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1、托福独立写作细节须知 托福独立写作细节须知,我们一起来看看吧，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作细节须知细节一：开头段交代清楚就行，不要一味求长还记得学英语的时候，老师讲过的英语中有一种很奇葩的用法，就是形式主语(话说好多孩子都在纠结形式主语和强调句怎么区分)。为什么有形式主语呢?很简单，因为真正的主语太长了，容易对我们的理解造成影响，而且主语太长不美观，因此出现了形式主语it。既然语法中都有这样的一个用法，那么我们写作中又为何不遵循这个要求呢?开头段写得太长，占用时间不说，有时候开头段话都说尽了，会严重影响主体段的展开。因此，独立写作的开头段不要写太长，一般50-80个单词是极好的
2、。细节二：每段写完记得空一行为什么呢?好看呗!试想一下，如果你的作文各段都连在一起的，你自己看起来舒服吗?更别说挑剔的考官来看了!你的作文如果不能从内容上征服考官，至少要在篇章结构上给人一种舒适的感觉!所以，每段写作记得空一行，你写着舒服，考官看着也舒服。细节三：正式文体若能坚持不随意缩写，那将是极好的缩写好吗?不好!因为首先不缩写的话可能是两个单词，缩写完单词数就少了!不过，这个点其实并不是最关键的，重点在于托福写作是应试作文，应该保持正式文体的写作风格!缩写会给人一种非正式的赶脚!所以，能够不缩写的尽量不要缩写。比如cant，最好在托福写作中写成cannot，而can not则是英式英语的
3、写法，记住了!细节四：不要一写作文就把你“七大姑八大姨”搬出来托福写作，太多这些个人的例子会给人一种非常personal的感觉!本身写作是在发表你自己的观点。虽然说托福的写作题可支持亦可反驳，但是关键点还在于你的论述能否让人觉得有一丝丝的可信度!举个例子，难道你姨喜欢吃的水果，大家都喜欢吗?所以，写作的例子若能避开太多个人例子，那又是极好的!或者如果你很强，可以考虑以客观的方式来写个人的例子!怎么调整托福考试心态托福考试怎么调整心态在这样的心态下，也许你会发挥的更好哦。你应该在前一天有足够的睡眠，并确保你的衣服和所有必要的身份证明文件已经放好了，考试当天可以直接拿到考场。具体小建议如下：吃一顿
4、适度量的饭，记是说不要吃太多，也不要吃太少，整个托福考试的时长在四个多小时，所以要预计好食物的量。不要过度地吃糖果，咖啡或抽太多的香烟，否则在考试过程中，你可能会想要更多，但是考场是不会让你吃这些的喝足够的水，但不要太多，因为上卫生会很麻烦。不要喝软饮料，饮料会让你更快地感到口渴。在考试之前做一些放松的事情，自己要了解下自己的习惯，什么能让自己放松下来。不要和那些倾向于不安或激动的朋友待在一起，因为负能量可能会相互传染。使用一些放松的方法，如冥想。努力集中精神。早点抵达考试中心，要有足够的时间来完成一些例行事务。任何时候开始感到紧张时，请进行一些深呼吸练习，它会重新让你集中精神。不要恐惧这种焦
5、虑，这是正常现象。保持冷静，不要惊慌，即使有些东西看起来很困难。只关注自己的考试，不要考虑其他学生在做什么。托福写作满分作文学习51 Do you agree or disagree with the followingstatement? Parents or other adult relatives should makeimportant decisions for their older (15 to 18 year-old) teenaged children. Use specific reasons and examples tosupport your opinion.No
6、one knows me as well as my parents. No one wants the bestfor me like my parents. It is natural that I should allow myparents to make important decisions for me. I think all older teenagers (15 to 18 year-olds) shouldtake their parents advice on decisions that concern their education, their social li
7、fe, and their futurecareers.My parents have always chosen the best schools for me to attend. They have encouraged me toattend special prep classes to make sure that I was well prepared for the exams. They have givenme tutors to make sure that I understood my subjects well. When it comes to choosing
8、a college, I will trust my parents to make that decision. They know what they can afford and what will giveme a good education.When I was young, my parents would invite children over to play with me. Over the years, I havebecome very close to these children. They are like my family. We celebrate hol
9、idays and birthdaystogether. We even go to the mountains together in the summer. My parents do not want me tofall into the wrong crowd. They do not want me to meet and fall in love with someone they do notknow. I understand that and I want to make them happy.My father runs a very successful business
10、 and my mother is a well-known politician. They are verywell connected and they have many friends who would like me to work for them when I finishschool. This is a very good arrangement for me.If all children follow their parents wishes, they would probably be happier. Parents only want thebest for
11、their children.52 Some people like to travel with a companion. Other people prefer to travel alone. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.Traveling alone is the only way to travel. If you take someone with you, you take your home withyou. When you travel alone
12、, you meet new people, have new experiences, and learn more aboutyourself.When I traveled with my friend, I spend all my time with that friend. We eat together and sightseetogether. When I travel alone, I spend my time looking for new friends. It is easy to fine otherpeople, either other tourists or
13、 locals, to eat with or have a coffee with. When you share meals withstrangers, they become friends.When I travel with a friend, my routine is predictable. We maintain the same schedule that we doat home. When I travel alone, I adopt the rhythm of the place I visit. I might take a nap in theafternoo
