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1、托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：the best way to travel托福写作难点话题一览Is traveling in a group led by a tour guide the best way to travel?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The best way to travel is in a group led by a tour guid
2、e. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析不能同意这个观点。因为题目中用到了绝对修饰词the best。建议大家罗列两三个除了用导游之外的旅游方法：独自旅游;与同事、朋友相伴等等。或者按照不同的情况下有不同的选择的思路来写也是不错的选择。本话题高分范文赏析Those lucky enough to travel, particularly those fortunate enough to visit foreign countries, face the decision of travelin
3、g in a group with an experienced tour guide or traveling by themselves. The choice is a difficult one as both ways of travel have advantages. personally, I believe that, although traveling in a group with a tour guide is obviously convenient, the benefits are often not significant enough and in many
4、 ways traveling in this kind of way can limit ones travel experience.The conveniences of group travel with a tour guide include the fact that one easily meets other people and thus has a more enjoyable and comfortable travel experience. This is particularly important when traveling in a foreign coun
5、try where a language barrier prevents interaction with the locals and isolation can become a problem. The tour guide is often experienced in generating a jovial atmosphere within the group, and his/her knowledge of the foreign culture and places of interest provide travelers with a greater appreciat
6、ion of their trip. Also, and maybe most importantly, when traveling with a guide the individual traveler normally does not have to worry about hotel reservations and transportation. Those aspects are taken care of.On the other hand, convenience might not be important to a traveler, and traveling alo
7、ne allows far more personal freedoms. For example, one can easily make changes to the travel itinerary. The traveler can choose to stay in certain places or move on more quickly than otherwise possible, because he does not follow a set schedule.Learning about culture and places of interest is also e
8、asy as that information is readily available in books.Furthermore, travelers tend to congregate, and it is very easy to meet fellow vacationers who might have insightful tips as far as where to go and what to do. Generally, basic command of the English language suffices to have such informative exch
9、anges with other travelers and locals, who are often eager to share their customs and culture.Therefore, traveling outside a large tour group can result in a richer and more genuine experience, and I believe this experience to be more exciting to me.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：students take classes in sub
10、jects托福写作难点话题一览Should students be required to take classes in many subjects or to specialize in one subject?Some universities require students to take classes in many subjects. Other universities require students to specialize in one subject. Which is better? Use specific reasons and examples to sup
11、port your answer.写作思路展开结构分析很难说哪一个比另外一个更好。Its hard to say one is better than the other. 学习范围过于广泛(extensive)可能会导致深度不够(superficial interpretation) 学习范围过于狭窄(limited)可能会导致无知(educated ignorance) 所以，学习应该既保证广度，也要保证深度。事实上，学科之间总是存在着某种这样那样的联系。比如物理学和哲学就两个一定程度上相辅相成(be inseparably interconnected)。折衷的方法是，学校开设很多的选修
12、课。要求学生在学好本专业课程的同时，尽量多地了解其他领域。本话题高分范文赏析Universities that require their students to take classes in many subjects offer a very different educational experience from the universities that encourage specialization. As higher education becomes a more accessible commodity students will be able to choose b
13、etween these two different forms of instruction. The answer to the question of which system is better depends on the students interests and the goals of their studies.Students who complete a degree at a university which requires them to take classes in many different subjects will receive a well rou
14、nded education. Here they will be able to develop their knowledge in different areas, and they will also have the opportunity to find out what their interests really are as they will be exposed to a variety of fields of study. Therefore, this kind of university is ideal for students who have many in
15、terests or dont know what their interests are. Also, students who have an interest in education and consider the possibility of graduate school will be able to gain a broader knowledge base before specializing later on in their academic careers. They will be able to pursue education for educations s
16、ake and not just to learn a trade. When they try to find work after graduation their versatility will allow them to apply for a wide range of jobs.On the other hand, students who specialize will have a great advantage over students who dont when it comes to finding a job in their specific field of s
17、tudy. Naturally, companies will be most interested in job applicants who have superior knowledge and can thus make the greatest contributions. At the same time, the specialization system allows students to focus on their interests and the subjects relevant to them. Students majoring in physics or ch
18、emistry would feel very out of place in a course on ancient poetry or Western literature. They might consider it a waste of their time and energy. This might then have a negative effect on their educational progress in general.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析： children begin learning a foreign language托福写作难点话题
19、一览Should children begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school?Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should begin learning a foreign language as soon as they start school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.写作思路展开结构分析这是一个有争议的话题。不同意这
20、个观点可能更好写一些。尽管从表面上来看儿童确实在学习语言方面有天赋，但是学习母语是一回事儿，而学习外语是完全另外一回事。外语不是单词、句型那么简单(Learning English involves much more than merely memorizing vocabulary and grammar rules)。语言是表达思想的，某种程度上学习外语，超出了儿童的能力范围尤其是对刚刚上学，甚至不知道学习为何物的儿童。极端的例子是河北省有一对夫妇(都是大学教师)，孩子才6岁，父亲教他英文，母亲教他日文，结果孩子出现了失语症(失语者 aphasic; 失语症 aphasia)。本话题高分
21、范文赏析More and more international corporations build their business in my country, China. At the same time, more parents tell their children that English is one of necessities to be successful in the future.Students work so hard to master English that English learning related publications have always
22、been on the top of the best-seller list.It seems clear that one will be better off if he/she is a bilingual, and if the second language is English, even better! However, learning a foreign language must have been painful, since people are continuously creating all sorts of methods and suggestions on
23、 how to learn it more easily, more quickly, and more efficiently. Some people propose that children should begin learning English as soon as they start school. But would it really work? Hardly.It seems true that children have natural amazing ability to develop their language skills. Statistic figure
24、s show that a 6-year-old boy can virtually memorize nearly as many as 150 words a day! But things become different when the child is learning a foreign language. When children are learning their mother tongue, they are not alone, and they are learning with numerous handy aids around. Parents, friend
25、s, and all the people around them are talking the same language, without any grammar error and nearly uniform intonation and pronunciation.However, when they are learning a foreign language, all of those natural aids disappeared. And words become really foreign and abstract after they leave classes.
