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1、托福写作范文赏析精选5篇 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福写作范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福写作范文赏析1MA A gift (such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a childs development. What gift would you give to help a child develop? Why? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.When I was about 10 yea
2、rs old, my older sister gave me a present. It was my first real grown-up bicycle: a three-speed, yellow and black, shiny and new. I still remember how excited I was. That bicycle was very important to me over the next few years. If I wanted to give a gift that would contribute to a childs developmen
3、t, I would choose a bicycle.Bikes are great exercise. They encourage outdoor play. Television and video games, which are the most popular childrens activities nowadays, involve mostly sitting and starting. Riding a bike makes exercise fun.Bikes are convenient transportation, too. Without a bike you
4、have to depend on an adult to drive you almost everywhere. With a bike you can go farther. You can ride to your friends bouses. If your school is close enough, you can take yourself to school. You have control over where you go, and youre not always waiting or begging for a ride. Now you can say “Ca
5、n I go ?” instead of “Please take me!”To me as a child, a bicycle meant independence. Not only could I could I go farther, but no one was watching where I went. The road went past the park, the pond, the woods, the 7-11 store, and more. I saw the network of little neighborhood roads from a different
6、 viewpoint. I could stop anywhere and look at whatever I wanted. Everything was my choice. Bike riding was active, not passive.My bicycle gave me fun exercise, easy transportation, and freedom. For all these reasons, I think that a bicycle is a special present for a child.托福写作范文赏析2PR Some people bel
7、ieve that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.I like the idea of students having several short vacations
8、 throughout the year. Im a working parent with two school-age children. Every summer I have to come up with a plan for keeping my children safe and entertained for three months, while my husband and I are at work. Summer camps are expensive, and finding the one your children will enjoy can be a chal
9、lenge. Getting rid of that one long vacation would make life a lot easier.Having several shorter vacations would also make it easier to schedule vacations. My husband and I both work in small offices with other working parents. All of us need vacation time during the same three months. This is hard
10、on our businesses and our careers.We also find that wherever we go in the summer, its crowded. It would be nice to go places throughout the year and find smaller crowds. Im sure the attractions themselves would like that better, too. It would be better for the economy to spread things out, too.I thi
11、nk my children would be more focused on their students if their vacation time was divided up throughout the year. The final month of the school year, theyre just not paying attention. Theyve been in school for nine long months and they dont have a lot of energy. Plus , theyre anticipating vacation t
12、ime. If vacations were throughout the year, they would concentrate better on studies.Of course, many older school buildings arent air-conditioned, because usually people arent there during the hottest months. That might be a problem, I think, though, that new air-conditioning would be worth the cost
13、. During the last few weeks of summer, my children are bored with their long vacation. I doubt that would happen if there were several vacations throughout the year.托福写作范文赏析3EX What do you consider to be the most important room in a house? Why is this room more important to you than any other room?
14、Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.The kitchen is my favorite room in a house, because it is where families gather. To me, that is the most important thing. So many of the memories people have of growing up revolve around the kitchen. My childhood memories concern the kitchens
15、 in my grandparents homes.My mothers family lived in a row house in the city. The rooms were all small, and that included the kitchen. In the summertime, when wed visit, the back door of the house would be left open. People would be sitting on the back porch and in the kitchen, talking and laughing,
16、 while my grandmother made dinner. There was no air-conditioning, but I dont ever remember feeling too hot. There was always a breeze coming through, along with the sounds of traffic and kids playing ball in the street.My fathers family liver on a farm in the country, and their house had a huge kitc
17、hen with windows on three sides. It seems like the windows were always open and the curtains blowing with the breeze. The main door to the house was almost never used. Everyone came in through the kitchen, and sat at the big table in the middle of the room. When dinner was being prepared, all the wo
18、men would bustle around, while the men sat at the table talking about farm prices. Sometimes my grandmother wouldnt even sit down during dinner, but would be refilling bowls of food and peoples glasses. From outside ,we could hear the cows in the field near the house.These two kitchens are the backg
19、round for some of my happiest memories. From the beginning of time, human beings have gathered together near the fire where the food was being prepared. I hope that never changes.托福写作范文赏析4PR Would you prefer to live in a traditional house or in a modern apartment building? Use specific reasons and d
20、etails to support your choice.I know there are advantages to living in a modern apartment, but Id prefer to live in a traditional house. My reason is that I love traditional design. Its graceful and warm and inviting. I think modern design is very empty and sterile and not very inviting. So, because
21、 of the way it looks, Id choose a traditional house.I recognize the fact that a modern apartment is going to be in much better shape. Being new probably means all the plumbing works, the roof isnt going to leak, the windows are properly sealed, and the kitchen appliances are in working order. A trad
22、itional house cant guarantee any of that. In fact, its likely that things will break down or need replacement, simply because of age.Still, if the appliances are old, so is the wood, and thats a big advantage as far as Im concerned. Very few new buildings have the kind of woods that were used years
23、ago. Its something that cant be copied.Space is always important to me, too. I need a lot of room for my home office, my clothes, and to display all the knickknacks Ive picked up in my travels. I also like to have interesting space. I dont want all the rooms and windows the same size or a boxy desig
24、n. A modern apartment usually comes in one size and shape. A traditional house is going to have a variety of spaces where I can put a little table or a window seat. And it will have lots of room, from basement to attic. These are all good reasons for me to prefer living in a traditional house.Some p
25、eople love modern design, but its not for me. The space and beauty of a traditional home are more important to me than having everything new and perfect.托福写作范文赏析5Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study
26、. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.I think high school students should be allowed to choose some of the subjects they study. However, the basic subjects, like mathematics, literature, and science, should be mandatory for all students.When I was in high school, we were allowe
27、d to choose three electives each semester. Electives were subjects that werent part of the basic curriculum. They included things like music, journalism, art, and various kinds of team sports. Choosing some of these subjects to study gave me a chance to experiment. I was able to get a head start on
28、what I was going to study in college.However, college preparation shouldnt be the main factor. I think all students should be allowed to take a certain number of courses just because theyre interested in them. For many students, high school is the last chance to learn about things theyre interested
29、in. Maybe once they have a job there wont be time for studying.Of course, its also important that students study certain basic subjects. If Id had a choice, I know I wouldnt have studied mathematics or science. I wasnt very interested in them. However, once I was in class, I found myself getting int
30、erested. I wouldnt have known this if Id been given the choice, because I would have chosen not to take the courses.High school students arent always the best judges of what theyll find useful in the years ahead. They need the guidance of experts in the field of education. However, they also need some freedom to follow their curiosity and individual interests. They should be given the freedom to choose some courses, while being required to take others.