14、n and eat dinner at 11 pm. I might go to a disco and dance all night.When I travel with a friend, we know how we will react to things. When I travel alone, each newexperience requires a new reaction. If I dont try new things, I wont be able to decide if I likesomething or not. Shall I ride an ostric
15、h or eat one?I think it is always important to do things on your own. You can fine new friends, collect newmemories, and adopt different ways of doing things. Isnt that the point of travel?托福写作满分作文学习27 AD It has recently been announced that a newmovies theater may be built in your neighborhood. Doyo
16、u support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specificreasons and details to support your answer.Some people will say that a new movie theater in ourneighborhood would be a bad thing. However, I fully supportthe plan to build one. I feel that a movie theater would bringmore opportunities for recreation, r
17、educe teenage delinquency, and lead to several improvementsin the town.As it stands, there is little to do in my town. There are no parks here, and there is certainly nonightlife. Additionally, the nearest movies theater is more than thirty minutes away. That isinconvenient for everyone here. Many m
18、ovies end late at night. Who want to a long drive home at 11:30 p.m. or midnight?Building a new movie theater here will reduce juvenile delinquency, Like everyone else, teens hereare bored. They need activities to keep them busy and out of trouble. The jobs that the theatrewill provide will help tee
19、ns, too. We need more businesses that are willing and eager to employyoung people.Overall, the new theater will bring many improvements to the town, For example, it will help otherbusinesses. That is because the movie theater will attract customers from neighboring towns. Those neighbors do not have
20、 a reason to come to this town now. However, if they are cominghere for a movies, they will be more likely to stay here to shop. If we get more visitors, well needbetter roads. While this may be costly, it will also make travel easier for people living here. We willbe able to get around faster, Safe
21、ty will be improved with the new roads, because they will be inbetter condition than many that we have now.I believe that our town needs a new movie theater. Again, I support it fully, I hope that others inour community will join me to convince residents and local government.28 AD Do you agree or di
22、sagree with the following statement ?People shouldsometimes do things that they do not enjoying doing. Use specific reasons andexamples to support your answer.I agree that people should sometimes do things that they dont enjoy doing. This is a basic part ofbeing an adult. Plus, some things that aren
23、t fun are still good for us in the long run.Take personal tasks. Who enjoys going to the dentist? Very few people enjoy having their annualcheck-up with the doctor. Not a lot of people enjoy changing the oil in their car or moving theirlawns. These are all things we do because we have to, not becaus
24、e we want to .We realize thattaking care of our physical health is the sensible thing to do .We know that if we dont change theoil in our cars, our cars wont run. We understand that grass grows and if we dont mow it, ourlawns will look like tropical forests.Professional tasked are another part of th
25、e same equation. No one likes to be stuck with a boringassignment or to be told we have to work with someone no one else gets along with. Sometimeswe have to put up with unfair criticism from a supervisor or resentment from those we supervise. Ifwere in management., we may have had the unpleasant ta
26、sk of having to fire someone. None ofthese are fun things, Unfortunately, theyre all part of earning a living, something the majority ofadults have to do.On the other hand, sometimes doing some thing we dont enjoy doing can lead to enjoyment. Simply by trying it again, we may decide we like doing it
27、 .for instance, we may have convincesourselves we hate to dance. We agree to go to a club only to please someone else. Yet, for somereason, this time we enjoying dancing. Weve been cheating ourselves of enjoyment without evenknowing it. The same can be true of trying new foods or a new type of museu