26、 And even worse, their teacher might have a bad accent or even wrong pronunciation. Some may adduce children in Luxembourg as evidence, but the point is that almost all parents in that place are trilingual!Learning a foreign language well involves much more than merely memorizing handful vocabulary
27、or several grammar rules. If a girl is able to say hello in a standard American accent, does that really mean she has learned a second language well, or she will go so far as to be a linguist? In fact, learning a foreign language in some sense is beyond the capacity of children, especially as little
28、 as first grade pupil, for language is used to express thoughts and ideas, both of which are naturally cultural and historical, and are sometimes too complex for children to comprehend. After all, learning earlier doesnt automatically guarantee learning quicker or better.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：Work w
29、ith a group or independently托福写作难点话题一览Work with a group of people or work independently?Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析这道题没有明显倾向性，因此无论选择哪一边展开都是可以的。的建议是从两种能力都重要的角度来切入
30、。考生可以分别陈述两种能力的重要性并举出一些例子。然后从根据不同的人，不同的工作环境，才会有孰重孰轻之分这样一个相对客观的角度来展开具体论述。本话题高分范文赏析While some people emphasize great importance of cooperation, others argue that the significance of individual competition should not be rejected or neglected. To examine whether one is more important than the other, we h
31、ave to look carefully into further details.There are circumstances where the ability to work with group is much more important than that to work independently. More often than not, in most fields, a team can achieve much more extensive scope than an individual can, because one has less strength than
32、 many have. In team-played sports, such as football, basketball, volleyball, etc. , teamwork is often highly valued and is of essence. To get a goal or make a point, team members have to cooperate with each other, nobody could achieve without others help. Although individual competence is a must, to
33、o much accent on his personal ability will lead him even the whole team to a disaster.On the other hand, there also are inverse circumstances. In vital decision-making, for example, one has to make a final choice with his/her own judgment. Lets consider the same situation mentioned above, on the ver
34、y same sports ground, each opposite team has only one and should have only one coach, who must work independently to make important decisions, including which player should be replaced, which player should present on what kind of special circumstances, and so many other critical choices. The coach,
35、like the commander in the war, stands on a position where he/she has to be competitive, and his/her only rival is the coach of the other side. Even if he/she at the same time has to consult with others, it is him/her who takes the final step, and he/she essentially has no choice but to have an excel
36、lent ability to work independently.There seldom exists a circumstance where cooperation and competition do not coexist. The point is that emphasis on cooperation doesnt mean competition should be neglected or rejected, and vice versa. Therefore, it hasnt gone too far to say that both the ability of
37、working with group and that of working independently are equally important.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：build a statue for someone in your country托福写作难点话题一览Whom in your country would you choose to build a statue for?Your city has decided to build a statue or monument to honor a famous person in your countr
38、y. Who would you choose? Use reasons and specific examples to support your choice.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目的考点有两个，一个当然是选择哪一位名人来进行展开，另一个则是你对自己的城市到底有多少了解，换句话说，考生不仅要详细说明这位名人的事迹，同时也要把名人和当地的关联性写出来，比如名人是这个城市出身的，或者名人为这个城市做出了哪些贡献等等。这其实就相当于杜绝了很多同学随便扯大旗找一些外国名人来写的思路。本话题高分范文赏析If my city has decided to build a statue to ho
39、nor a famous person in my country, I would choose a late singer, Teresa Teng. She was born in 1950s, and died of a severe asthma attack at age 41 in May 1995 while holidaying in Chiang Mai, Thailand, triggering an outpouring of grief among her legions of fans in Asia and elsewhere. During her brilli
40、ant stage career, favored by fans all over Asia, she moved millions of people. Her famous songs include sweet, story of small town, and the moon represents my heart, etc. It was said that it was her who introduced several generations in China to a certain field of popular music.Her songs have accomp
41、anied the growth and development of many people in China. In the home of these generations soul, her sweet voice has become immortal beauty and memory. Although shes gone, her sound of singing has never vanished. She is constantly commemorated; from Beijing to Taipei, Hong Kong to Singapore, her ubi
42、quitous fans observe her commemoration from time to time, cherishing her incredible beauty, and her voice that sounds to come from heaven. Her sweet songs made her a legend, and are still regularly heard on radio, and continue to have a following in Chinese communities all over the world.She should
43、be remembered not only because of her beauty and voice, but also because of her great charity. She founded Teresa Teng foundation during her lifetime. The purpose of the foundation is to cultivate and support gifted artists, and at the same time the foundation includes a trust to distribute scholarship to make sure that art students have opportunities to accomplish what they actually can. Every year, The Teresa Teng Foundation also send a great amount of money as a charity to help homeless children. And these activities are supported by her fans all over the world.
