come to museu