28、m.Doing what we dont enjoy doesnt always have to be a bother, does it? Its just part of life.托福写作满分作文学习68 Some people think governments should spend as much money as possible exploring outer space (for example, traveling to the Moon and to other planets). Other people disagree and think governments
29、should spend this money for our basic needs on Earth. Which of these two opinions do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.When we see photographs of starving children, its hard to say that we should spend billions of dollars on space exploration. But thats just wha
30、t we should do. Children dont need to be starving, but we do need to explore space. Right now, we have enough money to feed every person on Earth. Children are starving because of mismanagement of resources and simple human greed. Those are problems we can solve right here on earth. That shouldnt st
31、op our need to find out whats beyond our own solar system.We may never make contact with whatever other species there may be out there in space. Even so, there are still two very practical and positive consequences of space exploration. One is a certainty and the other is a possibility. The certaint
32、y is medical research. Yes, we can conduct research here on earth. But much of the research done in space, for example, on the effects of gravity on bone marrow, is making a difference in medicine here on Earth. When we do research in space, we also learn more about space exploration. Also, many of
33、the inventions that were developed for space travel have been adapted to good use on Earth.The possible consequence of space exploration is finding another planet human beings can colonize. Overpopulation is a huge problem on our planet. People are living longer, more healthful lives, and thats a go
34、od thing. But it means there are fewer people dying and more people being born. Eventually well have less space, fewer resources, and major distribution problems. If we can find another planet to live on, we can relieve the problems of overpopulation on our planet.Its a tragedy that there are human
35、beings suffering on Earth. However, if we wait until everyone has a perfect life, we will never explore spaceand that , too, would be a kind of tragedy.69 People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulties of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What d
36、o you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples to support your answer.Stress is one of our biggest enemies. It affects our health, our personality, and our relationships with others. In order to get rid of stress. I first have to identify the cause. I have differ
37、ent antidotes to stress depending on the cause. The most common types of stress I face are with work, with friends, and with myself.Work-related stress is the easiest to combat. I simply stop working for a while. If I find myself picking up the same piece of paper four times a day and never doing an
38、ything with it, I blame stress. The best thing to do is to do something else. Sometimes, I get up from my desk and go down the hall to talk to my colleagues, but I dont talk about work related subjects. Other times, I will take a short walk around the block and get some fresh air. Work-related stres
39、s can be cured by getting away from the work.Stress caused by friends is more difficult to cure. Often the cause is more complicated. My friends could have a personal problem that causes them and me both anxiety. Or my friends could be angry at me or vice versa. Here, the cure for stress is talking
40、about the problem and being with my friends. Unlike work, you cant walk away from your friends.Stress I cause myself is also not so easy to get rid of. If I feel bothered by an exam or anxious about the future, there is very little for me to do. I just have to tell myself that I can only do my best and leave the rest up to fate.It is important to try to lead a stress-free life. If you can avoid stress by walking away form it (like at work), talking through it (like with your friends) or facing it head on (like with yourself), your health, personality and relationships will benefit.
